I'm not sure if this book classifies itself as a mystery or a thriller, but to me, it doesn't belong to either category. Why? Because you already know who did the deed in the very first chapter, courtesy of the narrator and main protagonist, Claire. She tells you outright that her husband is behind her attempted murder, and the next couple hundred pages don't do anything to change that belief, only to cement it.
So this book is not a whodunit, as we already know who. It's eventually revealed that it wasn't her husband Griffin who personally carried it out, but he had a huge hand in planning her murder because she was going to ruin his chances of becoming governor of Connecticut by exposing him as the murderer of her best friend, who also happened to be his ex-girlfriend.
It's not really a howdunit either, because as much as Griffin Chase would like other people to believe, he's not a genius, and his plot is just so ridiculously stupid. It reeks of someone trying to be a wannabe killer, but effed up so bad that it made it easy to catch him, since he involved way too many people in his murder scheme. Even worse, they failed to kill their intended targets the first time around, Claire and Dan, and instead caused the death of an innocent person, Dan's wife Sallie. For someone who is supposed to be a brilliant prosecutor, it really doesn't seem like he is one, based on how the story unfolded. The first rule in killing people (do not try, of course!) is to involve as little people as possible, because people talk. It's obvious that the more people know about your secret, the more likely you'll get caught because they can't keep their big mouths shut. Or they'll screw up, because you can't trust everyone to be as careful as you are, and then they leave a trail of evidence and witnesses behind, which is what happened in this case. Police aren't dumb, you know.
Claire tells us that her husband said to her that he'd never made such idiotic mistakes if he were in the defendant's shoes, and being a prosecutor taught him to perfect the art of the crime. Of course, hindsight is 20/20, so it's easy to say that, but come on. There were so many utterly stupid things he did. Let's see what they are.
1) Leaving Spencer alive. Why. He knew that her friend Marnie had drowned, because she had been trying to escape from him after he raped her. He also knew that Spencer knew who he was, and that she was almost also raped by his friend Dan. He should have killed her too, but instead, he killed Ellen. Granted, he wasn't a prosecutor then, but if he was so concerned about his public image, he would have retraced his steps and eliminated Spencer as his top priority, not Claire. Claire only guessed what had happened, but she has no evidence, and it's all conjecture on her part.
2) Using a knife on Claire. Oh my god, this was so dumb, because he literally said in the story that he would never be so stupid as to use a knife to kill someone. And then he does, for the kicks of scaring the daylights out of her. First, it may leave DNA if the killer wounded himself, which didn't happen here, but you know, killing never goes as expected, so why would you, if you knew there's a possibility of it happening? Second, the killer used it to scare her, because she had said she's scared of knives, but was that really necessary? When you try to be fancy and metaphoric in killing, you screw up. As a result, her DNA was all over the knife when there was no reason for it at all. Third, now you have an extra crap to dispose of. Unlike common household objects, it's pretty easy to identify knives as they're potential murder weapons, so finding a bloody one is like screaming "OMG I did something bad with this here knife!" So guess what happened? Some kids find the bloody knife (you didn't even clean it, what the hell, Mr. Prosecutor?) and that lead the cops to find even more incriminating evidence. Hah, and you said you learned from the guilty party's mistakes.
3) The elaborate killing of Claire. Ok, so Griffin has an airtight alibi for the time when Claire was supposedly killed. But why did the killer who was not Griffin (Or was it? Eh, who cares?) do so much random crap when he should have just strangled her? He beat her up on the head, choked her, then used the knife to slice up her arms, and then hung her on the rafters, which then broke, allowing her to survive and escape. What the heck? You know that's four ways to kill a person, but way too many, right? Just stick with one. Variety is not the spice of death. This is why his plan is ridiculous. If the killer had just gone through with any of the first three assaults, Claire would be dead. Instead, she lived because the killer just couldn't choose the best way to kill a small woman who can't even fight back. Sigh.
