3 Stars
This was ok, better than book #2 in this series, but it doesn't compare to book #1. I will say the writing significantly improved! So that's a huge plus and shows the author is growing.
This story follows Prue and her husband, Oscar. The two have been married for 3 years but haven't consummated the marriage. They have only even kissed (just a peck) one time, on their wedding day. The two had to marry since Oscar ran into Prue while she was in a bit of a situation, so witnesses thought he compromised her. Oscar, to save Prue from ruin, agreed to marry her. This was a bit of a benefit to him, since he had needed to marry an heiress anyway to save his estate.
Prue was only 17 at the time of their marriage, and had an incident on their wedding night, so Oscar (despite his strong attraction to her), decided to wait before beginning any sort of physical relationship. 3 years have gone by. Oscar's attempt to distance himself from Prue unfortunately resulted in basically ignoring her altogether. Since their marriage is cordial at best, loveless as worst, Prue decides she cannot take it anymore. She makes a plan to seduce her husband into loving her.
First of all, I adore this trope. The whole "winning over a distant husband" thing in historical romances is always a favorite of mine, so I had high hopes for this. For 90% of the story, it didn't disappoint. I really enjoyed Oscar as a character, he had to save his family from ruin and has grown into a bit of a protector role for his family, so he's a quite pragmatic in all aspects of his life. He views love as a silly wish for marriage, but not something to strive for. Prue is a bit more whimsical and wants her marriage to have it all. This ended up showing a lot of immaturity, which in turn made me dislike Prue. Especially around the 90% mark.
An issue I have had through this whole series is how modern it feels. The women are part of a club, which is a bit questionable, but this is a book of course. My problem is that all the women MCs in these books have insane expectations for their lives and roles as women in their society. Again, yes this is fiction they don't have to be complete pushovers, but their actions, words, and views are not remotely reminiscent of the time period. The women act like they are in the 1990s or something. Prue has a decent marriage with her husband, especially when the two grow in their emotional and physical intimacy. Towards the very end of the story she decides that unless her husband (who she knows is more logical/less emotional AND whose actions clearly show he loves her) exactly says "I love you" she must leave him. This is absurd! She gets into a carriage, having not communicated with her husband at all (she had a weird, roundabout conversation trying to get him to say those words) and leaves him without sharing where she is going. This was infuriating and I almost stopped reading the book. Especially considering the time period when it was rare enough to have a husband that treated you decently and didn't keep a mistress. She should honestly be thankful that she had a husband who clearly loved her and she loved him. She showed her immaturity when she decided to run away rather than giving her husband time to develop and realize his feelings for her. Not to mention that any sane women of the time would have thanked their lucky stars they were married to Oscar, and would not dream of leaving him.
Which leads into - it's like this author realized she didn't write any external plot lines to play into the climax/main conflict in the story, so she just assassinates her FMC. This happened in the last book too, where I enjoyed the FMC for the most part, but then she was completely ruined towards the end for the sake of drama. I don't mind historical romance books being entirely romance focused (ie. pretty much no external plot to speak of), but don't ruin the characters when a bit of drama is needed to make the story interesting.
That being said, I did like this book for the most part. I will continue reading this series and anticipate this author will improve. I believe this is the third book she has written, so I do think there is a ton of potential.