I’m so glad this is over
I’ve binged this series, because it’s fairly well written, but it’s so boring. I had to force myself to keep going several times, because the world building makes it very interesting, but the plot just doesn’t move. It’s completely rudderless, you’re treading water until the last three chapters. I only finished it because I was already in too far to quit. I will not complete the series, this was just not a good book.
I will say, the world building is good, and the characters are fairly good. The main character isn’t very smart, which is a huge pet peeve of mine, especially because a lot of that is her lack of communication, which is a terrible trope. My biggest issue is just that the world is very intricate, but the characters are not very smart, and the actions don’t really make sense within the world that’s been established. Really, I think if this author were to work with a good editor a lot of this could be solved.
The ending is just bad. My biggest pet peeve is dumb MCs and this one is a doozy. The whole plot doesn’t move, she never seems to get to the point, and just nothing is well thought out. The entire system and book lack consistency. From travel, the magic system, plot flow, the relationships…there’s very little consistency. We go from absolutely crawling to everything happening in the space of the last few pages. Nothing happens politically except for like one page, which determines the entire book? Similar to the last few, the magic system is very inconsistent, sometimes it’s extremely powerful and hugely impactful to the plot and other times it seems to be completely useless.
Spoilers after this point:
For one, the mark was pointless. For several reasons. One of them being that they mention the ability to transfer it multiple times, and yet nobody mentions that they could just give it to the current god of death, which would fix all of the issues they have with his longevity and her problem with being cursed with it.
Also, chapter 36 was just annoying. And completely pointless, again. He’s literally back two chapters later, which is 100% predictable.
But let’s back up, to the scout. Now, just a few chapters prior an entire kingdom fell to somebody using a disguise. Facing that exact same enemy still, they didn’t think to put anything in place to protect them from the exact same trick?
Or, in the battle with her brother, who is a mortal, he somehow survives again? Without her protection? Even though, at this point, she has full mastery over death? And is focused solely on him and severing his life? So how the heck is he alive? He should not have been able to meet with them the first time he almost died, that should’ve taken weeks or longer to heal from, and this time he’s back up and at em immediately? Where is the consistency?
Speaking of consistency, there’s literally none in this magic system. Sometimes magic exhausts her, sometimes she’s great at it, sometimes she can make an impressive display, sometimes she recovers very quickly. Sometimes magic is incredible and can take down fields of enemies, but when it’s actually needed it does nothing. And apparently against her completely mortal, unshielded brother, it does nothing?
I think there’s another book after this, but to be honest, I skimmed the last chapter or so, so I really don’t know and don’t care. We all know how it was going to end, chapter 36 was just a distraction, and as far as I’m concerned the series is done.