“Angelus Salvatore, I lost my heart to you the moment you threatened my life. So brave, so capable and enticing.” Simeon replied, a smile lifting a corner of his mouth, a shiny fang glinting. “I meant what I said earlier, as well. I have lived a very long time, and two years were nothing to wait when the prize was your heart in return.”
On an objective level, and if I were to rate this for the elements that make up the story only, the story is an enjoyable one. It has enough promising features, factors that bring in a lot of potential, a great cast of characters, a promising romance, and enough of a magic system build up used to add a fun addition to the story. But when I think about how much these factors are actually developing the story, I can’t help but be disappointed. I must say though, I am very excited to read the rest of the series, see a development process between Angel and Simeon, hopefully grow some love for Isaac and see a building relationship between him and Master Batiste, and get to meet Daniel more and his future lover, Rory.
I think where this story really shines is through the characterization of Angel. Angel isn’t a presumptuous asshole, but he is strikingly confident, acknowledging his powers and good qualities, all while keeping himself in check and not showing off in a demeaning way. His character is refreshing, a unique character than other similar characters I’ve met. He’s a necromancer, and a very good one at what he does. He’s knowledgeable and not insecure; he’s afraid but not doubtful; he’s a risk taker but a logical thinker. S.J. Himes, now writing as Sheena Jolie, wrote him superbly, never undermining his character to fake flaws, unnecessary galore, and a revolting personality. Instead, Angel is a person of his own, sticking to what he knows without abrasives. I loved how Angel knew who he was, acknowledged his powers and abilities, and used them for the best.
However, my issues with this lie in everything else the novel was supposed to offer but didn’t: the romance, world-building, and characterization of Simeon.
His lover, Simeon, an Irish 400-year-old Elder Vampire, is of a silky quality: posh and elegant, confident, strikingly sexy, and enamored, Simeon wants Angel and isn’t afraid to show it. He’s caring, patient, and lovable, but he’s also his own part of strong and vulnerable. We don’t know much about him, unfortunately, other than his role with the Bloodclan, he’s an old vampire, he‘s Celtic, and of course, his ancestry is related to the brutal history with Angel. I mean, I’m sure there is more to him, but to me it felt like we only got an idea of who he is, both as an individual and lover. He’s such an admirer though, especially to Angel, which I did really enjoy, but I wasn’t rooting for it much.
Most of it all comes down to relationship development. Or lack thereof, I should say. While romance is not the biggest focus of this book and series, it is still integral and makes up a big chunk of the story. I’ve been in a romance slump lately, and I thought fantasy/paranormal romance was the way to get back into it a little more, so I thought giving this series a chance would be the right choice. However, it’s my second chance, and it reminded me why I gave up on it the first time I started it. From how I saw it, the relationship between Angel and Simeon felt like it was something we are thrown into the middle of. The author tries adding tension into it, but what they were missing was showing us a lot of these feelings unfolding. Instead, we are told that Simeon has waited two years for Angel, from the moment they met to the present, yet their relationship is fairly…instant. Angel, too, found Simeon attractive since he met him (and I mean, I don’t blame him). However, as previously mentioned, we don’t actually see the two years or many moments between the two. Instead, we are told, and then it’s as if we just jump into the attraction these two decide to give into. There’s really no development, and while the tension is slowly simmering in the background, it isn’t enough to make me believe in it. Perhaps if there was a prequel novella or flashbacks where we see Angel and Simeon interacting, building UST, and pushing/pulling their feelings, I would have been able to understand the relationship more. Plus, any type of relationship where the characters say they have waited x amount of years or time for the other is something I love reading about because it has a lot of potential for yearning and longing. So the fact that we didn’t see this was very…disappointing. It has the spark, but it’s not fully there, and it’s not because it’s not fully developed or because the relationship is still growing; it’s because the relationship never really started from the beginning to start with. Plus, Angel and Simeon haven’t actually interacted before besides the first time they met, so it’s hard to even imagine a prequel or more moments between them before they see each other again. I mean, 20% in or so and they already kissed… So yeah, definitely not slow burn, sadly.
Don’t get me wrong, there’s quite a lot to like about these two already. Simeon is very set on Angel, and there’s no stopping his attraction from being made clear. He’s set in, unwilling to give up but still waiting for the right time. He’s incredibly patient and kind, sexy, and extremely charming. Of course, he’s possessive, and I love it. I LOVE it when characters are from different countries/ethnicities and speak different languages, and I love it even more when we actually see them speaking to them, calling their lover certain terms. Simeon’s endearments for Angel only add to the fuel, like his endearments mo ghrá and lennán. Really, I’m a simple girl.
The world-building is lacking a little bit. I thought it needed more background on explaining more historical context, more information on the Salvatore clan, more references to Angel’s intense magic, and more necessary build-up to get the gist of where everything and everyone came from. We know that humans and magical users and creatures live together and separately, but we don’t really know why and how this all came to be. We get brief mentions and backstories on events, such as the Blood Wars, or how the Salvatore Clan (Angel’s family) was the strongest, or context on how Angel is responsible for some of the most brutal kills during the war. Yet, I think we were still missing enough details to know more about the background. I’m hoping we learn more about Angel and Simeon, or at least Angel, in the next book(s).
So yes, while I am disappointed with this first installment, I am excited to see where the rest take us. I know many people aren’t fans of couples getting together in the first books because there’s no room for build-up or more sexual tension, but I don’t mind it as long as the romance is enough to root for. I think there is still room left for the two to grow together, especially as Angel isn’t yet set on the whole I-love-you for Simeon, despite being close to feeling it. They’re together, but they’re not promised to each other or anything, so I’m hoping the author continues building up their tension. I also heard these two don’t play games in the next books, so I’m all here for future communication.
“I suck at interpersonal relationships. My brother hates me, who by the way I need to make sure is still alive, and I have one friend. My students all think I’m an asshole, and they’d be right. I’ve never had a relationship that lasted longer than an exchange of top versus bottom, and I don’t know what I’m doing,” Angel said, holding onto Simeon’s wrists with both hands.
“Neither do I, Angel. I’ve never been in love before.”
“Then we’re the blind leading the blind?”
“I prefer to think of it as finding our way together.”
“I will say I told you so if this goes sideways.”
Simeon smiled at him and pressed a kiss to his forehead. “I have faith in us, Leannán.”