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Two of Jane Austen’s classics collide in this intriguing tale of pride, prejudice and persuasion, set in England’s beautiful West Country.

In the aftermath of the Netherfield Ball, Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet are determined to find respite—Darcy from the allure of the lady and the feelings she evokes in him, and Elizabeth from the drama unfolding at Longbourn.

Fate is not done with them, however, as they both—unbeknownst to the other—take refuge on the Kellynch estate in Somersetshire, home to Sir Walter Elliot and two of his daughters.

Whilst Elizabeth takes solace from her friendship with Anne Elliot, Darcy finds little comfort in his reacquaintance with the woman fast taking hold of his heart and senses—or, indeed, in the eldest Miss Elliot’s company, whose fluttering eyelashes make her intentions plain.

As for Anne, it is five long years since she last laid eyes upon Frederick Wentworth, and though her regret lingers, she has found some contentment in life... until distressing news of the captain arrives.

When hints of deep secrets emerge—some recently stolen, others harboured for decades—the mystery begins to wrap tendrils around Darcy as he struggles to free himself from its ever-tightening bonds.

Can Darcy discover the truth before it is too late? Will Elizabeth even care if he does? And just what has become of Captain Wentworth?

If you enjoy Austen-inspired variations, then you’ll love this tale of romance, friendship and mystery from award-winning writing duo, Cass Grafton and Ada Bright.

586 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 9, 2021

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Cass Grafton

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Cass began her writing life in Regency England, enlisted Jane Austen’s help to time-travel between then and the present day and is now happily ensconced in 21st century Cornwall.


Well, in her imagination and soul; her heart and physical presence reside in northern England with her ever-patient husband and Tig and Tag, their cute but exceptionally demanding moggies.


A bit of a nomad, Cass has called three countries home, as well as six different English counties, but her aspiration is to one day reunite with her beloved West Country.


In the meantime, she writes feel-good contemporary romances set in Cornwall and, in doing so, manages to live there vicariously through her characters and settings.


An Ambassador for the Jane Austen Literacy Foundation, Cass is also a member of the Romantic Novelists’ Association, the Jane Austen Society UK and the Society of Authors.

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Author 5 books399 followers
March 24, 2021
Like a child who doesn’t have to make the agonizing decision between two favorite treats, Austen lovers can have their cake and eat it, too. That is, if Jane Austen’s Persuasion and her Pride & Prejudice were blended into one heart-felt, slow-building, and sometimes stunning tale like this latest release from a creative and crafty author team. I was eager to delve into the pages of Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion and be tantalized by the fusion of two delectable pairs of lovers.

One of the earliest pre-read anticipations was wondering how the authors would bring the two stories into the same orbit and how these encounters would alter the original stories. And, that was as simple as Anne already being acquainted with Charlotte Lucas and visiting Lucas lodge where she and Elizabeth meet and form a warm friendship. Anne’s wish to extend the friendship by an invitation to her home, Kellynch Hall comes just at a time when Elizabeth is anxious to be gone from Longbourn after the Netherfield Ball and Mr. Collins’ visit. As for Mr. Darcy, his surprising appearance at Kellynch is sheer coincidence considering he was attempting to escape his growing feelings for Elizabeth Bennet. He takes his sister into the warmer West Country for her health and leases a cottage on the estate of Sir Walter Elliot. Meanwhile, Captain Wentworth sustains an injury and conjures up ‘Anne’ and ‘Kellynch’ so that is where the recovering man is taken years after Anne refused his proposal.

It was exciting to see it all come together and some of the early conflicts for the two couples are present, but that looks to sort itself out when there is a surprising twist. And, that is just the first of more. Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion dips into the darker territory of theft, blackmail, and coercion. It will take the fortitude of the heroes and a few others to overcome the villainy and the ladies are given the opportunity to see what these men are made of. For Elizabeth, she goes from loathing to surprise, confusion, and then a true understanding of just how much she let one overheard insult prejudice her against a worthy man. Anne has since-learned her grave mistake in pushing away what was her best chance at happiness.

At times, I felt some ground was covered more than once unnecessarily, but for the most part, I felt this book read quickly and easily in spite of its length. The suspense was taunt and the mystery was as riveting as the growing romances that had many misunderstandings and miscommunications to work through.

While the story bears little resemblance to either Persuasion or Pride & Prejudice, many of the familiar characters appear even if some are off scene or play smaller or larger roles than their original. I have to say that was a surprise how Sir Walter and Elizabeth Elliot were characterized, but not beyond imagination and I ended up loving to detest them.

All in all, I thought this was sensational and I loved seeing this variation on a pair of Austen novels all in one. Those who enjoy sweet, slow-burn romance, gothic flavored plot, and an authentic-feeling Austenesque backdrop, should definitely reach for this one.

My thanks to the author for providing an eARC to read in exchange for an honest review.
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1,224 reviews59 followers
September 21, 2024
*Sigh* What could be better than P&P and Persuasion in one book?!?!?

Amazing book, LOVED the story! I read the first half online via the author's blog, but started from the beginning when when I purchased the book.

Elizabeth meets Anne Elliot when she stays with the Lucas's, around the time Bingley has deserted. Jane- despondent at her lost love - contemplates marriage to Collins to safeguard her family's future. Elizabeth furious with Darcy, blaming him for Jane's loss, meets him when she travels with Anne back to Kylynch. That's when the fun begins!

Emotions are high, manipulations run rampant, Anne's lost love returns to her on deaths door and ODC is stuck in the middle of it all.

No spoilers - this is a must-read! A beautiful collaboration between 2 gifted writers, does not disappoint!
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2,688 reviews202 followers
March 8, 2021
I read chapters of this story as they were posted on a blog and then won a copy during a blog giveaway. As the title tells us it is a mashup of Persuasion and Pride and Prejudice.

