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He is destined to be high priest—but at what cost to those he loves?
In ancient Samaria, Aban anticipates his rites of passage with excitement and dread. He yearns to join the priesthood of Ba’al Melqart, unlock the power of the rain god, and hear the deity’s voice. He’s been warned the licentious ceremony can take a dangerous turn, but as eldest son of the high priestess, he holds a privileged position. If he can make it through the ceremony, one day he’ll rise to high priest.
On the eve of the rituals, Aban’s mother confesses a dark secret about the bloody sacrifice demanded by Melqart. Aban may have escaped the flames, but if he is to save his brother, Aban must take his destined position of power as soon as possible.
When the mysterious prophet Elijah interrupts the rites, overturns the idol, and curses the land with drought, Aban’s world is shaken. The current high priest and the king appear powerless, but even more confusing is the fact that the rain god does nothing.
Against his better judgment, Aban conceals the strange prophet’s whereabouts, forfeiting the high priesthood. Now an enemy of the relentless Queen Jezebel, Aban has little time to question his fading commitment to Ba’al Melqart as he and his loved ones flee. But the conflict in Samaria is much larger than just a high priestess and her sons. Soon, Aban will have to choose a side in Yahweh’s war against the Ba’als—and it may cost him his life.
In ancient Samaria, Aban anticipates his rites of passage with excitement and dread. He yearns to join the priesthood of Ba’al Melqart, unlock the power of the rain god, and hear the deity’s voice. He’s been warned the licentious ceremony can take a dangerous turn, but as eldest son of the high priestess, he holds a privileged position. If he can make it through the ceremony, one day he’ll rise to high priest.
On the eve of the rituals, Aban’s mother confesses a dark secret about the bloody sacrifice demanded by Melqart. Aban may have escaped the flames, but if he is to save his brother, Aban must take his destined position of power as soon as possible.
When the mysterious prophet Elijah interrupts the rites, overturns the idol, and curses the land with drought, Aban’s world is shaken. The current high priest and the king appear powerless, but even more confusing is the fact that the rain god does nothing.
Against his better judgment, Aban conceals the strange prophet’s whereabouts, forfeiting the high priesthood. Now an enemy of the relentless Queen Jezebel, Aban has little time to question his fading commitment to Ba’al Melqart as he and his loved ones flee. But the conflict in Samaria is much larger than just a high priestess and her sons. Soon, Aban will have to choose a side in Yahweh’s war against the Ba’als—and it may cost him his life.
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First published March 1, 2021
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Dana McNeely
4 books207 followersDana McNeely dreamed of living in a world teeming with adventure, danger, and romance, but she had a problem—she also needed a lot of peace and quiet. She learned to visit that dream world by stepping into a book. Better yet, hundreds of books. Soon, she began writing her own stories, fact and fiction.
Inspired by the Bible stories of Elijah, Dana wondered why the prophet came to stay with the widow of Zarephath and her son. Who were they? What was their life, before? How did the boy change after he died, saw the other world—and came back?
Those questions led to Dana writing RAIN, in which she built her dream world of adventure, danger, and romance. Peace and quiet, however, have remained elusive.
No stranger to drought, Dana lives in an Arizona oasis with her hubby the constant gardener, two good dogs, an antisocial cat, and migrating butterflies.
Her debut novel RAIN spins the tale of a mysterious prophet, a desperate youth, and a relentless queen. RAIN and a second novel in the "Whispers on the Wind" series are contracted by Mountain Brook Ink.
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Inspired by the Bible stories of Elijah, Dana wondered why the prophet came to stay with the widow of Zarephath and her son. Who were they? What was their life, before? How did the boy change after he died, saw the other world—and came back?
Those questions led to Dana writing RAIN, in which she built her dream world of adventure, danger, and romance. Peace and quiet, however, have remained elusive.
No stranger to drought, Dana lives in an Arizona oasis with her hubby the constant gardener, two good dogs, an antisocial cat, and migrating butterflies.
Her debut novel RAIN spins the tale of a mysterious prophet, a desperate youth, and a relentless queen. RAIN and a second novel in the "Whispers on the Wind" series are contracted by Mountain Brook Ink.
Sign up for Dana’s newsletter to get book updates, garden exploits, butterfly effusions, and writerly fiascos.
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March 6, 2025
Have you ever finished a story and thought …. then what happened?
That’s exactly the mindset author Dana McNeely had when she read 1 Kings 17 and 18. She was inspired to continue sharing what might have happened to the widow of Zarephath’s son (from his perspective) and blend in the years of drought brought on by the prophet Elijah.
I was captivated as McNeely whisked me back to Samaria during King Ahab and Queen Jezebel’s reign and gently set me down amid an initiation ceremony where a 14-year-old boy, Aban, an acolyte and son of the high priestess, was about to join the priesthood of Ba’al Melqart on his way to fulfilling his dream of becoming a high priest. Suddenly, my heart started pounding as someone (the prophet Elijah) interrupted the ceremony and cursed the land with drought. I watched as Aban wrestled with who had more power, Ba’al or God, and then resolutely, dashed his dreams of becoming a high priest to hide Elijah from Queen Jezebel. In defecting, it swept him into an unforeseen battle where he had to choose sides.
“Is it worth your life to protect a peddler of myths?”
McNeely has done her research. She writes to reveal just how far Israel has wandered from God’s plan, how daunting the task is before Elijah, and how extensive the corruption is in Queen Jezebel’s court. These three threads were intertwined with cultural practices, food, recorded events from the bible, and a richly descriptive narrative that appealed to my senses. I loved learning in multiple settings: in the vineyard, in the fields, in the market and at the city gates. One scene about the camel and the Eye of the Needle was particularly memorable. I know I’ll never look at another raven without thinking of Elijah’s experience at the brook Cherith.
As I got further into the story, I could understand how difficult it must have been to live through those years of drought and how welcome Elijah’s intervention would have been. I was reminded about God’s provisions and timing, our faith, and our purpose.
“How else could I live in this world, after having seen the next?”
I’m looking forward to reading book 2 in the Whispers in the Wind series.
That’s exactly the mindset author Dana McNeely had when she read 1 Kings 17 and 18. She was inspired to continue sharing what might have happened to the widow of Zarephath’s son (from his perspective) and blend in the years of drought brought on by the prophet Elijah.
I was captivated as McNeely whisked me back to Samaria during King Ahab and Queen Jezebel’s reign and gently set me down amid an initiation ceremony where a 14-year-old boy, Aban, an acolyte and son of the high priestess, was about to join the priesthood of Ba’al Melqart on his way to fulfilling his dream of becoming a high priest. Suddenly, my heart started pounding as someone (the prophet Elijah) interrupted the ceremony and cursed the land with drought. I watched as Aban wrestled with who had more power, Ba’al or God, and then resolutely, dashed his dreams of becoming a high priest to hide Elijah from Queen Jezebel. In defecting, it swept him into an unforeseen battle where he had to choose sides.
“Is it worth your life to protect a peddler of myths?”
McNeely has done her research. She writes to reveal just how far Israel has wandered from God’s plan, how daunting the task is before Elijah, and how extensive the corruption is in Queen Jezebel’s court. These three threads were intertwined with cultural practices, food, recorded events from the bible, and a richly descriptive narrative that appealed to my senses. I loved learning in multiple settings: in the vineyard, in the fields, in the market and at the city gates. One scene about the camel and the Eye of the Needle was particularly memorable. I know I’ll never look at another raven without thinking of Elijah’s experience at the brook Cherith.
