I'd rate this "Meh"
I vacillated between 2 and 3 stars.
I mean, I didn't go into this expecting greatness.
But it's short, and there were enough typos that it actually bothered me. And generally, they don't.
There wasn't enough relationship building for me to even remotely be able to justify the "insta-love". I mean, here's a throuple that somehow had one night together.... and decided that it's love. and then they have another - I hesitate to call it a "night" - together, and they somehow know it's love?
Ok. I get it's a short book. I feel the author was trying to tackle too many things, too many stories, and emotions and backstories and everything...
If it's supposed to be about the sex, make it about the sex. If it's supposed to be about the story, give the story its due.
The thing is... I've read shorts that have story and backstory and relationship building and steam and didn't leave me feeling quite so Meh about any of it.
So... meh.
Even the football content felt wrong and understated.