CONTAINS EXTENSIVE SPOILERS, not just for Darkstalker but also Darkness of Dragons!
The storyline of this had SO much potential. Too bad the entire thing was extremely rushed. I just want to say that I loved the whole relationship between Fathom and Indigo and how it directly parallels Darkstalker's relationship with Clearsight. This could have been a real gem of a story if it had been polished but as it stands, the jewel is mostly covered in huge clumps of dirt.
There was a whole lot of metaphors in this book that were excellent.
First I'll start with Fathom and Indigo. These two are my favourite (aside from Arctic) in Darkstalker because they were two characters that didn't seem all that important. Fathom, originally famous, becomes an outcast because of a circumstance beyond his control. His own sister turns against him. He loses everyone else he loves, to murder. And he can't even find it within himself to hate the dragon who killed them...because he knows he lost his soul and it wasn't really him... Fathom the outcast, unable to be loved by anyone. His entire kind want him dead...even his own sister... But one dragon comes with him. A dragon who had everything to lose in siding with him...Indigo, the loyal friend who gave up everything to be with him. She gave up literally everything.
As if it wasn't enough the first time when she tried to save his life by launching herself at Albatross...even though she had no powers of her own. She had no chance really, and she almost lost her life for him.
Then again...as a wooden statue of a Seawing carved by Fathom's own claws. How insanely cruel of Darkstalker, to use Fathom's own talons, given as a gift, to betray him and entrap the one he cared about most. There's something very disturbing about Darkstalker's mind.
I love these two because they were background characters. They weren't important. They weren't soulmates. They were just victims of a terrible circumstance, but in direct contrast to Darkstalker and Clearsight, they are the couple that could pull through anything. They were the couple who put love above all else, even their own lives. While Darkstalker was busy manipulating his relationships to hold onto his power, Fathom and Indigo stand out as a stark contrast of those who gave up all they had out of love for others, putting others above themselves time and time again.
Two dragons that weren't important, yet had what was most important-love- made the biggest difference. I love how this fits in so well with the Bible.
1 Corinthians 13:13
And now these three remain: faith, hope and love. But the greatest of these is love.
1 Corinthians 13
13 If I speak in the tongues[a] of men or of angels, but do not have love, I am only a resounding gong or a clanging cymbal. 2 If I have the gift of prophecy and can fathom all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have a faith that can move mountains, but do not have love, I am nothing. 3 If I give all I possess to the poor and give over my body to hardship that I may boast,[b] but do not have love, I gain nothing.
4 Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. 5 It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. 6 Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. 7 It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.
8 Love never fails.
I was actually a little disappointed that Indigo wasn't aware the whole time. I was hoping she would break into a tearful smile when he brought her back, throwing herself into his arms. I imagined that she was there, aware, the whole time, watching terrible things unfold, knowing the truth, in despair, unable to tell the one dragon she loved most the truth about Darkstalker. I'm disappointed she didn't even know and had to have Fathom explain the whole situation to her. Lost opportunity Tui.
I also love what I unpacked on Arctic and Darkstalker's characters.
First, Arctic. I think he basically has mental illness (like bi-polar disorder) or depression (or both), because of the whole "losing his soul" thing. This would explain why Arctic became a jerk in the end.
However, mental illness can only push you so far as you let it. Mental illness can affect the brain and you can take pills for it or whatever. But if you let it...it can penetrate into you and become a heart issue as well, marking your entire sense of morals as obsolete...because you let it...
But let's not deny how the thoughts of Arctic and Darkstalker both focussed on themselves most of the time. When Arctic and Darkstalker get upset, they choose to dwell on the pain instead of acknowledging others pain. I think that even though it would be harder for Arctic because of his illness, if he realized the way he hurt others in the moment, he could perhaps learn to calm down and have better self control.
I'm not saying that focusing on others over yourself can get rid of his soul-lacking issue. However, it might have helped things.
Also I find it ironic that Darkstalker never used his animus powers to heal his father's soul. Instead he played "victim" the entire story, painted his father as a bad guy without even trying to understand what he was struggling through, and in the end made his father kill himself. So who is really the villain here? While Arctic isn't innocent, I would most definitely say it's Darkstalker.
Anyway how am I relating this to Darkstalker and Arctic? Because here's two "villains" in the story, but they go about it in extremely different ways. I laugh because Darkstalker acts so self-righteous in bestowing judgement upon his father. When on earth did Darkstalker EVER do anything for anyone? You want to know how your father lost his soul and went insane, Darkstalker? He used up a huge chunk of his soul just getting him and your mother to safety! That's more than you've ever done! I'm not saying that Arctic has an excuse to treat others the way he does, but can we all agree that Arctic's probably mentally ill? I mean, losing your soul made Albatross crazy. And I feel like Arctic is already half way there. The thing about Arctic though is that you can tell he still has some of his soul left because whenever Darkstalker accuses him of having no soul, Arctic looks genuinely horrified. That means Arctic still cares about having a soul, whereas Darkstalker doesn't. Darkstalker thinks he can do whatever he wants without consequence, and he doesn't really regret anything, but Arctic seemingly does regret the way he treats others. This is a parallel between Darkstalker and Arctic and shows who the real villain is. Darkstalker has his father disembowel himself in front of everyone. I like how Darkstalker just did that right in front of his sister. Darkstalker claims to love his sister throughout the book, but I don't think Darkstalker really loves ANYONE but himself! I mean who makes their little sister watch her own father disembowel himself in such a gory manner for the sake of "judgement?" That's messed up.