As I got further into the story, I could understand how difficult it must have been to live through those years of drought and how welcome Elijah’s intervention would have been. I was reminded about God’s provisions and timing, our faith, and our purpose.
“How else could I live in this world, after having seen the next?”
I’m looking forward to reading book 2 in the Whispers in the Wind series.
September 12, 2021
READ THIS BOOK READ THIS BOOK!🥺💘
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.*sighs* *dances* *cries*
This book has done things to my heart. I 200% loved it. @dana_mcneely you have a gift form God. The gift of storytelling you have is astounding and so touching🥺💕
Guys, this books wrecked me. It made me cry three times in three specific and pivotal moments that just crushed my heart. I cared so so much for these characters I don’t know how I’ll live without them 😭🤍
The backstory and intricacy of the characters and their lives is just MIND BLOWING. You can tell @dana_mcneely has plotted this book with so much care and has created a world of living characters that wow. I’m Shocked.
First of all, the book blurb doesn’t do the book justice 😉 The story is so so so much more... it’s so deep and beautiful and told in such a richly biblical way I ended up learning so much about that time period in the Bible that the story of Elijah is now one of my favorites ever.
I fell in love with some beautiful characters that @dana_mcneely brought to life... they were so human my heart ached and laughed with them. Even the secondary characters had a well developed backstory you often don’t see in books. #goals
Since reading Rain, I have started studying more deeply the story of Elijah and oh my goodness.... this story is so rich and amazing I have no words.
And the writing style and level... TOP TOP TOP. And I’m not saying this just because... This book truly transported me to that time period and I could see the pagan temples, their sacrifices, their way of life.... I could see Gods faithfulness, His providence, the vibrant colors, the gentle sea, the caravans in the dessert.... and so so much more.
I’ll refrain talking more about characters because I will end up spoiling important stuff *ahem * 💘😂💕.
But, yes, pls read it 🥺. It’s available in kindle unlimited! 🥳 Also, I’m now going to binge read @mtbrookinkfiction books!!!!! They book/writing quality is just 😍
Ps. @dana_mcneely pls let me know when book 2 comes out!! I honestly can’t wait 🥰
Also, this book is intended for mature audiences... being set in the time period and place it is, there is references to human sacrifices, prostitution etc
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.*sighs* *dances* *cries*
This book has done things to my heart. I 200% loved it. @dana_mcneely you have a gift form God. The gift of storytelling you have is astounding and so touching🥺💕
Guys, this books wrecked me. It made me cry three times in three specific and pivotal moments that just crushed my heart. I cared so so much for these characters I don’t know how I’ll live without them 😭🤍
The backstory and intricacy of the characters and their lives is just MIND BLOWING. You can tell @dana_mcneely has plotted this book with so much care and has created a world of living characters that wow. I’m Shocked.
First of all, the book blurb doesn’t do the book justice 😉 The story is so so so much more... it’s so deep and beautiful and told in such a richly biblical way I ended up learning so much about that time period in the Bible that the story of Elijah is now one of my favorites ever.
I fell in love with some beautiful characters that @dana_mcneely brought to life... they were so human my heart ached and laughed with them. Even the secondary characters had a well developed backstory you often don’t see in books. #goals
Since reading Rain, I have started studying more deeply the story of Elijah and oh my goodness.... this story is so rich and amazing I have no words.
And the writing style and level... TOP TOP TOP. And I’m not saying this just because... This book truly transported me to that time period and I could see the pagan temples, their sacrifices, their way of life.... I could see Gods faithfulness, His providence, the vibrant colors, the gentle sea, the caravans in the dessert.... and so so much more.
I’ll refrain talking more about characters because I will end up spoiling important stuff *ahem * 💘😂💕.
But, yes, pls read it 🥺. It’s available in kindle unlimited! 🥳 Also, I’m now going to binge read @mtbrookinkfiction books!!!!! They book/writing quality is just 😍
Ps. @dana_mcneely pls let me know when book 2 comes out!! I honestly can’t wait 🥰
Also, this book is intended for mature audiences... being set in the time period and place it is, there is references to human sacrifices, prostitution etc
August 1, 2023
3.75🌟
Audiobook (narrated by Joseph Robert Courtemanche)
This is a wonderful biblical novel. It didn't always go where I expected it to go, which is a good thing. I loved the moments of surprise, like when I understood which character was actually an unnamed but real person in the Bible. I'm looking forward to Whirlwind to learn more of what happens to some of the characters I met in this novel.
Robin’s Ratings
5🌟 = Out of this world. Amazing. Unforgettable. A personal favorite.
4🌟 = Enjoyed/loved it. Will recommend to others.
3🌟 = Liked it. Glad I read it. Engaging/entertaining/interesting.
2🌟 = The book was okay, but I’ve enjoyed other books so much more.
1🌟 = For whatever reason, I didn’t like it and can’t recommend it.
Audiobook (narrated by Joseph Robert Courtemanche)
This is a wonderful biblical novel. It didn't always go where I expected it to go, which is a good thing. I loved the moments of surprise, like when I understood which character was actually an unnamed but real person in the Bible. I'm looking forward to Whirlwind to learn more of what happens to some of the characters I met in this novel.
Robin’s Ratings
5🌟 = Out of this world. Amazing. Unforgettable. A personal favorite.
4🌟 = Enjoyed/loved it. Will recommend to others.
3🌟 = Liked it. Glad I read it. Engaging/entertaining/interesting.
2🌟 = The book was okay, but I’ve enjoyed other books so much more.
1🌟 = For whatever reason, I didn’t like it and can’t recommend it.
January 20, 2021
4.5* This was a fascinating take on the Old Testament period of Elijah and Jezebel's contentious interaction. Thr fictional characters fill out the story and put the reader in the front row seats to miracles and difficulties of living at that time. Dana McNeely paints a vivid picture of a people struggling to understand God and how he directs their lives when they turn to follow Him.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. All opinions expressed are completely my own.
I received a complimentary copy of this book. All opinions expressed are completely my own.
April 21, 2023
*4.5
I learned so much from reading RAIN 💦 for @biblicalfictionbuffs on IG last month! There are historical lessons, like the meaning behind Jezebel’s name (hint:🐷), the absolutely horrific ancient pagan rituals in Samaria, life on ancient vineyards, and so many other richly researched details that sucked you into the past.
But the most important things I learned are the lessons about the truth of YHVH and His people 💙 There is none like Him! Also, these characters were so well-written, the plot was engaging, the biblical connections awakening, and… you’ll have to find out the rest for yourself 😉 Go read it!!
2023 Reread on audio!! <3 Still as good as the first time I read it :)
I learned so much from reading RAIN 💦 for @biblicalfictionbuffs on IG last month! There are historical lessons, like the meaning behind Jezebel’s name (hint:🐷), the absolutely horrific ancient pagan rituals in Samaria, life on ancient vineyards, and so many other richly researched details that sucked you into the past.
But the most important things I learned are the lessons about the truth of YHVH and His people 💙 There is none like Him! Also, these characters were so well-written, the plot was engaging, the biblical connections awakening, and… you’ll have to find out the rest for yourself 😉 Go read it!!
