Dane

Daddies MC #1

by Lucky Moon

She's a Little baker. He's a Daddy Dom biker. But when her life's put in danger, he'll stop at nothing to protect her.

HARPER
Things can't get any worse.
I've been threatened, I'm sick, my job's in danger.
Then I run into him. Literally. He knocks me off my bicycle.
Six foot something of smokin' hot muscle and thick, dark ink.
A body to die for, an attitude so bad it makes me tremble and shake.
He's a biker, part of a secret club.
And now he's saying he's gonna claim me?
Protect me?
Regress me?
If I wasn't so fascinated, I'd be running for the hills.
But even if I ran, he'd catch me.

DANE
I'm not letting some Little distract me.
Regardless of how s*xy she is. Regardless of how cute she is.
I need to keep my eyes on the prize.
Someone's running drugs on my turf.
And that's not gonna fly.
Anyway, Harper's not my type.
She's too... perfect. Too beautiful. Too damn kind.
I don't deserve her.
But if that's the case, why can't I get her out of my head?
Just when I think I'm falling for her, I make a discovery that shocks me to my core.
And nothing will ever be the same.

Dane is a HOT, satisfying, full-length, Age Play biker romance novel featuring a couple of consenting adults who are perfect for each other. It includes spanking and other ABDL elements, a touch of discipline, a whirlwind of suspense, and a full-blooded Happy Ever After. Enjoy!

Genres: Romance, BDSM, M F Romance, Contemporary Romance, Steamy, Slow Burn, Contemporary

186 pages, Kindle Edition

Published January 31, 2021

About the author

Lucky Moon writes steamy age play romances. Her books are full of heat, heart, and very satisfying happy ever afters.

When she's not creating chemistry on a page, she's hanging out with her cats, taking forest walks, and trying to make the perfect taco. But whatever she's doing, she's always dreaming up new ways to give her readers exactly what they want. And then some...

Reviews

[Brooke · Rating 2 out of 5]

⭐️ 2 stars ⭐️

‘You’re gonna take whatever I give you, aren’t you?’

A friend of mine asked for a MF ageplay romance rec, but even if I’ve read quite a few MM, I had yet to read a straight one. So this one was for you, Francisco. ‪‪❤︎‬

I should’ve looked better for a good one, because this was not it. I didn’t have fun.
Bad plot, bad writing, mediocre smut, and even the ageplay (the only reason I picked this up) was lacking.

I’m telling you, I’ve got the bluest fucking balls in LA. No, scratch that—the bluest fucking balls in the whole country.

Same, Dane. The spice was a complete tease, the kink just there in name. Except for some caretaking, there weren’t any of the usual elements of ageplay I expected to see, which was the whole point. I didn’t care about the motorcycle club, the ‘twist’, the bakery, the side characters. I was just here for the smut, but am leaving disappointed.

CW and NSFW info (spoilers):
- Age play (no ABDL)
- Age gap?
- Mention of past bullying & kink shaming
- Mention of past child neglect
- Mention of parental abandonment
- Drug abuse (not MCs)
- Kidnapping
- Violence
- Cunnilingus + fingerfucking
- No condoms/creampie
- Vibrator
- Facefucking
- Spanking

[BelleLovesRomance · Rating 3 out of 5]

⭐️ 3.5/5 — Dane served major growly Daddy biker energy but the plot was revving hard without fully popping off. 🏍️💥😤

🌶 2.5/5 — Cock slaps and perineum massages? Appreciated. But I was still left thirsty AF for way more filthy heat. 🍆🥲💦

💭 MY RAMBLINGS 💭

Okay babes, I just finished riding with Dane from the Daddies MC and it was a chaotic, adorable, kinda mid whirlwind 🙈🏍️💖

This man is a bearded, tattooed, possessive DADDY who’ll slap his heavy cock across your face one minute and promise to destroy anyone who hurts his Little the next. Harper is the sweetest secret Little baker finally letting her stuffie-loving soul breathe and the second she hit him with that soft “Daddy” I was straight-up MELTING 😭💕🫠

