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Eternal Deception
Love or independence? Few choices remain for Nell and her new family on the Kansas frontier…Kansas, 1872. Unwed mother Nell Lillington hopes to support her daughter Sarah and friend Tess by working as a seamstress in an isolated seminary. When her only ally among the seminary's leaders dies, she must choose between returning to her old life in Chicago and remaining in charge of her destiny.As her talent as a dressmaker begins to win her commissions, Nell attracts the attention of two Reiner Lehmann, a wealthy senior student, and Judah Poulton, an impoverished professor. Shocking news from back home and another death at the seminary press Nell to make her decision. A disastrous winter journey, a treacherous game, and an impossible love could finally wrest control of Nell's life out of her hands for good.Eternal Deception is the second book in a series of engrossing historical fiction novels. If you like intriguing mystery, charming romance, and surprises you won't see coming, you'll love this story of one woman's battle for herself on the nineteenth century frontier.Buy Eternal Deception to continue Nell's incredible journey today!
476 pages, Paperback
Published December 9, 2020
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Jane Steen
11 books965 followersDear Reader,
Welcome to my page. Now, I could talk to you about myself in the third person, as if my author-self were someone else, but instead let me give you the Most Important Fact:
I was named after Jane Eyre.
I swear that this decision of my mother's influenced my entire life. I've always felt that I lead only half my existence here (here being wherever I happen to be) while the much more interesting stuff goes on in my head.
It also doomed me to spend most of that head-time in the nineteenth century, hence my books. My aim is to write entertaining fiction that hovers somewhere in the PG range (no graphic sex or nasty stuff unless the plot totally demands it) and is neither dumbed-down nor pretentiously intellectual. In short, it's the type of fiction I like to read when I just need to RELAX.
You can get to know me a lot better by subscribing to my newsletter.
The short biography is that I've lived in England, Belgium, the United States and England. The problem with moving around is that you end up torn between different countries and cultures; the advantage is that you get to speak more languages (my second language is French).
I've had an interestingly varied employment history (editor in a law firm, translating a Belgian aerospace magazine into English and real estate marketing spring to mind, but there were others), and have absorbed more education than is good for me. I'm married to a nice American, and have two adult daughters.
Welcome to my page. Now, I could talk to you about myself in the third person, as if my author-self were someone else, but instead let me give you the Most Important Fact:
I was named after Jane Eyre.
I swear that this decision of my mother's influenced my entire life. I've always felt that I lead only half my existence here (here being wherever I happen to be) while the much more interesting stuff goes on in my head.
It also doomed me to spend most of that head-time in the nineteenth century, hence my books. My aim is to write entertaining fiction that hovers somewhere in the PG range (no graphic sex or nasty stuff unless the plot totally demands it) and is neither dumbed-down nor pretentiously intellectual. In short, it's the type of fiction I like to read when I just need to RELAX.
You can get to know me a lot better by subscribing to my newsletter.
The short biography is that I've lived in England, Belgium, the United States and England. The problem with moving around is that you end up torn between different countries and cultures; the advantage is that you get to speak more languages (my second language is French).
I've had an interestingly varied employment history (editor in a law firm, translating a Belgian aerospace magazine into English and real estate marketing spring to mind, but there were others), and have absorbed more education than is good for me. I'm married to a nice American, and have two adult daughters.
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October 3, 2020
5 STARS
Holy shit. This book blew it out of the water. Wow.
I am completely engaged now. Moving right into book 3. I'm a little speechless here. Not even sure how to review this. All I can say is that I loved the book, and I scarcely want to take the time to write this. I just want to finish the series now.
Brilliant story-telling. I was on the edge of my seat (or reading chair all night) dying to know what was going to happen next. Don't let the cheesy covers fool you, these books are fantastic. And I hear she is releasing some new covers soon. Thank goodness *wink* Sorry Jane, but just being honest.
Gah... I'm so mad at these mc's. The situation they have gotten themselves into... all I know is that they better work it out. Enough said. I have another book to buy.
Good bye Kansas.
"You're not entirely devoid of charms..."
Holy shit. This book blew it out of the water. Wow.
I am completely engaged now. Moving right into book 3. I'm a little speechless here. Not even sure how to review this. All I can say is that I loved the book, and I scarcely want to take the time to write this. I just want to finish the series now.
Brilliant story-telling. I was on the edge of my seat (or reading chair all night) dying to know what was going to happen next. Don't let the cheesy covers fool you, these books are fantastic. And I hear she is releasing some new covers soon. Thank goodness *wink* Sorry Jane, but just being honest.
Gah... I'm so mad at these mc's. The situation they have gotten themselves into... all I know is that they better work it out. Enough said. I have another book to buy.
Good bye Kansas.
“Are we going to go now, or do you want to stare at the prairie some more? I can tell Tess to wait a bit longer.”
“You don’t have to.” I kissed Sarah again, put her down, and took her hand. “I’m ready.”
February 9, 2016
This is a magnificent book. I'll probably run out of adjectives to describe just how much I loved this rich, perfectly well written, solidly well constructed, with amazingly well built characters and absolutely well structured in its time period novel. This is a historical novel that seems to have been written at that time period, not now, so immersed in that time the reader feels. Not just the settings but all the descriptions of the clothes are so rich and so beautiful! I really recommend going to the author's Pinterest board where she collects images of the gorgeous dresses she used as inspiration for Nell's creations (it's linked at the end of the book).
Oh, and the ebook is beautifully formatted, with gorgeous chapter headers.
Nell is a fascinating main character. I think her most important quality resides in the fact that she is not, in any way, perfect. She is growing, she is learning. She makes mistakes--boy, how she makes them!--and she entangles herself in complicated and even dangerous situations. She is stubborn and there may start the reason of all her troubles; but her stubbornness is also what leads her to work so hard to strive in a world still not made for strong women. A world where any class of mistake is to be remembered for a lifetime and longer by society but even more from a woman.
