Actual rating: 3.5 stars, but for the sake of the concept, I'm rounding it up to 4 on GR.
I really do enjoy this concept. Everyone gets a device that makes them basically superhuman, sounds awesome right? Except that the devices can be overridden and people basically become slaves to them given the right circumstances. In general, that idea sounds enticing, and any concept that makes me wonder what I would do in that circumstance is intriguing.
So these people live in their sweet, little community, where everyone is supposed to be equal, but things aren't as idyllic as they seem. The "Equality Movement" means that anyone who is different or who stands out is in violation of that movement, no matter what the circumstances are, not matter what's going on. Any heroic acts threaten "equality" and are frowned upon, and in certain cases even met with retribution. Our heroine, Mari, has just gotten Amplified, but is being monitored because her actions have made her stand out. She struggles to fit in, to be "normal" because she's always been taught to think for herself and she's a creative individual, but in this society, that isn't just frowned upon, but also forbidden. Mari enjoys the power of being amplified, but is also concerned about what amplification means in terms of who she is; she worries about the overrides, about amplification changing her, about letting the amplifier control too much.
And beyond those concerns, the more time that goes by, and the more these kids progress with their training, the more we learn that their idyllic community has been keeping things from them, things that could be dangerous, and things that threaten to change the very world they thought they knew. Near the end of the book, Mari starts to uncover some of these secrets, and begins to realize that things aren't as perfect as they seem, that the leader isn't benevolent as she's been taught. Every new thing she learns begs even more questions though, for her as well as the reader.
And for the intrigue and mystery, excitement and action in this book, that is the one things that holds it back from receiving 5 stars (at least to me). The book ends with an abrupt bang, and everything is wrapped up very quickly, but we're left with more questions than answers, which drives me nuts. I felt that everything came to a head far too quickly and wrapped itself up much too fast. Also, because things ended so quickly, I feel like we didn't get any REAL closure. I feel like one conflict was resolved, but it created five more conflicts which were just left up in the air. So the ending didn't feel like a proper ending to me.
I'm definitely interested enough in this world that Flauding created that I want to read more, and I like Mari as a character. I want to know what she does, and what happens, but I just wish that we got to find out more before the book ended, because I feel like many of the main issues were never resolved, and I wish that the ending itself actually felt like an ending, because instead it felt like the ending to a chapter. It felt to me like there should be another three chapters in this book before it ends, and for some reason, my copy just got messed up and they weren't printed in my copy. That's how jarring the ending was for me. That said though, I still give this book some credit, because up until that point, I did like it, and the premise really intrigues me.
Also, there's the matter of slight grammatical mistakes. I didn't make a specific note of every single one this time, but I noticed a few, and a recurring mistake: Talina's name is spelled Talena with an "e" instead of an "i" on multiple occasions, which drove me nuts. come on now, stick to a single spelling would you? Other than that though, I didn't mind the writing. It didn't stand out in any way, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, because it means that it was decent enough to read and be able to get into the story, and the writing wasn't messy or jarring enough to get in the way, but it also means that it didn't stand out in any fashion either. Overall though, I don't need phenomenal writing to enjoy a story, I just need it to be good enough to allow me to jump into the story, and Flauding did achieve that here.
All in all, I love this story, I'm just not crazy about it's execution, particularly the ending. But I like it enough that I will definitely be reading the rest of the series to see how things turn out (especially since things ended so abruptly in this book, I really do need some closure.)