4) He involved the whole gang. Or otherwise known as The Last Monday Club, an ultra secret club of wealthy misogynistic men. Except it's not that secret. Even the local newspaper knows the name of the club, and the fact that it's supposed to be a secret. That's when you know that you've failed at being secretive. And you also have two members who are parading around wearing the logo of said secret club. Headdesk. Not only that, but he strung along the children of the members of this club in his evil plot as well. I guess he's raising the heirs to fill their shoes, but you must know that teenagers can hardly be trusted with getting things done right, especially things like murder.
5) He kept the children of Dan and Sallie alive. I don't know what the heck was going through his mind when he decided that. Ok, so you want to be governor of Connecticut? That's a pretty long official position to hold if he had won. The children witnessed everything, and know all the major details of what he planned. They know that he was planning to kill Dan, and also that he wanted to get rid of Claire. When they are older, they can spill the truth to someone and his image will be completely ruined, if there hadn't already been other people that lived through his terribly thought-out schemes to begin with. He's left too many victims alive, and that's what ultimately brought him down. So yeah, I don't see why he bothered to keep these two kids safe if he knew they had the possibility of talking, which was the whole point of why he wanted to kill Claire and Dan to begin with. They gave some lame excuse like he didn't want the children to be abandoned like he was, but hello they know everything, so you should just kill them too? It's not even like he has a soft spot for children, anyway.
6) The already-dug out graves. Who does that? Why would you dig out a grave-shaped hole to fill with a body? Is it economical? Dig an early grave, get 20% off on suspicion towards you? I don't get it. And let's point out that the graves aren't located in remote places at all. One is nearby the lodge the club hunts at, and the other is in Dan's yard. Yeah, this just boggles my mind. This is screaming, "I'm going to kill someone soon™!"
That's just the list off the top of my head. There's probably more errors he made, but these were the most glaring ones I remembered. This is kind of like those horror movies where the main character does everything you're not supposed to do to survive, except it's for a killer who doesn't want to get caught. It's a huge trainwreck, and it's obvious that his plan was going to crumble one way or the other, because it's just full of holes like Swiss cheese.
Besides Griffin acting like a numbskull, this book was just full of things that just didn't jive with me.
The most offensive thing was the non-linear timeline. The story starts with Claire recounting the attack as it happens, I guess to hook the audience. Then it backtracks to several days before the incident. After a couple chapters, it jumps forward. And then back. We have constant "X days before" and "X days after" and at first, I couldn't tell if the after was supposed to be after the previous chapter about it being before, but then I realized it means before/after the incident in the first chapter. I think they should just have put a date on it to make it clear. But, besides the point. The non-linear timeline was confusing as hell and also pointless. It wasn't executed well at all.
The constant switching of perspectives made it worse. I'm reading about Claire being all happy in the past, and then to Sallie, who I already know is dead. Like, why do I care about her POV? She's dead, and the mystery isn't who is behind her death. Actually, there was no mystery at all to begin with, because it's all Griffin anyway. The story doesn't try to give us a red herring. We know it is Griffin as Claire had already told us so from chapter one, and if it's not him, it's his club members. The actual who did the killing isn't important, since it all ties up back to him running for governor, and his loyal lackeys who'd do anything to make sure he succeeds.
I actually think the story would be far more interesting in chronological order, so we could at least wonder if the two women's incidents were related, but as it's presented here, we know that it's a sure thing. You see, if the multiple perspectives happened linearly, we'd be wondering how the two women's stories tie into each other, but the author showed her hand too early, and in the wrong order, so it didn't work for this story. What's more annoying though, is that all the other characters think Claire is likely dead, and then we have every other chapter with Claire talking in first person about how alive she still is, so it just completely defeats the point. Honestly, if you had eliminated Claire's POV, this story would be more thrilling, especially if we didn't know she was alive. That would have been a cool twist.