The age play hit right — all the caretaking, light discipline, “let Daddy handle everything” vibes, and gentle regression moments were pure comfort. The MC suspense actually kept me hooked too — shady deals, betrayals, threats, the whole “will they get kidnapped” drama had me flipping pages like a madwoman 🕵🏻‍♀️👀

BUT bestie… the spice. The spice was playing hide and seek. We got some solid oral worship, face cock-slapping, and ball play (respect 👏🏻), but I needed so much more. More scenes. More intensity. More Daddy growling filthy shit while wrecking her. It teased me and then left me high and dry 😩🍆

Still, the protective “you’re mine now little girl” energy, the found family MC chaos, and watching Harper bloom in her Little space had me giggling and blushing in public like an idiot 🤭🏍️

Final verdict:
A cute, sweet DDLg biker romance that’s heavier on the snuggles and suspense than straight smut. Solid if you want soft age play with motorcycle danger on the side. Not perfect, but I’m still thinking about that Daddy energy days later 🫂💞

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⚠️ Detailed spoilers below ⛔️

RC and MCs:
🏍🍰 MF
🏍🍰 Dane O'Brien yo and Harper yo
🏍🍰 Dane: VP of the Daddies Motorcycle Club. Owner of The Milk Shed bar. It's also the headquarter of the Daddies MC. He's also a former criminal.
🏍🍰 Harper: Baker
🏍🍰 Dane: Daddy dom, black beard, dark brown eyes, scar on his cheek, muscular, tatted-up (torso, shoulders), tan complexion
🏍🍰 Harper: Submissive, sweet little, loose ringlets dark red (auburn) hair, blue eyes, freckles across her nose and cheeks, pale complexion

Genre, tropes, and microtropes:
🏍🍰 MF contemporary romantic suspense
🏍🍰 Motorcycle club (MC club) backgrounds
🏍🍰 Biker x baker
🏍🍰 Meet-cute accident (bike crash)
🏍🍰 DDlg
🏍🍰 Age play / age regression
🏍🍰 Light ABDL elements
🏍🍰 Awakening Daddy Dom (triggered by the FMC being a little)
🏍🍰 Closeted, sweet little FMC
🏍🍰 Protective, caretaker MMC
🏍🍰 Possessive MMC
🏍🍰 Damsel in distress
🏍🍰 Instant chemistry
🏍🍰 Forced proximity (caregiving during illness)
🏍🍰 Betrayal by boss
🏍🍰 Rival gang danger
🏍🍰 Found family (MC club)
🏍🍰 Grumpy/sunshine
🏍🍰 Touch her and die
🏍🍰 Found family
🏍🍰 Mine
🏍🍰 Pet names: Babygirl, sweetheart, baba, honey, darling

Safety info:
🏍🍰 Angst: Low to medium
🏍🍰 OPD: No
🏍🍰 Cheating/sharing: No
🏍🍰 Third act breakup: No
🏍🍰 Ending: HEA
🏍🍰 Epilogue: No
🏍🍰 POV: Dual, 1st person
🏍🍰 Series structure: Interconnected standalone

Spice and kinks:
Daddy kink, DDlg, age play (little, cake-shaped stuffie), light ABDL elements (mention of wearing diaper in the past), power exchange, spanking, fingerfucking, cunnilingus (tonguefucking, pussy licking, cock slapping (cock-on-face slapping), blowjob, deepthroating, ball play / ball suckin, perineum massage (taint stimulation), hair pulling, face fucking, cum swallowing, sex toy (vibrator), no condom, creampie

CW/TW:
Explicit sexual content, power exchange, detailed mention of past bullying, public shaming, trauma, violence, drugs trafficking, drug addicts parents, child neglect, being thrown in to the system / foster home, gunfights, alcohol consumptions.

