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Come Undone: A Love Triangle
Her fiance doesn’t want her anymore. Her new neighbor would do anything to have her.
From the outside, Alyssa has the perfect life. Beautiful apartment. Handsome high school sweetheart. Impending wedding.
Only her fiance doesn't love her anymore. He disappears into work, leaving her alone with her emptiness.
Until Luke. The brooding lawyer needs a beautiful distraction. Soft lips against his chest, hard nails against his back, Alyssa groaning his name.
He doesn't care that she belongs to someone else. He's going to claim her anyway.
From the outside, Alyssa has the perfect life. Beautiful apartment. Handsome high school sweetheart. Impending wedding.
Only her fiance doesn't love her anymore. He disappears into work, leaving her alone with her emptiness.
Until Luke. The brooding lawyer needs a beautiful distraction. Soft lips against his chest, hard nails against his back, Alyssa groaning his name.
He doesn't care that she belongs to someone else. He's going to claim her anyway.
360 pages, Paperback
First published December 27, 2018
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Crystal Kaswell
114 books2,549 followersCrystal Kaswell is the author of the Sinful Serenade series. She writes steamy new adult romance with flawed characters. She loves police procedurals, tea, and The Hunger Games series. She lives in Portland, OR with her husband.
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March 10, 2021
Alyssa is an actress battling an eating disorder and is newly engaged to Ryan who is an emotionally abusive workaholic lawyer. At Ryan's law firm she meets Luke his partner who is handsome and genuinely interested in her. The two of them start a friendship and when she and Ryan go on a break it becomes something much more.
I loved Luke in this book from start to finish I thought he was charming and smart and just perfect. I like him and Alyssa together because they had great chemistry although near the end it drove me crazy that Alyssa wouldn't just pick him when it was obvious she had fallen in love with him. I liked the end when she finally did pick him and told Ryan off and thought it was a long time coming.
I loved Luke in this book from start to finish I thought he was charming and smart and just perfect. I like him and Alyssa together because they had great chemistry although near the end it drove me crazy that Alyssa wouldn't just pick him when it was obvious she had fallen in love with him. I liked the end when she finally did pick him and told Ryan off and thought it was a long time coming.
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October 24, 2019
I'm a hardcore fan of the love triangle trope, there's very little drama in my life (Thank God) so reading about fictional characters with tons of drama in theirs is fun.
Problem with loving this trope though is it's very hard to find an excellent one because it so hard to write this kind of story in a sufficient way.
This story had a lot of potential, I was immediately pulled into the story and although some of the characters were extremely annoying and jumped on my last nerve I was willing to over look that for the quality of the plot, however that plummeted for me as well.
Look, I'm going to be honest if I can't find some kind of kinship with the heroine then the results probably aren't going to be favorable and I never grew to like her, having nothing to do with her personal situations that she was trying to over come her back and forth gave me whipped lash, I mean yeah, you need to choose but when one of the choices is an egotistical, narcissistic, controlling ass bag it shouldn't be that hard? I found her to be a bit contrived, self centered and shallow at times and her character never really evolved emotionally.
There are hot scenes, sure but even those seemed to be perfunctory and I skimmed those after awhile because I would rather there be a focus on an actual connection. So, it wasn't for me but maybe it will be for you.
Problem with loving this trope though is it's very hard to find an excellent one because it so hard to write this kind of story in a sufficient way.
This story had a lot of potential, I was immediately pulled into the story and although some of the characters were extremely annoying and jumped on my last nerve I was willing to over look that for the quality of the plot, however that plummeted for me as well.
Look, I'm going to be honest if I can't find some kind of kinship with the heroine then the results probably aren't going to be favorable and I never grew to like her, having nothing to do with her personal situations that she was trying to over come her back and forth gave me whipped lash, I mean yeah, you need to choose but when one of the choices is an egotistical, narcissistic, controlling ass bag it shouldn't be that hard? I found her to be a bit contrived, self centered and shallow at times and her character never really evolved emotionally.
There are hot scenes, sure but even those seemed to be perfunctory and I skimmed those after awhile because I would rather there be a focus on an actual connection. So, it wasn't for me but maybe it will be for you.
December 29, 2018
Alyssa's just received a proposal from her best friend, the man she loves. But, is she in love with him? Does he truly make her happy? Is he truly good for her? Or is she just holding on to what he was once for her, to her? That same night of the proposal, he rushes her out of the restaurant to his law firm - yet another emergency. He can't even spend the time to celebrate their engagement. But that's OK because he's not the romantic type, right? And then she meets his partner, Luke. Hot, tatted up Luke, to whom she's immediately attracted. And you can probably see the writing on the wall just from that sentence. I could, but it didn't stop me from being entertained by Come Undone.
I have to say that Come Undone is a departure from Crystal Kaswell's usual writing. It's still excellent, angsty, and sexy, but Luke isn't really her usual type of hero and Alyssa definitely is not her usual heroine. Alyssa is really the main reason why I couldn't give this 5 stars. She drove me bonkers with her wishy washy attitude, stringing Luke along. The cheating part didn't really bother me, as it was kind of a Ross & Rachel situation and her fiancé was a complete and total douchebag who deserved everything bad that came his way. Not that cheating is OK, though I get where Alyssa was coming from in that situation. BUT, she should have just left him completely before she ever started anything with Luke. Then she wouldn't have been stringing Luke along and her fiancé wouldn't have had any reason to come down on her about anything. Anyway...as much as Alyssa irritated me, I loved the rest of this story, especially Luke. What can I say? Tall, tatted up men with hearts of gold are my jam!