Nell (and, as listened to the first book in the series instead of reading it I confused her name with "Nelly" as I say in my review there, I apologize) doesn't want much from life; she only desires to be free, to be able to work and maintain her small selected family--Tess and Sarah--and to, perhaps, become a respected dressmaker. The bare minimum she could dream of today, but a very ambitious dream for a single woman in the 1870s.
It is heartbreaking to see how society treated some in those times. Not that we are that far better today; unfortunately we didn't evolve as much as one would wish in all that time, but Nell's life would have certainly be a lot less difficult nowadays. She wouldn't be faced with the kind of decisions she is forced to make in this book, at least.
For a long time during this reading I was yelling at my Kindle like a crazy person, trying to urge Nell to see what was right in front of her, to be wiser, to stick to her plans, but alas, she never listened to me. All for the better; although her journey was way more difficult that way, it was also all the more entertaining.
Once again Tess is the voice of reason in many aspects. It is so refreshing to have this character at such a main spot and so well written. Representation is so important and I say kudos to Jane Steen for writing such a beautiful, realistic character.
While we face evil once again with Nell, and, again, we have to see her sometimes impotent (all those times I stared at my Kindle thinking, "what now? How is she ever going to get out of that situation??"), it's a growing, lovely journey that made our heroine stronger and wiser. I can hardly wait to read what's coming next in her life. And I mean it--I can hardly wait indeed. I wish the third book were already available. I'll be thinking of their future for months until I can finally start the third book in the series. And I will read as many books as Ms. Steen decides (hopefully many) to write about Nell Lillington.
Disclaimer: I received an ebook copy of this novel from the author, which did not affect my opinion in any way.
Oh, and the ebook is beautifully formatted, with gorgeous chapter headers.
Nell is a fascinating main character. I think her most important quality resides in the fact that she is not, in any way, perfect. She is growing, she is learning. She makes mistakes--boy, how she makes them!--and she entangles herself in complicated and even dangerous situations. She is stubborn and there may start the reason of all her troubles; but her stubbornness is also what leads her to work so hard to strive in a world still not made for strong women. A world where any class of mistake is to be remembered for a lifetime and longer by society but even more from a woman.
Nell (and, as listened to the first book in the series instead of reading it I confused her name with "Nelly" as I say in my review there, I apologize) doesn't want much from life; she only desires to be free, to be able to work and maintain her small selected family--Tess and Sarah--and to, perhaps, become a respected dressmaker. The bare minimum she could dream of today, but a very ambitious dream for a single woman in the 1870s.
It is heartbreaking to see how society treated some in those times. Not that we are that far better today; unfortunately we didn't evolve as much as one would wish in all that time, but Nell's life would have certainly be a lot less difficult nowadays. She wouldn't be faced with the kind of decisions she is forced to make in this book, at least.
For a long time during this reading I was yelling at my Kindle like a crazy person, trying to urge Nell to see what was right in front of her, to be wiser, to stick to her plans, but alas, she never listened to me. All for the better; although her journey was way more difficult that way, it was also all the more entertaining.
Once again Tess is the voice of reason in many aspects. It is so refreshing to have this character at such a main spot and so well written. Representation is so important and I say kudos to Jane Steen for writing such a beautiful, realistic character.
While we face evil once again with Nell, and, again, we have to see her sometimes impotent (all those times I stared at my Kindle thinking, "what now? How is she ever going to get out of that situation??"), it's a growing, lovely journey that made our heroine stronger and wiser. I can hardly wait to read what's coming next in her life. And I mean it--I can hardly wait indeed. I wish the third book were already available. I'll be thinking of their future for months until I can finally start the third book in the series. And I will read as many books as Ms. Steen decides (hopefully many) to write about Nell Lillington.
Disclaimer: I received an ebook copy of this novel from the author, which did not affect my opinion in any way.
September 30, 2016
This is a review for the audio book.
Eternal Deception, by Jane Steen, is the second book of The House of Closed Doors series. In this book, we continue with Nell’s journey in search of independence and a place for herself and her family in the world. By the end of the first book, she was a very young unwedded mother with a friend heading for the Kansas frontier to work as a seamstress for a Seminary.
Nell is a great character; she is stubborn, patient and determined to follow her dreams. And she is still learning and growing, making mistakes along the way and falling into traps. The book is very detailed in terms of a historical description of the place and the period, showing the beauty, difficulties and hardships of the frontier for all its inhabitants. Nell is isolated in the Eternal Life Seminary, with a tiny growing town an hour away, and her friend Catherine Lombardi and her family on a mission a day away. The hardness of circumstances is also reflected in the people who surround Nell, depicting a money- and status-driven society and revealing to Nell the difficulties of starting again, of being accepted in the identity she has chosen and is creating for herself, and of leaving behind the mistakes she committed (and this is not just a problem of that period). Her long awaited independence is constantly threatened not only because she must conform – to a certain extent – to society, but also because she is now responsible for Tess and Sarah, and that responsibility means that her choices will affect them both (including the consequences of her past choices). It is quite interesting to follow Nell’s struggle for balancing happiness and security for all of her chosen family, and how she matures along the way.
The book brings a great period reconstruction, showing the rapid development of border towns while (from afar) we heard about the Chicago reconstruction after the great fire, but at the same time it brings a relatable and compelling story of personal growth. Jane Steen is an excellent storyteller, her prose is very elegant, her characters are colorful and entertaining, and I can’t wait to see what comes next for them all.
I was given a copy of the audio book in exchange of an honest review and I would recommend it to everyone, but particularly to fans of historical novels. The narration is outstanding with an excellent range of voice and tone, improving the listener experience. (And since I had previously bought the ebook, so anxious I was to keep reading about Nell, I can tell)
Eternal Deception, by Jane Steen, is the second book of The House of Closed Doors series. In this book, we continue with Nell’s journey in search of independence and a place for herself and her family in the world. By the end of the first book, she was a very young unwedded mother with a friend heading for the Kansas frontier to work as a seamstress for a Seminary.
