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Hell to Pay #2
Chaos in Hell
If God thinks he can keep me from my demon princes he has another thing coming.
I've woken up in Heaven as I wanted when I first passed, but it's definitely not what I want now. Jehovah--or God as most know him--is holding me captive for more reasons than one. To mock and hurt Lucifer, stop his sons from falling in love with me, and to cause general chaos between the three realms. A war brews right over the horizon as I fight against my feelings for Jehovah and dive back to where I belong. . . with my demons.
Not only will this affect Heaven and Hell but also the human world. As a prophecy unfolds, enemies turn to friends, and bonds become stronger all I can think is that the fight between good and evil is a lot more complicated than it seems. That, paired with my training, makes everything feel impossible to carry.
Will I be strong enough to stop my own prophecy before it destroys Heaven and Hell alike?
I've woken up in Heaven as I wanted when I first passed, but it's definitely not what I want now. Jehovah--or God as most know him--is holding me captive for more reasons than one. To mock and hurt Lucifer, stop his sons from falling in love with me, and to cause general chaos between the three realms. A war brews right over the horizon as I fight against my feelings for Jehovah and dive back to where I belong. . . with my demons.
Not only will this affect Heaven and Hell but also the human world. As a prophecy unfolds, enemies turn to friends, and bonds become stronger all I can think is that the fight between good and evil is a lot more complicated than it seems. That, paired with my training, makes everything feel impossible to carry.
Will I be strong enough to stop my own prophecy before it destroys Heaven and Hell alike?
- GenresDemonsParanormalRomance
295 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 19, 2021
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September 15, 2021
Aaliyah did not know what to expect when she ascended to heaven, but her conversion into an angel has been extraordinary as well as her progression as a celestial being, thanks to the goodness and love that dwells in her heart. She is no longer the lonely girl who did not want to cling to anyone to avoid suffering. Now she has the love of many people around her, only none of them knew how much they were in danger. I never imagined that ending. I'm still in shock
October 28, 2022
Good premise
The story itself is good. What is so distracting are the problems created by the writer. There are so many spelling and grammatical errors, it is distracting. Add to that the immature characters, and it becomes annoying to read. Of course, if you eliminate all of the excess noise created by the characters and reveal the true substance, it would be a much shorter book. I find myself skipping over all the nonsense to pick out the nuggets worth reading. I am tempted to edit it myself, and sent it back to the author. Thank goodness it is a Kindle Unlimited offering!
The story itself is good. What is so distracting are the problems created by the writer. There are so many spelling and grammatical errors, it is distracting. Add to that the immature characters, and it becomes annoying to read. Of course, if you eliminate all of the excess noise created by the characters and reveal the true substance, it would be a much shorter book. I find myself skipping over all the nonsense to pick out the nuggets worth reading. I am tempted to edit it myself, and sent it back to the author. Thank goodness it is a Kindle Unlimited offering!
June 8, 2025
Verrrrrrry slow burn
Being a RH I expected It to have more...... comming togetherness then 1 time in 2 books
Though thankfully it was still interesting enough to keep reading
Being a RH I expected It to have more...... comming togetherness then 1 time in 2 books
Though thankfully it was still interesting enough to keep reading
August 6, 2024
This book starts immediately after the last one in the aftermath of Allie’s second death. She is now an angel in heaven, who basically has to relearn to everything that comes along with being an angel. I’ve seen this before with characters when they do something in one book and when you get to know that character you think back to the beginning and you can’t fathom how they acted I’m putting Jehovah in this category the way he acted at the end of the first book seems very out of character for who he actually is. I understand the whole self fulfilling prophecy concept of it, but I really don’t like when authors do that.
This book had pretty much all to do with heaven and that’s run there the growing relationship between Allie and Jehovah and a little bit more of the relationship aspects of her and her three mates at this point I’m a little confused as to the relationship with Jehovah and Lucifer And Allie is going to play into that relationship. Book one had to do with hell book 2 had to do with heaven in book 3 is going to be interesting book
This book had pretty much all to do with heaven and that’s run there the growing relationship between Allie and Jehovah and a little bit more of the relationship aspects of her and her three mates at this point I’m a little confused as to the relationship with Jehovah and Lucifer And Allie is going to play into that relationship. Book one had to do with hell book 2 had to do with heaven in book 3 is going to be interesting book
June 25, 2023
4.25★
Seguimos con la trilogía de fantasía donde luego de ese trágico final en el primer libro, la protagonista debe acostumbrarse a su nueva vida como ángel, aprender a entrenar con las alas, los cambios, sus nuevos compañeros y con el líder que fue el que le arrebato su vida anterior y a sus príncipes.