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May 11, 2019
I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
I did not enjoy this book. Luke was hot; however, Ryan was manipulative and Alyssa was annoying. And Luke being hot was not enough to carry me through the book. He may not have liked Ryan but that does not excuse his behavior towards Alyssa. This could have been a really great book dealing with Alyssa and her eating disorder but anytime there was really a chance to get into that with her sponsor it was quashed. Instead, the storyline just dragged on way too long. I did not appreciate the cheating aspect of the book (yes, it was cheating). The only reason I finished the book is that Luke and Alyssa did have great chemistry. Again that was not enough to redeem the book for me. I say skip it.
I did not enjoy this book. Luke was hot; however, Ryan was manipulative and Alyssa was annoying. And Luke being hot was not enough to carry me through the book. He may not have liked Ryan but that does not excuse his behavior towards Alyssa. This could have been a really great book dealing with Alyssa and her eating disorder but anytime there was really a chance to get into that with her sponsor it was quashed. Instead, the storyline just dragged on way too long. I did not appreciate the cheating aspect of the book (yes, it was cheating). The only reason I finished the book is that Luke and Alyssa did have great chemistry. Again that was not enough to redeem the book for me. I say skip it.
December 29, 2018
It was very different than I expected. First of all, I love the book cover. The story was written in much darker tones and I don't always like it(you need to be in the "mood to read stuff like that), but this was written so well.I enjoyed the story and how things were unfolding. Alyssa's life and love life is worth reading.If you like not sugar-coated stories, but raw and real ones then you will love this one!
Disclaimer-It does talks about toxic relationship and an eating disorder.If you are triggered by things like this, better skip this one.
4/5 stars
I received an advanced copy of this manuscript and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
Disclaimer-It does talks about toxic relationship and an eating disorder.If you are triggered by things like this, better skip this one.
4/5 stars
I received an advanced copy of this manuscript and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
December 28, 2018
A fantastic story of a girl stuck between two men. The one who seemed to always be there but may not be the best for her after all, and the new one that sparks new life in her and makes her feel alive again.
I love Alyssa and Luke - they have that steam level on high but also have a bond that is sweet and meaningful. This story is well written, entertaining and satisfying.
I received an advanced reader's copy of the book and I am voluntarily leaving my honest review and recommendation.
I love Alyssa and Luke - they have that steam level on high but also have a bond that is sweet and meaningful. This story is well written, entertaining and satisfying.
I received an advanced reader's copy of the book and I am voluntarily leaving my honest review and recommendation.
December 28, 2018
Wow!! I was biting my nails the entire read! Alyssa has struggles, she's strong in some ways and weak in others but is working to change that. I felt for her, loved the bits of pain and struggle she had. The push and pull, ups and downs with both Ryan and Luke kept me completely on edge and I loved every second of it. A great read, characters that I really enjoyed and a story that grabbed hold of me.
I received a copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
I received a copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
April 29, 2021
I really enjoyed my first read of this author. I haven’t read a love triangle in a while. Does Alyssa choose the safe choice Ryan the one she could always count on? Or does she choose Luke who actually talks to her and shows how a man in love should be treating her.
I saw the tug and pull Alyssa had and I’m glad she finally choose what she finally wanted for herself.
I saw the tug and pull Alyssa had and I’m glad she finally choose what she finally wanted for herself.
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December 28, 2018
Not my favorite
I wanted to love it like I do with Crystal's other books, but this one just didn't do it for me, granted I am not a fan of cheating whether IRL or in book. I couldn't connect with Alyssa. I understand the self image issues and lack of self confidence because of her body dysmorphia that lead to her bulimia. But at a certain point I couldn't understand how she chose to stay with her fiance with his controlling, manipulative ways. I understand loving someone because of history and being with you through hard times but when a relationship no longer works and when you are aware there are issues why would you say yes to the proposal to begin with then to cheat instead of ending the relationship just doesn't make sense to me. But humans are flawed and Crystal showed that with all of the characters in this book. As always, the chemistry between characters is always off the charts so Crystal did not disappoint with that. Overall a decent book not my favorite, Alyssa and Ryan aggravated me. If this is your first Crystal Kaswell book I would pass and start with one of her other books
I wanted to love it like I do with Crystal's other books, but this one just didn't do it for me, granted I am not a fan of cheating whether IRL or in book. I couldn't connect with Alyssa. I understand the self image issues and lack of self confidence because of her body dysmorphia that lead to her bulimia. But at a certain point I couldn't understand how she chose to stay with her fiance with his controlling, manipulative ways. I understand loving someone because of history and being with you through hard times but when a relationship no longer works and when you are aware there are issues why would you say yes to the proposal to begin with then to cheat instead of ending the relationship just doesn't make sense to me. But humans are flawed and Crystal showed that with all of the characters in this book. As always, the chemistry between characters is always off the charts so Crystal did not disappoint with that. Overall a decent book not my favorite, Alyssa and Ryan aggravated me. If this is your first Crystal Kaswell book I would pass and start with one of her other books
December 21, 2019
This book made my heart ache. It was such a raw emotional and honest story.
This story played so hard on my training. My day job is a Mental Health Supposed Worker and well, you see the main gal has mental health issues, her "bestfriend/boyfriend" thinks he knows what's best. But he isn't aiding her recovery his hindering it.
Person centered recovery is all about enhancing the tools an individuals has to make their recovery smoother, to able them to pick their own pieces up. Unfortunately Ryan does the complete opposite, maybe out of love, maybe for his own needs of control I'm not sure. This book is all written from Alyssa's point of view.
Enter Luke, the guy who does nothing but help set her free. He'll settle for friendship if that's all he can get, but he wants more.
Luke is the dream support system, he encourages her, lifts her up. Makes her feel like her illness isn't what defines her.
This book is labeled as a love triangle, but that's not how I felt reading it. I couldn't feel the connection between Alyssa and Ryan. It just wasn't there. But Alyssa and Luke, oh man. They're ment to be end game.
This story played so hard on my training. My day job is a Mental Health Supposed Worker and well, you see the main gal has mental health issues, her "bestfriend/boyfriend" thinks he knows what's best. But he isn't aiding her recovery his hindering it.