Nell is a great character; she is stubborn, patient and determined to follow her dreams. And she is still learning and growing, making mistakes along the way and falling into traps. The book is very detailed in terms of a historical description of the place and the period, showing the beauty, difficulties and hardships of the frontier for all its inhabitants. Nell is isolated in the Eternal Life Seminary, with a tiny growing town an hour away, and her friend Catherine Lombardi and her family on a mission a day away. The hardness of circumstances is also reflected in the people who surround Nell, depicting a money- and status-driven society and revealing to Nell the difficulties of starting again, of being accepted in the identity she has chosen and is creating for herself, and of leaving behind the mistakes she committed (and this is not just a problem of that period). Her long awaited independence is constantly threatened not only because she must conform – to a certain extent – to society, but also because she is now responsible for Tess and Sarah, and that responsibility means that her choices will affect them both (including the consequences of her past choices). It is quite interesting to follow Nell’s struggle for balancing happiness and security for all of her chosen family, and how she matures along the way.
The book brings a great period reconstruction, showing the rapid development of border towns while (from afar) we heard about the Chicago reconstruction after the great fire, but at the same time it brings a relatable and compelling story of personal growth. Jane Steen is an excellent storyteller, her prose is very elegant, her characters are colorful and entertaining, and I can’t wait to see what comes next for them all.
I was given a copy of the audio book in exchange of an honest review and I would recommend it to everyone, but particularly to fans of historical novels. The narration is outstanding with an excellent range of voice and tone, improving the listener experience. (And since I had previously bought the ebook, so anxious I was to keep reading about Nell, I can tell)
August 3, 2020
Why is it that the second book of a series is always so lacking compared to the first? They almost always are predictable, plodding and contain an ending that is just a little too contrived and convenient. This one is no exception. It's pretty obvious from chapter one who will be the first to die and by chapter three who will be the villain. It does not help that our protagonist seems to have lost what little sense she developed in the first book. There are no surprises in book two at all, and there are a few things that just don't really jibe with the setting and Nell's supposed circumstances.
In spite of that, the books continue to be a nice, light diversion, and I'm particularly enjoying the character of Tess.
In spite of that, the books continue to be a nice, light diversion, and I'm particularly enjoying the character of Tess.
November 9, 2023
I really liked this historical novel. In 1872, unwed young mother Nell Lillington, along with her daughter Sarah and best friend Tess, takes a position as seamstress at a private seminary in Kansas. An opportunity for a new start in life where no one knows her, hoping to keep her status and that of her child, a secret.
She excels in her dressmaking skills not only as a seamstress but also a designer, earning commissions from the upper class women in the local town, making garments for them, each one an original creation.
She attracts 2 prospective suitors, unintentionally, who compete for her attention, which causes conflict and complications for her little family, as she does not want to marry at all. Her lifetime friend, Martin, comes on the scene but she is determined that no man is going to have control of her life.
This young woman is wise beyond her years facing barriers and adversity. Romance, mystery, deception and murder, create an unsafe environment for Nell, Sarah and Tess. Her will and strength are tested time and time again as she continues to fight for her independence and at times for her life.
I’m looking forward to Books 3 and 4, to follow Nell’s journey through life.
She excels in her dressmaking skills not only as a seamstress but also a designer, earning commissions from the upper class women in the local town, making garments for them, each one an original creation.
She attracts 2 prospective suitors, unintentionally, who compete for her attention, which causes conflict and complications for her little family, as she does not want to marry at all. Her lifetime friend, Martin, comes on the scene but she is determined that no man is going to have control of her life.
This young woman is wise beyond her years facing barriers and adversity. Romance, mystery, deception and murder, create an unsafe environment for Nell, Sarah and Tess. Her will and strength are tested time and time again as she continues to fight for her independence and at times for her life.
I’m looking forward to Books 3 and 4, to follow Nell’s journey through life.
May 30, 2017
Really good read
I normally stick to mysteries not much on romantic novels but this series of books has managed to combine both in a really interesting way that kept me reading from one to the other. I don't think that you will be disappointed.
I normally stick to mysteries not much on romantic novels but this series of books has managed to combine both in a really interesting way that kept me reading from one to the other. I don't think that you will be disappointed.
March 25, 2018
In this sequel to The House of Closed Doors, Nell Lillington leaves the Poor Farm with her infant daughter Sarah and friend Tess and journeys to Kansas where they hope to make a new life for themselves. Nell is hired as a seamstress for Eternal Light Seminary, the one stone building in a land of sod shanties. But the solidity of the seminary turns out to be little more than a facade. Nell soon discovers that there are competing factions in the seminary, with many men (and women) valuing money and prestige over the pursuit of truth.
As Nell's skills in sewing continue to improve, she takes on a side job of dressmaking for the wealthy women in the vicinity. This augments the money that she can send to her faithful friend Martin Ruthersford, who has been busy investing her capital at the same time as he has been building his upscale department store in Chicago.
A pretty young woman in 1870s Kansas can't help but attract admirers, and Nell soon finds herself being courted by Reinar Lehmann, a wealthy and impetuous young student, and by Judah Poulton, a handsome but coldly calculating teacher. The idea of providing Sarah with a father (and removing the stain of illegitimacy from her) is attractive, but will either of these men be the father Sarah needs or a man that Nell can love? When two mysterious murders turn the seminary into a place of mistrust and danger, Nell must decide whether Kansas is the place she wants to set down roots, or if, in fact, her heart lies farther away in the resurrected city of Chicago.
The title of this book ties well into the theme of the story. Instead of being full of the eternal light of God's presence, the seminary founders are eternally full of deception about their aims. No one practices what they preach, with the head of the teetotalling seminary plying donors with alcohol and committing adultery in secret. One of Nell's own suitors is dissembling about his nefarious past and will stop at nothing to achieve the power he craves.