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Quotes: ⚠️ Spoilers ⛔️

There’s no cruelty, no nasty smirk. His expression just softens, and he lifts a hand to my shoulder, squeezes gently. ‘You’re safe, Babygirl. I’m not gonna let anything bad happen to you. No fucking chance.’
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‘I’d love to meet her.’
She looks surprised. ‘You wanna meet my friends?’
‘Sweetheart, maybe you don’t get it yet,’ I say, dropping my guard. ‘I kinda like you, and I wanna know everything there is to know about you.’
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‘Sorry Daddy,’ she says. It’s like she’s reacting on instinct, like she’s not really in control of what she’s saying. And that’s the way I like it. I don’t make a big deal about the fact that she called me Daddy — Hawk told me not to — but inside, my heart’s going berserk.
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I mean, look, I like cake as much as the next man, and Harper’s was insanely delicious, but mine was not so good. Dry, but at the same time, weirdly undercooked, I still ate some, mainly to get a laugh out of Harper. To be honest, I’d eat just about fucking anything if it got a laugh out of that girl.
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‘You know we only kissed like, once last night.’
Damn. I hope she hasn’t been worried all night about this. ‘Yep,’ I say.
‘Is it because you never ever ever want to kiss my gross lips ever again?’ She’s smiling, playing with me. I love her like this. So free and happy.
‘That’s it,’ I say. ‘You got me. My evil plan to never kiss you again. You worked it out.’
‘Mwahahaha. And now, it’s time to strike.’
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‘I don’t care what your fucking makeup looks like. I don’t care if you don’t wear any. All I care about, is that I’m with you, and you’re with me.’
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‘I don’t fucking deserve you, Harper. When I think about losing you, I just…’ He trails off. I’ve never heard him sound like this before. Never heard him sound vulnerable. ‘I never used to be scared of dying,’ he finally says. Didn’t care about it. Always thought that when it was my time, it would just be my time.’ He rubs the sponge on one thigh, then the second. ‘Now though, I do care. Because I can’t deal with the thought that I might never see you again. And I don’t want to think of you without me. Because I need you, and you need me.’
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‘I’m gonna fuck you now, Harper. Gonna make you mine.’ He steps up so that he’s close. ‘Unbuckle my belt.’ His voice is as serious as an assault rifle.
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‘You belong to me. I belong to you.’
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‘I just want you to slap my little face with your cock.’
Before I say anything, she kneels down, looks up at me with those angelic blue eyes. ‘Please Daddy. I’ll be sooo nice to you in return.’

I grab my cock, rub the tip against her cheek. ‘That’s what you want, is it?’

She nods. ‘Just want to feel that heavy dick against my cheek.’

‘Like this?’ I say. I twist my hips and flick my thick cock against her face — not too hard, but it makes a satisfying slap sound.

‘Thank you, Daddy,’ she says, grinning wide.

I flick my cock again, sending the tip to Harper’s face, but this time, before it hits, she turns her head round, and catches the tip of my manhood in her pretty little mouth.

‘Naughty girl,’ I say, as she starts to suck. She looks up at me, bats her eyelids, and takes me even further into her mouth. ‘Fucking hell,’ I say. Harper smiles, sucks more, lifts her hand up and cups my balls. The sensation is crazy. Her tongue flicks over my cock as my balls throb in her hand. She gently rolls them and then, she strokes the space behind my ball sack, massaging my perineum, making my cock pulse and throb.

‘Where’d ya learn to do that?’ I pant, as she takes my dick from her mouth. She kisses the tip, licks my shaft, then pops my balls into her mouth. She keeps moving her hand over my cock, pumping gently as her lips flit over my skin, making me hard as a rock, and fit to burst.
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‘You taste good, Daddy.’
‘What did I do to deserve you?’ I ask.
‘You saved me,’ she says, simply. ‘Not my life. My soul.’
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Honey,’ Dane says, sliding the key into the ignition. ‘I want you to know something. I meant what I said back there.’ He turns, looks back at me. His face is full of complex emotion: sadness, pride, relief, intense, burning affection. ‘I love you, Harper.’
It knocks the wind from me. Then, his kiss puts it back.
‘I love you too,’ I reply.
‘Always and forever.’
‘Always and forever.’
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[KittyLuvr · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoyed this one a lot.
Loved how protective Dane was & his realization he wanted to be & was, a Daddy Dom.
Harper was extra sweet, kind & loving but still had spirit, drive & ambition.
A lovely romance.