Person centered recovery is all about enhancing the tools an individuals has to make their recovery smoother, to able them to pick their own pieces up. Unfortunately Ryan does the complete opposite, maybe out of love, maybe for his own needs of control I'm not sure. This book is all written from Alyssa's point of view.
Enter Luke, the guy who does nothing but help set her free. He'll settle for friendship if that's all he can get, but he wants more.
Luke is the dream support system, he encourages her, lifts her up. Makes her feel like her illness isn't what defines her.
This book is labeled as a love triangle, but that's not how I felt reading it. I couldn't feel the connection between Alyssa and Ryan. It just wasn't there. But Alyssa and Luke, oh man. They're ment to be end game.
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January 7, 2019
All the main characters had flawed traits both good and bad. However, I didn’t like the way it all played out and it left me conflicted as to whether or not I liked the book overall.
Luke, Ryan, and Alyssa find themselves in a bit of a love triangle. Now while I don’t agree with Ryan’s manipulative behavior and treatment of Alyssa he was at least honest enough as to who he was and there was no mention of him cheating. Alyssa frustrated me with her indecisiveness and meek acceptance of her place in Ryan’s life. Luke was great for Alyssa and for fragile self esteem but knew better than anyone else that his behavior was WRONG. It’s a situation in which everyone had numerous opportunities to walk away from yet persisted in doing the wrong thing. I personally don’t like messy unnecessary drama and cheating is a turn off, all of which transpired in this book. Hard to like and accept.
I voluntarily reviewed an ARC of this book.
December 28, 2018
Loved it!
God this book was special! I've loved a lot of books written by this author, but this might be one of my favorites. Alyssa's character was so interesting to read about. A former actress trying to find her way, she's struggling with past issues that she's been battling with for a while. The guy she's with, he's "safe". He's been her friend for years, but everything about their relationship seemed stilted from day 1. I really liked how this author wrote their relationship, because it set you up for what's to come.
When Luke arrives on scene, it's utterly perfect. Their connection right from the start makes you feel things.
Throughout the book, I just wanted Alyssa to be happy and I love how this author told her story.
God this book was special! I've loved a lot of books written by this author, but this might be one of my favorites. Alyssa's character was so interesting to read about. A former actress trying to find her way, she's struggling with past issues that she's been battling with for a while. The guy she's with, he's "safe". He's been her friend for years, but everything about their relationship seemed stilted from day 1. I really liked how this author wrote their relationship, because it set you up for what's to come.
When Luke arrives on scene, it's utterly perfect. Their connection right from the start makes you feel things.
Throughout the book, I just wanted Alyssa to be happy and I love how this author told her story.
July 26, 2020
I loved this story by Crystal Kaswell! Alyssa and Luke definitely belong together. Ryan was a jerk and didn't treat Alyssa well. I don't believe either of them were happy together and Ryan was too controlling and tried to make Alyssa feel like he is the only reason she was alive! Then Luke comes along and changes everything for Alyssa and makes her feel again! This story is full of emotion. Crystal did phenomenal with this one. It's a bit different from her other stories but if your a fan of her work you will love this one!
November 30, 2019
I received an advanced copy of this manuscript and am voluntarily leaving an honest review.
Alyssa is an actress who has been struggling in life, her high school sweetheart has proposed and she should be happy, but she is not. Then she meets Luke, he is her fiances business partner but she has an instant attraction. Kaswell does an amazing job at telling Alyssa's story and I highly recommend it! I couldn't put it down, I had to know how it was going to end.
Alyssa is an actress who has been struggling in life, her high school sweetheart has proposed and she should be happy, but she is not. Then she meets Luke, he is her fiances business partner but she has an instant attraction. Kaswell does an amazing job at telling Alyssa's story and I highly recommend it! I couldn't put it down, I had to know how it was going to end.
February 9, 2019
Ok
It was okay. Storyline dragged. Heroine was annoying and her storyline could have been more refined, she was so immature and whiny. The other guy was trash. I didn’t care for her. But I was in love with Luke and their chemistry, that is the only reason I finished. Otherwise I wouldn’t have finished reading this book.
It was okay. Storyline dragged. Heroine was annoying and her storyline could have been more refined, she was so immature and whiny. The other guy was trash. I didn’t care for her. But I was in love with Luke and their chemistry, that is the only reason I finished. Otherwise I wouldn’t have finished reading this book.
December 29, 2019
I Discovered I'm Not A Fan Of 'Love Triangles'!!😕💘🔥💥 A Generous 3 Stars 🌟
Come Undone: A Love Triangle
Alyssa is an up & coming Actress. She's taken nearly a year off of work to deal with her Eating Disorder, which came close to claiming her life.💔😢 Her Fiance Ryan Knight, who has supported her throughout all of her ups & downs since her teenage years, has changed. He's gone from being supportive, caring & very present in their relationship to cold, manipulative & a distant workaholic!!💔😭 Things come to a head just after she accept's his proposal but is then sent a request to audition for the Lead in a new TV Show.