Most of the action takes place at the Kellynch estate. Darcy has arranged to stay at the Meadowbrook House on that estate as he was searching for a warmer location due to Georgiana's ongoing cough/ill health. Sir Walter Elliot and his oldest daughter, Elizabeth, reside at the main hall.

Elizabeth comes to stay at the estate, first at Kellynch Hall and then at the Willow Cottage with Anne Elliot. She has met Anne while Anne was a guest of Sir Lucas. That man's wife becomes ill and he requests that the Bennets allow Anne to reside with them in order to be safe from contagion. Anne and Elizabeth become close friends and when Anne is due to travel home it becomes Elizabeth whom she invites to travel with her. The intent is that Elizabeth will only stay a fortnight but as events occur that time is extended.

Darcy and Elizabeth have met as in canon and also attended the Netherfield Ball. Darcy is fighting his feeling for Elizabeth while Elizabeth loathes the man.

Events which influence fate are several: Georgiana's mysterious loss of a letter which mentions that failed elopement with Wickham and an unconscious Captain Wentworth is brought to Kellynch when he moans out the words "Kellynch" and Anne. The Captain has partial amnesia when he awakens but does remember his and Anne's attachment years before this date.

Darcy's true character is revealed to Elizabeth as he takes in the nearly drowned captain when Sir Elliot will have nothing to do with the injured man. Darcy further raises Elizabeth's esteem of him when he offers the Willow Cottage to Anne and her guest as Sir Elliot demands Elizabeth leave his home immediately and also that Anne NOT attend Captain Wentworth's bedside (chaperoned, of course). At one point early in the story Darcy has decided to declare himself to Elizabeth. However he only speaks a few words when Elizabeth turns on him and relates her negative opinions about him.

The main angst in this story involves a blackmail scheme against Darcy. As he and then Colonel Fitzwilliam and even Sir Elliot's employee, Mr. Shepherd, search for a way to foil that plot Elizabeth realizes that against all odds she has fallen in love. The solution was not something I would never have imagined...well done. The plot is so heinous that it is kept secret from most of the company. Elizabeth is one who is unaware of what is distracting Darcy.

Although I had read the first 30 chapters as they were posted I read this story from the beginning again. I fully enjoyed it and highly recommend it. It is a longer story with many twists I don't mention here.
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1,736 reviews134 followers
March 16, 2021
“You pierce my soul. I am half agony, half hope… I have loved none but you.” –Jane Austen, Persuasion

Rating: clean: PG->13 due to language: British cursing: Angst Level: high: 54-chapters + epilogue: Source: I won an eBook [3 -9-21] via a random drawing from the author’s newsletter. The cover is amazing and so perfect. This review may contain ***Spoilers***

“His cold politeness, his ceremonious grace, were worse than anything.” –Jane Austen, Persuasion

Elizabeth and Darcy were on the run from their feelings and emotions. Darcy was taking Georgiana out of London for her health. Elizabeth was escaping Longbourn for a trip with a friend. Little did they know they were headed toward the same destination. The authors effectively dove-tailed Austen’s books into one amazing story that featured two sets of lovers. One couple [old love] reuniting after an estrangement, another couple [new love] finding each other for the first time. Both fighting the machinations of an evil plot that defies the imagination.

“She hoped to be wise and reasonable in time; but alas! She must confess to herself that she was not wise yet.” –Jane Austen, Persuasion

I have NEVER disliked Sir Walter Elliot, baronet, as I did in this story. His pernicious daughter, Miss Elizabeth Elliot was just as bad and did such an egregious act that it nearly undid our Mr. Darcy and certainly derailed his attentions to another… Miss Elizabeth Bennet.

“Time will explain.” –Jane Austen, Persuasion

OMG! There were several… Please Note... I said several… awe-inspiring reveals that will shock and amaze. I’ve never been hit in the solar plexus this many times only to be slammed again with another shocking revelation that just blew me away. My mouth dropped and my hands covered my mouth as I read the most shocking twist ever. I nearly fell out of my chair. The clues were there and I did not pick up on a single one. That was why it blind-sided me so effectively. Well done to our authors, Cass and Ada. Man, that was so good. OMG! Was that ever cool. I am still shaking my head and going… OMG!!! I can’t say more due to spoilers. I highly… Highly recommend this for the most shocking story I’ve read in a while. Although it is long, it is so cool.
899 reviews70 followers
August 9, 2021


My Rating: 4.5* rounded up to 5*

"Choice is a complicated thing for a woman...For the present I will own to some regrets - regrets that have never left me." (quote from the book)

This was a delightful blend of Jane Austen's 'Pride & Prejudice' and 'Persuasion' with a hint of another of her novels. It is also a unique variation on these books in having the characters be known to each other. I think Jane, herself, would have been highly diverted. I know I was!

"Keep yourself under good regulation. It had been his father's edict, and it was one he had lived by. Until Elizabeth came whirling into his life on an autumn breeze..." (quote from the book)

As the book description indicates, this all takes place after the Netherfield ball. Darcy has left to escape Elizabeth's allure and Elizabeth needs to escape the drama that is unfolding at Longbourn. The drama of Jane's broken heart by Mr. Bingley leaving, and Mr. Collins changing his intentions.

"The silence suited him; the thoughts in his head did not." (quote from the book)

Anne Elliot in the meantime is a guest of Charlotte Lucas and is soon introduced to the Bennets and becomes good friends with Elizabeth. Through certain events, Elizabeth is soon on her way with Anne Elliot to Kellynch Hall for a visit and a respite. Unbeknownst to them both, is that Mr. Darcy, Georgiana and Mrs. Annesley will be leasing a home on Sir Walter's property called Meadowbrook House for Georgiana's health. But that is not all that comes to pass during their stay. There will be no respite for Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy.

