Yet another book that I really wanted to like, but that ultimately was a great disappointment. I followed Harvey Pekar's career from early on and always enjoyed his autobiographical stories, most of which are included in my library. And I've had a special interest in the modern day wars of the Balkans for a long time, even collecting comics related to that part of European history.
So, I was anticipating a lot when starting to read this book, not the least when I found out that it was based on the autobiographical story of a woman actually travelling to Macedonia to study how and if a war can be avoided by international intervention. This felt like a surefire hit. Sadly, it wasn't. The story is interesting in itself and the ideas expressed by Robertson is fascinating, but Pekar rendition of them is not up to his usual level of telling a story, at all. The story is too long-winding, loosing sight of itself several times over and not picking up speed until Robertson travels to Macedonia and starts her fact fining mission, This part is bearable, but not more. Strangely, the script feels like it was left to the artist unfinished, as it lacks momentum, an idea of how the factual, journalistic parts and the "funny"/autobiographical parts relates to each other and just generally a sense of direction.
The artist Piskor is also not at all up to the task of doing this story justice. The art is static, the anatomy and postures of the characters awkward and the layouts of the pages disastrous. The latter could be Pekar's work, and if so it's even worse, since he does know how to write a well-paced comic. But this is just too much facts, too many words, too many panels stacked on top of each other on each page, making me weary and actually considering not finishing the book. This graphic novel could easily have been twice as long, and then it would still have felt cramped, but at least less so than the end product that we have now.
Early on, Pekar admits in the comic to the character Robertson, that he wants to do something like Joe Sacco, and report from the Balkans through comics. Well, the ambition is right, but having this in the comics only helps to underscore just how brilliant Sacco is at what he does, and how inferior Pekar's effort really is.
So, all-in-all, a missed opportunity at making what could have been great comics art.