Another thing with this book is that there are way too many characters, with extremely boring names that made it hard to keep track of, and they're all somehow related to each other. I think by the end of the second chapter, with Conor's perspective, we have been introduced to over ten key people in the span of a few pages, and several chapters later, we're treated like we know and remember who these people were. Well, I certainly didn't. I had to use the X-Ray function of the ebook to figure out when the character mentioned appeared, and what their role or relationship with someone else was. And what's even worse, sometimes these forgettable characters were the main perspective of the chapter, even though they're not one of the main characters in the story. The only perspectives I cared about were those of Conor and Tom, the two detective brothers who were investigating the two separate incidents of the two women, but piecing it together to get the bigger picture that it was all related to Griffin Chase. Everyone else's story was just unnecessary, or too convenient, serving as single-use info-dumps.
Like Spencer, for instance, whose role was so specific, and by all cases, shouldn't even be alive to do any of the things that she did in this story. Like I said earlier, Griffin should have tracked her down and silenced her early on. She's not exactly in hiding, nor is she off the grid. With Griffin's supposedly wide network, she'd be easy to catch. Like with her posting very telling comments on the Facebook page and putting up stalkerish photos of Claire online. Who does that? It should be easy to track her IP address. And one of the crazy lackeys of his directly messaged this person as well, and should know that this online person is a viable threat to his campaign. It certainly didn't take Claire any real difficulty to contact her, so I don't see why Griffin wouldn't have lured Spencer out to kill her too, if he was so scared of Claire spilling some beans with no evidence whatsoever. Allowing Claire to learn the story of what Griffin did when he was a college boy didn't change the story, and didn't thicken the plot. It's all just in a day's work for this busy murderous, psychopathic prosecutor. It gave her some crazy foolhardy courage to go back to her house (seriously, why?) to almost get killed by her husband the second time.
I can't even suspend my disbelief at how stupid Claire is. By all accounts, she should be dead too. She's constantly traipsing around the woods and the beach near her house, and somehow her all-controlling husband doesn't know where she could have gone, like she never told him that she has a secret cabin in there, where she spent most of her childhood. Then she goes to the tide pool where she and Griffin found Ellen's body, which he already knows is one of her favorite spots, he's caught her there on multiple occasions. But there's more. She even goes inside her own studio, which is right next to where they live together, and does ridiculous things like Googling herself on her laptop and prancing in areas where there's security cameras. She doesn't even do this just at her own house, she goes checking Facebook after breaking into her other best friend's house too. Priorities, right? When you're being hunted down by a killer husband, first things first, must check social media!
That whole Facebook group thing was another pile of crap. I personally can't imagine complete strangers setting up multiple, strictly enforced groups on social media concerning a missing person. She's not really a celebrity, even if she is the wife of someone who would become governor. People just don't give that much of a darn about other people that they don't know in real life. When Claire joined her own missing person group to find the woman posting negative things about Griffin, the whole conversation between her and the admin of the group had my eyes rolling. It was totally unrealistic. And why were some of these people using real names and others using online handles? The Facebook I know doesn't have usernames with random numbers following a name. Not that Spencer was using a very hard to figure out handle, it's just her last name with several numbers after it. It would make more sense for her to use a random string of letters and numbers instead, to err on the side of caution. Seriously, how did she live for so long, I don't know. It must be luck that the villains are as stupid as the heroes, or there'd be no story to tell.
The most disturbing part of the story though was the constant attempts to make Griffin seem nice. Maybe that's not the right way to put it. But it spends so much time on Claire flashbacking to some random happier time when she was having romantic moments with him, and these all ultimately don't tie in with the rest of the story. It would do so in the most inappropriate moments, like when she was about to die, or get discovered, or otherwise doing something more important than reminiscing. Honestly, I wanted to smack her myself, because it was getting on my nerves. There'll some heart-pounding moment (or as close to one as it gets, basically whenever it gets a little interesting), and Claire would just launch into a multi-page flashback without warning, and I would sigh in frustration. I don't know what the author was aiming for. Is it trying to tell us Griffin isn't so bad, that he can be nice and loving, if he wants to? So we should feel a little sorry for him? Or is it trying to save Claire, telling us that it's understandable why she liked someone like him? Either way, I didn't feel it was executed well, and should have been left out entirely. Griffin is beyond salvation at this point, because not only is a he murdering rapist, he's also so scared to get his hands dirty, he's making his own teenaged sons do the killing for him, which is beyond depraved.