2023 Reread on audio!! <3 Still as good as the first time I read it :)
January 19, 2021
I absolutely adore this book. So well written, with amazing historical detail, and packs an emotional punch. Dana McNeely is a debut author to watch.
December 15, 2021
Received a copy for review from the publisher
This was an interesting take on the prophet Elijah and Queen Jezebel. I was captivated by the characters, the action and the drama. I wasn't a huge fan of the romances that the main character had, but the ending was well done and the use of scripture was impeccable.
Aban was amazing. As a soon-to-be High Priest of Ba’al Melqart he was always skeptical of his god, but upon a chance encounter with the prophet Elijah his life changes for the better. I adored him as a character and his boldness to step out in faith and learn about Yahweh. Aban made me smile, laugh and cry. He was such a realistic character and his journey was absolutely amazing to see.
I did not care for the various romances that Aban had because I couldn't connect with any of the females, but I did enjoy how his romance concluded in the end.
Elijah was interesting. I wish there was more of him because I was intrigued by him. I loved how Dana McNeely wrote the story weaving scripture beautifully together to craft his story.
Jezebel was an infuriating character and King Ahab was an irresponsible fool. I enjoyed Mara, Dov and the other characters. I cried when certain characters died or got hurt. This book ripped my heart out for sure.
Overall, I enjoyed this story and look forward to the sequel to see what's in store for Dov and the other secondary characters. Can't wait to read more from Dana McNeely!
This was an interesting take on the prophet Elijah and Queen Jezebel. I was captivated by the characters, the action and the drama. I wasn't a huge fan of the romances that the main character had, but the ending was well done and the use of scripture was impeccable.
Aban was amazing. As a soon-to-be High Priest of Ba’al Melqart he was always skeptical of his god, but upon a chance encounter with the prophet Elijah his life changes for the better. I adored him as a character and his boldness to step out in faith and learn about Yahweh. Aban made me smile, laugh and cry. He was such a realistic character and his journey was absolutely amazing to see.
I did not care for the various romances that Aban had because I couldn't connect with any of the females, but I did enjoy how his romance concluded in the end.
Elijah was interesting. I wish there was more of him because I was intrigued by him. I loved how Dana McNeely wrote the story weaving scripture beautifully together to craft his story.
Jezebel was an infuriating character and King Ahab was an irresponsible fool. I enjoyed Mara, Dov and the other characters. I cried when certain characters died or got hurt. This book ripped my heart out for sure.
Overall, I enjoyed this story and look forward to the sequel to see what's in store for Dov and the other secondary characters. Can't wait to read more from Dana McNeely!
February 19, 2021
Rain, by author Dana McNeely will pull you in from page one. A story based on Elijah, the prophet and Jezebel. Dana wrote a story of people struggling to understand God and how he directs their path when they decide to follow him. Truth and lies. Idols and God and finding friends in unexpected places.
A master story teller, Dana McNeely is a debut author to watch. Her first book blew me away. I highly recommend Rain. I received a copy of the book from the publisher and author in exchange for an honest opinion. All opinions are my own
A master story teller, Dana McNeely is a debut author to watch. Her first book blew me away. I highly recommend Rain. I received a copy of the book from the publisher and author in exchange for an honest opinion. All opinions are my own
February 3, 2021
An amazing story that will grab you and not let go!! A young man who is to be the next high priest of the god Melqart - but when he sees Elijah promise no rain for 3 years he follows him. But he is afraid — and so he watches him from the walls - - - and lies about which way he went. AND this book is his story mixed in with Elijah’s story. Idols and Jehovah. Truth and lies. Friends is unexpected places. THIS book will grab you and you will not be able to put it down!!!
April 27, 2021
I loved the beautiful cover of this book and I really wanted to read a new author. I was not disappointed.
The author did an excellent job telling a fictionalized version of the story of Elijah, the prophet of Yahweh. Oh, what Elijah needed to do in serving the LORD! I could picture more clearly the Bible Story because of Dana McNeely's narrative.
Aban was the firstborn son of Mara, priestess of Melqart. He was getting ready to be initiated to become a high priest. Aban had doubts because he had seen much evil and pretense by other high priests. All of a sudden Elijah, the true prophet of God shows up. Elijah told King Ahab that no rain would fall for 3 1/2 years because the people of Israel have forgotten Yahweh and worshipped false gods. King Ahab is the most wicked king in history. Elijah looks at Aban and Aban realizes that he must leave the initiation ritual and follow Elijah. Aban is having a hard time keeping up with Elijah. And, when questioned by soldiers about Elijah's route of passage, Aban gives the soldiers false information.
Because Aban has left the ritual he is hunted down by Jezebel, the wicked wife of evil King Ahab. Jezebel wants Elijah dead and kills many of Yahweh's prophets. Some of the prophets narrowly escape Jezebel's schemes. Aban is taken in by followers of Yahweh. Aban wants to go back to Samaria to rescue his mother and his little brother. This family decides to aid his rescue attempt.
There is much danger lurking - it is hard to know who to trust. Many people turn on others.
Throughout Aban's life, God was with him. We can all be thankful for the LORD God's guidance in our own lives.
I really liked that at the beginning of each chapter, the author included Scripture from the Holy Bible. It was like an introduction to what was happening in the storyline. I love reading my Bible and this book helped me understand more fully the true story of Elijah. I also liked the fact that Elijah and even Jezebel depended on ravens. That is very interesting because Elijah was so moral and Jezebel was so immoral.
If you like Biblical fiction, adventure, dangerous situations, a bit of romance, and family life, you will enjoy this book.
The author did an excellent job telling a fictionalized version of the story of Elijah, the prophet of Yahweh. Oh, what Elijah needed to do in serving the LORD! I could picture more clearly the Bible Story because of Dana McNeely's narrative.
Aban was the firstborn son of Mara, priestess of Melqart. He was getting ready to be initiated to become a high priest. Aban had doubts because he had seen much evil and pretense by other high priests. All of a sudden Elijah, the true prophet of God shows up. Elijah told King Ahab that no rain would fall for 3 1/2 years because the people of Israel have forgotten Yahweh and worshipped false gods. King Ahab is the most wicked king in history. Elijah looks at Aban and Aban realizes that he must leave the initiation ritual and follow Elijah. Aban is having a hard time keeping up with Elijah. And, when questioned by soldiers about Elijah's route of passage, Aban gives the soldiers false information.
Because Aban has left the ritual he is hunted down by Jezebel, the wicked wife of evil King Ahab. Jezebel wants Elijah dead and kills many of Yahweh's prophets. Some of the prophets narrowly escape Jezebel's schemes. Aban is taken in by followers of Yahweh. Aban wants to go back to Samaria to rescue his mother and his little brother. This family decides to aid his rescue attempt.
There is much danger lurking - it is hard to know who to trust. Many people turn on others.
Throughout Aban's life, God was with him. We can all be thankful for the LORD God's guidance in our own lives.
I really liked that at the beginning of each chapter, the author included Scripture from the Holy Bible. It was like an introduction to what was happening in the storyline. I love reading my Bible and this book helped me understand more fully the true story of Elijah. I also liked the fact that Elijah and even Jezebel depended on ravens. That is very interesting because Elijah was so moral and Jezebel was so immoral.
If you like Biblical fiction, adventure, dangerous situations, a bit of romance, and family life, you will enjoy this book.