The greatest lie, however, is the self-deception that both Nell and Martin have been practicing for so long. Nell has deceived herself into thinking that her vaunted independence is preferable to a loving marriage with Martin, while Martin has refused to admit to himself that Nell Lillington is the only girl he has ever cared for. As the deception clears away from the main characters' hearts and the action-packed finale brings the novel to a breathless close, we are forced to face the question: is it too late for happiness or will the consequences of their self-deception be eternal?
As Nell's skills in sewing continue to improve, she takes on a side job of dressmaking for the wealthy women in the vicinity. This augments the money that she can send to her faithful friend Martin Ruthersford, who has been busy investing her capital at the same time as he has been building his upscale department store in Chicago.
A pretty young woman in 1870s Kansas can't help but attract admirers, and Nell soon finds herself being courted by Reinar Lehmann, a wealthy and impetuous young student, and by Judah Poulton, a handsome but coldly calculating teacher. The idea of providing Sarah with a father (and removing the stain of illegitimacy from her) is attractive, but will either of these men be the father Sarah needs or a man that Nell can love? When two mysterious murders turn the seminary into a place of mistrust and danger, Nell must decide whether Kansas is the place she wants to set down roots, or if, in fact, her heart lies farther away in the resurrected city of Chicago.
The title of this book ties well into the theme of the story. Instead of being full of the eternal light of God's presence, the seminary founders are eternally full of deception about their aims. No one practices what they preach, with the head of the teetotalling seminary plying donors with alcohol and committing adultery in secret. One of Nell's own suitors is dissembling about his nefarious past and will stop at nothing to achieve the power he craves.
The greatest lie, however, is the self-deception that both Nell and Martin have been practicing for so long. Nell has deceived herself into thinking that her vaunted independence is preferable to a loving marriage with Martin, while Martin has refused to admit to himself that Nell Lillington is the only girl he has ever cared for. As the deception clears away from the main characters' hearts and the action-packed finale brings the novel to a breathless close, we are forced to face the question: is it too late for happiness or will the consequences of their self-deception be eternal?
June 5, 2016
I loved the book and read every word. That may sound odd, but it's a difficult thing for me to do. I have spent so many years writing, it takes a certain type of novel to draw me in and keep me hooked on another author's work. This one ticked all of the boxes for me. Unlike some who are prolific on this site (and others), I make a pointing of never reviewing a book unless I have read it right through.
I normally cannot abide lead characters who are in their twenties, but that was before I encountered Nell. What a gal. It may be that I was born out of time. Or, it may be the fact that Nell is a classy chick with little interest in vampires or fake tan that appealed to me so much. This is a well-written novel that draws the reader into a different century. A century where women are very much at the mercy of men and society in general. A world where a girl had to become a woman at a young age if she hoped to get on and keep her head above water. The Poor House portion of the tale is pure genius, and provides a glimpse into an environment that was commonplace back then. Any reader with even a vague interest in history will really enjoy it.
Yes, the story is left slightly open at the end. Simple solution. I purchased Book 2 and read that! Yes, some of the conversation is a tad stilted. Possibly because times were more formal back then, and sexting was frowned upon. Yes, Nell unexpectedly realises that she wants to keep her baby. Gosh! Who ever heard of a reluctant mother falling madly in love with a newborn? I have no hesitation in recommending this novel, and am grateful to have discovered this writer. No conflict. We are not friends or any of that malarky, I just think it's a great book and well worth a read.
I normally cannot abide lead characters who are in their twenties, but that was before I encountered Nell. What a gal. It may be that I was born out of time. Or, it may be the fact that Nell is a classy chick with little interest in vampires or fake tan that appealed to me so much. This is a well-written novel that draws the reader into a different century. A century where women are very much at the mercy of men and society in general. A world where a girl had to become a woman at a young age if she hoped to get on and keep her head above water. The Poor House portion of the tale is pure genius, and provides a glimpse into an environment that was commonplace back then. Any reader with even a vague interest in history will really enjoy it.
Yes, the story is left slightly open at the end. Simple solution. I purchased Book 2 and read that! Yes, some of the conversation is a tad stilted. Possibly because times were more formal back then, and sexting was frowned upon. Yes, Nell unexpectedly realises that she wants to keep her baby. Gosh! Who ever heard of a reluctant mother falling madly in love with a newborn? I have no hesitation in recommending this novel, and am grateful to have discovered this writer. No conflict. We are not friends or any of that malarky, I just think it's a great book and well worth a read.
March 7, 2019
Part Two of this saga takes Nell, her daughter, and bestie to the vast empty plains of Kansas, where she finds everything but the peace she was seeking. Finding instead - fights, greed, jealous suitors, and dead bodies - and of course Martin is never far from her thoughts. The third and final book of the series may finally bring Nell to the happily ever after she never thought she wanted.
I'd wanted to give this book 4 stars, but just couldn't. There is a really good story here, it's keeping me intrigued and eager to read what happens next - but there's just so many words! Yes it's a book, of course there's lots of words. But I feel this story could have been told in one well paced book without leaving out a thing. I have to admit there where times I found myself skimming past groups of sentences that added nothing to the story, looking for the place the story would continue on. Having said that - I am enjoying the story. It just takes a little patience to read through it.
On to volume three!
I'd wanted to give this book 4 stars, but just couldn't. There is a really good story here, it's keeping me intrigued and eager to read what happens next - but there's just so many words! Yes it's a book, of course there's lots of words. But I feel this story could have been told in one well paced book without leaving out a thing. I have to admit there where times I found myself skimming past groups of sentences that added nothing to the story, looking for the place the story would continue on. Having said that - I am enjoying the story. It just takes a little patience to read through it.
On to volume three!
