My problems with this book started at pacing and somehow ended up at child abuse
Yes this review contains spoilers, but seriously, don’t waste your time on this book.
Let’s start at the beginning. At first it just felt a bit cheesy, but that was expected from the cover and blurb. You know there’s that certain kind of writing and it makes for an easy read but is not particularly interesting, so it was fine.
I liked the concept - a woman dies and her organs get donated and how these people are fated to be in each other’s lives. That’s interesting!
And credit where it’s due, Lisa’s death did make me emotional. It was the one well written part of the book.
It’s how everything unfolds that frankly sucks, and there’s a lot to get through so this might be slightly sporadic.
I’ll start with the family she leaves behind - her husband Alex and seven year old son Connor (since none of her family seemed to care she died and check in at all or be relevant to the story). Alex is a bad dad. He’s one of the two main characters yet he’s so hard to sympathise with, mostly because he’s so selfish. Of course grief is hard, but his priority should be his kid and yet he’s blatantly neglectful. If your SEVEN YEAR OLD child is clearly not dealing with this event you need to get him help. Maybe I’m too practically minded but I can not read about how sad it is a little kid is so depressed- GO HELP HIM!! Give him therapy, properly explain what has happened, don’t let him think his mum is returning. And it’s that stupid cliché of mum’s dead and dad’s useless. YOU ARE A PARENT! YOU WERE A PARENT BEFORE SHE DIED AND YOU STILL ARE NOW! SO STEP UP! There’s no denying that suddenly losing your partner would be horrible, but this portrayal is not one that conjures any sympathies from me.
The other main character is Molly, who receives the heart transplant. The chapters switch between first person for molly and third for alex - a choice that makes little sense when the narrative voice stays pretty consistent in style. Molly is at least a nicer character but her story is frustrating. She somehow is in a love triangle between Alex and Mac - who receives a retina transplant. Both are obviously terrible options. One thinks he loves her because she has his wife’s heart (though of course the author decides it’s important to mention that he’s Sexually attracted to her) and the other she describes multiple times as feeling childlike in his presence because he’s so tall. Heres a tip! If you want 2 characters to get together, DONT USE ANY DESCRIPTION THAT REFERS TO CHILDREN YOU WEIRDO. And Mac even says at one point that they should be friends and it is said in such a brilliant way that YOU WOULD THINK THE AUTHOR WOULD LISTEN. Oh and there’s this irrelevant plot point about Mac having a pregnant friend and Molly thinking he must be involved somehow because god forbid a man be friends with a pregnant lady??? What in the world?
Here are some quick fire problems I have as they come to me:
* Molly wearing red lipstick with a smoky eye. You either do a bold eye or a bold lip otherwise it’s too much…unless you’re doing Strictly.
* Connor gets a kitten from the old lady who received the kidney transplant after she basically forced it on Alex. Why when your kid is severely traumatised would you not immediately accept the first thing to bring him joy in months? And why was his reaction ‘Lisa would’ve been so proud of me’ NO SHE WOULDVE GOT THE KITTEN IMMEDIATELY YOU DICK
* Bad research on blindness. Mac says he didn’t think he’d ever have children? Because blind people can’t have children??? And there was the stupid old misconception of ‘i can hear so much better because I’m blind’ no babes blind people rely on hearing more than sited people THEYRE NOT BLOODY SUPERHEROS WITH ECHOLOCATION
* the pacing of the book sucked and there were so many unnecessary chapters and things stretching on too long
* The ending omg THE ENDING ok obvs major spoilers but if you’re still planning on reading the book have a word with yourself. Ok so the ending - Connor, a seven year old CHILD, slips out the house with no one noticing. i mean you have to be joking. Someone please take his father’s rights away. So alex doesnt want them calling the police which again terrible parenting. Connor’s gone to find his mum because he thinks she’s still alive (!!) and ends up at a pier (not really explained why). Somehow Mac had been driving to this same pier a lot when he first got his surgery so knew where it was and it’s like the mum’s eyes knew where her son would be like what kind of supernatural bs is this. Connor ends up in the sea, in a storm, getting mouth to mouth, only to be fine to talk to his dad. LIKE GIRL JUST WATCH ONE CASUALTY EPISODE AND YOULL KNOW THATS NOT ACCURATE.
* And the final chapter? A five months later subheading and Mac and Molly getting married. For one, why are you getting married so fast. For two, how are you planning a wedding so fast. For three what a lazy cliché ending. Why not the ending where Connor heals and gets the help he needs.
This book just makes me rage. I am shocked it got through editors and no one pointed out these 490 flaws. I’m even more shocked people LIKE this book?? At this point I think it might be a prank.
But yes I did finish it. The absolute ridiculousness of it all kept me hooked by making me wonder what on earth is gonna come next, and shocking me every time.
I’m glad I got this book second hand rather than paying full price. Some people kayak the amazon for charity, I read a shite book that cost 50p from a charity shop.