The way part 2 of this book was written, a 90 page flashback through the entirety of the MCs military service. It was a perfect setup to get you emotionally invested in the happenings of part 3. However it also is a glaring indicator of the authors lack of effort in other relationships in the story. He got me more invested in male characters relationship with Hunter then any of the “Romantic” relationships. And it made an otherwise good book lacking. At the end of this story Hunter has 6 women with him and his relationship and another in the flashback is also talked about. These relationships are frustratingly dull compared to the one with Titan. It highlights-how Carbon Copied the Bi, fuck anything that moves, 10/10 model woman in your story seem to be. Almost nothing about any of them is unique except for their powers and you constantly seem to stumble on their relationships, why should I care about their relationship if they can’t even seem to care about it themselves? Literally within 24 hours of meeting 2 other women all 3 of our previous harem members seem to care more about them then the Mc. It doesn’t make any fucking sense. It seems to me that you have one of the most unique and incredible stories In this book but you have fallen to the idea that trophy woman need to be constantly added to the group to keep your book any good. If you really need something to keep people interested in that stuff, you literally at this point have 7 super-powered people in a relationship together. I can sure as hell tell you they aren’t having sex like normal people in real life, they’d be using their powers. In all great story, terrible Character building.
Ok, this is pretty cool. I loved the back story of Hunter's SPCC days before he became a smuggler. It was looking pretty grim for the good guys, but things turned around after getting help from someone they didn't think would help them. Nice ending, I sorta seen it coming, but I want to see if it's what I think happened, and not something else.
I have been slow going with reading this series for some reason. Which is weird, because I love it. It hits all the right boxes. The best part is the inovative uses of everyone's powers. I was thinking this was going to be wrapping up the series, but I am really glad that it is continuing. Can't wait for book 4
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
Exceeded my high expectations. At no point did I feel I could predict what would happen next. Plenty of action in both senses of the word. Looking forward to the next one already. If you enjoyed his previous works you'll enjoy this one.
Couldn't stop myself from just finishing the book. It was just that exciting. Good character development and convincing motivations. Can't wait for sequel
I absolutly love this story the way the story flows and the interactions between the different characters in it are just awesome im sad the way that things ended with titan but still very good