"Elizabeth Bennet had walked straight out of his intractable thoughts to sit beside him." (quote from the book)

There is much going on in this tale that brings other beloved characters to the fore; Colonel Fitzwilliam and Frederick Wentworth to name two. Will Anne get her second chance or will she lose Frederick? Will the Colonel be able to help Darcy untangle himself from the machinations of Sir Walter and his eldest daughter, Elizabeth Elliot? Oh, how I loathed those two devious peacocks! Actually, it isn't fair to peacocks to call them that! Certain clues are there in story that you know will have a greater impact later on. I just thought the dots were not connected fast enough by the characters as the story progressed. Mr. Darcy and the Colonel are intelligent men, and I felt that part dragged a bit along with some repetition of Elizabeth and Darcy's inner thoughts. However, not enough to lessen my over all enjoyment of this novel. I so enjoyed the relationships that have been built between the characters, that I would love to 'persuade' the authors to write a sequel.

I was thrilled to see at the end, that the authors are donating 10% of the profits from the sale of 'Mr. Darcy's Persuasion' to the Jane Austen Literacy Foundation. Well done ladies!
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1,334 reviews79 followers
March 11, 2021
Two Favourites Become One
Happiness is my two favorite Austen books melded into one fabulous story of two beloved couples whose circumstances somehow find them all together at the Kellynch estate, home of Sir Walter Elliot and his daughters Elizabeth and Anne.

Leasing a house on the estate, Darcy and Georgiana are there primarily for her health, although Darcy also seeks an escape from his feelings for Elizabeth following his departure from Hertfordshire. Not knowing Darcy is there, Elizabeth has accompanied Anne Elliot back to her home after befriending her when she was a guest of Charlotte’s. Captain Wentworth has been brought there after he is injured and unconscious.

None of the newcomers to Kellynch are enamoured with the Elliot patriarch and his eldest daughter. Some mischief is afoot and all appears hopeless for one of our heroes. Can any allies be found? Intrigue, and just enough angst to keep one on edge. At least for me, but I’m an angst wuss.

The authors had me with the humour of the opening paragraph. I was captivated to the end. The intertwining of these beloved characters is extremely well done. Darcy and Wentworth remain swoon worthy. Elizabeth and Anne very likable.

Definitely recommend this one!
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757 reviews21 followers
August 22, 2024
A crossover, mainly a variation of Pride and Prejudice, but with an interwoven variation of Persuasion, and a tiny yet pivotal piece of Mansfield Park. There were a few things I personally found annoying, so I downgraded it on my second reading, though I still recommend it.

The story begins soon after the Netherfield Ball and the Bingley party's sudden departure from Meryton. Mr. Darcy can't get Elizabeth Bennet off his mind. He returned to London, persuading Bingley that Jane Bennet was indifferent to him, to find that his sister Georgiana suffered a cold recently that has left her with a lingering cough and fatigue. Fearing to take her north for Christmas, he accepts an offer from Sir Walter Elliot to lease a dower house on his Kellynch estate called Meadowbrook House, thinking the winter will be milder in Somersetshire. Darcy arrives with his sister at Kellynch Hall, and immediately takes Georgiana on to their rented house there. Colonel Fitzwilliam arrives soon after. He is to be posted nearby and plans to spend Christmas with them.

It becomes clear at once that Sir Walter and his oldest daughter Elizabeth have set their sights on Darcy as a husband for her. They begin scheming, which at first takes the mild form of obvious flirtation.

Meanwhile, Elizabeth Bennet has refused Mr. Collins' offer of marriage, only to be shocked when he proposes to her sister Jane a day later, and Jane thinks about accepting him. Jane has asked Mr. Collins for a fortnight or so to think about his offer. Lizzy becomes so insistant that Jane refuse him, fearful that her sister is only considering it out of concern for the financial future of her family, that Jane clams up, and the two sisters' close relationship is threatened. Lizzy takes solace in her friendship with Charlotte Collins, and her houseguest, a former schoolmate, Anne Elliot of Kellynch Hall in Somersetshire. When Lady Lucas becomes ill, Anne needs a place to stay for a few days until her departure for home, and Charlotte arranges for her to stay at Longbourn, where Lizzy and she quickly become friends. Charlotte was to accompany Anne home for a visit, but with her mother ill she can't make the trip, so Anne invites Lizzy to Kellynch instead.

On arrival there, Lizzy is treated terribly by Anne's father and older sister, who want to think of her as a lowly companion rather than a friend to Anne, and are perfect snobs towards her. Anne defends her friend to them, while Lizzy decides to find amusement in their behavior and takes it in her stride, happy to spend more time with her new friend, whom she now pities for her relations. Anne finds herself reminiscing, on her return home, about her former suitor, Frederick Wentwoth. Lizzy has confided in her about her dislike of Mr. Darcy and her suspicion that he helped to separate Bingley from her sister Jane. So both women are shocked to learn of Mr. Darcy's presence as a resident on the Kellynch estate, when he comes to dinner with his cousin the colonel.

Darcy is also shocked, but he'd rather seek out Miss Bennet's company than Miss Elliot's. He becomes tongue-tied around Miss Bennet, but he can barely stand to be in the same room with Miss Elliot, and he doesn't like how she and her father treat Miss Bennet. Miss Bennet can't stand him, though. The colonel is intrigued to meet this other Elizabeth, from Hertfordshire, after his cousin's visit there seemed to change him so much. Georgiana soon meets her as well, and likes her at once.

The story becomes even more deliciously complex, full of blackmail, reconciliations, threatened reputations, maddening behavior on the part of some, and lots of twists and intrigues, maybe even a forced marriage, and it's almost as much of a mystery-suspense story as a romance. I couldn't put it down.