[arielle · Rating 3 out of 5]

I actually finished reading this yesterday but forgot to update it or even remember to mark it as a Cr but it was lame, I wanted to skip it but I didn't

[Ally · Rating 2 out of 5]

I ended up skimming the last 50% 😩

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[ashlee · Rating 5 out of 5]

Dane - Daddies MC Book 1

This was such a cute read. Heavy on the MC with a little dash of an innocent baker. Definitely a series I’d like to continue.

[Tammy · Rating 4 out of 5]

Harper’s life isn’t the best at the moment, she is being threatened, she is sick and could be in danger of losing her job. When she bumps into Dane, her little side comes screaming out. Can Dane keep his little safe while he tries to rid his turf of drugs? Sizzling chemistry, loads of drama and very hot. I liked it.

[Tjasa · Rating 1 out of 5]

What did I just read?? The summary sounded pretty good but from there everything went down. Even though I finished the book (in hopes it would get better) I do not recommend it.

[Rebecca Grove · Rating 5 out of 5]

Harper is a Little in the closet who is traying to make her dream of being a baker come true. She has been working odd jobs in a bakery but finally her boss is giving her a chance to bake a cake for a customer. However she is trying to bake and deliver a cake when she is sick. She does manage to finish the cake but on her way to deliver the cake on her bike, she has an accident. A man on a motorcycle hits her bike and she and the cake go flying. Harper is barely conscious due to her fall and her illness. She wakes up later with a big biker intent on taking care of her. While she is sick she calls Dane Daddy which panics her so she runs away back home.

Dane is part of an MC called Daddy Doms. He doesn't think he is a Daddy but he feels the need to protect the innocent like the rest of the club does. He is in a hurry to get to an important MC meeting so he is driving on the sidewalk. He is distracted for a second and runs into Harper on her bike. He feels really guilty and nurses her back to health. Harper surprises him by the protective feelings she inspires. When she leaves him, he regrets not getting her contact information. A little while later, he and a couple of other Daddy Doms are investigating some drug trafficking in their city. They get a tip that a big delivery is being dropped off at a certain address. To his surprise the only delivery made was done by a familiar girl on a restored bicycle. Dane steps in to find out what exactly Harper is doing and why.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Beverly McCall · Rating 4 out of 5]

Dane is the first book in Lucky Moon’s Daddies MC series. In this book, readers get to know Harper and Dane. She works for a bakery with aspirations of owning her own bakery. He owns a bar, The Milk Shed and is the VP of a Daddies MC. Both Harper and Dane are emotionally wounded souls. Harper, a submissive, is manipulated by her employer, Mr. Frank. He is mean and verbally abusive. Unknown to Harper, Mr. Frank is involved with drug dealing and uses the innocent Harper as a mule. Dane is a DD. Both, Dane, and his MC are devoted to protecting women and helping the vulnerable and little innocent Harper falls into this category. So, when Destiny brings them together sparks fly awakening Dane’s protective and possessive streaks. What lies ahead for Dane and Harper? Can Dane keep Harper safe? Will Dane and Harper become a couple? Will their romantic journey be smooth or bumpy? Want to find out what happens, then you must read this book.
I enjoyed the attraction and banter between Harper and Dane. I appreciated Ms. Moon’s skill in using literary devices like dialog, dual point of view, and descriptive language. Her strong dialog contributes to moving her plot along at a smooth pace. Additionally, it provides reader with an insight into their psyches. I like how she infuses suspense through antagonists like Mr. Frank, a pawn of the notorious and vicious President of the Blood F¬__r’s MC, the anonymous Satan. Not to spoil it, I will not expand on this character other than to say his role is pivotal to this plot. Well done, Ms. Moon!

