This book needed a better editor - there were a lot of grammatical errors, and continuity problems. I have difficulty getting through a book when such errors seem so blatant and easily corrected. I found myself disappointed by this book. Abbi's character - it had the potential due to the trope (older woman/younger man) - was a bit much: she cried over things that didn't make sense to me (maybe they make sense to others), and the other characters just reacted very inappropriately to the situations they found themselves in (Abbi's sister Kim for instance). I liked the premise of Ben's character but the words used by the author were what we non-Brits think they talk like - it just didn't seem to flow properly. The mystery part was pretty good, and the twists there were what made me finish the book, but, again, I think the author needed to edit this one a bit more before publishing it. I also don't care for cliffhanger endings.