Tw/// attempted suicide
I did not enjoy this book at all. A lot of that has to do with my own preferences but the writing itself was not that good and i also had a particular issue with how one aspect was handled.
I’ll start with the good things; the beginning. The first line itself was a great opener and the tone of the writing felt like it was leading up to a great plot.
Unfortunately the plot was a copy and paste of MULTIPLE other books from the ya romance genre and had a lot more focus on how besotted the main characters were after just ONE meeting. Yes there was a terrible case of insta love and thats one sure way to make me lose interest in a book in one go. The particular nuance in that trope just had me laughing, someone who’s lived MULTIPLE lives for centuries, meets this person for A WEEK AND SUDDENLY “in all my lives, ive never loved someone like you.” I STARTED LAUGHING INSTANTLY. LIKE HOW????? love doesnt occur in such a small amount of time😭. As for the dialogue, it was downright cringey, and the banter was worse. One of the reasons i felt this way probably is because there was no depth to the characters. If characters had depth, no matter how cringey their dialogue is, I’d appreciate it as part of their personality, but due to the lack of actual depth, the dialogue and banter just felt forced and honestly irrelevant. The scifi element too was barely explored. The concept; while a very frequently used trope, is something i still enjoy to read a lot and I wish we got more backstory with it.
Now with the issue. One of the characters attempted suicide and yes he was talked out of it, but the thought process of the mc regarding this situation was “i thought you were crazy” and “deranged”. And the author actually made it a laughing gig???? It urks me that something so serious was dealt this particular way. Not only did it feel forced, but also it was used for comedic effect?? I don’t think it should have been handled that way.
Overall, i think the author had the potential to make this a truly great story, but execution of the idea was too generic and for me, simply boring.
Note: i Got an ARC from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.