Me gustó este libro, nos da un nuevo enfoque de el "villano", podemos ver el progreso de algunos protagonistas, ver y conocer a fondo a otros, aprender más de la profecía, forjar nuevas amistades y nuevos enamoramientos, entre otras cosas. Es un libro divertido y una muy buena continuación del primero, es fácil de leer y con otro plow twist que tampoco ví venir, amo como la autora sabe desarrollar la trama y dar justo lo que se necesita.
Seguimos con la trilogía de fantasía donde luego de ese trágico final en el primer libro, la protagonista debe acostumbrarse a su nueva vida como ángel, aprender a entrenar con las alas, los cambios, sus nuevos compañeros y con el líder que fue el que le arrebato su vida anterior y a sus príncipes.
Me gustó este libro, nos da un nuevo enfoque de el "villano", podemos ver el progreso de algunos protagonistas, ver y conocer a fondo a otros, aprender más de la profecía, forjar nuevas amistades y nuevos enamoramientos, entre otras cosas. Es un libro divertido y una muy buena continuación del primero, es fácil de leer y con otro plow twist que tampoco ví venir, amo como la autora sabe desarrollar la trama y dar justo lo que se necesita.
February 26, 2022
Ahhhh!! Love it so much!
This book continued the bad@$$ery - Aaliyah goes through all these trials and tribulations and STILL comes out on top. She's funny, kind, sarcastic and doesn't take any nonsense. The relationships between her and the angels AND Jehovah makes me smile. Super wholesome.
I love reading the men's point of views - I learned so much more about them and I literally need them to be my boyfriends irl 😅
This book continued the bad@$$ery - Aaliyah goes through all these trials and tribulations and STILL comes out on top. She's funny, kind, sarcastic and doesn't take any nonsense. The relationships between her and the angels AND Jehovah makes me smile. Super wholesome.
I love reading the men's point of views - I learned so much more about them and I literally need them to be my boyfriends irl 😅
August 25, 2023
Ame profundamente la forma en que hacen ver a Jehová y la relación que se desarrolla entre ellos me parece tan bonita.
Adonis es mi favorito de los príncipes, pero definitivamente tengo debilidad por Lucifer.
Realmente me gustaría que sucediera algo entre ellos, pero entiendo que él solo ha amado a Eva y sería cruel que esté con ella solo por eso.
Aun así, con la sinopsis del siguiente libro mis esperanzas de que suceda algo entre ellos, vuelven a crecer.
Me encanto este libro.
Adonis es mi favorito de los príncipes, pero definitivamente tengo debilidad por Lucifer.
Realmente me gustaría que sucediera algo entre ellos, pero entiendo que él solo ha amado a Eva y sería cruel que esté con ella solo por eso.
Aun así, con la sinopsis del siguiente libro mis esperanzas de que suceda algo entre ellos, vuelven a crecer.
Me encanto este libro.
February 27, 2021
😇💜💛💙💚😈
OMMFG I'm in love with this series and I cannot wait to see what happens next!! WTH happened??!! Crap definitely hit the fan with that ending. So I'm really hoping that she doesn't just mate/💖 the demon prince's because I think she needs to have Lucifer and God as part of her Mate's/💖!! Please let her fall and have all 5 😇/😈!!
OMMFG I'm in love with this series and I cannot wait to see what happens next!! WTH happened??!! Crap definitely hit the fan with that ending. So I'm really hoping that she doesn't just mate/💖 the demon prince's because I think she needs to have Lucifer and God as part of her Mate's/💖!! Please let her fall and have all 5 😇/😈!!
February 25, 2021
Compelling series. Second book just as compelling
Interesting reverse harem with angels, demons, God and Lucifer. I like unique. So many stories are all seeming the same. This is addictive page turner.
Interesting reverse harem with angels, demons, God and Lucifer. I like unique. So many stories are all seeming the same. This is addictive page turner.
March 25, 2021
Absolutely love this
From Hell to Heaven and back....this story only gets crazier by the chapter. Aaliyah's life, her afterlife becomes more chaotic and is trying to work through the chaos.
It's amazing, a must read!
From Hell to Heaven and back....this story only gets crazier by the chapter. Aaliyah's life, her afterlife becomes more chaotic and is trying to work through the chaos.
It's amazing, a must read!