March 4, 2019
I did not enjoy this as much as the first book, as it dragged on and on and seemed like life on the Frontier was NEVER going to end! Also, for all the worldliness Nell thinks (and probably should have) accumulated, she is very blind to the charms of Judah - whilst I appreciate life was different for women back then and it was proper to be subordinate to the menfolk, that didn't sit with her character at all!
I found Martin quite annoying also - I was rightly outraged alongside Nell when he tried to make claims on her after ignoring her for months and getting married in secret.
Lastly, it was annoying that we never found out the contents of the letter - i know this was addressed at the end of the book, but it didn't make it any less irritating. I wouldn't want to (buy) and read a whole book on Judah, a character I didn't like, just to find out.
I have bought book 3 as I am invested in Nell, Sarah and Tess now but I hope that one goes quicker than this.
I found Martin quite annoying also - I was rightly outraged alongside Nell when he tried to make claims on her after ignoring her for months and getting married in secret.
Lastly, it was annoying that we never found out the contents of the letter - i know this was addressed at the end of the book, but it didn't make it any less irritating. I wouldn't want to (buy) and read a whole book on Judah, a character I didn't like, just to find out.
I have bought book 3 as I am invested in Nell, Sarah and Tess now but I hope that one goes quicker than this.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 28, 2016
Quite the story!
Both this and the previous "House of Closed Doors" was difficult to put down! I found both to be informative and riveting. Discriptions of Baby Sarah brought many a smile, as they were so true-to-life. And though the love scenes were sweet and caring, it was a relief not to have to page through vulgar sex scenes, but rather be able to read a tale worth telling! I think I may have found new author to follow!
Both this and the previous "House of Closed Doors" was difficult to put down! I found both to be informative and riveting. Discriptions of Baby Sarah brought many a smile, as they were so true-to-life. And though the love scenes were sweet and caring, it was a relief not to have to page through vulgar sex scenes, but rather be able to read a tale worth telling! I think I may have found new author to follow!
October 22, 2022
Entertaining read
Both "Eternal Deception" and its predecessor, "The House of Closed Doors" are engaging works of historical fiction. Both books were obviously founded on solid historical research that made the period details of this well-told saga credible.
Both "Eternal Deception" and its predecessor, "The House of Closed Doors" are engaging works of historical fiction. Both books were obviously founded on solid historical research that made the period details of this well-told saga credible.
February 23, 2025
dark and depressing
I had a hard time reading this book. The evil characters seem to dominate and win throughout the book. The good characters seem to always have a hard and unjust path. The world is depressing enough and evil abounds so why would I want to read about it?
I had a hard time reading this book. The evil characters seem to dominate and win throughout the book. The good characters seem to always have a hard and unjust path. The world is depressing enough and evil abounds so why would I want to read about it?
November 4, 2018
I am really impressed with the author's writing ability. From the moment I read the first book in the series - a freebie on Kindle, I struggled to put it down.
The unfolding saga of the three women, this time on the prairie, mesmerized you. It is filled with intrigue, adventure and a budding romance.
You get involved in Eleanor Lillington's story. Uniquely written, it gives you a very good idea of life for an unwed mother back in the day. The care she took to design a new life for herself with her 4-year-old daughter and the dear Tess. Tess has become a strong character in her own right which I admire greatly.
Sarah's own character develops as the story grows, literally growing with the book and a pleasure to witness.
But my admiration for Nelly is at the forefront. Her willingness to take on new ventures in the midst of people's views elevates her above her peers. Putting them aside to really care for her small family the best she can. Just as with her daughter, she grows in stature dealing with life as it comes along. Her strong willpower and dedication setting her apart from other women.
Martin's character hovers still in the background but yet stays prominent. The author's creative writing always bring him to the forefront and I can not help but admire this man. Since day one, he was Nelly's protector and beneficiary. His love and care visible in the letters he sent.
Really a great series I can recommend to all history lovers.
Can't wait to see what happens next with this small group, on their way to new ventures; hopefully with a romance that will bring these group even closer.
The unfolding saga of the three women, this time on the prairie, mesmerized you. It is filled with intrigue, adventure and a budding romance.
You get involved in Eleanor Lillington's story. Uniquely written, it gives you a very good idea of life for an unwed mother back in the day. The care she took to design a new life for herself with her 4-year-old daughter and the dear Tess. Tess has become a strong character in her own right which I admire greatly.
Sarah's own character develops as the story grows, literally growing with the book and a pleasure to witness.
But my admiration for Nelly is at the forefront. Her willingness to take on new ventures in the midst of people's views elevates her above her peers. Putting them aside to really care for her small family the best she can. Just as with her daughter, she grows in stature dealing with life as it comes along. Her strong willpower and dedication setting her apart from other women.
Martin's character hovers still in the background but yet stays prominent. The author's creative writing always bring him to the forefront and I can not help but admire this man. Since day one, he was Nelly's protector and beneficiary. His love and care visible in the letters he sent.
Really a great series I can recommend to all history lovers.
Can't wait to see what happens next with this small group, on their way to new ventures; hopefully with a romance that will bring these group even closer.
February 1, 2021
Exceptional motive, description and character development
Eternal Deception continues the life of Nell, Sarah, Tess and Mrs. Lombardi. This is not just a fluff of imagination romancing lovers through idyllic events to titillate and encompass warm dreaming - Jane Steen digs deeply into the causes and effects of each character’s motivations. The result builds real, fleshed-out friends and enemies that occupy a companion dimension weaving in and out of a reader’s own thoughts to impact and prompt our personal desires and decisions. Descriptions are carefully constructed to identify the purpose and result of each picture and emotion. Obviously I empathized with Nell’s young enthusiasm for the pleasures and possibilities stretching before her as a fresh, naive girl on the threshold of womanhood. Her responsible reaction to the unexpected reality she faces becomes foundational to her character as the cages of society and morality of the time close about her and her efforts to provide a life without discrimination for Sarah. Nell becomes the portrait of the hopes and hidden talents inside every woman trapped within mores and expectations. Nell strives against opposition with a spirit of love and discovery regarding who is capable of truly loving and who pretends in order to selfishly take. Unfortunately, like life, the saga continues and further trials and tribulations assail Nell’s hopes and expectations- we have to buy the next book to continue sharing in Nell’s dreams! I can’t stop here.
