29 Nov. '20
Spoilers ahead. Read at your own risk.
A quick read with easy prose. Excellent blurb. Made the book sound 100% much more intriguing than it actually was. Sadly the plot itself was weak and hinged upon many conveniences designed specifically by the author:
(1) The most useless police force in town
From the unsolved robbery of Raven's biological mother, to the now murder of his step-mother. The police have been a negligible force, entering the story only when the plot requires it to be relevant.
Everybody knows that in the death of a spouse, the first place to look is at the current husband/wife, any existing lovers, and previous exes. The fact that the police did neither in both cases and went for the immediate arrest of a teenage girl based on a conveniently placed "murder recipe" left at the scene of the crime . . . I mean, you don't get more gullible than that.
If the police had done what any basic crime investigator would've done from the first murder, none of this would have happened.
(2) The most useless parents in town
This book took the absent parent trope to a new level. If any of the parents in this book were just the tiniest bit responsible or even, I dunno, mature, so many things would never have taken place.
(3) The most unreliable set of narrators you will ever read
And not even particularly well written unreliable narrators.
Unreliable narrators still need to be reliable in how or why they are unreliable. Are they delusional and have a penchant for exaggeration? Are they extremely naive and have a limited way of understanding events that unfold around them? Are they psychologically impaired in some way--psychopaths who are detached from reality? Are they simply just liars by character?
Well-written unreliable narrators are at least consistent in their unreliability. They make you question scenes, other characters, or question their own perception of things.
Lily, Bella, and Jack are none of the above. They are unreliable simply for the bare-bones plot demands a dark, mysterious atmosphere to make up for its otherwise lack of mystery.
Sometimes their unreliability is by omission--hiding information from readers, from each other, and more critically, from themselves. They never once think about or mention key reveals when it is natural for that particular character in that particular train of thought or situation to be thinking about that particular reveal. I don't consider this clever narration, rather deliberate authorial manipulation.
Then sometimes their unreliability is by straight up lying--for example in the case of Belle-vs-Jack, where Belle tells us she saw Jack kissing Raven (who was at that time Belle's love interest), while later in Jack's chapter he is adamantly saying to himself that he never kissed Raven. And then a couple of chapters later, Jack admits to himself (and to us readers) that okay, so I did kiss Raven 🤷🤷🤷
All right, I mean, why lie about it in the first place? Lying about it to yourself, even? Other than to forcefully make us readers question Belle's reliability, that is? ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
This ping-pong of he-said-she-said between narrators happen consistently throughout the book. The effect is a chaotic whiplash, rather than a budding suspicion of one or more particular characters. If that isn't bad enough, the things they constantly "lie" about or "omit" about each other are absolute garbage non-issues that aren't even relevant to the story (such as whether or not Jack kissed Raven; who spent the night with Belle that day she got arrested; who stole the cookie from the cookie jar; who gives a literary f*ck).
And that is exactly the cherry on top. It's one thing to have unreliable narrators because one of them is the secret killer and you're trying to conceal which one it is. It's quite another to have unreliable narrators but none of them is actually responsible for Evelyn's death. I have never been more gaslit in my life.
Sure, one of them had a hand in procuring the object that ultimately did cause her death, but they did not actually poison her themselves.
(4) Forced drama between main characters
Because God forbid the characters actually talked! to each other honestly and put their heads together!!! If that happened, this book would've been solved within one chapter.
This would have worked if the characters had a reason to be lying to each other and hiding facts from each other. Unfortunately, they did not.
Readers are made to believe Belle would hide things from Jack because she's angry Jack kissed Raven those, what? three years ago?
Except Belle isn't angry at either of them, since she's now with Lily and have gotten over it, as proven by the fact that she had actually prepared to frame Jack using the exact same tactics (killing Evelyn using poppy and leaving an incriminating note at the scene), but then didn't go through with it. So why does she, in the narrative, actually keep hiding things from Jack?
Readers are made to believe Belle and Lily would be hiding things from each other, because they (according to Jack) hated each other. Except they don't since they're actually having a secret relationship.
And then there's Jack, who's hiding things from everyone except the only thing that Jack turns out to be hiding has nothing to do with the actual murder of Evelyn so why the fuck did that stop him from ever just sitting down with Lily and laying everything out together from the beginning?
The only believable explanation as to why they didn't sit together and chat is because they suspect each other as being the killer and trying to frame one another.
Which would not have happened if Belle had just told Jack she had been with Lily the night Evelyn was murdered (something Belle has no reason hiding, especially if it would clear her lover from being a potential murder suspect).
Lily has no reason to suspect Jack as being the killer, since she knows full well who took the belladonna from Bella's garden. Seeing Jack burning Raven's clothes was no reason to suspect him as a killer, since stealing Raven's clothes three years ago has nothing to do with Evelyn's murder today. Besides, she knows Jack even lied to provide an alibi for Belle, risking arrest himself. Why would he do that if he had framed Belle in the first place?
Anyway, in the end, everything was so convoluted and just a tiny bit forced, which really took away from the full immersion of the story. The actual turn of events itself managed to be both predictable and disappointing. Predictable as in you know it's always a love interest. Disappointing as in one of the "villains" turns out to be a character who was introduced in the, I wanna say, last 35% of the book.
It all just gave me Pretty Little Liars vibes, and not in a good way. Forced tension, forced drama, a whole convoluted mess with little actual substance and unnecessary romantic intrigue to pad up the pages.