April 14, 2021
Very good
Omg! Shit is hitting the fan now in this book. Aaliyah finally completes her training and had some one on one with her men, only for shit to go crazy again at the end. I can’t wait to read the next book!
Omg! Shit is hitting the fan now in this book. Aaliyah finally completes her training and had some one on one with her men, only for shit to go crazy again at the end. I can’t wait to read the next book!
July 5, 2021
Oh my even in Heaven Aali is a force to recon with. Her 3 devil Mates don't give up on her and the prophecy comes true in the end. Though it's not what you think. What happens when heaven falls? Can't wait until book 3 to find out.
February 19, 2021
Wow
Excitedly waiting for the last book of the series! It keeps you on the edge of your seat!! Leaves you wanting more. Live it!
Excitedly waiting for the last book of the series! It keeps you on the edge of your seat!! Leaves you wanting more. Live it!
February 19, 2021
Not as good as the first story
Sadly I didn't enjoy this story as much as the first. Alai's stay in Heaven seemed to be very long-winded and without much action.
Sadly I didn't enjoy this story as much as the first. Alai's stay in Heaven seemed to be very long-winded and without much action.
February 25, 2021
Good read
This was a good addition to the series. A little bland in parts but worth the read. A great cliffhanger I can't wait for the conclusion.
This was a good addition to the series. A little bland in parts but worth the read. A great cliffhanger I can't wait for the conclusion.
March 8, 2021
Wow!
Wow, that was one heck of a cliffhanger! I am definitely looking forward to see what happens next in this interesting series.
Wow, that was one heck of a cliffhanger! I am definitely looking forward to see what happens next in this interesting series.
May 30, 2021
Whoa… That was intense.
I feel like I just rode a roller coaster in 4 hours. I am not even sure what I can say beyond I am truly loving this series. ❤️
I feel like I just rode a roller coaster in 4 hours. I am not even sure what I can say beyond I am truly loving this series. ❤️
September 11, 2021
I feel like I'm not getting enough info. We get all these point of view which is great I love that but we haven't got any real info. Nothing but surface thoughts nothing in depth about these worlds.
September 16, 2021
4.5/5
Omfg! That was an incredible ending.
Omfg! That was an incredible ending.
October 11, 2021
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Completely consumed with this series so far. The twits and turns in the world that has been created will keep you turning the pages.
Completely consumed with this series so far. The twits and turns in the world that has been created will keep you turning the pages.
May 24, 2022
Really good!
This series has kept me hooked from the first book. The action is great and I love how both Heaven and Hell are included.
This series has kept me hooked from the first book. The action is great and I love how both Heaven and Hell are included.
July 11, 2022
Oh my
Sheesh! That ending had me breaking It is well worth the time to consume the whole book! On to the next!!
Sheesh! That ending had me breaking It is well worth the time to consume the whole book! On to the next!!
January 15, 2023
Ahhhhh
Noon! I need more! More of this world and the crazy characters and the love and suspense!!! Diving into the nest immediately I can't wait! Sleep be d@mn3d
Noon! I need more! More of this world and the crazy characters and the love and suspense!!! Diving into the nest immediately I can't wait! Sleep be d@mn3d
March 22, 2024
Very good story
I enjoyed the characters and the story lines of this story. I would definitely recommend that it is to be read along with the other books in the series.
I enjoyed the characters and the story lines of this story. I would definitely recommend that it is to be read along with the other books in the series.
April 4, 2024
Not a bad series but I feel it's dragging a bit
July 4, 2025
Holy shit! What the hell is going on that was fucking one hell of a ride and I need the next book right now. You can't end the book like that and not make me want to through it off a cliff.
November 16, 2023
Filler, filler, filler, fill-HOLY SHIT THE CLIFHANGER FROM HELL!
Right, I get the feeling this whole trilogy could be reduced to a single, slightly large book. There is a lot in here that was redundant.
Nevertheless, cute...ish. Meh, really. The clifhanger pushed for that third star to be honest.
Edit 6 monts later: I was right, it really should have just been one book 😑
I did enjoy the slightly.....more unhinged ideea of God. He made things spicy 😈
Right, I get the feeling this whole trilogy could be reduced to a single, slightly large book. There is a lot in here that was redundant.
Nevertheless, cute...ish. Meh, really. The clifhanger pushed for that third star to be honest.
Edit 6 monts later: I was right, it really should have just been one book 😑
I did enjoy the slightly.....more unhinged ideea of God. He made things spicy 😈
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