Alyssa meets Luke on the night of their Engagement. They leave the restaurant & on the way home he receives a call regarding work. Instead of putting work off he goes into work, she decides to stay with him. This is where she meets his Law Practice Partner Luke Lawrence for the first time. They're obviously physically attracted to each other.🔥 Luke clearly doesn't like how Ryan speaks to her or treats her like a trophy or a silly child!!😡
This whole storyline was creepy to me! The 'we were on a break', in this instance, didn't wash with me!!😳 Admittedly Ryan was completely wrong to pursue an engaged person in the first place but the way it was written you could see his point of view. Alyssa, I just felt sorry for. Ryan was obviously using coercive control with her. She'd already been relying on him as a support before her Bulimia was discovered, so him stepping in & taking control over getting her in a treatment facility then therapy as well as his control over all of her meals, I feel just nudged him into this behaviour earlier than it might have shown up otherwise!!😡 Ryan isn't a nice, kind or even pleasant person, he treats Alyssa like he owns her & her thoughts and feelings!😱 However, Alyssa was exceptionally weak willed, she jumped straight into bed with Luke, literally, after finally moving out, but she still refused to acknowledge all of Ryan's manipulations & control issues. The plot excuse for this was she was concerned she couldn't keep her Bulimia under control without his support & help :rolling my eyes HARD: The thing is she'd already taken steps to find other forms of support, this *really* annoyed me on her behalf!!😡
I won't continue with this series. I read the chapter at the back of this book & I can see more self sabotage in her future & I just can't read more of that!!😞
Debbie, 1970, UK
Come Undone: A Love Triangle
Alyssa is an up & coming Actress. She's taken nearly a year off of work to deal with her Eating Disorder, which came close to claiming her life.💔😢 Her Fiance Ryan Knight, who has supported her throughout all of her ups & downs since her teenage years, has changed. He's gone from being supportive, caring & very present in their relationship to cold, manipulative & a distant workaholic!!💔😭 Things come to a head just after she accept's his proposal but is then sent a request to audition for the Lead in a new TV Show.
Alyssa meets Luke on the night of their Engagement. They leave the restaurant & on the way home he receives a call regarding work. Instead of putting work off he goes into work, she decides to stay with him. This is where she meets his Law Practice Partner Luke Lawrence for the first time. They're obviously physically attracted to each other.🔥 Luke clearly doesn't like how Ryan speaks to her or treats her like a trophy or a silly child!!😡
This whole storyline was creepy to me! The 'we were on a break', in this instance, didn't wash with me!!😳 Admittedly Ryan was completely wrong to pursue an engaged person in the first place but the way it was written you could see his point of view. Alyssa, I just felt sorry for. Ryan was obviously using coercive control with her. She'd already been relying on him as a support before her Bulimia was discovered, so him stepping in & taking control over getting her in a treatment facility then therapy as well as his control over all of her meals, I feel just nudged him into this behaviour earlier than it might have shown up otherwise!!😡 Ryan isn't a nice, kind or even pleasant person, he treats Alyssa like he owns her & her thoughts and feelings!😱 However, Alyssa was exceptionally weak willed, she jumped straight into bed with Luke, literally, after finally moving out, but she still refused to acknowledge all of Ryan's manipulations & control issues. The plot excuse for this was she was concerned she couldn't keep her Bulimia under control without his support & help :rolling my eyes HARD: The thing is she'd already taken steps to find other forms of support, this *really* annoyed me on her behalf!!😡
I won't continue with this series. I read the chapter at the back of this book & I can see more self sabotage in her future & I just can't read more of that!!😞
Debbie, 1970, UK
January 12, 2019
This book isn't so much of a love triangle, rather accepting a marriage proposal out of obligation and fear of going back to the old ways! Emotional blackmail.
Ryan and Alyssa are or were good friends before dating each other. He is always there when needed. He doesn't hesitate to point out this fact to Alyssa whenever he wants to get his way. Taking her on guilty trips. She accepts everything he throws at her as he knows best. He is always right! Is it the right path for a relationship?
Anyway, the night that he proposes, he expects a positive reply and just like that, she is engaged. Instead of celebrating their engagement, he returns to the office after taking an urgent call. Everything is an emergency! This is the first time that Alyssa sets eyes on sexy Luke, his partner. There is an instant spark between them and one thing leads to another. The problem is Alyssa is still engaged and keeps on misleading Luke. Can she or will she ever break away from Ryan and give Luke a chance?
As hard as I tried, I found it hard to take to Alyssa. Ganted, she had her problems and Ryan helped her. Now, she is stuck in a loveless relationship and is selfish enough to lead Luke on. Ryan might well love her in his own way, but staying at the office late, seven days a week isn't what a relationship is about. He sees her as arm candy and shows her off whenever the need arises. She goes along with it and more or less does what he demands. Luke who is my favourite character is stuck in the middle. He has all good intentions, but unfortunately cannot and doesn't speak for Alyssa. I can't say that I like Ryan and Alyssa, but thankfully she comes to her senses and does the right thing.
The story itself is well written, but I don’t like the storyline. It also touches on the delicate subject of eating disorders which is the reason why Ryan behaves the way he does. All in all, a good read, but not one of my favourites.
I was kindly issued with an eARC and the views expressed are my personal opinion.
Ryan and Alyssa are or were good friends before dating each other. He is always there when needed. He doesn't hesitate to point out this fact to Alyssa whenever he wants to get his way. Taking her on guilty trips. She accepts everything he throws at her as he knows best. He is always right! Is it the right path for a relationship?
Anyway, the night that he proposes, he expects a positive reply and just like that, she is engaged. Instead of celebrating their engagement, he returns to the office after taking an urgent call. Everything is an emergency! This is the first time that Alyssa sets eyes on sexy Luke, his partner. There is an instant spark between them and one thing leads to another. The problem is Alyssa is still engaged and keeps on misleading Luke. Can she or will she ever break away from Ryan and give Luke a chance?
As hard as I tried, I found it hard to take to Alyssa. Ganted, she had her problems and Ryan helped her. Now, she is stuck in a loveless relationship and is selfish enough to lead Luke on. Ryan might well love her in his own way, but staying at the office late, seven days a week isn't what a relationship is about. He sees her as arm candy and shows her off whenever the need arises. She goes along with it and more or less does what he demands. Luke who is my favourite character is stuck in the middle. He has all good intentions, but unfortunately cannot and doesn't speak for Alyssa. I can't say that I like Ryan and Alyssa, but thankfully she comes to her senses and does the right thing.
The story itself is well written, but I don’t like the storyline. It also touches on the delicate subject of eating disorders which is the reason why Ryan behaves the way he does. All in all, a good read, but not one of my favourites.
