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Preyed Upon
A missing person? A tormented sister. A deadly quest.
In this page-turning short story from bestselling author Nadia Siddiqui, aspiring cop Tori Whitfield deals with the aftermath of her missing sister. Cast into sudden darkness, Tori begins to suspect that someone close to her is involved and tries to set a trap before leaving for the police academy.
It isn't long before the darkness she had escaped from in her hometown finds her. Tori is forced to rush out into a dark snowy night and race back to her hometown in order to save two innocent lives but is quickly greeted by the horrible truth.
Will Tori survive her nightmare or will she fall victim to the hideous truth that is determined to destroy her?
From bestselling author Nadia Siddiqui comes Preyed Upon, part of Dark Corner collection, a thrilling collection of short stories about a world full of crime committed by those who are good and bad. Follow each character’s journey in each story, which can be read to in a single setting.
In this page-turning short story from bestselling author Nadia Siddiqui, aspiring cop Tori Whitfield deals with the aftermath of her missing sister. Cast into sudden darkness, Tori begins to suspect that someone close to her is involved and tries to set a trap before leaving for the police academy.
It isn't long before the darkness she had escaped from in her hometown finds her. Tori is forced to rush out into a dark snowy night and race back to her hometown in order to save two innocent lives but is quickly greeted by the horrible truth.
Will Tori survive her nightmare or will she fall victim to the hideous truth that is determined to destroy her?
From bestselling author Nadia Siddiqui comes Preyed Upon, part of Dark Corner collection, a thrilling collection of short stories about a world full of crime committed by those who are good and bad. Follow each character’s journey in each story, which can be read to in a single setting.
47 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 13, 2020
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About the author
Nadia Siddiqui
38 books8 followersFKA John Greyson.
Nadia Siddiqui has always been an author at heart--writing stories in her room since she was in high school. Now her stories have come to life. She spends time with her calico cat in Los Angeles, CA.
Nadia Siddiqui has always been an author at heart--writing stories in her room since she was in high school. Now her stories have come to life. She spends time with her calico cat in Los Angeles, CA.
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December 30, 2020
This is a 3.5 star read.
August 10, 2021
Amateurish!
Well, I really tried to like this story. Well... I did like it a bit, but the writing is so amateurish!
Tori Whitfield’s sister goes missing one day, while out shopping with her mother and twin daughters. She is never seen again.
Seven months later, Tori feels the local police have not done enough to find her so she decides to become a cop and do their job for them.
Lots of convolutedness, cliched dialogue and trite coincidences.
Two stars ⭐️.
Well, I really tried to like this story. Well... I did like it a bit, but the writing is so amateurish!
Tori Whitfield’s sister goes missing one day, while out shopping with her mother and twin daughters. She is never seen again.
Seven months later, Tori feels the local police have not done enough to find her so she decides to become a cop and do their job for them.
Lots of convolutedness, cliched dialogue and trite coincidences.
Two stars ⭐️.
July 15, 2021
Part of the Dark Place collection of six short stories, Preyed Upon is a real page turner, that sent shivers down my spine, as I read into the night. Although I’ve only awarded 4 stars, due to errors that distracted me, I’m already looking forward to reading the other books in this series.
January 20, 2022
I received a free ARC of this book for an honest review. This one took me a bit longer to get into than I anticipated as I've already read a fair few of Nadia Siddiqui's books. Once I did get into it I was hooked and wasn't expecting the twist and the end! A good read to persevere with
January 11, 2021
Greenson, TN. McDougal HS. Tori Whitfield (28, guidance counselor always had good advice for the HS students she saw.
Pigeon Forge, TN. Matthew Rogers (35, husband/father, stockbroker), Paula Rogers (daughter/sister), & Noel Rogers (son/brother) missed Amanda Rogers (wife/mother, nee Whitfield).
It’s been 7 months & she had not been located.
Tori was accepted into the Tennessee Police Academy in North Ridge.
Tori was accosted & almost strangled to death.
Detective Andrew Lory (45+, divorced, 2 kids) went to see Tori, which again didn’t go well.
Greenson. Tori went to see Matthew (Winds & Rogers Brokerage Firm).
North Ridge. Tennessee Police Academy in North Ridge Officer Melanie Hocker greeted Cadet Tori.
Captain Henry Wills (wife, 2 teen sons) addressed the incoming Cadets.
Greenson. # 327 Pine Falls Lane. why were the Greenson PD called?
I do not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing free books from publishers & authors. Therefore, I am under no obligation to write a positive review, only an honest one.
An awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A very professionally written mystery book. It was quite easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters & facts to keep track of. This could also make another great mystery movie, or better yet a mini-TV series. There is no doubt in my mind this is an amazingly easy rating of 5 stars.
Thank you for the free Author; Freebies@FreeBooksForLife; BookFunnel; ARC; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
Pigeon Forge, TN. Matthew Rogers (35, husband/father, stockbroker), Paula Rogers (daughter/sister), & Noel Rogers (son/brother) missed Amanda Rogers (wife/mother, nee Whitfield).
It’s been 7 months & she had not been located.
