Actually a 4.5, I haven’t rounded it up. I must confess, I usually read middle grade in the hopes of something lighter or cute (although there have been exceptions). I did not expect to dive headfirst into a book that’s emotional and beautiful enough to still be on my mind not too long after finishing it. I will try not to spoil anything in my review, though!
I would like to say upfront that I think Brian’s background in filmmaking and screenwriting is obvious in the writing style. Not only does he have a good grasp of the story’s structure and characters(which is crucial for a debut), but he’s very visual in his descriptions of places and actions. That was a treat to read.
I also felt the subject matter of mental illness and addiction was handled carefully. I liked the nuanced way the family dynamics of Jet, Nathan and Nali were depicted, even if Nathan couldn’t grasp everything because he’s just a kid. There’s also a particular story device(that I won’t spoil) that ends up working as a way to place Nathan directly into the kind of mindset Jet has, which was difficult to read about but places a focus on sympathy and finding help that isn’t granted very often in the stories of addicts. (And on the topic of Jet getting help, I appreciated that although Nali had a push to heal him through ceremony, there was just as much emphasis on him getting actual therapy in addition to that.)
There’s slightly less fantasy than I expected—while the creatures appear throughout, Nathan’s plot lines with the Holy Beings and his Nali don’t overlap until the end, so the magical elements feel a bit more like a backdrop. But I still really liked how Brian Young found a balance between integrating the original mythos of the beings he depicted, and creating his own kind of story around them. (He talked about that in his author’s note, and I found that interesting.) The characters themselves were also memorable. (For example, I didn’t expect to like a spider, but here we are.) Of course, though, Pond was my favorite of the creatures, mostly for the fact that he was adorable. eughuhhhh…
Pond and the other Water Monsters were a creative way to incorporate environmental issues into a kids book, and although that took a backseat to all the other story elements in this one, I’m looking forward to seeing how that’s handled as a central part of the sequel. (I assume it’s going to be, anyhow, because of the author’s note.)
My only other qualms are that the pacing was a bit slow in the first half, and that the number of plot points felt sometimes overwhelming. But I was so excited to find that there was a sequel! I loved a lot about this. I’d say “enjoyed” but it’s actually quite sad so
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