I was kindly issued with an eARC and the views expressed are my personal opinion.
December 2, 2019
This is definitely different from this authors previous work: while it still has all the emotions and the sensitive subject matter we are used to, I just never fully connected with Alyssa.
Alyssa is an actress who is recovering from an eating disorder. Her boyfriend, Ryan, has always been the one to save her. From possible date rape at a high school party, to where she put herself in the hospital because of her eating disorder, he has always been her rock. When he asks her to get better, (and I think adding that he asked asked her for HIMSELF, not her is very important to note.) And confesses his love for her, she decides that she finally has something good in her life, so she decides to do all she can to hold onto him.
Fast forward to present day, and Ryan is colder, distant, apathetic and career driven. He proposes to Alyssa, and even though something tugs at her to say no, she does say yes because she knows she loves him.. She's just not sure if that love is enough, or if that love is right for her. This is proven when Ryan pushes aside their engagement celebration to fix a work emergency, and tries every excuse to have Alyssa go back home and wait for him. (Which pretty much sums up their entire relationship.)
She ends up coming with him, and it's there that she meets his business partner, Luke. He is the complete opposite of Ryan: tatted, flirty, crazy attractive, and above all else, has his attention soley focused on Alyssa.
I loved Luke. He was absolutely the better man in every aspect, and he always knew what he wanted, and then went for it. He and Alyssa had a passionate relationship, and the difference between the two men is obvious in the way they show their affection for her.
I really did enjoy this story, but I just didn't like how whiney and wishy washy Alyssa was. And the fact that she couldn't make a decision to save her life drove me bonkers. I'm hoping she grows more of a backbone and stands up for herself in the next book!! Overall it is a wonderful read and I would definitely recommend it!! :)
Alyssa is an actress who is recovering from an eating disorder. Her boyfriend, Ryan, has always been the one to save her. From possible date rape at a high school party, to where she put herself in the hospital because of her eating disorder, he has always been her rock. When he asks her to get better, (and I think adding that he asked asked her for HIMSELF, not her is very important to note.) And confesses his love for her, she decides that she finally has something good in her life, so she decides to do all she can to hold onto him.
Fast forward to present day, and Ryan is colder, distant, apathetic and career driven. He proposes to Alyssa, and even though something tugs at her to say no, she does say yes because she knows she loves him.. She's just not sure if that love is enough, or if that love is right for her. This is proven when Ryan pushes aside their engagement celebration to fix a work emergency, and tries every excuse to have Alyssa go back home and wait for him. (Which pretty much sums up their entire relationship.)
She ends up coming with him, and it's there that she meets his business partner, Luke. He is the complete opposite of Ryan: tatted, flirty, crazy attractive, and above all else, has his attention soley focused on Alyssa.
I loved Luke. He was absolutely the better man in every aspect, and he always knew what he wanted, and then went for it. He and Alyssa had a passionate relationship, and the difference between the two men is obvious in the way they show their affection for her.
I really did enjoy this story, but I just didn't like how whiney and wishy washy Alyssa was. And the fact that she couldn't make a decision to save her life drove me bonkers. I'm hoping she grows more of a backbone and stands up for herself in the next book!! Overall it is a wonderful read and I would definitely recommend it!! :)
January 4, 2021
Luke and Alyssa – Alyssa is recovering from bulimia and she owes everything to her fiancé for saving her life and helping her through her rehab. The night that he proposes their night is interrupted by his law partner that he is needed at the office to smooth things over for an important divorce settlement. Alyssa is upset that he thinks so little of this special time that he goes without a second thought. When she insists on going with him so that they can continue their celebration afterward he finally agrees, but instead of her relaxing comfortably in this office he makes her wait in the waiting room. When she is introduced to his business partner she is in shock. He is the total opposite of her fiancé. Tall and covered in tattoos. Oh, and SMOKING HOT! When they shake hands the shock of electricity is nothing she has ever felt before. She keeps repeating to herself “I am engaged…I am engaged…”
Alyssa agreed to take a year's sabbatical from her acting career to get control of her bulimia and be healthy again. Will she be able to resist Luke or will she let her gratefulness to Ryan for saving her life regardless of his condescending and controlling ways keep her away from Luke and acting. Does she love him or is he just holding her back?
This is book 1 of a 3-book series. Even though this is the continued story of Luke and Alyssa it does not have a cliffhanger and can be read as a standalone novel. This is an emotional book covering both Alyssa’s confusion about her feelings and how she feels that she won’t survive without Ryan’s continued support for her bulimia. This book is from Alyssa’s point of view, but you can feel the frustration and rage from both Luke and Ryan. I hated for this book to end and look forward to reading the rest of their story. I highly, highly recommend this book!
Alyssa agreed to take a year's sabbatical from her acting career to get control of her bulimia and be healthy again. Will she be able to resist Luke or will she let her gratefulness to Ryan for saving her life regardless of his condescending and controlling ways keep her away from Luke and acting. Does she love him or is he just holding her back?
This is book 1 of a 3-book series. Even though this is the continued story of Luke and Alyssa it does not have a cliffhanger and can be read as a standalone novel. This is an emotional book covering both Alyssa’s confusion about her feelings and how she feels that she won’t survive without Ryan’s continued support for her bulimia. This book is from Alyssa’s point of view, but you can feel the frustration and rage from both Luke and Ryan. I hated for this book to end and look forward to reading the rest of their story. I highly, highly recommend this book!