The poor women in the story don't get my pity either. Claire knows she's in an abusive relationship, but does nothing, except to continue stroking his ego whenever he wants her to. She doesn't help with raising his sons, so that they can avoid following his awful footsteps. Instead, she seems to drive them to work even harder against her. Not to forget, but she was Griffin's mistress, even when she had been happily married to a guy called Nate. Just because she had lusted after Griffin, for all this time. I find her a self-destructive woman. She brought this on herself.
Ellen, the poor best friend of hers who died a long time ago, is no saint either. She allowed Griffin and Dan to rape two girls, and did nothing but sit in her car. She didn't even try calling the police, or warning the girls that they would get drugged. When Claire brought her up again in the last chapter, I just felt disgust. Ellen is no hero. Yes, her death was tragic, but she doesn't elicit any sympathy. If she had tried to fight Griffin, and died for it, that would be a different story.
Sallie is just as unlikeable. She's a married woman with two young kids, but willingly chose to have an affair. And the story paints her like an angel, because of her love for the color white, which was unnaturally forced upon us in yet another weird flashback. She also drew the attention of a potential psychopath-in-the-making in the form of Griffin's son, Ford. We learn her death was an accident, but she's not an innocent person by any means. She knew that Dan was behind something, but was too absorbed in her own scandalous relations to focus on it before it was too late. It almost got her beloved children killed.
The final chapter was just a I-don't-give-a-crap, or that's what it felt like to me. Griffin throws all his elaborate plans out the window, deciding to strangle Claire with his bare hands in the open space of their yard, where there's security guards and cameras. Claire also did some stupid thing where she emailed her ex-husband Nate saying that she hates him for siding with the evil elite club, all on the basis of having found his autographed books at the manor where they plotted their wicked plans. I don't even know how she came to that conclusion. That's like if someone went to a fan meeting to meet an author, and then that someone killed a person, does that mean that the author supported their fan in killing people, just because they signed one of their books? No! Claire needs this explained to her like she's a toddler, and then she realizes she loves Nate. Sigh.
Oh, and that speech she gave Griffin when he was arrested? Yeah, I get it was supposed to be like a reverse-the-tables power speech, but it just rings hollow. She tells him, "You've been caught by the women whom you've abused" or something to that effect. No, he was caught because he effed up so bad, nothing could save him. Even if Claire and Spencer were dead, the police would have caught him on the plethora of evidence and witnesses he left behind and alive. He even had Dan buried in his own yard. Such stupidity. The police did all the legwork, Claire is just fluffing it up to be her moment, when in actuality, she didn't really do anything. Nor did any of the other women in this story.
When you think about it, it's unlikely that Griffin and his gang will stay in prison for long. They supposedly have a lot of connections and money, so I'm sure they'd be able to pull some strings to get out of it somehow. Wasn't that the entire reason that Claire couldn't show herself, because she knew he'd twist the truth, and couldn't be convicted? I think that got lost somewhere in the middle of the story, as nothing really changed, yet after hearing Spencer's story, she just decided to gun for it, consequences be damned. Griffin can forget about becoming governor for sure, though. I guess it's a bittersweet victory on their part.
Last note, is it just me, or Claire has an eye fetish? It spends a lot of the time describing Griffin's eyes, and how they change color, from green to black, like it's meaningful, but it doesn't bring anything new to the table. She'd be staring at his eyes when she should be concentrating on something more pressing. By the way, Nate's eyes are blue.