Eternal Deception continues the life of Nell, Sarah, Tess and Mrs. Lombardi. This is not just a fluff of imagination romancing lovers through idyllic events to titillate and encompass warm dreaming - Jane Steen digs deeply into the causes and effects of each character’s motivations. The result builds real, fleshed-out friends and enemies that occupy a companion dimension weaving in and out of a reader’s own thoughts to impact and prompt our personal desires and decisions. Descriptions are carefully constructed to identify the purpose and result of each picture and emotion. Obviously I empathized with Nell’s young enthusiasm for the pleasures and possibilities stretching before her as a fresh, naive girl on the threshold of womanhood. Her responsible reaction to the unexpected reality she faces becomes foundational to her character as the cages of society and morality of the time close about her and her efforts to provide a life without discrimination for Sarah. Nell becomes the portrait of the hopes and hidden talents inside every woman trapped within mores and expectations. Nell strives against opposition with a spirit of love and discovery regarding who is capable of truly loving and who pretends in order to selfishly take. Unfortunately, like life, the saga continues and further trials and tribulations assail Nell’s hopes and expectations- we have to buy the next book to continue sharing in Nell’s dreams! I can’t stop here.
September 14, 2023
This is the second book in this series and tells the life of Nell Lillington over the ensuing four years of 1872 to 1876. We learn of Nell's arrival in Kansas where she takes a position as the seamstress at a seminary. Although, this is her attempt to escape gossip, it follows her to the seminary. Here she meets Professor Wale, Mr Lehmann and Mr Poulton. She is sworn of men but they seek her out. There is deception, murder, repentance and redemption. She wants to get out from under Mr Poulton by going to see her friend Catherine. However, she inadvertently tells Judah she will not marry him while they are traveling and he strikes her. She and Tess force him to leave them on the prairie but no one comes looking for them so, Nell must begin walking the last 3-4 hours to Catherine's in the snow. Once again Martin comes to her rescue and their relationship rekindles. Martin is now married and does not see how he can divorce his wife without bringing more shame to Nell. He does encourage her come to Chicago where she can enter society as a woman of wealth and pursue her freedom. After much thought Nell, Sarah, her daughter and Tess, her friend leave Kansas and go to Chicago to find their independence.
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July 28, 2025
Eternal Deception
This is the second book in the House of Closed Doors by Jane Steen. Set in 1870’s America, Nell Lillington is an unwed mother determined to carve out an independent life for herself, her daughter Sarah, and her friend Tess on the Kansas frontier. Now working as a seamstress at a remote seminary, Nell hopes for stability, but when her only ally at the school dies, she’s left vulnerable in a hostile environment. As her dressmaking skills begin to attract attention, so does she, especially from two very different men: Reiner Lehmann, a wealthy student, and Judah Poulton, a struggling professor. But just as Nell starts to find her footing, shocking news from Chicago and another suspicious death at the seminary force her to make impossible choices. A brutal winter journey, a dangerous game of secrets, and a love that defies logic all threaten to upend the fragile control she’s fought so hard to gain. It’s a story of resilience, mystery, and the high cost of freedom in a world that offers women few choices. Set in 1870s, Kansas it blends the grit of frontier life with suspenseful twists, emotional depth, and a heroine determined to forge her own path. I really enjoyed this amazing historical mystery romance novel.
This is the second book in the House of Closed Doors by Jane Steen. Set in 1870’s America, Nell Lillington is an unwed mother determined to carve out an independent life for herself, her daughter Sarah, and her friend Tess on the Kansas frontier. Now working as a seamstress at a remote seminary, Nell hopes for stability, but when her only ally at the school dies, she’s left vulnerable in a hostile environment. As her dressmaking skills begin to attract attention, so does she, especially from two very different men: Reiner Lehmann, a wealthy student, and Judah Poulton, a struggling professor. But just as Nell starts to find her footing, shocking news from Chicago and another suspicious death at the seminary force her to make impossible choices. A brutal winter journey, a dangerous game of secrets, and a love that defies logic all threaten to upend the fragile control she’s fought so hard to gain. It’s a story of resilience, mystery, and the high cost of freedom in a world that offers women few choices. Set in 1870s, Kansas it blends the grit of frontier life with suspenseful twists, emotional depth, and a heroine determined to forge her own path. I really enjoyed this amazing historical mystery romance novel.
August 16, 2025
This is the second book in the House of Closed Doors by Jane Steen. Set in 1870’s America, Nell Lillington is an unwed mother determined to carve out an independent life for herself, her daughter Sarah, and her friend Tess on the Kansas frontier. Now working as a seamstress at a remote seminary, Nell hopes for stability, but when her only ally at the school dies, she’s left vulnerable in a hostile environment. As her dressmaking skills begin to attract attention, so does she, especially from two very different men: Reiner Lehmann, a wealthy student, and Judah Poulton, a struggling professor. But just as Nell starts to find her footing, shocking news from Chicago and another suspicious death at the seminary force her to make impossible choices. A brutal winter journey, a dangerous game of secrets, and a love that defies logic all threaten to upend the fragile control she’s fought so hard to gain. It’s a story of resilience, mystery, and the high cost of freedom in a world that offers women few choices. Set in 1870s Kansas, it blends the grit of frontier life with suspenseful twists, emotional depth, and a heroine determined to forge her own path. I really enjoyed this amazing historical mystery romance novel.
May 8, 2020
Fast paced and good reading!