May 13, 2021
Luke and Alyssa – Alyssa is recovering from bulimia and she owes everything to her fiancé for saving her life and helping her through her rehab. The night that he proposes their night is interrupted by his law partner that he is needed at the office to smooth things over for an important divorce settlement. Alyssa is upset that he thinks so little of this special time that he goes without second thought. We she insists on going with him so that they can continue their celebration afterwards he finally agrees, but instead of her relaxing comfortably in this office he makes her wait in the waiting room. When she is introduced to his business partner she is in shock. He is the total opposite of her fiancé. Tall and covered in tattoos. Oh, and SMOKING HOT! When they shake hands the shock of electricity is nothing she has ever felt before. She keeps repeating to herself “I am engaged…I am engaged…”
Alyssa agreed to take a year sabbatical from her acting career to get control of her bulimia and be healthy again. Will she be able to resist Luke or will she let her gratefulness to Ryan for saving her life regardless of his condescending and controlling ways keep her away from Luke and acting. Does she love him or is he just holding her back?
This is book 1 of a 3-book series. Even though this is the continued story of Luke and Alyssa it does not have a cliffhanger and can be read as a standalone novel. This is an emotional book covering both Alyssa’s confusion about her feelings and how she feels that she won’t survive without Ryan’s continued support for her bulimia. This book is from Alyssa’s point of view, but you can feel the frustration and rage from both Luke and Ryan. I hated for this book to end and look forward to reading the rest of their story. I highly, highly recommend this book!
Alyssa agreed to take a year sabbatical from her acting career to get control of her bulimia and be healthy again. Will she be able to resist Luke or will she let her gratefulness to Ryan for saving her life regardless of his condescending and controlling ways keep her away from Luke and acting. Does she love him or is he just holding her back?
This is book 1 of a 3-book series. Even though this is the continued story of Luke and Alyssa it does not have a cliffhanger and can be read as a standalone novel. This is an emotional book covering both Alyssa’s confusion about her feelings and how she feels that she won’t survive without Ryan’s continued support for her bulimia. This book is from Alyssa’s point of view, but you can feel the frustration and rage from both Luke and Ryan. I hated for this book to end and look forward to reading the rest of their story. I highly, highly recommend this book!
January 2, 2019
Goodness this book took me on a journey...
There were times I couldn’t put it down and then times I had to step away for personal reasons. I loved that all the characters were real and honest and flawed. Your “hero” wasn’t perfect and he wasn’t her knight in shining armor because the heroine wouldn’t let him be her scapegoat and I really appreciated that.
I don’t usually enjoy love triangles because I’m really against cheating obviously, bc personally I’m one of those people when I’m done I’m done and I just end it. I feel like if you know in your brain that you’re not attracted or in love with your SO anymore and want to explore other options just be fair and end it don’t drag it on. Of course in this story that wasn’t an option because our heroine had other circumstances in her life that made her want to stay and work it out with the person she had been with. And the way Crystal went about writing that and explaining her recovery and struggles made you really understand why she felt this undying loyalty. I also appreciated that it was obvious from the get go that the two had been basically living as roommates for quite a long time. I was also grateful that Alyssa never actually has sex with Ryan after she started sleeping with Luke. I believe that made me route for Alyssa and Luke even more.
It was also amazing to see that once Alyssa decided she was on the fence she moved out to put space between her and Ryan, I don’t like it when a character stays in the same house even though they “need space” it marks the journey for me.
All in all this was amazing and way outside the spectrum we’ve see from Crystal but it did not disappoint.
There were times I couldn’t put it down and then times I had to step away for personal reasons. I loved that all the characters were real and honest and flawed. Your “hero” wasn’t perfect and he wasn’t her knight in shining armor because the heroine wouldn’t let him be her scapegoat and I really appreciated that.
I don’t usually enjoy love triangles because I’m really against cheating obviously, bc personally I’m one of those people when I’m done I’m done and I just end it. I feel like if you know in your brain that you’re not attracted or in love with your SO anymore and want to explore other options just be fair and end it don’t drag it on. Of course in this story that wasn’t an option because our heroine had other circumstances in her life that made her want to stay and work it out with the person she had been with. And the way Crystal went about writing that and explaining her recovery and struggles made you really understand why she felt this undying loyalty. I also appreciated that it was obvious from the get go that the two had been basically living as roommates for quite a long time. I was also grateful that Alyssa never actually has sex with Ryan after she started sleeping with Luke. I believe that made me route for Alyssa and Luke even more.
It was also amazing to see that once Alyssa decided she was on the fence she moved out to put space between her and Ryan, I don’t like it when a character stays in the same house even though they “need space” it marks the journey for me.
All in all this was amazing and way outside the spectrum we’ve see from Crystal but it did not disappoint.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 11, 2019
If you’ve read any of Crystal’s books in the past, you’ll know this one is a bit different than her normal books. While the book may be different, it still carries the touch of Crystal’s writing. You still have that heartfelt feel and she still tackles tough subjects. I love when authors tackle tough subject but she’s my favorite author who does it so well. Yes, this book is a bit different but in a way, we get to see a whole new side to her style. It makes me appreciate her writing so much more. Onto my review, Alyssa life is a bit of a mess. She’s coming out of recovery, she’s engaged to her high school sweetheart but something is off with her. She’s tired of Ryan controlling her life and not really caring. She’s not sure if she’s in love with because he’s been with her through all of her downfalls and feels that she owes him or because she really cares. There’s no passion with them two and he’s a jerk. I wanted to punch him several times in the book. Luke is Ryan’s business partner and Alyssa’s new love interest. From the moment they met, she’s instantly attracted to him. There’s something about him that’s alluring. He encourages her, challenges her, makes her reevaluate things. The story is well written and a great read. I couldn’t give this book a full five stars simply because there was something Alyssa that kept throwing me off. Overall a great book. I give this book 4.25 stars. It’s really great.
