I feel I should preface this review by saying that - SOMEHOW- I honestly had no idea that this was yet another Beauty and the Beast retelling. Not sure how I managed to completely miss that, but I did, and I would not have bought it if I’d known (I mean, I like vampires and the concept of ‘Beauty & the Beast with vampires’ does sound cool, but I just feel like B&tB retellings have been done to death already, there’s nothing new left to do there). If that’s your thing, then go for it. But I thought I was starting a new urban fantasy series, and now I have no idea why I though that?!
But anyway, I just wasn’t into this book. Speaking of ‘nothing new’, it might actually be more accurate to say that this is an A Court of Thorns and Roses retelling, just replace the word ‘faerie’ with ‘vampire’. Soo many of the details are the same, it surely can’t be a coincidence. Additionally, I didn’t like either of the main characters and I didn’t really believe that they liked each other either. The relationship felt forced, to me, and it did not seem to evolve naturally. But my biggest issue with this book is the editing. Or more importantly, the lack thereof.
I’m not sure if this book actually had an editor or not, but I’m inclined to think that it didn’t. It was in serious need of one. For example, at the beginning of the book, there are several references to how they used to be rich but lost everything (funnily enough, so did the family in ACOTAR...), and then the author seemingly just completely forgets about this, never mentions it again, and talks as though they’ve always been poor??
Some quotes from page one and two:
”I lift my favourite book from my chest ... It’s the only one I have left from before life went to hell”
, and
“A far cry from the luxury we used to have.”
And here are some quotes from a bit further into the book:
”I can’t remember a time when I wasn’t fighting just to survive”
, and
“All my life I’ve only had the one book”
- I actually just did a search for “all my life” and she mentioned THREE times that she’s only ever had one book, despite making it perfectly clear on literally PAGE ONE that she used to have more. I can’t tell you how much this annoyed me and I can’t believe that an actual editor - or even just a beta reader - wouldn’t have picked up on this.
Then there are things like this quote: “I have lost my apatite”. That’s not how you spell appetite?? It is, however, how you spell the mineral apatite, so it wouldn’t have been picked up on if the only editor was SpellCheck...
There’s potential here, but it really just needed some more work. I won’t be reading the next one.