Tori was accepted into the Tennessee Police Academy in North Ridge.
Tori was accosted & almost strangled to death.
Detective Andrew Lory (45+, divorced, 2 kids) went to see Tori, which again didn’t go well.
Greenson. Tori went to see Matthew (Winds & Rogers Brokerage Firm).
North Ridge. Tennessee Police Academy in North Ridge Officer Melanie Hocker greeted Cadet Tori.
Captain Henry Wills (wife, 2 teen sons) addressed the incoming Cadets.
Greenson. # 327 Pine Falls Lane. why were the Greenson PD called?
I do not receive any type of compensation for reading & reviewing free books from publishers & authors. Therefore, I am under no obligation to write a positive review, only an honest one.
An awesome book cover, great font & writing style. A very professionally written mystery book. It was quite easy for me to read/follow from start/finish & never a dull moment. There were no grammar/typo errors, nor any repetitive or out of line sequence sentences. Lots of exciting scenarios, with several twists/turns & a great set of unique characters & facts to keep track of. This could also make another great mystery movie, or better yet a mini-TV series. There is no doubt in my mind this is an amazingly easy rating of 5 stars.
Thank you for the free Author; Freebies@FreeBooksForLife; BookFunnel; ARC; PDF book
Tony Parsons MSW (Washburn)
May 4, 2020
Best short story yet!
What an absolute breath taking action packed thriller. Short story or not, this book grabs you and doesn’t let go until the very last page ending with a surprising and “oh my god” result. If this has anything to go by this awe-inspiring “Dark Series collections” are going to be at the top of my, to read list.
This story is about a Tori Whitfield who wants to become a cop after her sister Amanda disappears without a trace presumably dead with too may un-answered questions. What appears to be a unconcerned husband, being let down by the Lt Lory the police officer who carried out the investigating her disappearance followed then by threats from persons unknown to drop her search and investigations of her sister. The story slowly builds and develops into intriguing and very intensive cop thriller. This may be a short story but it isn’t really it feels like a full length story that just keeps you deep in thought and is just addictive.
John‘s writing is descriptive, tight tense and all that it should be to hold one’s attention and ask for more. I loved his writing style and I will be looking for his next book in this series for sure!
What an absolute breath taking action packed thriller. Short story or not, this book grabs you and doesn’t let go until the very last page ending with a surprising and “oh my god” result. If this has anything to go by this awe-inspiring “Dark Series collections” are going to be at the top of my, to read list.
This story is about a Tori Whitfield who wants to become a cop after her sister Amanda disappears without a trace presumably dead with too may un-answered questions. What appears to be a unconcerned husband, being let down by the Lt Lory the police officer who carried out the investigating her disappearance followed then by threats from persons unknown to drop her search and investigations of her sister. The story slowly builds and develops into intriguing and very intensive cop thriller. This may be a short story but it isn’t really it feels like a full length story that just keeps you deep in thought and is just addictive.
John‘s writing is descriptive, tight tense and all that it should be to hold one’s attention and ask for more. I loved his writing style and I will be looking for his next book in this series for sure!
April 27, 2020
A missing person? A tormented sister. A deadly quest.
In this page-turning short story from bestselling author John Greyson, aspiring cop Tori Whitfield deals with the aftermath of her missing sister. Cast into sudden darkness, Tori begins to suspect that someone close to her is involved and tries to set a trap before leaving for the police academy.
It isn't long before the darkness she had escaped from in her hometown finds her. Tori is forced to rush out into a dark snowy night and race back to her hometown in order to save two innocent lives but is quickly greeted by the horrible truth.
Will Tori survive her nightmare or will she fall victim to the hideous truth that is determined to destroy her?
This is a brilliant read.
Wonderful well written plot and story line that had me engaged from the start.
Love the well fleshed out characters and found them believeable.
Great suspense and action with wonderful world building.
Can't wait to read what the author brings out next.
Recommend reading.
In this page-turning short story from bestselling author John Greyson, aspiring cop Tori Whitfield deals with the aftermath of her missing sister. Cast into sudden darkness, Tori begins to suspect that someone close to her is involved and tries to set a trap before leaving for the police academy.
It isn't long before the darkness she had escaped from in her hometown finds her. Tori is forced to rush out into a dark snowy night and race back to her hometown in order to save two innocent lives but is quickly greeted by the horrible truth.
Will Tori survive her nightmare or will she fall victim to the hideous truth that is determined to destroy her?
This is a brilliant read.
Wonderful well written plot and story line that had me engaged from the start.
Love the well fleshed out characters and found them believeable.
Great suspense and action with wonderful world building.
Can't wait to read what the author brings out next.
Recommend reading.
March 2, 2021
This is an astounding short story. It is well plotted, beautifully told about a sister looking for her missing sister who is married and has two young daughters. Giving up on the local police department she gives up her job as a school counselor, enrolls in the Police Academy and is going to find her sister, herself. But she is getting threats and almost killed by someone who wants her to just give up the case and let the police do their job. Lots of excitement, twists and turns and just a jolly fun read! Will look for more books by John!