The humor is delightful, and I like how Georgiana grows in this story. The author handles the two Elizabeths, which one can imagine could get confusing, with clarity and skill, keeping the reader always aware of which is which, while Darcy manages to get himself, against his will, entangled with the wrong Elizabeth. I loved the conclusion, though I won't say any more about that. The setting, with the main house, Kellynch Hall, and the dower house, Meadowbrook House, as well as Willow Cottage, and the winter season dropping over the story and its characters, is just perfect.

Unfortunately on my second reading I found that parts of the story dragged on too long, especially Lizzy reconciling her changed feelings toward Mr. Darcy. I'm sure there's a fine line between this happening too abruptly or two slowly, but this story crossed over into too slowly and then some. It could have been a shorter book and better for it. But it's well written, and suspenseful, and I loved the humor in that last chapter.
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997 reviews345 followers
January 7, 2023
Double the Pleasure, Double the Fun, and Double the Trouble!

Rating: 4.5 out of 5 stars

Source: Gift from Authors


TYPE OF NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice/Persuasion Variation Mash-Up

THE PREMISE: After the Netherfield Ball, Darcy and Elizabeth encounter each other again in Somersetshire where they both plan to enjoy a brief sojourn. But their host and landlord proves to be most antagonizing – he unceremoniously ejects Elizabeth from his home, refuses to open his house to a dying man, and coerces Mr. Darcy into a most troubling bind. Can our beloved characters still find a way to come together? Or is all hope gone forever…

WHAT I LOVED:

- Doubled and Well-Blended: (sounds like a drink order. Lol) This fantastic writing duo gives readers double the pleasure and double the fun in this inventive Austen-inspired mash-up. There are two sets of heroes and heroines and two featured romances – although of the two, Darcy’s and Elizabeth’s storyline is more extensive and prominent. I loved seeing these characters all brought together – their reasons for encountering each other were credible, and their interactions with each other felt authentic. Speaking of well-blended, I’m always in awe of how well these authors write and collaborate together. They match tone and style so seamlessly and skillfully – it is impossible to know where one author’s writing ends and another begins.

- A Charming Setting: How refreshing to spend some time at Kellynch! Even in Persuasion, our time there is brief. This was an exciting change of scenery for us all. But even more so than the hall itself, I was enchanted by the comfortable and idyllic Meadowbrook House and Willow Cottage. I loved witnessing the charms of these dwellings, and I can well understand their lasting affection for the places where their happiness was found.

- Friend Groups: Some terrific new relationships develop in this story. One being between Anne and Elizabeth, who only became acquainted recently are quick to form a supportive and strong bond. I also loved witnessing the affinity that quickly blossomed between Elizabeth and Georgiana after Elizabeth’s initial wariness (thanks to Wickham). And lastly, not only did I love seeing the loyalty and brotherly rapport between Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mr. Darcy, but also the easy camaraderie and trust develop between these characters and their new friend, Captain Wentworth. I loved that all these characters felt such strong affection and accord together. You just know they will be friends for life and have frequent get togethers in the years to come.

- The Elliot/Darcy Juxtaposition: A mirror his held up to Mr. Darcy when he discovers that he is guilty of the same pompous arrogance and prideful snobbery that he recognizes in the Elliots. What a clever impetus to have Mr. Darcy realize his own flaws and reform his mindset.
Romantic Moments: I loved all the tender moments these beloved couples shared. The ardent longing each character felt (especially Anne and Darcy), the surprising reveals that followed after intense heartache and distress (Anne and Wentworth), and the quiet moments shared alone where unspoken love was felt (Darcy and Elizabeth) were all ones that stayed with me and made my heart sigh.

- The Twists and Revelations: So delicious! So brilliant! I thought I knew the secrets – that I guessed the infamous sins of this character, but the truth came out to be so much better than I had surmised. I loved the irony and poetic justice! So masterful! I also loved the collaboration of hands that served our antagonist their heaping pile of just desserts! (Being vague on purpose to not divulge and spoilers!)

WHAT I WASN’T AS FOND OF:

- Small Quibbles: With such a large and eventful story (which for the most part was an effortless and enthralling read) there were a few times where the pacing felt a little unbalanced. Some parts of the story proceeded with great leisure and detail, while some of the action at the end progressed at a brisk and summarized clip. In addition, occasionally some instances felt a little repetitive (i.e. Darcy caught being inattentive and distracted by Elizabeth, Elizabeth being confused and discombobulated by her feelings for Mr. Darcy).

CONCLUSION: With Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion, Cass Grafton and Ada Bright once again deliver a most captivating tale, rich with creativity, sensitivity, and heart. I love that sincere and uplifting friendships are always a prominent theme in their stories together. The steadfast and warm relationships readers witness between these characters seems to be a lovely tribute to their own long-standing friendship. I hope we see more collaborations from this dedicated duo in the near future!

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277 reviews13 followers
April 1, 2021
4.5
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When I heard Cass Grafton and Ada Bright were writing a Pride & Prejudice / Persuasion mashup I knew I had to read it. What could be more perfect then the characters from my two favorite Austen novels sharing page time in a new story?

My expectations were high and I was certainly not disappointed. In this story, Anne Elliot is acquainted with Charlotte Lucas and while visiting her in Hertfordshire meets Elizabeth Bennet. The young ladies form a friendship and Elizabeth is invited to stay with Anne at Kellynch Hall for a time. What none of the ladies knows, is that because of Georgiana’s recent health issues, Mr. Darcy is leasing a house on the Estate, which means that Elizabeth will be forced to spend more time then she would have liked with a certain gentleman from Derbyshire.

Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion will therefore take place mainly at Kellynch Hall where the Elliots will present themselves as the main antagonists of Elizabeth, Darcy, Anne and Wentworth. This book is long but very well written, and for that reason, it is engaging and easy to read. I loved many aspects about it, but the ones that I would like to highlight are the setting, Anne and Elizabeth’s friendship, and Captain Wentworth’s character.

