The beginning of the book had plenty potential but then the story line went anywhere and everywhere and MC both male, female had no growth. What about FMC friends, what about MMC Pack and beta and gamma?
Where is all the storyline and plots. .just started dealing so jumbled and rushed and mistakes got more frequent.
I started reading this one with high hopes and it started out good. I loved that the Alpha waited for her and there are good aspects to the story. However, there is a lot of editing needing to be done. Wrong names mentioned, grammar errors, and fact checking needed. This made the story a bit frustrating to follow. This is why I gave it the rating I did. If you want help fixing things feel free to reach out.
The author clearly knows absolutely nothing about Canada and shouldn't write about things they haven't researched. There are no states in Canada for one and no presidents for another. Google it, before you write about it. All you're doing is spreading uneducated information to your readers. Also, fix your grammer; It's aweful and needs a lot of work.
I liked that this was fast paced and unpredictable. I can tell by other reviews that people expect books to follow an overused outline, but that was my favorite thing about this. It was a fast read, spicy, and every chapter was interesting.
It wasn’t too serious obviously. I assume it was written quickly and never went into the hands of an editor like most romances, but it holds up fine.
It's a good book but I want to read it without paying alot of money for only a few chapters. And here on goodreads I can't even read it or finde a way to purchase the hole book.