December 11, 2019
★ Art imitating life or life imitating art? ★
—>>> In this first installment, we see and feel the inner turmoil of Alyssa, who has an eating disorder and her life quite well controlled by her boyfriend, Ryan, who works in a two-man law firm specializing in divorces. As an actress on recent hiatus, Alyssa receives a casting call from her agent, but working again puts their relationship at odds and really makes Alyssa push for it as something she wants. However, it is clear Ryan has plans to keep her longer than their near-decade together, and in fact, has just proposed marriage. She is swept along with steadily mounting emotional reservations, and that very same night, she meets his partner, Luke, who makes her sit up and take notice. She takes strides to put her needs and desires first, including taking a break from Ryan and his controlling ways to explore and experience a man like Luke who makes his interests in her more than obvious. The struggle to balance all the new changes in her life at once throw her in a spin, and it is up to Alyssa, really. to dig deep within to discover what she really wants for herself. I look forward to seeing how Alyssa fares in the next book of this series, as Ryan’s intentions, demands, and attempts to keep her to himself seem to have only negative consequences on Alyssa’s psyche, his savior role when they had first met morphing into a detached relationship over the last few years.
—>>> In this first installment, we see and feel the inner turmoil of Alyssa, who has an eating disorder and her life quite well controlled by her boyfriend, Ryan, who works in a two-man law firm specializing in divorces. As an actress on recent hiatus, Alyssa receives a casting call from her agent, but working again puts their relationship at odds and really makes Alyssa push for it as something she wants. However, it is clear Ryan has plans to keep her longer than their near-decade together, and in fact, has just proposed marriage. She is swept along with steadily mounting emotional reservations, and that very same night, she meets his partner, Luke, who makes her sit up and take notice. She takes strides to put her needs and desires first, including taking a break from Ryan and his controlling ways to explore and experience a man like Luke who makes his interests in her more than obvious. The struggle to balance all the new changes in her life at once throw her in a spin, and it is up to Alyssa, really. to dig deep within to discover what she really wants for herself. I look forward to seeing how Alyssa fares in the next book of this series, as Ryan’s intentions, demands, and attempts to keep her to himself seem to have only negative consequences on Alyssa’s psyche, his savior role when they had first met morphing into a detached relationship over the last few years.
December 10, 2019
I love Kaswell's ink series, so I was very excited to read this book. For me, it was really hard to like the characters. I guess I liked the characters, but I just didn't know whether I should cheer them on or yell at them. The heroine of the story, Alyssa, gave me mixed emotions. While she was in a mediocre relationship, she seemed happy and felt obligated to be there. Later on, I do believe she had just reasons to want to get away from her fiance', but she seemed so hesitant for so long. Alex, the fiance', came off as a sweet, caring guy, but a workaholic. People commented that he was an asshole, but I didn't see that right away. Luke, Alex's co-worker, gave me the vibe that he enjoyed trying to break up Alyssa and Alex. That he was doing it in spite of Alex versus having true, caring feelings for Alyssa. By the end of the book, I saw the true light of the characters, but up until then, I was left confused and weary on whom to support. While Alyssa has reasons to doubt herself, there were times that the answer was in front of her face, but she willingly talked herself out of that healthier choice. I am intrigued and want to read the other two books in the series to see how this pans out. Alyssa's friend, Laurie, was just awesome. A vibrant, fun character amidst the dark, dreary main characters.
December 28, 2018
I have to be honest, this book wasn't easy for me. I've never been a fan of love triangles, especially when it comes to cheating. Though I do appreciate the fact that Alyssa did admit that nothing happened between her and Luke until Ryan and her took a break. I DID NOT like Ryan. He was controlling and manipulative. All he seemed to want was a beautiful woman on his arms who would do and say what he wanted so he could get more clients. He never really seemed to care about what Alyssa wanted or felt. He never even listened to her! I liked Luke. He wanted Alyssa to be happy and to enjoy life. I felt so bad for him and how she kept stringing him along, especially after hearing his story. I had mixed feelings about Alyssa. I wanted her to be stronger, to have a backbone. While I truly enjoy this authors wrote it wasn't my favorite. I love her brooding bad boys and these two just didn't do it for me. They worked together while hating each other. They just seemed to use each other, and while I'm sure there are plenty of companies out there like that, I didn't really care to read about it. This won't stop me from reading more by this author though. *I voluntarily read an advanced copy of this book for my honest and unbiased review.*
December 30, 2018
This literally made me “Come Undone”!
I love all things CK and knew I wanted to read this book no matter what, despite how different it may be from most of her work.
Holy hell, y’all, I could not possibly love this book anymore than I do in this moment.
Luke and Alyssa are purely amazing together.
She’s complicated, damaged even, bound by practically emotionless Ryan, and fearful.
He’s been dealt a crappy broken heart (how dare someone cause him an ounce of pain!) and is honestly still figuring out how to forgive and love himself. You’ll find that they heal each other in the sweetest way. A love the flourishes by just being seen and heard and listened to (oh and all that hot fun stuff lol).
Maybe I’m overly emotional... but I cried when I finished. Yeah, okay, and a couple times throughout the book. They’re just so sweet!
I’m notorious for falling in love with the leading man and Luke was no different, thank God.
Ryan, who’s Ryan? Forget him.
Learn that guilt, fear, and obligation aren’t what makes a relationship.
Feel what it’s like to experience kindness, compassion, and pure wholehearted love.
Read “Come Undone” and you’ll understand.
And after you’ve finished, go take a look at the beautiful bad boys we’ve all come to love thanks to Crystal!
I love all things CK and knew I wanted to read this book no matter what, despite how different it may be from most of her work.
Holy hell, y’all, I could not possibly love this book anymore than I do in this moment.
Luke and Alyssa are purely amazing together.
She’s complicated, damaged even, bound by practically emotionless Ryan, and fearful.
He’s been dealt a crappy broken heart (how dare someone cause him an ounce of pain!) and is honestly still figuring out how to forgive and love himself. You’ll find that they heal each other in the sweetest way. A love the flourishes by just being seen and heard and listened to (oh and all that hot fun stuff lol).
Maybe I’m overly emotional... but I cried when I finished. Yeah, okay, and a couple times throughout the book. They’re just so sweet!