Even though this book also tells us the story of Anne and Captain Wentworth, and they share some of the most romantic moments in the book, it is mainly a Darcy and Elizabeth story, and it was very interesting to see it take place at Kellynch. It was the first time I saw this setting in a P&P story, and the fact that these characters spend most of their time at this estate gave the story a cozyness I always appreciate in a book. I could picture all the scenes taking place at Meadowbrook House and the cottage, and at times I even felt I was there with the characters myself.

Also, because this story takes place at Kellynch, our anti-heros are different from the usual ones. I loved to hate the baronet and his oldest daughter, and it was refreshing to see a different antagonist in the plot, even if Miss Elliot did resemble Caroline Bingley at times. I can’t say much about the secrets that were revealed in the ending, but I wasn’t expecting that revelation which I absolutely loved! I believe most readers will feel Miss Elliot had everything she deserved.

Anne and Elizabeth’s friendship is also an unexplored plotline and I loved to see how two completely different ladies found common ground in their friendship using their differences to strengthen each other. In Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion, Jane makes a decision that creates friction with Elizabeth, and Anne felt like the perfect replacement for Jane’s calm and sensible personality. Anne had a bit more character though, and even a teasing tone, that made her friendship with Elizabeth much more alive then the one we often see Elizabeth having with Jane. Elizabeth’s devotion to Anne and all the support she gave her was endearing and I can see these two couples spending many pleasurable times together (can you tell I’m begging for a sequel?).

Captain Wentworth was everything I hoped for and even though I would have liked to see him take a more active part in assisting Mr. Darcy solving the conundrum he found himself in, Wentworth was the perfect hero, strong, steady and charming. His scenes with Anne were always electrifying and very emotional. I also enjoyed seeing a bit more of Captain Wentworth’s brother instead of his sister. Most Persuasion novels have Mrs Croft present but say little about Reverend Wentworth and the change in this one was something new and refreshing.

Summing up, if you like Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion, you should not miss this novel. It is a new and interesting story which takes place in a cozy setting that will captivate you. I recommend it to everyone who likes a good romance 🙂
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471 reviews35 followers
March 10, 2021
In Jane Austen’s final complete novel, Persuasion—published six months after her untimely death—the heroine, Anne Elliot, is influenced by her prideful father, a baronet, to break off an engagement with Captain Frederick Wentworth, who was considered a poor match due to his low social status and lack of wealth. Similarly, in Austen’s earlier novel, Pride and Prejudice, Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy is the prideful man causing heartbreak over his disapproval of an undistinguished family. The consequences of such prejudiced persuasion collide spectacularly in Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion by prolific writing duo Cass Grafton and Ada Bright.
Mr. Darcy is in denial. In a letter to his cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, he insists, “Despite your suggestion to the contrary, no young lady has caught my attention.” (152) Yet he flees Hertfordshire posthaste following the ball at Netherfield hosted by his friend Mr. Bingley, whom he has advised to avoid a growing attachment to Miss Jane Bennet. All the while, Darcy knows his own hypocrisy as he likewise advises himself to avoid the undeniable attraction he feels toward Jane’s younger sister, Elizabeth. He acknowledges that the Bennet family is far beneath the notice of a wealthy gentleman landowner such as he, thus he removes himself from danger and warns his smitten friend to do the same.
Miss Elizabeth Bennet holds a grudge, knowing that interference has led to her beloved sister’s heartbreak and now may lead to an even worse fate. In a happy twist of fate, however, she becomes acquainted with Miss Anne Elliot and is soon delighted by the diversion of an invitation to join her new friend for a fortnight’s visit to the Elliot family’s estate, Kellynch Hall in Somersetshire. Elizabeth finds Anne to be “a genteel lady, a little older than I, but we appear to have much in common. I find I like her very well.” (235)
For the benefit of his sister’s health and to avoid a harsh winter at Pemberley in Derbyshire—as well as to escape his memories of a certain bewitching young lady—Darcy travels south, hopeful of warmer weather in Somersetshire, where he has leased a property for the winter from Sir Walter Elliot. He is, therefore, rendered speechless when he discovers “Elizabeth Bennet. The woman he thought he had relegated to the past sat across the room from him, as alluring and unattainable as she had ever been, and raising inexplicable emotions in Darcy that he struggled to conceal, let alone comprehend.” (1457)
Unceremoniously thrown together again, Elizabeth sees in Darcy only a disdainful man, similar to the disdainful Sir Walter and Miss Elizabeth Elliot, whose rude dismissal of her she endures only for the sake of her dear friend Anne. Meanwhile, in scrutinizing Elizabeth’s treatment at the hands of her reluctant hosts, Darcy is forced to face his own prejudice. “It would seem he was not only guilty of looking down upon those less fortunate than himself but also of judging them in the same way the Elliots did. This notion was of little comfort.” (1964)
When an unexpected visitor arrives at Kellynch Hall, Elizabeth is surprised to see a different side of Mr. Darcy. “His gallantry and compassion…spoke volumes, but this conflicted with all Elizabeth knew him to be. Or did it truly?” (3430) As mysteries swirl around them, will Darcy and Elizabeth be persuaded to put aside their pride and prejudice at last?
What a lovely experience it was to read a story combining two of my favorite Austen novels—Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion—in one effortlessly enjoyable tale. My single complaint is that I wish for a sequel with all of these wonderfully drawn characters happily together again. The devoted friendship between Elizabeth Bennet and Anne Elliot was delightful, and I found myself envious of their attachment and wishing to be one of their group. I had never before drawn the connections between the two stories, and it was enlightening, to say the least. This book had all of the best elements of an unputdownable tale: romance, mystery, villains, tense confrontations, humor, and admirable relationships of all kinds. A reader could not hope for a more satisfying way to immerse themselves in a book.
Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion is a story about how ardent admiration and love can overcome even the most persuasive pride and prejudice.
5 out of 5 stars
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305 reviews
June 18, 2021
The book started out so great! Lively and interesting with fun character interaction. Sure, Elizabeth was a little frustrating with how she dealt with Jane but I think it was keeping in line with her character, so cool.