July 13, 2021
1)Biblical fiction of Elijah with King Ahab and Wicked Queen Jezebel
2) Aban is destined to become the next high-priest of Baal yet changes the course of his life as he aides the mysterious prophet, Elijah
3) Mara, Aban's mother, is the high priestess. There is no length she will not go for the good of her son
4) 3yr drought, the showdown against the priests of Baal on Mt. Carmel with fire, fed by ravens, the widow of Zarapeth and the never ending supply of flour and oil
5) "The words caught in his mind, chasing after each other like a whirlwind, until they were a never-ending stream lashed by his pan and anger. The wind roared and his words became infused by a power from the outside that settled on him like a cloak. And then they were truly a prayer.
Hold back the rain."
What a fantastic debut! Ancient Samaria was brought to life with vivid colors through the tale. The struggles, the journeys and the faith were so tangible. Ancient idolatry clashes with faith, but Good wins. I can't wait to read the next in the series!
2) Aban is destined to become the next high-priest of Baal yet changes the course of his life as he aides the mysterious prophet, Elijah
3) Mara, Aban's mother, is the high priestess. There is no length she will not go for the good of her son
4) 3yr drought, the showdown against the priests of Baal on Mt. Carmel with fire, fed by ravens, the widow of Zarapeth and the never ending supply of flour and oil
5) "The words caught in his mind, chasing after each other like a whirlwind, until they were a never-ending stream lashed by his pan and anger. The wind roared and his words became infused by a power from the outside that settled on him like a cloak. And then they were truly a prayer.
Hold back the rain."
What a fantastic debut! Ancient Samaria was brought to life with vivid colors through the tale. The struggles, the journeys and the faith were so tangible. Ancient idolatry clashes with faith, but Good wins. I can't wait to read the next in the series!
March 10, 2025
This book was my perfect ‘escape’ – I was instantly transported into another time and place – right into the heart of the Old Testament. There were so many well researched historical details and unforgettable characters that it really made this story come alive for me. Told through the eyes of ‘Aban’, a young temple acolyte – this story plays out through his exciting (and sometimes scary) experiences.
There was a lot to love about 'Rain', but I think my favorite part was the setting. I picked up shades of ‘Lawrence of Arabia’ mixed with the original ‘Star Wars’. If this book were made into a movie, I could almost see the screen opening crawl with ‘A long time ago, in a Biblical desert far, far away…’ - Dana McNeely did a masterful job of delivering a three dimensional experience - the sights, sounds, smells, textures and even taste were crafted so well in this book! I could almost see the sun setting on the dusty horizon with ‘Imperial walkers’ (aka camels) silhouetted in the distance.
I relate to stories that make me truly care about the characters, and this one did that for me. These characters were placed alongside real historical figures from the Bible - like the evil Queen Jezebel and the prophet Elijah - very suspenseful with a beautiful faith element! Each character’s faith journey and transformation is shown as they encounter the one true God in their lives. There were also some amazing plot twists that really caught me by surprise. Very well done!
This amazing story of Elijah was not just an exciting read for me, but I also learned so much about the people and traditions during that time in history – reading this book made the Bible become more alive to me. Suspenseful and fast moving – and so much more! I highly recommend this book.
There was a lot to love about 'Rain', but I think my favorite part was the setting. I picked up shades of ‘Lawrence of Arabia’ mixed with the original ‘Star Wars’. If this book were made into a movie, I could almost see the screen opening crawl with ‘A long time ago, in a Biblical desert far, far away…’ - Dana McNeely did a masterful job of delivering a three dimensional experience - the sights, sounds, smells, textures and even taste were crafted so well in this book! I could almost see the sun setting on the dusty horizon with ‘Imperial walkers’ (aka camels) silhouetted in the distance.
I relate to stories that make me truly care about the characters, and this one did that for me. These characters were placed alongside real historical figures from the Bible - like the evil Queen Jezebel and the prophet Elijah - very suspenseful with a beautiful faith element! Each character’s faith journey and transformation is shown as they encounter the one true God in their lives. There were also some amazing plot twists that really caught me by surprise. Very well done!
This amazing story of Elijah was not just an exciting read for me, but I also learned so much about the people and traditions during that time in history – reading this book made the Bible become more alive to me. Suspenseful and fast moving – and so much more! I highly recommend this book.
October 28, 2024
This was a fantastic biblical fiction story, and the author's debut novel. I learned so much about the practices and culture during that time both evil and Godly. This was my first time reading any Biblical fiction book on the life of Elijah. The other characters brought to life by the author, just added so much depth, that at times I was so drawn into the story I couldn't put the book down! I am very much looking forward to reading new books as the author is able to write and publish them! I was provided with a copy of this book by author, Mesu Andrews, as a result of a book giveaway, but it did not in any way affect my review. All opinions are my own.
February 3, 2022
As you have never seen it. The evils of that time in history are recorded in many places, including child sacrifice, which was a part of this book. It interweaves the Bible story of Elijah in the lives of another young man, who suffers pain and loss, but in the end finds a source of joy. It was hard, but unique.
June 8, 2025
This is the first book I've read by Dana McNeely, and I thoroughly enjoyed it! I found it to be very emotional, engaging and fascinating. What an awesome and inspiring retelling of the prophet Elijah's story. The characters were realistic and very detailed, and descriptions of the settings were easy to visualize.
I'm looking forward to reading more of this series.
I'm looking forward to reading more of this series.
February 15, 2021
Very good story based on the life of the prophet Elijah. I personally enjoyed seeing the Bible stories come to life like the ravens feeding Ellijah, the widow feeding him and Ellijah calling down fire from heaven.
February 5, 2021
Rain is one of the most well-researched and descriptive debut novels I’ve had the pleasure to read. McNeely’s fictional story takes place during the time in history when Ahab was king of Israel, ruling alongside his wicked wife, Jezebel. Yahweh worship, which had been prevalent during Ahab’s predecessors’ David and Solomon’s reigns, had diminished and idol worship dominated Israel. Since a wicked king was in place and unwilling to lead Israel in worshipping the one True God, Yahweh had to use prophets to try and convince the Israelites to return to Him. One such prophet during this time was the wild-and-woolly Elijah.
This sets the background for the main character, Aban, who was born to become a Ba’al high priest until one day during a chance encounter he meets the mighty prophet Elijah, forever changing the trajectory of his and his family’s lives and kicking off many grand adventures.
I was provided an advance copy of this book to read with no obligations. All opinions expressed are my own.
February 4, 2021
Rain could just as easily be talking of our modern world with false god worship and sinful ways. Reminds me of other wonderful Biblical authors such as Tessa Afshar. Dana McNeely brings to 3-D life the lands that Elijah walked, Mount Carmel and Mount Horeb. You can see the green fields, hear the storms and feel the great emotional turmoil with these characters.
Aban, a young acolyte soon to be high priest, helps a prophet named Elijah escape. His actions soon lead him on a different path toward Yahweh. Caleb, an Israelite, helps Aban escape Queen Jezebel’s soldiers. After rescuing his family and losing some members, Aban, his mother, Mara, and their new friend, Hiel, make their way to Mara’s childhood city Zarephath. This story continues to Elijah’s contest for fire with the Baal worshippers showing ultimately that God is the one true God.
It follows Elijah’s travels continuing to show us God is forever unchanging. I was sent an ARC for an honest review.
