It disturbed me rating a Christi Caldwell book 2-stars because I’ve read several of her books, many of which are 4- and 5-stars. But this book isn’t up to her usually high standards.
It was an interesting premise. Rafe Audley is a 31-year-old coal miner and the illegitimate son of the Duke of Bentley and wants nothing to do with his father who now wants plenty to do with him. The duke is attempting to make up for the abandonment of his children, all illegitimate. Rafe has refused to have anything to do with him. Enter Miss Edwina Dalrymple, a governess charged with bringing him to London to meet his father, the duke, and teaching him how to get along in “polite society.” Miss Dalrymple is herself an illegitimate daughter of a marquess, a fact she keeps hidden from everyone.
Sounds intriguing, a battle of wills, surely. And so it is. But the first half of the book is laced with cruelty and self-centeredness on the part of the heroine, Miss Dalrymple, and parts that I believe are meant to be amusing fall flat. There is an extended scene at the mines where they meet, and she has a difficult time dealing with mud and her umbrella. I think it is meant to be humorous, but mostly it’s a silly, overly contrived meet-cute. Miss Dalrymple is attracted to the man who is to be her charge, but he does not share the same attraction.
Again, a pretty good premise. But it doesn’t get off the ground. Miss Dalrymple, in her quasi-prim way, lusts after him. The games continue as she beleaguers him and refuses to leave him alone. They are thrown together (more by the writer than by circumstances) and ultimately, he gives in and off to London they go.
There are huge misunderstandings, some of them making Miss Dalrymple seem not only shallow, but self-involved to the extent of being unable to see anyone else’s point of view or feelings. For instance, she cannot understand why Rafe “for reasons she’d never understand, [was] determined to remain at the Cheadle coalfields, risking life and limb, when he could be pursuing a future that was safe and secure.” The writer has already shown us how much the job meant to Rafe, that he made a huge difference in the lives of the men who worked under him. It was linked to his sense of self-worth. But Miss Dalrymple saw only a man who stood to gain a fortune and a wealthy future if he’d only listen to her. She did not respect the man, merely the life he could have in London as the recognized son of a duke.
Miss Dalrymple needs Rafe to do as she demands; this is her only opportunity to break into the aristocracy as a governess for the wealthy blue bloods. That is what Rafe means to her. She sets out to ruin him at the coal mines by buying off his employer into terminating him. Her thinking was that he would then go off to London with her to confront his father. I found this cruel and underhanded, the very things Miss Dalrymple teaches her charges never to be. So, she’s also deceitful. She is fast becoming a tiresome heroine and I found myself liking her less and less with each turn of the page.
At a scene in Rafe’s home, Miss Dalrymple laughs at his being terminated. She accuses him of rudeness, and this is extraordinary since she is the one who betrayed him and is being rude—and obnoxious—in his home. At this point I considered putting the book aside. This was no longer an amusing tit-for-tat, back-and-forth battle of wits. The situation was demeaning to both characters. Miss Dalrymple’s betrayal is absurd and hostile. While Rafe’s ego is not fragile, his capability has been called into question and knocked over. Miss Dalrymple has shown herself to be harsh and thoughtless, someone who wants more than anything to be part of the empty aristocracy and she’ll stop at nothing to get there. On her road to her own perceived happiness, she also has a hand in harming the relationship between Rafe and his brother, Hunter.
At one point in the book, Miss Dalrymple ruminates on how much she abhorred country living and once again we are told that “she could never understand” Rafe’s preference for it. She further remembers how horrible and cruel her own father was, regarding her illegitimacy. And this is the world she is thrusting Rafe into. He was an assignment to her, a way to be “set…free from ever having to worry about returning to the country and being gossiped about and mocked.” It’s all about her. Later still, she fusses internally about Rafe’s erroneous opinions of her, and yet she’s brought those opinions on herself, by her inherent dishonesty.
By the end of chapter 11, they were lusting after each other and I had to speedread. Miss Dalrymple, by now, had passed ridiculous and moved on to tiring and tedious. By the end of chapter 12, I started skipping paragraphs and found I was still able to keep up with the plot. In chapter 15, at the 60% completion mark, I found myself no longer caring about the characters.
There is, of course, an HEA—as there must be in a romance—but it feels unearned. Too many miracles occur, and all is well. Rafe Aubrey and Edwina Dalrymple feel like pawns on a chessboard. Their moves seem forced. The terrible things that Miss Dalrymple did cannot be erased because she and Rafe have come to terms with one another. There were too many acts of malice to be undone by the sweep of a storyline. All the epiphanies the various characters seem to have at the end of the book cannot condone the nastiness of our heroine at the beginning.
That is why I rated the book 2-stars. While the writing is strong, the story felt forced, and it was too easy to see the characters being manipulated. Conflict is important in a romance, in any genre, really. But the conflict here just seemed “off.” Sadly, Miss Dalrymple was callous, and she lied too readily. I would not have trusted her; why should Rafe, our hero? Since the name of this series is “All the Duke’s Sins,” and “duke” is singular, then I would guess that the series is about the duke’s illegitimate children. As much as I’ve enjoyed many books by Ms. Caldwell, I believe I’ll pass on this series.