[MN Book Lady · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book wasn’t terrible, just maybe not for me.

Harper is a closeted little due to a bad experience as a teenager. Who tries to keep working while sick. And meets Dane when she runs into him, having something click inside him with a need to protect her.

Dane never thought of himself as a Daddy Dom, but Harper’s little side calls to him. But when a rival gang is selling and trafficking drugs in their city, Dane and the rest of the Daddies MC will do whatever it takes to make the city safe again.

Dane and Harper get their happy ending in this stand-alone book in a series.

I appreciate that Harper didn’t regress too far as a little nor did Dane want her to. And although this book didn’t resonate with me, I liked the idea of a motorcycle club that’s also Daddy Doms wanting to protect their littles.

[Nate · Rating 5 out of 5]

I enjoyed Dane & Harper's book. Good characters. Great chemistry. It was full of drama & entertainment. I received a free copy of the book. And am voluntarily leaving my honest opinion.

[Assh · Rating 2 out of 5]

Dane O'Brien et Harper
Motard et boulangère
Daddy dom et girl

Angeline (Harley de Dane)

😔 Lecture en diagonale a partir du chapitre 15/29
Déçu, intrigue intéressante mais tournure inattendue et décevante.
Parfois on dirait que je lis un manuel de développement personnel axe sur des conseils de psycho. C'est non pour moi.
Et parfois on dirait que je lis la plume d'un enfant précipité qui a réponse à tout.

📖
Elle est une petite boulangère. Il est un motard à la Papa Dom. Mais lorsque sa vie est en danger, il ne recule devant rien pour la protéger.

HARPER ___
Les choses ne peuvent pas être pires.
J'ai été menacé, je suis malade, mon travail est en danger.
Et puis je le croise. Littéralement. Il me fait tomber de mon vélo. Un mètre quatre-vingt de muscles brûlants et une encre noire épaisse.
Un corps à tomber par terre, une attitude si mauvaise qu'elle me fait trembler et trembler.
C'est un motard, il fait partie d'un club secret.
Et maintenant il dit qu'il va me revendiquer ?
Me protéger ?
Me faire régresser ?
Si je n'étais pas aussi fasciné, je courrais vers les collines.
Mais même si je courais, il me rattraperait.

DANE ___
Je ne laisserai pas une petite fille me distraire.
Peu importe à quel point elle est sexy. Peu importe à quel point elle est mignonne.
Je dois garder les yeux fixés sur l'objectif.
Quelqu'un fait circuler de la drogue sur mon territoire.
Et ça ne marchera pas.
De toute façon, Harper n'est pas mon type.
Elle est trop... parfaite. Trop belle. Trop gentille.
Je ne la mérite pas.
Mais si c'est le cas, pourquoi ne puis-je pas la sortir de ma tête ?
Juste au moment où je pense que je suis en train de tomber amoureux d'elle, je fais une découverte qui me choque au plus profond de moi-même.
Et rien ne sera plus jamais comme avant.

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🖋
Oh mon Dieu ! Je devrais absolument faire un gâteau aux escargots. Les escargots sont en quelque sorte mon animal spirituel. Petits. Lents. Mignons. Visqueux.

OK, je ne suis pas visqueux, mais peut-être que je suis ces autres mots.

Bon, je suppose que parfois je suis visqueux. Mais pas toujours. Pas visqueux comme un escargot, en tout cas. Juste visqueux comme un humain. C'est dégoûtant.


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« Harper, ce gâteau ne va pas se décorer tout seul, Babygirl ! »

Je lève les yeux vers Pudding. Il est toujours assis sur le rebord de la fenêtre, sans bouger ni parler. Mais on dirait qu'il parle.

