A reminder not to judge the fic by its cover.
I actually loved the writing but things got a bit repetitive as Lily refused to make her relationship public for over 25 chapters. I get her reasons but c’mon, you can at least tell your friends… I also don’t like that there was a bit of focus on Snape and his obsession for Lily. You called her slurs, tortured her several times and a lot of other offenses. Boy, no one cares about your dark heart. Go muse about whatever somewhere else.