But then around the halfway point, it stalled out a bit. Sir Walter appears out of nowhere to push one plot line to resolution, then quickly disappears and everything just sort of dwindles to a halt. Instead, Darcy and Elizabeth spend way too many pages staring off into space, daydreaming about the other while their friends try to recapture their attention. I get what the book is showing us during that time but it was overdone and eventually gave things an immature/silly feel. And it just kept going and going.... There was another serious plot line going on but the characters only talked about it, they didn't really do anything. It stayed at this non-moving point for so long that I got bored. So bored. I stopped reading the book for a day and a half and went to AO3 to read fanfic.

Finally, I decided to pick this up again just so it would no longer be hanging over my head. The distracted daydreaming finished and things picked up with the pacing, but I was so beyond caring, I just skimmed. At one point, a character complains about how slowly Darcy is explaining something and I felt such strong sympathy because that was my experience with the last half of the book. Why explain something in one page when you can take three? Why have things be straightforward when you can have a character interrupt an important conversation and narrate them getting drinks for everyone? It was just so drawn out.

Things did finally pick up speed again but I still didn't care and it just seemed ridiculous. I also finally understand the phrase "lampshading" thanks to this book. Perhaps if the third quarter of the book was drastically trimmed down, I wouldn't have checked out and it would have fulfilled its promise of the first half but it wasn't so we will never know. As much as I like the idea of a mashup of Austen stories (and of Persuasion stories), I think I'll be avoiding them for a while because of how annoyed this one left me.
363 reviews8 followers
May 30, 2021
I have been procrastinating about writing this review for multiple reasons.

A.) I can't do it justice.
B.) If I get started, I'll just gush and not give a valuable review.
C.) I can't do it justice.

I loved this book! For me this was the perfect story. Perfect build up of angst (high) and perfect resolution. Wonderful romance. Beautiful blend of two favorite Austen books; P&P and Persuasion. Sir Walter and Elizabeth Elliot, who we never liked anyway turn out to be true villains in this one. Wickham is a big plot element but at least not present in his snaky evilness. Darcy gets an additional back up man in Captain Wentworth (he's rather swoony here.) Colonel Fitzwilliam is a big back-slapping, teasing, drink-pushing favorite annoying cousin here and a little over-the-top (but he's written that way for a purpose.) The resolution I mentioned above, was aided greatly by a twist in a character from the original Persuasion, and it was a real nail-biter. Whew! Anne Elliot and Elizabeth Bennet become close friends, which was lovely. Darcy and Elizabeth's slow reconciliation after the failed Hunsfordesque proposal was even more lovely.

I can't say enough good things about this book except I'll be rereading it multiple times. Highly recommended.
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832 reviews1 follower
March 12, 2021
As a combination of my two favorite Austen novels, I loved seeing Anne Elliot and Elizabeth Bennet become friends and support each other. There was lots of Darcy, Captain Wentworth and Colonel Fitzwilliam time as the men work together to get Darcy out of a predicament that was not of his making. There are misunderstandings between Elizabeth and Darcy, an almost-proposal, and that slow change of feelings for Elizabeth that I love to see. The twist near the end was fun. I also liked how the book started and ended with letters.

I won an ebook from the authors. A review was not required and all opinions are my own.
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71 reviews4 followers
March 10, 2021
Mr Darcy’s Persuasion

As I opened the cover of this gorgeous new book, I knew I would love it! And yeah I was so right! Would I sigh, curse and laugh? Yeah more than!

The plot, well takes place mostly in Somersetshire in the home of the Elliots of Kellynch Hall from Austen’s Persuasion. Into the mix Darcy and Georgiana Darcy are introduced, wintering in South England due to Georgiana recovering from a severe case of cold.
Soon Elizabeth Bennet and Anne Elliot returns from Hertfordshire and on goes the drama! After reading for 5 minutes straight I was completely back into the plot which I had followed during the winter on Cass Grafton’s blog.
Since this is a true variation, we also got to know Anne Elliott and Captain Wentworth, who appears, part way through the plot! And an old flame is rekindled and has hope for the future.

As the plot thickened I was more and more inclined to curse the two ladies who wrote this book, but damn they know just how to get a reader to continue to read even if it ends up being 2am in the morning! Suddenly Darcy are entangled into a web and so goes the wild chase to get him out and to get him onto the right track.
Meanwhile has Elizabeth realised her mistaken view of Darcy and understands the trouble of Wickham and what harm he had left on Georgiana.

And yet again when the plot finally looked like it would come together, the two brilliant ladies did a 180 again with the plot and twisted it further! I seriously sat up and nearly screamed at the book “Seriously?! You have got to be kidding me! Of course that would happen!”

As the ending neared I was laughing myself hoarse at the hilarity which happens during the last 15-20 pages, it was beyond brilliant and utterly hilarious 🤣 Even now after finishing the book, I have to say, the plot is SO typical Ada and Cass! But something I also noted was how much their combined writing has the touch of Austen’s own writing style, and with some of their antics I will definitely call them the modern Austen’s of variation writing.
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31 reviews
March 12, 2021
“How quick come the reasons for approving what we like.”