Ma tête bat à tout rompre à chaque battement de cœur. J'ai l'impression que quelqu'un me brise le crâne avec un marteau au rythme de mon pouls. Je sais que Pudding ne parle pas vraiment, c'est juste mon imagination. Après tout, les peluches en forme de gâteau avec de grands yeux globuleux ne peuvent pas parler. Tout le monde le sait.

Même dans les meilleures conditions, mon imagination est un peu débordante. Je pense que c'est pour cela que je n'ai jamais eu autant de succès à l'école. Ce n'est pas que je sois bête (même si je ne me considère pas comme intelligente), mais j'ai toujours trouvé impossible de me concentrer. Comment est-on censé résoudre des équations simultanées quand on pourrait rêver que des personnages de dessins animés remplacent tous nos professeurs ? Comment est-on censé analyser la langue d'Herman Melville quand on pourrait s'imaginer nager aux côtés d'une baleine rose au large des côtes de Madagascar ?
Comment êtes-vous censé décorer un gâteau, alors que vous pourriez avoir une conversation imaginaire avec votre peluche ?

« Non, non, non ! » dis-je, essayant de me sortir de ce rêve provoqué par la fièvre. « Harper doit travailler ! »

Je superpose la deuxième couche de génoise, je dépose une nouvelle couche de crème au beurre, puis j'ajoute la dernière couche de gâteau. Il est maintenant temps de recouvrir le gâteau de miettes. Il s'agit d'une fine couche de glaçage qui s'étend sur tout le gâteau, pour empêcher le gâteau de se dessécher et sceller toutes les miettes. Je remplis à nouveau la poche à douille et j'en verse une bonne quantité sur les côtés du gâteau, avant de commencer à tourner le cylindre maintenant rose vif sur la planche à gâteau.

En retournant le gâteau, je lisse le glaçage avec un grand grattoir pour obtenir une finition solide et uniforme. Cette partie du processus est si importante et si facile à rater que je dois me concentrer pleinement. Je sens ma langue sortir, tandis que mon front se plisse sous l'effort.

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[Samantha · Rating 5 out of 5]

I received an ARC from the author thru Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving my review. I really enjoyed the love story between Dane and Harper. She is trying to deliver a cake for her horrible boss. She is sick and hauling it on her bicycle when her and Dane collide. He is rushing back for a special vote with the club. Needless to say, neither of them make it to their locations. He takes her home, cares for her and has her bike fixed. They have a lot of chemistry between them. His inner Daddy calls to her Little regardless of what they admit. They both feel the loss when she leaves. The drug problems become issues for them both and brings them back together. Harper is in desperate need of a Daddy to watch out for her. Dane needs to protect her and get the drugs stopped. Their story is full of drama, danger, betrayal, lust and love. I thought that they were perfect for each other. I am really looking forward to the next book in the Daddies MC series. This is one of my favorite books written by Lucky

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Fiona · Rating 5 out of 5]

I absolutely love reading any of Lucky Moon’s books. I love how finding a Little brings a Daddy Dom from being a mean and tough man to being a marshmallow on the inside. I love the excitement and all the drama that happens in the stories and how there is an element of danger in Lucky Moon’s MC stories have the good guys winning the day. She brings all of her characters to life on the pages of the book, especially with Dane who is a hard arse and grumpy old man. When he meets Harper he knocks her off her bike and he takes her to his place to recuperate. Harper is a cake maker who is also a little but she’s hiding the little part of herself from the rest of the world because of the torment she had as a teenager from her peers. It’s a great story and really drag you in and gives you a feel good HEA ending.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Daisy Sauceda · Rating 4 out of 5]