I’m notorious for falling in love with the leading man and Luke was no different, thank God.
Ryan, who’s Ryan? Forget him.
Learn that guilt, fear, and obligation aren’t what makes a relationship.
Feel what it’s like to experience kindness, compassion, and pure wholehearted love.
Read “Come Undone” and you’ll understand.
And after you’ve finished, go take a look at the beautiful bad boys we’ve all come to love thanks to Crystal!
July 5, 2021
Solid writing, vivid MCs, and non-stereotypical supporting characters (for once)
The writing was pretty solid- I enjoyed the plot and the angst. I laughed out loud a few times and gasped at others. There were some minor grammatical errors, but they were few and far in between. The main character grappled with recovery from an ED, which I don't think I've ever really come across in a fictional erotic-type story before. It added an additional depth to the character and didn't feel forced or out of place. The friend and support group sponsor were totally chill regular people- that just happened to be WOC which was SUCH a freaking relief. You never see that and I was genuinely relieved and happy to see it (usually in this genre it's like I usually start counting down to the eye roll moment but this story absolutely didn't have one). The fiancee was infuriating and manipulative and the other fellow was...so patient and almost too perfect? There were so many times when I would've just ghosted this broad, but my threshold for drama and nonsense (in real life) is non-existent lol
I'd definitely give this 4.25 stars and I'd recommend this to anyone who enjoys (fictional) angst and entertaining the possibility of "what if."
You know who you are ;)
The writing was pretty solid- I enjoyed the plot and the angst. I laughed out loud a few times and gasped at others. There were some minor grammatical errors, but they were few and far in between. The main character grappled with recovery from an ED, which I don't think I've ever really come across in a fictional erotic-type story before. It added an additional depth to the character and didn't feel forced or out of place. The friend and support group sponsor were totally chill regular people- that just happened to be WOC which was SUCH a freaking relief. You never see that and I was genuinely relieved and happy to see it (usually in this genre it's like I usually start counting down to the eye roll moment but this story absolutely didn't have one). The fiancee was infuriating and manipulative and the other fellow was...so patient and almost too perfect? There were so many times when I would've just ghosted this broad, but my threshold for drama and nonsense (in real life) is non-existent lol
I'd definitely give this 4.25 stars and I'd recommend this to anyone who enjoys (fictional) angst and entertaining the possibility of "what if."
You know who you are ;)
December 28, 2018
Even though I really did love this story, it was a very difficult one for me to read, as I related so much with Alyssa's demons, her battle with an eating disorder is one I have fought all my life. So I was actually afraid to open the book and find out what it had in store, but I pushed my fears aside because I love Crystal's writing and knew she would do it justice.
I am really glad I did, because although it was very emotional I found it helpful.
This is a Love triangle, and usually I find them incredibly frustrating and hate the cheating element. But it was so clear in my mind who I wanted Alyssa to spend the rest of her life with.
Torn between her Fiance Ryan and his business partner Luke, as you can imagine things get messy. Alyssa is an Actress who has been in treatment and away from her acting career for a long time. This is a story of her taking back control of her life and getting her independence back,and falling in Love properly with someone who wants her and supports her. Instead of controlling her.
I actually enjoyed this book it was intelligently written Beautiful and Raw.. I wish I had a Luke in my life.. A very compelling read. I highly recommend it
I am really glad I did, because although it was very emotional I found it helpful.
This is a Love triangle, and usually I find them incredibly frustrating and hate the cheating element. But it was so clear in my mind who I wanted Alyssa to spend the rest of her life with.
Torn between her Fiance Ryan and his business partner Luke, as you can imagine things get messy. Alyssa is an Actress who has been in treatment and away from her acting career for a long time. This is a story of her taking back control of her life and getting her independence back,and falling in Love properly with someone who wants her and supports her. Instead of controlling her.
I actually enjoyed this book it was intelligently written Beautiful and Raw.. I wish I had a Luke in my life.. A very compelling read. I highly recommend it
December 1, 2019
"I am voluntarily reviewing an advanced copy of this manuscript"
I am utterly, to a point of no return, in love with Luke and Alyssa's story! As an avid reader of Crystal Kaswell, this gem is a little twist, a novelty in her repertoire! I knew she was an absolute regal when it came to tortured rockstars or tattoo artists romances but now i can just say that her talent knows no bounds when it comes to romance, point! We still have her signature tortured soul love story but it feels more real, deeper somehow... The display of emotions will, depending on your mood and predicament, send you on a soul searching of the true meaning of love (Is it loyalty? Is it the revelation of your true-self?) or simply give you a ton of goosebumps and hellish butterflies!!! Whatever happens you won't be able to stay insensitive to "Come Undone"! Very well written with a very interesting storyline, based on struggles and raw emotions, this book will enthrall you from page one!! I finished it in one seating and didn't want it to end!!! I understand that it is part of a series and cannot wait to read on!!! Thank you for this amazing opportunity and read! It's exactly what i needed!!!!
I am utterly, to a point of no return, in love with Luke and Alyssa's story! As an avid reader of Crystal Kaswell, this gem is a little twist, a novelty in her repertoire! I knew she was an absolute regal when it came to tortured rockstars or tattoo artists romances but now i can just say that her talent knows no bounds when it comes to romance, point! We still have her signature tortured soul love story but it feels more real, deeper somehow... The display of emotions will, depending on your mood and predicament, send you on a soul searching of the true meaning of love (Is it loyalty? Is it the revelation of your true-self?) or simply give you a ton of goosebumps and hellish butterflies!!! Whatever happens you won't be able to stay insensitive to "Come Undone"! Very well written with a very interesting storyline, based on struggles and raw emotions, this book will enthrall you from page one!! I finished it in one seating and didn't want it to end!!! I understand that it is part of a series and cannot wait to read on!!! Thank you for this amazing opportunity and read! It's exactly what i needed!!!!
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