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Tempting Noah: Tempting men Series
84 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 1, 2021
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April 5, 2021
The couple: Noah and Lily
Romance genre: Age gap
Part of a series: Yes (Tempting Men - but has not been written yet)
Length: 72 pages
Plot: Lily is a newly-18 year old who works hard to support her freeloading mother, and sometimes she hangs out at an auto body shop to catch a glimpse of Noah, a much older, silver fox of a man. She has a big ol' crush on him, and he feels the same way about her (X 100). Her mom is a problem though. Her mom takes most of her money, mostly so she can engage in her habit of snagging rich guys. Her mom goes too far, though and now owes money to some shady characters that are willing to take it out on Lily. They try to kidnap Lily, but she manages to get away, and runs to the nearest house, which happens to belong to Noah. The story progresses from there.
Character development: Why was Lily hanging out at the mechanic's shop? She would just randomly walk in, stay for a minute, not say or do anything, and then leave. It didn't make any sense. I think that having a place for Noah to work was fine, and I like highlighting the blue collar work that he did, but having a logical reason for Lily to walk into the auto shop, or having them meet in another way, would have made the story just a little more believable. I loved the DD/lg-type interaction between them, so I would have loved this story with a few tweaks. Also - that mom! I hope that's a caricature, but I'm sad to think that there must be that comically villainous of a woman out there.
Grammar/formatting: Lots of grammatical errors, commas especially - need a good editor to catch those mistakes. If those mistakes were cleared up, this would be a good story.
Would I read more from this author/in this series: no - the errors were too distracting and pulled me out of the story; this is unfortunate, because the storyline had a lot of potential
Romance genre: Age gap
Part of a series: Yes (Tempting Men - but has not been written yet)
Length: 72 pages
Plot: Lily is a newly-18 year old who works hard to support her freeloading mother, and sometimes she hangs out at an auto body shop to catch a glimpse of Noah, a much older, silver fox of a man. She has a big ol' crush on him, and he feels the same way about her (X 100). Her mom is a problem though. Her mom takes most of her money, mostly so she can engage in her habit of snagging rich guys. Her mom goes too far, though and now owes money to some shady characters that are willing to take it out on Lily. They try to kidnap Lily, but she manages to get away, and runs to the nearest house, which happens to belong to Noah. The story progresses from there.
Character development: Why was Lily hanging out at the mechanic's shop? She would just randomly walk in, stay for a minute, not say or do anything, and then leave. It didn't make any sense. I think that having a place for Noah to work was fine, and I like highlighting the blue collar work that he did, but having a logical reason for Lily to walk into the auto shop, or having them meet in another way, would have made the story just a little more believable. I loved the DD/lg-type interaction between them, so I would have loved this story with a few tweaks. Also - that mom! I hope that's a caricature, but I'm sad to think that there must be that comically villainous of a woman out there.
Grammar/formatting: Lots of grammatical errors, commas especially - need a good editor to catch those mistakes. If those mistakes were cleared up, this would be a good story.
Would I read more from this author/in this series: no - the errors were too distracting and pulled me out of the story; this is unfortunate, because the storyline had a lot of potential
January 3, 2021
Nope. Sorry, but can't keep reading this. I endured it until about 57% but seriously, I can't read anymore. There are so many typos and grammar errors that actually make my head hurt. And the writing is.... immature. Then, the girl is a bit stupid and has no backbone. The man is.... I can't even tell. He's just not very likeable, in my opinion. It could have been a nice read, if thoroughly edited.
April 2, 2022
Tempting Noah is a fast-paced age gap story with family drama and suspense that will keep you turning the pages.
Lily lives with her mom, who think nothing but of herself. She has dreams that are being crushed by her mom's selfishness and her life in danger by her actions. Noah owns the auto shop in town, he has noticed Lily when she walks by the shop, although he wants to know more, he keeps his distance until she shows up at this door.
Noah protects what is his, and the includes Lily. Their connection is intense, and the passion is hot that you will need to take a moment. Great story to get lost in.
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I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Lily lives with her mom, who think nothing but of herself. She has dreams that are being crushed by her mom's selfishness and her life in danger by her actions. Noah owns the auto shop in town, he has noticed Lily when she walks by the shop, although he wants to know more, he keeps his distance until she shows up at this door.
Noah protects what is his, and the includes Lily. Their connection is intense, and the passion is hot that you will need to take a moment. Great story to get lost in.
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I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 5, 2021
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review. Noah and Lily are attracted to each other but Noah doesn't act on it as he doesn't know if she's legal. When Lily is in danger and runs unknowingly to Noah's cabin, he finds out she is and they go to bed together. While it has a happy ending, it was trite and missed the opportunity to make it good by not expanding on the drama part of the story.
January 17, 2021
Story about Noah and Lily. NOah own a garage..and Lily...comes to look every day. She has hots for him..but she is minor.
He will wait....but...it will not be easy
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
He will wait....but...it will not be easy
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 11, 2022
I felt so bad for Lily in this story, I can’t believe how awful her family life is. Noah is a really sweet guy and seems to really care for Lily. Their relationship is pretty steamy hot. This story and enjoyable though there wasn’t a lot of depth to it.
I received a free advanced review copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a fair and honest review.
I received a free advanced review copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a fair and honest review.
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