Aban, a young acolyte soon to be high priest, helps a prophet named Elijah escape. His actions soon lead him on a different path toward Yahweh. Caleb, an Israelite, helps Aban escape Queen Jezebel’s soldiers. After rescuing his family and losing some members, Aban, his mother, Mara, and their new friend, Hiel, make their way to Mara’s childhood city Zarephath. This story continues to Elijah’s contest for fire with the Baal worshippers showing ultimately that God is the one true God.
It follows Elijah’s travels continuing to show us God is forever unchanging. I was sent an ARC for an honest review.
February 23, 2021
A fantastic retelling of one of my favorite Old Testament stories!
Rain is quite amazing! Retelling one of my favorite Old Testament stories, debut author Dana McNeely has created a realistic and very well-researched story that stays true to the Biblical narrative and adds details that enrich the understanding of some of the whys behind it. My heart was wrung. It hoped and sighed (can a heart sigh?)
I was fascinated from the very start. The thoughts and feelings of Aban, the young pagan acolyte to Melqart, are the main ones shared, though some of the other characters also have sections dedicated to their perspectives, such as Elijah and Aban's mom. And even one who will surprise you.
I enjoyed the characters very much! At one point, I realized that keeping to the Biblical narrative meant something bad happening to a character I had come to love and I began to grieve, even before it happened! Caleb's grandma was very inspiring and I just loved Joah and Hiel.
Lovely imagery fills the pages as well. In a scene where camels were racing across the desert, I almost felt the wind in my face! As characters engaged in things like masonry or scribing, or fishing, rich descriptions of the processes were detailed - and yet not at all by "telling" but instead woven into the narrative so well that in at least one place, I had gotten through the paragraph before I realized that the author was subtly walking through all that was involved. I have rarely seen this done as well as it was here.
Atonement, new life, faith, and trust in Yahweh were strong themes of the story. Not to even mention the overwhelming grief Elijah experienced over the idolatry of the children of Israel, which prompted him to pray for the Lord to close up the heavens and withhold the rain, in accordance to Deuteronomy 11:17. And he prayed - again and again until the Lord directed him to publicly proclaim that this very thing would happen.
Because so much of the story is told from Aban's perspective, and as Melqart's priests were expected to perform duties that offend many people's sensitivities, it could have been so easy for Dana McNeely to include details that would repulse most of her readers. And yet, she presented enough details to suggest these things without doing so.
Dana McNeely is now on my shortlist of favorite Biblical fiction authors. Perhaps even just historical authors. I am so glad to have seen that there is more to come from her as Elisha begins to be discipled by Elijah. But don't wait to read Rain! All lovers of Christian or Biblical fiction will want to read this fantastic story!
Originally Reviewed on Among The Reads
I was given a copy of this book. I was not required to give a favorable review nor was any money received for this review. All comments and opinions are my own.
Rain is quite amazing! Retelling one of my favorite Old Testament stories, debut author Dana McNeely has created a realistic and very well-researched story that stays true to the Biblical narrative and adds details that enrich the understanding of some of the whys behind it. My heart was wrung. It hoped and sighed (can a heart sigh?)
I was fascinated from the very start. The thoughts and feelings of Aban, the young pagan acolyte to Melqart, are the main ones shared, though some of the other characters also have sections dedicated to their perspectives, such as Elijah and Aban's mom. And even one who will surprise you.
I enjoyed the characters very much! At one point, I realized that keeping to the Biblical narrative meant something bad happening to a character I had come to love and I began to grieve, even before it happened! Caleb's grandma was very inspiring and I just loved Joah and Hiel.
Lovely imagery fills the pages as well. In a scene where camels were racing across the desert, I almost felt the wind in my face! As characters engaged in things like masonry or scribing, or fishing, rich descriptions of the processes were detailed - and yet not at all by "telling" but instead woven into the narrative so well that in at least one place, I had gotten through the paragraph before I realized that the author was subtly walking through all that was involved. I have rarely seen this done as well as it was here.
Atonement, new life, faith, and trust in Yahweh were strong themes of the story. Not to even mention the overwhelming grief Elijah experienced over the idolatry of the children of Israel, which prompted him to pray for the Lord to close up the heavens and withhold the rain, in accordance to Deuteronomy 11:17. And he prayed - again and again until the Lord directed him to publicly proclaim that this very thing would happen.
Because so much of the story is told from Aban's perspective, and as Melqart's priests were expected to perform duties that offend many people's sensitivities, it could have been so easy for Dana McNeely to include details that would repulse most of her readers. And yet, she presented enough details to suggest these things without doing so.
Dana McNeely is now on my shortlist of favorite Biblical fiction authors. Perhaps even just historical authors. I am so glad to have seen that there is more to come from her as Elisha begins to be discipled by Elijah. But don't wait to read Rain! All lovers of Christian or Biblical fiction will want to read this fantastic story!
Originally Reviewed on Among The Reads
I was given a copy of this book. I was not required to give a favorable review nor was any money received for this review. All comments and opinions are my own.
July 12, 2021
I nearly dnf’d this at 50 percent. I was disappointed that Elijah only made a small appearance up until then. It wasn’t until 70 percent when Elijah finally became a central character. The novel is long and drawn out. In my opinion it could have been much better if edited and more focused. Kindle Unlimited
July 28, 2022
I devoured this book. Loved how the author gave backgrounds to characters in the Bible. Highly recommend it to anyone who enjoys Biblical fiction. Very much looking forward to the next book in the series.
April 17, 2021
As the firstborn son of a high priestess, teenaged Aban is set to join other acolytes and take his rite of passage into the priesthood of Ba’al Melqart. But a prophet of Yahweh interrupts the rites, cursing the land with a drought. When Aban helps the prophet escape capture, the young acolyte becomes an enemy of the sitting queen, Jezebel, in Rain by author Dana McNeely.
The gorgeous cover is what most attracted me to this biblical fiction novel. I mean, yes, the story comes mostly from Aban's perspective, so I'd only be guessing at exactly who the woman on the cover might be. Still, the emotive image of pouring rain, the sun breaking over the horizon, and the soaring raven effectively set a mystical tone for this age-old, spiritual story.
It'd be easy to overdramatize such an epic account in an ancient setting, using one-dimensional caricatures of saintly figures vs. wicked figures. But this debut author has instead created relatable characters with a balanced feel to them, even as it's clear that they're far removed from modern times and Western culture.
This is a rather gritty story that's also deeply emotional with moments of beauty. While it involves unsavory themes (child sacrifice, temple prostitution/slavery, some violent scenes), and there's a little "potty humor" between a few of the male characters, the author uses overall tact in her storytelling.
Now, in between the higher points, this dense read was pretty slow for me, and it was rough-going in the middle as the characters' grave misfortunes began to pile on, one after another. One event felt like an extra act of striking cruelty that wasn't really necessary to the plot. Also, unless I missed something (which is possible!), the story relates an ominous intention of one of the characters at one point but doesn't address it again. And with much of the book focusing on Aban's journey, it felt random at times when the story would switch to this or that other character's perspective for a chapter.
Nevertheless, plenty of other ChristFic fans should enjoy this rich, layered story. I'm looking forward to the future Book Two in this series.
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I received an advance reading copy of this book for an honest review.