I don't know how anyone could say Darkstalker had "good intentions." I don't see that anywhere in the book. All I see is him striving to get what he wants. Even when he makes things for his "friends," he only does it to either A) manipulate them, or B) give things in order to get something back. This isn't true friendship. And the moment any of them do something he doesn't like, he instantly seeks to get rid of them. Who would do that to your friends? I've never seen a single moment of Darkstalker actually doing something out of the goodness of his heart while NOT expecting something back from it. He's continually selfish throughout. Zero good intentions anywhere. That's just a lame excuse.
When Darkstalker said "Maybe there won't be a queen in my future." Once finding out Clearsight took his scroll, was a blood curdling line that really showed the extent of his "love" for her. She does ONE thing to get in the way of his plans, and despite being his "soulmate" Darkstalker is instantly eager to turn his wrath on her too.
I think it just goes to show that the whole "soulmates" thing is just ridiculous. Love is a choice you make daily to put another above yourself. Despite being "soulmates" Darkstalker hoards his power and seeks only after his own interests, and ends up completely destroying the perfect unity with Clearsight he could have otherwise had. Darkstalker: The one who proves that the whole "soulmates" fantasy is nothing but a myth. Because you can be perfect for each other and your own sin and selfishness will still always destroy you unless you choose DAILY to put love above everything else. Compatibility does not hold a marriage together. Effort does. Love is effort. There it is, hands down. Love is not a feeling. It is not fleeting and based on hormones and emotion. Love is a choice you make over and over and over again. When people divorce because they say they don't "love" each other anymore, what they are actually saying is that "I choose not to love them anymore because I'm selfish." That's what that really means. And that's exactly what Darkstalker chose when he decided that his power and glory and him playing God was more important than his "one flesh." His soulmate, his mate.
Gotta love that the book never mentioned Fathom and Indigo being soulmates, and yet they're the ones who showed everyone what true love is in the end.
Lol and did Darkstalker learn his lesson after being trapped under the mountain? Nope. Back he goes, straight to manipulating Moonwatcher in the second arc without an iota of regret. In fact it's actually so ironic that when he turns someone else into Clearsight in the second arc, even then it's not perfect because the Clearsight he knew and loved was the one who always was his conscience. Yet, that's exactly what he didn't like about her. So basically what he loved about her was what he didn't like about her. *Claps for Darkstalker.*
I really don't know why anyone likes this guy.
I have to say, Tui is excellent at shaping characters, parallels and hidden meanings between them. Like I said, the storyline itself was excellent and really fleshed out the characters of the past and how they relate to the characters in the second arc.
Now I'm going to go into all my criticisms.
The way the story was executed was extremely sloppy. The entire thing was very inconsistent from all the other books in the other arcs, and buries the fantastic story and characters in a mudslide of brainstorming debris that was never cleared away in the editing process.
First off, Tui's usage of words out of their context. Bigotry does not mean what Tui thinks it means.
Bigotry: Intolerant of other people's views.
Last I checked, Whiteout destroyed their game, NOT with her views but with her own ignorance and carelessness. If anyone is being a bigot in this circumstance, it's Darkstalker for using the term. He was the one who was intolerant of the dragon's anger over the fact that his sister destroyed their game. Instead of apologizing for his sister's clumsiness and trying to explain that it was an accident and she didn't mean anything by it, he insults their entire lives just because they get mad at his sister for wrecking their game? Seems to me like Darkstalker is the bigot. Oh, and Clearsight saw him as more intelligent for all this? She's also an idiot.
This is like reading a story from Facebook, this scene. No wonder everyone calls each other bigots, it's writers like this, spreading this stupidity to the younger generations, using a word for something it doesn't even mean. I'm a bigot, you're a bigot. We're all bigots.
Can we please keep political words out of a children's story? Especially if you can't even use them correctly? Thanks.
Also they weren't even bullying his sister, they were just expressing their anger that she wrecked their game. That's a genuine reason to be angry. What if they had been playing this game for hours only for some clumsy dragon to destroy everything they spent hours building up? Like I'm sorry but I'd be pretty angry too.
Toothrbrushes. WHY DO DRAGONS NEED TOOTHBRUSHES?!
Sashimi. Seawings have no fire, so don't they eat EVERYTHING raw? How would they know what sashimi is?
Couches. The crap are these couches made of?! Do they collect wool or cotton and weave it into furniture?! At this point they might as well be wearing clothes. At this point they might as well be HUMAN.
Where the heck would seawings get macadania nuts?! Aren't they not on good terms with Rainwings at this point? And why are they eating fruit? Seawings in the future, as far as was revealed anyway, just eat fishy stuff, just ask Queen Coral what she served at HER banquet. I thought fruit was specifically a Rainwing thing. Guess not!
It seems to me that the further back in history we go, the more civilized dragons are. More human and less like dragons. They're DE-EVOLVING!! It's like watching progression go backwards.
This soulmates thing is like reading a dramatic soap opera that makes you gag and roll your eyes.
So many loopholes everywhere.
Apparently Nightwings must also milk cows or SOMETHING because they have CHEESE. Is the author really thinking all this through? I'm a little disturbed trying to imagine a dragon milking a mammal of any sort.
This thing looks like it was written for a Naimo Rhymo. Like it was written within a month and completely bipassed the editing process. I feel like if there was more thought put into this, these mistakes wouldn't have been missed.
You can also tell how rushed this was because I found a couple spelling mistakes in the book.
This book is basically brain baggage dumped on blank pages. This story needs a LOT of work to make it the gem that it could've been.