May 7, 2020
Another fast packing adventure crime story! John's books never disappoints me! This author has mystery and crime adventures all you could ask for and he has you sitting on the edge of your seat and can't read fast enough to find out what happens! I like his stories cause it's short,but he gets his point across! The characters in this story are so very well portrayed and believable! Look forward to more stories!!
June 14, 2020
Preyed Upon (Dark Place collection), my fourth read from author Nadia Siddiqui. As good as her Anonymous shorts are, this is as good or better! Another 90-Minute (or less) Mystery, Thriller & Suspense Short Read. I really liked it. In fact, after reading this book I look forward to reading more from this author. "I received a free review copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review." (RIP Marley January 20, 2014 - July 24, 2018).
May 14, 2020
Preyed Upon
In the search to find her missing sister, Tori leaves her teaching job to become a cop. For being a short story, it had a lot to say. Well written, fast paced, and believable characters. A good story to read before bed, relaxing and enjoyable. The ending was a surprise!
I received this book in exchange of an honest review.
In the search to find her missing sister, Tori leaves her teaching job to become a cop. For being a short story, it had a lot to say. Well written, fast paced, and believable characters. A good story to read before bed, relaxing and enjoyable. The ending was a surprise!
I received this book in exchange of an honest review.
June 17, 2020
Not very good at all. The writing was more tell than show with long, winding sentences. The idea was good, but very poor execution. The author seemed to have some very strong opinions that they tried to express through the characters and it came off very rantish. Would have been a much better story with a bit of editing.
April 5, 2020
Drama, angst, and questions...Another great twisty turny short story from John Greyson.
Awaiting the next one!..
I received a free copy of the book from the author and I am thrilled to be able to give you my honest review.
Awaiting the next one!..
I received a free copy of the book from the author and I am thrilled to be able to give you my honest review.
May 7, 2020
Shorter is Better
Great story, told with skill and brevity. Possibly could have benefited from extra proofing (Wills/Mills, "you're" - possessive) but I want to read more from this author.
Great story, told with skill and brevity. Possibly could have benefited from extra proofing (Wills/Mills, "you're" - possessive) but I want to read more from this author.
May 8, 2020
What would you do to find your sister? How far would you go? Would you turn your whole world upside down? Tori loves her sister but has she gone too far? Read this intense story and judge for yourself. I was given this as a free book and this is my honest opinion.
April 12, 2021
Good mystery
Enjoyed this book very much. I was twisted trying to figure out what really happened. The one person I really thought was guilty, was not. Guess I’m not much of a detective. Love all Nadia Siddiqui books
Enjoyed this book very much. I was twisted trying to figure out what really happened. The one person I really thought was guilty, was not. Guess I’m not much of a detective. Love all Nadia Siddiqui books
March 14, 2020
Surprised
A fun read, but didn't guess the ending. A little light on true suspense, but still was a good story.
A fun read, but didn't guess the ending. A little light on true suspense, but still was a good story.
March 27, 2020
Quick Read
Thank you John Grayson for the quick read. Enjoyed the story and read it in one sitting. Will have to read more of this authors books
Thank you John Grayson for the quick read. Enjoyed the story and read it in one sitting. Will have to read more of this authors books
March 29, 2020
Yes great read bit of a twist can't wait for the next
June 7, 2020
A missing sister, a deadly confrontation!
A good start to a new series! Thrilling from the start.
Looking forward to the next instalment and her journey into a new career.
A good start to a new series! Thrilling from the start.
Looking forward to the next instalment and her journey into a new career.
April 7, 2021
It's a good short story, slightly laboured in places but interesting and the ending was excellent
April 29, 2021
I absolutely loved this book. The main character reminded me of myself when I went through the police academy. This was a book with such a surprising twist.
September 30, 2021
Thought this to be poorly written. Unrealistic scenes and dialogue. Thin characters.
December 3, 2021
An interesting short story.
September 6, 2020
Full of the unexpected
Well written, good characters, easy to read. I believe this book to be the start of a good series.
I received this book as an arc and wanted to give an honest review.
Well written, good characters, easy to read. I believe this book to be the start of a good series.
I received this book as an arc and wanted to give an honest review.
June 9, 2020
A poignant short story full of twists and turns. A definite page-turner.
June 28, 2022
The story sheds light on our main protagonist Tori Whitefield and her sister Amanda. One day, Amanda goes missing while out shopping with her mother and twin daughters with no trace at all. Soon after 7 months, Toru feels the police department might not have investigated her sister's case they way they should've had and so she she decides to become one and do that herself. Her primary suspect, Amanda's husband is soon proven innocent and she feels lost in her way. She receives death threats from an unknown masked stranger telling to drop her investigations for the case.
The story is slow paced at some points yet the events are interesting. Moreover, the writing style and the twists at the end made the plot engaging .
Thanks to the author for sending me an ARC copy of the book in exchange of an honest review .
The story is slow paced at some points yet the events are interesting. Moreover, the writing style and the twists at the end made the plot engaging .
Thanks to the author for sending me an ARC copy of the book in exchange of an honest review .
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