And there are countless reasons to like, no LOVE, this beautiful novel. When I saw that the authors of “The Particular Charm of Miss Jane Austen” were collaborating on a Pride and Prejudice/Persuasion crossover, I nearly died of happiness. In less capable hands, these crossovers often fall short of capturing what we love most about the original works. This much anticipated novel more than rises to meet the challenge. Warning: You should probably surround your reading area with cushions, as you are likely to swoon from this Mr. Darcy and this Captain Wentworth appearing in the same novel.
With just the right amounts of angst, humor and romance (in equal measure), this extremely well-written and deliciously lengthy story will keep you from getting anything else done, as it is nearly impossible to put down. I would purchase it again simply for the pleasure of reading Chapter 52.
From its exquisite cover, to the Epilogue, you will lose yourself in this beautiful imagining of how our beloved Austen characters might have found their way together had their paths crossed. I will not reveal any spoiler plot points in my review (they can be found easily enough in others), only to say that rarely have I enjoyed the journey to Happily Ever After as much.
These two authors have shown their talents before, writing seamlessly and expertly with great appreciation for and understanding of Austen’s characters and style. They know how to write a smart, witty heroine and a noble, constant hero. They understand the importance of the supporting characters in providing the conflict, as well as the comic relief, in a nuanced (not over-the-top) way. Most importantly, they are skilled in staying true to the original Austen characters, if not canon plot. Their love and respect for dear Jane shows on every page. It was a privilege and delight to read Mr. Darcy’s Persuasion, and I eagerly await their next collaboration.
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573 reviews11 followers
May 3, 2021
4.5⭐️

A very interesting and intriguing story.
70 reviews3 followers
April 8, 2022
Half Agony - Ardent Hope


I have thought before that Anne Elliot sure could have used an Elizabeth Bennet in her corner. Mr Darcy's Persuasion gives us an inspired scenario of that what-if, when a close friendship is formed between the two. This worthy variation interweaves Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion during a surprisingly short period of time with satisfying, believable results. The characters actions feel true to their canon. Secondary characters are well drawn but do not overpower the continuing thread of D&E’s journey to HEA - although they do try! The nefarious scheme that binds Darcy seems unbreakable. I enjoyed the many turns of the story from beginning to end.

The ball at Netherfield is now a memory. Darcy has escaped the fascinating Elizabeth Bennet and the Bingley clan and settles in at Meadowbrook House, a property on the Kellynch estate of which he has secured lodgings for a time. He hopes the location and climate will help Georgiana recover from a lingering cold and residual effects of Ramsgate. He determines the change will also aid him in banishing incessant thoughts of Elizabeth, but his mind is owning that futility. It’s quite the shock when EB appears at Kellynch as a guest of Anne Elliot. Thank goodness the steadfast, gallant and delightfully irreverent Colonel Fitzwilliam has some leave time and joins his cousins!

As I’m tempted to spoilers, I’ll stop there - except that a snip of a D/E encounter happily continues to pop into memory. Divine prose to savor with tea:

Quote from Elizabeth: “There is a mystical air about this hour, Mr Darcy. Do you not agree? The half-night between darkness and light, where all is not as it seems".

The entire scene is a delight.

I enjoyed the fun and anticipation of following along on the blog as the authors shared the beginning chapters. Advise all to hang on tight for the books concluding romp!
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81 reviews14 followers
October 18, 2024
I expected this to follow the plots of the books more closely in combining the stories, which it didn't do....but it was very fun and creative. I felt it could have been shortened a little, but other than that it was a light, clean, sweet book perfect for Jane Austen fans.
205 reviews8 followers
March 12, 2021
Great Crossover

I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Seeing both Elizabeth and Darcy grow in their estimation of each other is so well done. There is enough angst caused by Jane, Sir Walter Elliot and Elizabeth Elliot for anyone. This is going into my favourites file tobe read again.
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304 reviews12 followers
May 17, 2021
4.5 stars rounded up to 5 stars.

Really great story and very unique compared to other PPFF that I’ve read in that Elizabeth’s family is hardly seen. In fact, Elizabeth’s mother and three younger sisters are nonexistent in the story. Only her father and Jane are mentioned and included - and they didn’t enter the story until the very last few pages. The major players are Darcy, Lizzy, Richard, Georgiana, Capt Wentworth, Miss Elizabeth Eliot and Sir Walter Eliot and Shepherd.

I’m not necessarily included spoilers but I’m putting a SPOILER WARNING HERE anyway.

I liked the friendship that developed between Anne and Elizabeth and how supportive they were for each other in their times of need.

Richard (Colonel Fitzwilliam) and Darcy are more like brothers than cousin, their relationship is very close and I always love a story where they have a strong, cloaks relationship with each other. I thought they were very well written.

Sir Walter was an ass! It was great to have such a villain in the story.

But my favorite part of the book was the last few chapters. I have to say, it was outright hilarious. Just when the company is finally able to leave Meadowbrook House and everyone is happy and in love, enters the various family members - Lady Catherine, Lord & Lady Matlock, Mr Bennet & Jane, the Gardiners…it was so funny and unexpected!
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240 reviews2 followers
April 30, 2021
This is definitely an interesting take, combining P&P with Persuasion. Although the beginning, with Elizabeth meeting Anne and becoming fast friends is a little contrived, the plot is interesting and we get a whole new take on both stories, although the focus is on Elizabeth and Darcy.

There are a lot of convenient encounters here that maybe could have been set up a bit better. Elizabeth also has a very rapid change of heart in a few weeks as opposed to several months in the original. I think some small changes could have helped on that front, as well.