So if you like to read about age play or littles than this book will be right up your alley. So we have Dane who is a member of the Daddies MC and he seems really rough and gruff. However, as you read about him you see a different side of him than what your initial assessment is. So he has yet found a little that intrigues him until he has a run in with Harper. Like literally but it was not all her fault. Poor Harper is just in her own world and has no clue what could be going on around her. Which is how she ends up in the middle of some trouble. Dane does not like that one bit and steps up to protect her and he finds out more about himself and realizes that he loves being a Daddy dom to Harper. Their relationship is cute and undeniable. Can Dane coax Harper out of her shell and accept who she is? Will Dane be able to protect her? Overall this was a pretty good book to read.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Syd Springer · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was an awesome book! I loved Dane and Harper! Harper has had rough life and is need of a Daddy but with history, is afraid to come out as a little. Dane, is a rough biker with a rougher past and didn't know that DD/lg lifestyle was for him until he laid eyes on Harper. These two are drawn together after an accident but then go their separate ways until fate throws them back together. With everything going on around Harper and Dane, these two build trust and find that they are perfect for each other. I loved the drama, steam, side relationships, banter, love, twists and turns, action, and suspense that this book offered and I can't wait for more of Daddies, MC! I highly recommend this book and Lucky Moon as a fantastic author!

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Margaret · Rating 5 out of 5]

Harper is knocked off her bicycle by biker Dane a member of Daddies MC.
Harper had been given a chance to make a cake for delivery but as she was cycling to the delivery address she is knocked off her bicycle. Hurrying to a meeting of the club to vote Dane hits a beautiful woman pedaling a bicycle and seeing her prone on the street he gets off his bike. She comes to but seem disoriented so he gets her onto his bike and takes her back to his place and calls the club medic. Dane wants this woman who is showing signs that she is a Little ideal for his Daddy Dom self but he is trying to find those pushing drugs in the city so wonders if is a bad time to be distracted.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Marcie · Rating 2 out of 5]

This is my first read by Lucky Moon and it was sweet - don’t get me wrong - but there was some stuff that I couldn’t get around. Dane was a sweet, gentle giant when it came to Harper and he truly had a heart of gold. Harper though? She made me want to claw my eyes out because she was in “little” mode the entire book - I just can’t with that, role play is one thing and this wasn’t role play for her. The story itself has a ton of potential, the plot was interesting and I enjoyed how the MC played into the role play life of all the guys. There were a few holes in it, but things were patched up towards the end. This is a story that some may enjoy, it just wasn’t my cup of tea.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Cat H · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.6 stars.
This was an ok Daddy Dom romance. Not great though.
There were multiple minor spelling errors throughout the book that could’ve easily been caught by another round of editing.
The secret bad guy was so obvious throughout I wanted to shout. And all the little foreshadowing moments leading up to the reveal were way over the top. They got a bit annoying by the time we get to the climax of the book.
The romance was fine. The sex was probably the best part, but even that wasn’t the best.

I think that’s just what it comes down to. I have pretty high standards when it comes to age play books and this just didn’t completely cut it.
I haven’t decided yet if I’ll read Rock’s book, but probably not since he wasn’t my favorite of the side characters.

[Danielle Graves · Rating 4 out of 5]

oh Daddy Dane….

Two book tropes that I love to read are motorcycle gang romances and relationships which follow the DDLg path and this wonderful book combined both of those-

Dane is the first book in the Daddies mc series and we are introduced, to Dane and Harper as they explore both their relationship and their roles as a Daddy Dom and. Little whilst trying to overcome outside risks like rival gangs, double crossing and evil exes.

We are introduced to the Daddies MC club and learn about their members and the gangs dynamic which sets everything up for the following books in the series.

The storyline is gripping with just the right mixture of Daddy Dom and danger. A really enjoyable read.

[Nanadeb · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sweet DD/lg romantic suspense.

Sweet little innocent, country bumpkin, Harper, and big, strong, new Daddy Dane are so cute together. Also, liked Rock and Ripper too. Her friend Felicity seemed nice as Harper's friend but was dippy to me- like she was just a silly-themed, wannabe writer. Some things didn't quite jive like Harper's relationship with her boss before and after the big crisis. The handling of the drugs and crisis seemed muddled and not well thought out, but the love story was very sweet. There were many typos that I stopped and highlighted too, so overall this was a maybe a 3.5 star book. And that's being generous. Nothing in this book makes me want to read the next one. Sorry.