The gorgeous cover is what most attracted me to this biblical fiction novel. I mean, yes, the story comes mostly from Aban's perspective, so I'd only be guessing at exactly who the woman on the cover might be. Still, the emotive image of pouring rain, the sun breaking over the horizon, and the soaring raven effectively set a mystical tone for this age-old, spiritual story.
It'd be easy to overdramatize such an epic account in an ancient setting, using one-dimensional caricatures of saintly figures vs. wicked figures. But this debut author has instead created relatable characters with a balanced feel to them, even as it's clear that they're far removed from modern times and Western culture.
This is a rather gritty story that's also deeply emotional with moments of beauty. While it involves unsavory themes (child sacrifice, temple prostitution/slavery, some violent scenes), and there's a little "potty humor" between a few of the male characters, the author uses overall tact in her storytelling.
Now, in between the higher points, this dense read was pretty slow for me, and it was rough-going in the middle as the characters' grave misfortunes began to pile on, one after another. One event felt like an extra act of striking cruelty that wasn't really necessary to the plot. Also, unless I missed something (which is possible!), the story relates an ominous intention of one of the characters at one point but doesn't address it again. And with much of the book focusing on Aban's journey, it felt random at times when the story would switch to this or that other character's perspective for a chapter.
Nevertheless, plenty of other ChristFic fans should enjoy this rich, layered story. I'm looking forward to the future Book Two in this series.
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I received an advance reading copy of this book for an honest review.
August 5, 2022
An incredible biblical story brought to life
The story is really about the priest, Aban, who merely thought he is strong enough about his beliefs. He was wrong. Curiosity drives him to look for the prophet Elijah who spelled on their land with a long drought. The language’s terms and the characters’ names put the reader within the premise instantly. The dialogues are a bit ahead of time, turning the story even more receptive and enjoyable.
While diving deep into the story, I expected that the pick moment where Aban finally meets prophet Elijah would be more sparking and tense, and yet it was calm. The scenes preceding the changes in Aban’s beliefs in true God were elegantly written and highly visual. As concluded; ‘Aban had come to realize Yahweh’s fingers were always shaping human events.’ In this alternative biblical world, one would expect Aban to succeed Elijah but God had Elisha in mind, and the author successfully has made a great effort for the story to stay authentic.
The women’s characters make the reading fascinating from the evil Jezebel to the lovely Mara, Berenice, and others. I found the moment Aban prays for the rain while simultaneously keeping the woman he desires in his thoughts thoughtful and deep. A memorable, timeless citation:
“A woman needs the reassurance of other women. After all, the men are rough looking, even those who are lambs underneath...”
The most mesmerizing scene was when Queen Jezebel sacrificed Aban’s little brother:
׳The heat seared Aban’s face. The last soldier heaved Joah up into the air. Joah seemed to float above their heads like a slow-moving cloud on a windless day.’
The pace is a bit slow, perhaps on purpose, and rightly so we can digest the spirit of the period and permit the author to reveal the characters’ thoughts. This is in contrast to the Bible itself, which is highly concise and every word and sentence counts and even interpreted differently, and the characters’ thoughts are often guessed. Overall, it was an enjoyable read for me.
The story is really about the priest, Aban, who merely thought he is strong enough about his beliefs. He was wrong. Curiosity drives him to look for the prophet Elijah who spelled on their land with a long drought. The language’s terms and the characters’ names put the reader within the premise instantly. The dialogues are a bit ahead of time, turning the story even more receptive and enjoyable.
While diving deep into the story, I expected that the pick moment where Aban finally meets prophet Elijah would be more sparking and tense, and yet it was calm. The scenes preceding the changes in Aban’s beliefs in true God were elegantly written and highly visual. As concluded; ‘Aban had come to realize Yahweh’s fingers were always shaping human events.’ In this alternative biblical world, one would expect Aban to succeed Elijah but God had Elisha in mind, and the author successfully has made a great effort for the story to stay authentic.
The women’s characters make the reading fascinating from the evil Jezebel to the lovely Mara, Berenice, and others. I found the moment Aban prays for the rain while simultaneously keeping the woman he desires in his thoughts thoughtful and deep. A memorable, timeless citation:
“A woman needs the reassurance of other women. After all, the men are rough looking, even those who are lambs underneath...”
The most mesmerizing scene was when Queen Jezebel sacrificed Aban’s little brother:
׳The heat seared Aban’s face. The last soldier heaved Joah up into the air. Joah seemed to float above their heads like a slow-moving cloud on a windless day.’
The pace is a bit slow, perhaps on purpose, and rightly so we can digest the spirit of the period and permit the author to reveal the characters’ thoughts. This is in contrast to the Bible itself, which is highly concise and every word and sentence counts and even interpreted differently, and the characters’ thoughts are often guessed. Overall, it was an enjoyable read for me.
July 18, 2025
It took me a while to get into this Book at first, I couldn't seem to get past the first few pages somehow. I just had no idea what was going on in the beginning and there were a lot of new words I had to look up (throughout the whole book), which isn't bad of course, it just slowed me down a bit at the beginning.
But then, as I kept reading, things started making sense of course and I really got invested into the story and characters. The way Samaria and Zarephath were described made me really feel like I was there, especially while reading about the scenes near and in the ocean, because I read the book at the beach most of the time during my vacation.😂
The way Dana McNeely wrote this story really immerses you into it and keeps you turning the pages!
There are so many layers to the story, so many different connections and I really enjoyed all the adventure in this book!
❗️Spoiler alert❗️
I loved Abans story and his journey of faith and trusting in God. I also loved the relationship between Abans mother Mara and Hiel. :)
This book really brought the Bible story of Elijah to life and it was definitely hard to put the book down!
There were 2 things I didn't really like about this book though...
First of all, Abans vision during death, I guess?
The Bible clearly says that the dead know nothing! You can't have a vision while you're dead, if it was before he died or as he was becoming conscious again that would make sense. I was so confused while I was reading that scene.
Also, he sees his brother who is in heaven in his vision, but that also is false, because the dead do not go to heaven right after death, they lay in their graves until the second coming of Christ. That's what the Bible says.
I know many people don't agree with that view and I respect that. It was just so frustrating for me, because up until that point, while I was reading the book, I was preparing to give it 5 stars and that scene which was so important, kinda ruined that for me.
The second thing I didn't like, was that near the end of the story after Aban finds Berenice, he says that he forgives her. For what?? She didn't go to the Temple willingly! She had agreed to stay with Aban in Zarephath before she was kidnapped! The letter she wrote that stated she was happy with her life as a priestess was just to save his life, she didn't really mean it! I just didn't understand why he was upset at her and felt the need to forgive her...
Maybe I'm missing something but that really annoyed me.
The ending of the story was very beautifully done though.
In conclusion, I really enjoyed reading this book and wish I could give it all 5 stars!
But then, as I kept reading, things started making sense of course and I really got invested into the story and characters. The way Samaria and Zarephath were described made me really feel like I was there, especially while reading about the scenes near and in the ocean, because I read the book at the beach most of the time during my vacation.😂
The way Dana McNeely wrote this story really immerses you into it and keeps you turning the pages!
There are so many layers to the story, so many different connections and I really enjoyed all the adventure in this book!
❗️Spoiler alert❗️
I loved Abans story and his journey of faith and trusting in God. I also loved the relationship between Abans mother Mara and Hiel. :)
This book really brought the Bible story of Elijah to life and it was definitely hard to put the book down!
There were 2 things I didn't really like about this book though...