Still, the story is interesting and we get to see various Austen characters together - there are even some references to Mansfield Park. It’s enjoyable and worth a read.
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Author 72 books604 followers
August 8, 2021
Great Austen Adaptation

I'm a lifelong fan of Jane Austen, with Pride & Prejudice and Persuasion being my two favorite of her novels. This was wonderful JAFF, made all the better by the connection with Mrs. Norris. Well done!
322 reviews4 followers
April 22, 2021
Audacious and Most Enjoyable

Bringing two remarkable heroines--Elizabeth Bennet and Anne Elliot--together at Kellynch, the authors have created a most satisfying female relationship as well as an enduring story of two sets of lovers and the obstacles they face.
234 reviews4 followers
April 20, 2021
I have a confession to make; I have never read Persuasion. I know, I know. Blasphemy! But I kept reading P&P variations instead. It is in my TBR still! But I know the broad strokes from film adaptations.

Still, I decided to give this book a chance. The premise was just too fun. Unfortunately, the book fell flat for me. The biggest weakness of this book is that it cannot quite decide how much of a Persuasion variation it wants to be. Plenty of the book is devoted to Darcy's and Elizabeth's perspectives, but we get very little from Anne or Frederick. But enough to make you think it is their story too. It makes for an awkward balance. I wanted it to either be fully P&P based or evenly split between the two.

I also found the basic conflict/plot a bit...well, silly. Darcy's forced betrothal was far-fetched on its own. Then adding in a public announcement, subsequent retraction, and new marriage (complete with every family member imaginable just showing up) within the span of a few days....it just felt downright ridiculous. The book had its lovely moments - especially between a wiser Anne and a stubborn Elizabeth - but I had been hoping for more from it.
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2,188 reviews156 followers
April 13, 2022
Unexpectedly exciting

For those readers who are familiar with both Pride and Prejudice and Persuasion, expect double the pleasure. The authors have combined characters from both stories in their tale.

The storyline uses these characters perfectly as Fitzwilliam Darcy and his sister, Georgiana, arrange to spend the winter in rented lodgings on the estate of Sir Walter Elliot in Somersetshire. A milder winter than is expected in Derbyshire will hopefully benefit Georgiana's health.

Elizabeth Bennet has found friendship with Anne Elliot and has been invited to visit Anne's home. This leads to an unanticipated meeting between Elizabeth and Darcy. Elizabeth holds Darcy in contempt, and Darcy is trying to forget Elizabeth and her harsh words.

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1,191 reviews29 followers
March 22, 2021
Entertaining

Wonderful writing and storytelling compel me to give this book 3 stars. These authors are clearly talented, and know how to construct a good yarn. Anne Elliot (from Persuasion) visits her good friend, Charlotte Lucas, and meets Elizabeth Bennett. Because of an illness in the Lucas family, Elizabeth is invited to take Charlotte's place and visit Anne at Kellynch.

Meanwhile, after the Netherfield ball, Darcy returns to London to find his sister, Georgiana, is sick, and needs a more healthy environment in which to recover, while at the same time he is desperate to put some space between himself and Elizabeth, who he can't get out of his thoughts. He leases a home on the grounds of Kellynch from Sir Walter Elliot for Georgiana's benefit, and thus is about to be reunited with Elizabeth, much to his surprise.

Of all the Jane Austen-created characters, I find Anne Elliot to be one of the most insipid. In this book, as in Persuasion, she is a timid and hesitant person, albeit she is sweet and kind. Her story with Captain Wentworth features prominently in this version, and I found myself getting annoyed with her manner when faced with nursing a very ill captain who needed her. Just when you would like her to show her inner strength, and the conviction of her devotion, she can't seem to do anything without encouragement from Elizabeth. The captain is gravely injured, is near death, and she can't seem to summon the courage to touch him and do whatever needs to be done. I certainly couldn't picture her eventually accompanying the captain on a ship, and enduring the hardships that would inevitably come.

Although the story is well done, this is one of those books that begins with a premise that is most unlikely, and ends with events that throw it completely off the rails. Anne Elliot visiting Charlotte at Lucas Lodge - unlikely. The arrival of the Bennetts, the Matlocks, the Gardiners, and Lady Catherine at the end - almost cartoonishly weird, and a disappointment in a book that is so nicely written. Up to that point, my worst complaint was that the story was a bit repetitious, and needlessly long. The thoughts and emotions of many characters were gone over ad nauseum. But when the events at the end occurred, I just had to shake my head and think that something went horribly wrong.

I recommend this book with reservations. I love these authors, and sort of automatically purchase whatever they create, as I know it will be quality work. Unfortunately, the storyline of this one disappointed me.

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Author 17 books75 followers
March 30, 2021
It's rare to find crossover stories between Jane Austen's books, but Cass Grafton and Ada Bright have done an excellent job! This story takes place in 1811, the year that Pride and Prejudice is set and a few years before Persuasion is set. Elizabeth Bennet becomes friends with Anne Elliot and is invited to stay at Kellynch. Meanwhile, Mr. Darcy is renting the dower house on the Kellynch estate. During this time, a shipwrecked and delirious Captain Wentworth shows up at Kellynch.

I could easily believe the natural friendship between Anne and Elizabeth. They seem to be perfect kindred spirits. It was also fun to see a different outcome play out for Anne and Wentworth, and a unique twist on the usual patterns for Elizabeth and Darcy. This was a delightful story that I thoroughly enjoyed, and I heartily recommend it to all fans of Jane Austen!
2,535 reviews46 followers
March 13, 2021
I don't believe I've ever seen a mash up of P&P with Persuasion. It was kind of fun to have the characters from both books together interacting and forming friendships. And enemies. Many of the bigger characters from both books are present at some point in the story or are at least discussed.

There is an element of intrigue as Darcy gets into a bit of a bind and much is discovered in twists and turns. Elizabeth must get over her prejudice but it doesn't come about as in canon. Basically, nothing in this story follows canon except the characters are the same with the same issues to be overcome. But with such a differing set up, the path to their happily ever after is very different. I found the plot imaginative and the characterization accurate. An enjoyable read.

Sex: no
Language: yes, mild
Violence: no
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