[Trish · Rating 4 out of 5]

Sweet story.

The characters are interesting, and our main players, Harper, and Dane are very sweet as a couple. Harper's life is pretty sad, on an existing in L.A., life. She's barely making it, on the barely minimum wage. Her apartment if you can call it that, has her pretty much living and sleeping in the kitchen. Her boss is horrible to her, and all she wanted was to prove she can bake and decorate as well as the others in the company. Dane has issues with confidence around the others in his MC club, and Bar. Almost running over Harper with his Motorcycle, while she is riding her bike changes both of their lives. You can't help getting caught up with all the problems facing them all. Trish. A.

[Jill · Rating 5 out of 5]

Harper is afraid to show her Little because few understand the concept but after colliding with Dane she discovers the Daddy she had longer for. As their relationship progresses, danger has found it way to them and the bike club Dane belongs to. Dane and the other members of his club are fighting to keep drugs out but the drug leader is the last person they would have suspected. I enjoyed the story, it is fast paced and full of action. The Little part of the story is well written and shows how Harper thrived once she found her Daddy. This is a story worth reading and I would highly recommend it.
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[Coastie Mom · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is the first book I have read from this author and I have to say, this was not what I was expecting. This is also the first book I have read about “Littles”. Needless to say, I was very intrigued by what I learned! There is drama, chemistry, loyalty, deception and passion in this story. It was a great story with some great characters who you find yourself rooting for and there were a few times I got a little emotional over some things that happened – this is when you know it’s a great book when your emotions come into play! I cannot wait to read more from Lucy Moon!

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[Amy · Rating 5 out of 5]

Lucky Moon has quickly become a favorite author so I am always watching for new releases. I was so excited to read her newest book, Dane. Harper and Dane had amazing chemistry. I am so glad this is the first book of the series because that means there is more to come. Harper works for Superstar Frosting. On her way to deliver a very important cake, she literally runs into Dane on her bike. Dane is a member of the Daddies MC and his club is trying to figure out the increasing drug problem plaguing their town. This is a great beginning to this series and if you enjoy age/play DD/lg romance you will love Harper and Dane's story.

[Shifty Bugger · Rating 5 out of 5]

Loved the book it was great, the story was written well and the characters were interesting. Harper has had it rough growing up and needs a Daddy but what has happened in the past is scared to show her little side. Dane, a rough bad boy biker unsure whether DD/lg lifestyle was for him until he laid eyes on Harper. They keep bumping into each other they build a relationship, which they grow a strong bond with the trust of each other. I loved the drama, hot and steamy, twists and turns, action, suspense and a HEA.

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[Diane · Rating 4 out of 5]

Daddy Dane

Harper is a baker and is good at it. She is sick but pushes through it and then takes her bicycle to deliver the cake. Also she has a secret, she identifies as a Little but nobody knows. Dane is on his motorcycle and is late to a meeting. As luck would have it they collide. Harper is hurt and Dane takes her home and proceeds to look after her. From there they develop a thing for each other. His club is Motorcycle Daddies. Most members have littles. There is more afoot than they both know. Danger is around them. Find out all the secrets as you read. Great read!

[schafer · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5 stars
believe me when i say i’m relieved this book is finally over, seriously i was going to dnf around half way in cuz first half of this book feel like 2 stars to me but the second half is definitely better. the writing in this book is a bit meh to me tbh, especially the use of ‘ instead of “ but i think it’s because this is this author’s earlier work since i checked out her newer work, and the writing is definitely better (i only browsed a few pages lmao) anyway, the writing in this book could definitely be better, it was a. little insufferable to me but i’ll definitely try to read her newer books though