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283 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 20, 2021

“I think the Tess Hamilton case is interesting,” Rocky said. “She’s suspected of killing all three of her husbands for their insurance money. They could never prove it before she died last year.”And then the author forgot about it, so she's very much alive in this book. It's not even a case of everyone thinking she was dead. Nope, just a serious continuity error.
○ Rocky gets chased by a dog. It starts with him trying to investigate something, but no investigation happens. And yeah, it eventually leads him to Asher. But there had to be a better way to get to Asher, one that didn't waste several pages on nothing!
○ There's a 2-pages scene of Rocky getting drive-thru.
○ Two more pages are spent on Rocky watching birds outside his window.
○ Rocky's normal workday gets described with an unnecessary amount of detail. It's boring.
○ Rocky has lunch with Jonah and Felix. We don't learn anything about them that we don't already know, the scene's not entertaining, and, again, it doesn't advance the plot. Though really, none of the interactions with the other two protagonists of the series accomplished anything. Except maybe making me hate Felix.