First of all, Abans vision during death, I guess?
The Bible clearly says that the dead know nothing! You can't have a vision while you're dead, if it was before he died or as he was becoming conscious again that would make sense. I was so confused while I was reading that scene.
Also, he sees his brother who is in heaven in his vision, but that also is false, because the dead do not go to heaven right after death, they lay in their graves until the second coming of Christ. That's what the Bible says.
I know many people don't agree with that view and I respect that. It was just so frustrating for me, because up until that point, while I was reading the book, I was preparing to give it 5 stars and that scene which was so important, kinda ruined that for me.
The second thing I didn't like, was that near the end of the story after Aban finds Berenice, he says that he forgives her. For what?? She didn't go to the Temple willingly! She had agreed to stay with Aban in Zarephath before she was kidnapped! The letter she wrote that stated she was happy with her life as a priestess was just to save his life, she didn't really mean it! I just didn't understand why he was upset at her and felt the need to forgive her...
Maybe I'm missing something but that really annoyed me.
The ending of the story was very beautifully done though.
In conclusion, I really enjoyed reading this book and wish I could give it all 5 stars!
September 21, 2022
I have a high standard for Biblical fiction--and it's a difficult genre to write. Not only do you have to research the historical and cultural context thoroughly, but you need a certain reverence for biblical characters and most importantly, for your description of God and his actions in your story. I want to see major Biblical events and miracles play out, but I don't want a literal Deus ex machina to take away the tension from the story.
Rain by Dana McNeely passed my test with flying colors.
Without sharing any spoilers, there were some dark moments in this story. Characters experienced heavy loss. Even miracles didn't remove problems entirely--and I think that's an incredible insight into human nature. Whether it's the Israelites in the wilderness or the man Jesus healed at the pool of Bethesda, there are many examples of humans being just as bitter, just as fearful, just as selfish after a miracle as before. Even people who are grateful and joyful in a miracle still have to live life in a world where not every problem will be solved in that same miraculous way. Rain captures that.
Yet there is healing. Again, without getting into spoilers, things that seemed broken and hopeless do heal, even if they carry scars. But in a way, those scars are reminders of God's faithfulness and what he led the characters through.
If I have a complaint, it was that sometimes, this story felt a little spread out and episodic between its cast of characters. But I think that allowed a glimpse of the culture, history, and famous biblical events that I wouldn't have gotten otherwise. That trade-off was worth it. It allowed even minor Biblical characters to make an appearance without it feeling forced, and ultimately, all the plotlines were tied together and resolved in a satisfying way.
Well, except for Elisha. Gotta save him for the sequel--which I am very much looking forward to!
Rain by Dana McNeely passed my test with flying colors.
Without sharing any spoilers, there were some dark moments in this story. Characters experienced heavy loss. Even miracles didn't remove problems entirely--and I think that's an incredible insight into human nature. Whether it's the Israelites in the wilderness or the man Jesus healed at the pool of Bethesda, there are many examples of humans being just as bitter, just as fearful, just as selfish after a miracle as before. Even people who are grateful and joyful in a miracle still have to live life in a world where not every problem will be solved in that same miraculous way. Rain captures that.
Yet there is healing. Again, without getting into spoilers, things that seemed broken and hopeless do heal, even if they carry scars. But in a way, those scars are reminders of God's faithfulness and what he led the characters through.
If I have a complaint, it was that sometimes, this story felt a little spread out and episodic between its cast of characters. But I think that allowed a glimpse of the culture, history, and famous biblical events that I wouldn't have gotten otherwise. That trade-off was worth it. It allowed even minor Biblical characters to make an appearance without it feeling forced, and ultimately, all the plotlines were tied together and resolved in a satisfying way.
Well, except for Elisha. Gotta save him for the sequel--which I am very much looking forward to!
October 6, 2023
The story of Elijah is one of my favourites. Full of high drama, incredible faithfulness, the highs and lows of a ministry. Although this book covers more of the background surrounding and supporting Elijah’s own story, this book fully does it justice.
It is fast paced, engaging, with well researched details that set the scene. It draws you into the Biblical account.
From the story you can clearly see the extent to which Israel had fallen away, the debauched worship of idols, the warped priesthood, the obscene control of Jezebel. Superstition, paganism and idolatry had merged into a toxic mix, that show how much Elijah was facing up to and contending with. No wonder it took all that he had and more to speak truth to this power.
The book offers background that shows the harshness of life living in this corrupt society, driven by the greed of Queen Jezebel that tainted the life of everyone in her kingdom.
The story takes you on a life adventure of a young priest, who is drawn to the charismatic character of Elijah, albeit from a brief interaction. But this begins his calling to follow Elijah, as he rapidly sees through the lies and false gods and begins to see the truth of Yahweh.
Later, a further encounter with Elijah leads him to become his helper as mentioned in the Biblical account. The telling of the story from his viewpoint helps the reader engage fully with the circumstances, the culture and the impact that the two years of drought would have had on society, and the depth of meaning that Elijah’s intervention would have had.
Dana is a great storyteller, bringing tension and intrigue, keeping the reader deeply engaged and even weaving a heart-warming love story into a sub-plot.
If you are a fan of the Biblical fiction genre, then this is a fine example.
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It is fast paced, engaging, with well researched details that set the scene. It draws you into the Biblical account.
From the story you can clearly see the extent to which Israel had fallen away, the debauched worship of idols, the warped priesthood, the obscene control of Jezebel. Superstition, paganism and idolatry had merged into a toxic mix, that show how much Elijah was facing up to and contending with. No wonder it took all that he had and more to speak truth to this power.
The book offers background that shows the harshness of life living in this corrupt society, driven by the greed of Queen Jezebel that tainted the life of everyone in her kingdom.
The story takes you on a life adventure of a young priest, who is drawn to the charismatic character of Elijah, albeit from a brief interaction. But this begins his calling to follow Elijah, as he rapidly sees through the lies and false gods and begins to see the truth of Yahweh.
Later, a further encounter with Elijah leads him to become his helper as mentioned in the Biblical account. The telling of the story from his viewpoint helps the reader engage fully with the circumstances, the culture and the impact that the two years of drought would have had on society, and the depth of meaning that Elijah’s intervention would have had.
Dana is a great storyteller, bringing tension and intrigue, keeping the reader deeply engaged and even weaving a heart-warming love story into a sub-plot.
If you are a fan of the Biblical fiction genre, then this is a fine example.
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October 3, 2022
This is a memorable debut. Biblical fiction is challenging not just because an author is grappling with the ‘truth’ but often there are spartan details which can make it difficult to discern how best to fictionalise that ‘truth’. McNeely manages this challenge well with some detailed research, demonstrable respect for the ‘truth’ and a compelling story that makes one wonder at times when fact becomes fiction.
This is a story of Elijah, King Ahab and Queen Jezebel. Well, that’s the Biblical story. There’s another story about a young son of one of Jezebel’s priestesses, Aban, and how his heart is stirred by the wisdom of a prophet that leads him on an adventure of a lifetime.
Most of the first two-thirds of the story involves Aban, his backstory and how he comes to participate in Elijah’s dramatic miracle on the mountain near Jezreel. He is cleverly crafted as are several of the supporting cast: Hiel, Mara and Berenice. For the most part it’s easy to read. There are times it dragged a little and I do wonder if some of these pages (say 50) were removed, the story would be even tighter and more compelling.