This second book of the series is, again, a nonstop, fast-paced story of the life of a young woman in 1870'd Midwest who strives to make a decent life for herself and her child out of wedlock.
The crazy idea that women were considered "fallen" after having a child without benefit of marriage is a foreign concept today. Any woman who made the decision to keep that child and attempt raising them by herself was bravery alone. Married or not, early life on the prairie was extremely hard. The story gives great descriptions of this life in a seminary in Kansas.
Many years ago I read a book, 'Wisconsin Death Trip,' s compilation of pictures and newspaper articles from the late 1800's that put into perspective the lonely, hard life experienced by the population.
I enjoyed this book very much and would recommend to readers of historical fiction and romance.
This second book of the series is, again, a nonstop, fast-paced story of the life of a young woman in 1870'd Midwest who strives to make a decent life for herself and her child out of wedlock.
The crazy idea that women were considered "fallen" after having a child without benefit of marriage is a foreign concept today. Any woman who made the decision to keep that child and attempt raising them by herself was bravery alone. Married or not, early life on the prairie was extremely hard. The story gives great descriptions of this life in a seminary in Kansas.
Many years ago I read a book, 'Wisconsin Death Trip,' s compilation of pictures and newspaper articles from the late 1800's that put into perspective the lonely, hard life experienced by the population.
I enjoyed this book very much and would recommend to readers of historical fiction and romance.
July 7, 2020
The 2nd book had moments of high intrigue towards the end the outcome was predictable. It is a romantic triangle type of fare with a twist of angst and suspence to hold the reader's attention.
Nell has moved further west into the frontier of Kansas to work at an all boys school hoping to start afresh with her daughter and friend Tess. Here sad history follows her however and makes for an uncomfortable life of lies while she tries to hide her past. Predictably all is eventually discovered by the protagonist in the story and used against her . Nel finds herself once again compelled to solve a murder that she feels bound up in putting her on life at risk. In the end she saved by old friend Martin who now pledges his undying love even though he is a married man Nell acknowledges her own feelings all the while fearful of where it might lead.
A very quick read.
Nell has moved further west into the frontier of Kansas to work at an all boys school hoping to start afresh with her daughter and friend Tess. Here sad history follows her however and makes for an uncomfortable life of lies while she tries to hide her past. Predictably all is eventually discovered by the protagonist in the story and used against her . Nel finds herself once again compelled to solve a murder that she feels bound up in putting her on life at risk. In the end she saved by old friend Martin who now pledges his undying love even though he is a married man Nell acknowledges her own feelings all the while fearful of where it might lead.
A very quick read.
February 2, 2021
Two mysterious murders
Two foreboding romances
The title says it all Eternal Deception is a gripping tale of Elenor “Nell” Lillington finding her independence on the frontier of Kansas.
Nell is courted by two possible suitors who could promise a better respected life for Nell’s daughter Sarah, will Nell give up her independence and beliefs on married life for a chance to save Sarah the humiliation of being an unwed mothers daughter?
This book blew me out of the water with its elegance, simplicity, heartwarming friendships, pride, twisted romances on the heart and incredibly touching story of Nell and her path to success in Kansas during the 1800’s
Any young woman fascinated with finding herself and learning of life in the 1800’s for women, should read this series it is both inspiring and insightful I look forward to book 3!
Two foreboding romances
The title says it all Eternal Deception is a gripping tale of Elenor “Nell” Lillington finding her independence on the frontier of Kansas.
Nell is courted by two possible suitors who could promise a better respected life for Nell’s daughter Sarah, will Nell give up her independence and beliefs on married life for a chance to save Sarah the humiliation of being an unwed mothers daughter?
This book blew me out of the water with its elegance, simplicity, heartwarming friendships, pride, twisted romances on the heart and incredibly touching story of Nell and her path to success in Kansas during the 1800’s
Any young woman fascinated with finding herself and learning of life in the 1800’s for women, should read this series it is both inspiring and insightful I look forward to book 3!
December 1, 2023
Excellent sequel to House of Closed Doors
This book covers four years in the lives of Nell, her daughter Sarah, and her developmentally delayed but very competent friend Tess. She has moved to Kansas and taken a position as lived in seamstress at an all male religious boarding school. We get to see Nell continue to mature and use her inner strength to survive and thrive. There is intrigue, mystery, death and triumph along the way, as well as a bit of romance. The story is complete and can be enjoyed without reading the first book in the series, and the ending wraps up this part of Nell's life while also leading nicely into her next adventure. The writing and editing are excellent, the story holds the reader's attention, and the character development leads the reader to cheer for our protagonists and feel disdain for other characters. Jane Steen has written another triumph!
This book covers four years in the lives of Nell, her daughter Sarah, and her developmentally delayed but very competent friend Tess. She has moved to Kansas and taken a position as lived in seamstress at an all male religious boarding school. We get to see Nell continue to mature and use her inner strength to survive and thrive. There is intrigue, mystery, death and triumph along the way, as well as a bit of romance. The story is complete and can be enjoyed without reading the first book in the series, and the ending wraps up this part of Nell's life while also leading nicely into her next adventure. The writing and editing are excellent, the story holds the reader's attention, and the character development leads the reader to cheer for our protagonists and feel disdain for other characters. Jane Steen has written another triumph!
November 3, 2024
Eternal Deception (The House of Closed Doors, Book 2) by Jane Steen is a very engrossing, excellent and enjoyable book. When I read a book by Ms. Steen, I feel so much like the female main character - I feel her joy, her shame, her excitement, whatever the main character feels. Not every book/every author can make me "feel the story" as Ms. Steen does.
Eternal Deception is the second book in Ms. Steen's The House of Closed Doors series. Books one and two are stand-alone books, but even though they end completely, the way they are written could always lead to another book, as this series of four books shows. That said, the endings of Books one and two left me completely satisfied with how they were tied up and feeling like that was the stories' end.
I have a couple more books of Ms. Steen's read, as well as the next two books in this series and I simply cannot wait to read them!!