And then the Biblical account of Elijah takes over and Aban slips into the background. This section stirred me, and I sensed the Lord’s presence in these pages. I couldn’t turn the pages quick enough seeking what the Lord may reveal. It was excellent and will linger with me for days I suspect as McNeely brought the Biblical words alive in my imagination.
McNeely’s story craft is excellent. She drew me into the drought of Samaria, the smells of the sea off Zarepath, and the shocking wonder of God’s hand on Mount Horeb.
I so look forward to her sequel. McNeely has set herself a high benchmark with her debut.
This is a story of Elijah, King Ahab and Queen Jezebel. Well, that’s the Biblical story. There’s another story about a young son of one of Jezebel’s priestesses, Aban, and how his heart is stirred by the wisdom of a prophet that leads him on an adventure of a lifetime.
Most of the first two-thirds of the story involves Aban, his backstory and how he comes to participate in Elijah’s dramatic miracle on the mountain near Jezreel. He is cleverly crafted as are several of the supporting cast: Hiel, Mara and Berenice. For the most part it’s easy to read. There are times it dragged a little and I do wonder if some of these pages (say 50) were removed, the story would be even tighter and more compelling.
And then the Biblical account of Elijah takes over and Aban slips into the background. This section stirred me, and I sensed the Lord’s presence in these pages. I couldn’t turn the pages quick enough seeking what the Lord may reveal. It was excellent and will linger with me for days I suspect as McNeely brought the Biblical words alive in my imagination.
McNeely’s story craft is excellent. She drew me into the drought of Samaria, the smells of the sea off Zarepath, and the shocking wonder of God’s hand on Mount Horeb.
I so look forward to her sequel. McNeely has set herself a high benchmark with her debut.
September 28, 2023
Rain is the first book I’ve read/listened to by Dana McNeely. I really enjoyed the story. She brings the story of Elijah vibrantly to life as seen through the eyes of a Samaritan boy named Aban.
The story opens with Aban preparing to take the rights to become a priest and one-day high priest in ancient Samaria. After he learns a painful secret about how his life was spared, he worries for his young brother and seeks to save him. Everything changes when he encounters an Israelite named Elijah, who prophesies drought and famine for the land.
He strives to save his family, and eventually, they are able to escape certain death. Aban begins to realize this struggle is much bigger than just that of his family. It’s one of a nation. He comes to a decision point in his life where he must choose between the god of his childhood and Yahweh, the God of Elijah.
I gained so much more insight into that period in history as I read this story. McNeely does a beautiful job of bringing the setting to life, both with the secondary characters and descriptions of life during that time. McNeely is great at keeping the facts authentic while bringing them to life at the same time.
The narrator does a pretty good job. His voice is easy to listen to. I had trouble with his female voices, though.
If you enjoy biblical fiction, this is a must-read story that will keep you fascinated.
***I was gifted a copy of this book by the author with no obligation to leave a review. All opinions are completely mine.
The story opens with Aban preparing to take the rights to become a priest and one-day high priest in ancient Samaria. After he learns a painful secret about how his life was spared, he worries for his young brother and seeks to save him. Everything changes when he encounters an Israelite named Elijah, who prophesies drought and famine for the land.
He strives to save his family, and eventually, they are able to escape certain death. Aban begins to realize this struggle is much bigger than just that of his family. It’s one of a nation. He comes to a decision point in his life where he must choose between the god of his childhood and Yahweh, the God of Elijah.
I gained so much more insight into that period in history as I read this story. McNeely does a beautiful job of bringing the setting to life, both with the secondary characters and descriptions of life during that time. McNeely is great at keeping the facts authentic while bringing them to life at the same time.
The narrator does a pretty good job. His voice is easy to listen to. I had trouble with his female voices, though.
If you enjoy biblical fiction, this is a must-read story that will keep you fascinated.
***I was gifted a copy of this book by the author with no obligation to leave a review. All opinions are completely mine.
December 14, 2024
I have not read many Biblical novels. If pressed for a reason, I suppose I would sum it up as a lack of interest in reading stories that add a lot of imaginative detail to what the Bible actually says. However, this story just might change my mind. After all, some of the best teaching I have ever sat under included stories that developed in the mind of the teachers as they studied the Scriptures. Within a matter of a few chapters in the book, I was starting to connect the various characters to real people I have read about in the Bible. Running through the story is a thread of true Biblical events tied together with a wonderfully imaginative back story that could have really happened. Just as with reading the Bible, I often disliked decisions made by the various characters, especially those who wavered back and forth between good and evil. When I think about it, I see a lot of similarity with people of today. As is true today, there were no perfect people in the Old Testament. This story is based on the life of Elijah as told in the book of I Kings. The focal point of the story is the event on Mount Carmel when Elijah faced off with the prophets of Baal although that is not the end of the story. Jezebel was every bit as despicable in the book as she is presented in the Bible. I liked the way the author used Aban to lead her readers through the events portrayed in the Bible. I think I will go get another book by this author and read some more Biblical fiction. I received a copy of this book from the publisher. This is my honest review. All opinions are strictly my own.
September 9, 2025
What does it take to find your way in a world where gods clash and faith is tested at every turn? Dana McNeely’s Biblical historical fiction novel, Rain, sends readers into the time of the prophet Elijah to explore this very question. This impactful story is about learning to live life one day at a time, no matter what comes your way.
The protagonist, Aban, is the child of the High Priestess of Melqart. His life starts to change drastically around the time a loved one encourages him to “Hold back your heart.” McNeely expertly weaves unexpected twists into the narrative that left me speechless, forcing me to feel what the characters felt and experience the story as if I were living it alongside them. The journey of self-discovery they go on is incredibly relatable.
What starts as a familiar biblical narrative quickly becomes a story with deep emotional and spiritual complexity. The author’s talent for descriptive writing is a huge strength; her detailed descriptions of the characters, landscapes, and cities are so enticing that they make the ancient biblical world feel real. She paints clear, memorable images that resonated with me on a personal level.
The storytelling is both calming and gentle, guiding the reader through the plot with ease. A surprising and impactful twist on the "eye of the needle" proverb adds an extra layer of depth to the narrative. Rain is more than just a retelling; it’s a deeply felt exploration of faith, love, and humanity that will stick with you long after you’ve turned the final page. I am excited to read the next book, Whirlwind.
The protagonist, Aban, is the child of the High Priestess of Melqart. His life starts to change drastically around the time a loved one encourages him to “Hold back your heart.” McNeely expertly weaves unexpected twists into the narrative that left me speechless, forcing me to feel what the characters felt and experience the story as if I were living it alongside them. The journey of self-discovery they go on is incredibly relatable.
What starts as a familiar biblical narrative quickly becomes a story with deep emotional and spiritual complexity. The author’s talent for descriptive writing is a huge strength; her detailed descriptions of the characters, landscapes, and cities are so enticing that they make the ancient biblical world feel real. She paints clear, memorable images that resonated with me on a personal level.
The storytelling is both calming and gentle, guiding the reader through the plot with ease. A surprising and impactful twist on the "eye of the needle" proverb adds an extra layer of depth to the narrative. Rain is more than just a retelling; it’s a deeply felt exploration of faith, love, and humanity that will stick with you long after you’ve turned the final page. I am excited to read the next book, Whirlwind.
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