Eternal Deception is the second book in Ms. Steen's The House of Closed Doors series. Books one and two are stand-alone books, but even though they end completely, the way they are written could always lead to another book, as this series of four books shows. That said, the endings of Books one and two left me completely satisfied with how they were tied up and feeling like that was the stories' end.
I have a couple more books of Ms. Steen's read, as well as the next two books in this series and I simply cannot wait to read them!!
March 23, 2018
This is the second book of The House of Closed Doors series. In this book we follow Nell as she works as a seamstress at a seminary. While Nell has always been against marriage, she finds herself reconsidering when two suitors begin to pursue her. The seminary suffers two deaths and Nell finds herself on what seems like an impossible journey through the snow. ➖ I just stayed up far too late to finish this book. As I mentioned before, I’m not typically a fan of historical fiction, but Steen does an amazing job of incorporating the element of mystery into her stories. I received this series from the publisher and NetGalley in exchange for my honest review and I’m so thankful for the opportunity to be introduced to a new author.
August 8, 2019
This was such an unexpected joy to read. Got the first book free on Kindle, had it sitting on my device for months until I finally took the plunge. Couldn't stop once I started and totally devoured Eternal Deception when I was done. The romance in this, although you could see it coming, was done so freaking well! To this day, the moment when *cough* realises that they are in love with *ahem* and how that sends their entire world into absolute chaos...... Ugh! Bravo. Freaking amazing. Best written romantic epiphany I have read in recent times and I say that without want or need for qualification.
This book has everything. Romance. Mystery. Thriller. Suspense. Just an overall great read and an underrated one at that. I HIGHLY recommend this series.
This book has everything. Romance. Mystery. Thriller. Suspense. Just an overall great read and an underrated one at that. I HIGHLY recommend this series.
August 12, 2020
This is the second book of the "House of Closed Doors" trilogy. I enjoyed the first book in the series set in a small town in the early 1870s. In this book, the heroine moves to the Kansas prairies with her daughter hoping to live an anonymous, low-key life as the seamstress in a seminary.
I almost gave up on this book several times, the last time about 50% of the way through. But I kept thinking about how good the first book was and continued on. The story picked up for me at about 60% and I ended up liking the story - or rather 40% of the story. Nothing much seems to happen in the first half. I can't recommend this book highly, but if you enjoyed the first one, titled "The House of Closed Doors," you might want to continue to this one. I don't think I will be buying the third book.
I almost gave up on this book several times, the last time about 50% of the way through. But I kept thinking about how good the first book was and continued on. The story picked up for me at about 60% and I ended up liking the story - or rather 40% of the story. Nothing much seems to happen in the first half. I can't recommend this book highly, but if you enjoyed the first one, titled "The House of Closed Doors," you might want to continue to this one. I don't think I will be buying the third book.
March 11, 2019
‘Eternal Deception’ is an excellent goodread and this title perfectly describes Nell’s life in Kansas. Martin, childhood close friend, may be in Chicago, but still very much apart of Nell’s life. Author, Jane Steen’s writing flows with characters that kept me reading as they played out mysterious and sometimes fearful storylines. Nell expected a wonderful new life in Kansas, but Ms. Steen summed it up perfectly saying her Garden of Eden had a few snakes in it. I love that! It makes great reading and book 2 in this series has all the elements that make up a great story hardships, mystery, adventure, and suppressed love.
June 8, 2022
I really enjoyed this book, the lead character irritates and frustrates with her stubborn ways and inability to see what is happening, getting herself into difficulties that we can easily see from our exalted viewpoint. Still the writing is good and the period seems to be well described and incorporated (I say seemed as I don't actually know much about the period in USA). The storyline kept my attention and keeps me reading into the next book of the series. The decisions taken by the main characters may not always be understandable but they are carried out consistently and credibly. Jane Steen is a wonderful historical author, more power to her elbow.
October 27, 2022
Grateful
Boy, I sure am glad I was born after the 1800's! Nell has had a terrible time dealing with her love of her illegitimate child, her ( I'm guessing) downs syndrome best friend/ chosen sister and her child hood best friend Martin. Man people were judgy! Most being hypocrites without a conscience themselves. This story was really good. So much deception happening to a girl with very little experience with such things, Nell is determined to make a good life for herself and her loved ones. She's a gifted seamstress and she has developed quite a side gig, but with her fortunes, come more slimy predators trying to take advantage of her.
Boy, I sure am glad I was born after the 1800's! Nell has had a terrible time dealing with her love of her illegitimate child, her ( I'm guessing) downs syndrome best friend/ chosen sister and her child hood best friend Martin. Man people were judgy! Most being hypocrites without a conscience themselves. This story was really good. So much deception happening to a girl with very little experience with such things, Nell is determined to make a good life for herself and her loved ones. She's a gifted seamstress and she has developed quite a side gig, but with her fortunes, come more slimy predators trying to take advantage of her.
November 25, 2022
Captivating!
Jane Steen has captured the essence of frontier life, and provided us with a captivating story! Nell plans to pursue her dream of being an independent and successful business woman during a time that women were neither independent nor successful at anything more than being subservient to their husbands, and devoted to their children. Determined to raise daughter Sarah, and care for fiercely loyal friend Tess, Nell encounters almost insurmountable obstacles. “Eternal Deception” is masterfully written and leaves me wanting more - I can’t wait to read “The Shadow Palace”!
Jane Steen has captured the essence of frontier life, and provided us with a captivating story! Nell plans to pursue her dream of being an independent and successful business woman during a time that women were neither independent nor successful at anything more than being subservient to their husbands, and devoted to their children. Determined to raise daughter Sarah, and care for fiercely loyal friend Tess, Nell encounters almost insurmountable obstacles. “Eternal Deception” is masterfully written and leaves me wanting more - I can’t wait to read “The Shadow Palace”!
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