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Your Mess is Mine
Louis is the father to the most brilliant little boy in the world who is all Louis really needs, or at least that's what he tells himself. Harry is a gorgeous boybander fresh off a two year break and a massive scandal that's left him a little broken and more than ready to move on.
They fall in love.
published:2015-02-24
Completed:2017-05-26
Words:176723
Chapters:20/20
They fall in love.
published:2015-02-24
Completed:2017-05-26
Words:176723
Chapters:20/20
- GenresFan Fiction
1194 pages, ebook
Published February 24, 2015
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March 3, 2022
Rating: 3.5 stars
This wasn't exactly what I was expecting. When I read the synopsis, I was expecting more to happen just because it was so long. I thought maybe it'd be a slow burn or that it would have a twist that would need a lot of time to fix. But that didn't really happen so I don't know. I don't know how to rate this because I know that right now in this exact moment this is probably a 3 star read, but I also know that when I'm in the correct mood for it this would be exactly what I would've needed and if I had read this at that time then it would've been higher than 3 stars. So, do I rate based on how I feel after finishing now or on how I think I would've felt if I had read this another time? Expectations suck.
This book was just really long. I kept expecting for the turning point but it never really happened? Unless you count their 3 day break up. It's a long one but it's very cute and it's extremely domestic and just, it's a book to read when you want to enjoy them being together and not the pining and the longing and the drama. It's very cute and I really liked it.
The characters were also written really well. I loved Noah and I found his character cute and funny and his quirks were fairly accurate. He's adorable and I enjoyed reading him get closer with Harry and see how all of their relationships develop. This book evoked emotions out of me that I wasn't expecting. I have a bit of personal experience with your parent dating someone who you might not approve of and seeing how much Louis cared about his son and how much he valued his opinion and how he felt about Harry had me feeling so many things. It was extremely nice. I loved Louis as a character and as a single parent. His fears and his thoughts were so well written and it made the story really really enjoyable. Harry was very soft and adorable here and I wasn't expecting that. I don't know why, maybe because I mixed it up with spoilers for a different fic, but it was very lovely to see.
I like the plot and what the book is about. It's my first intentional kid fic and I really liked it. It wasn't too cheesy or dramatic which is why I tend to avoid kid fics. It was cute and enjoyable and just so domestic. I really enjoyed it and I'd probably like to go back to it sometime.
Summary: **Obvious spoilers**
Reading Thread: https://twitter.com/loveonsapphic/sta...
This wasn't exactly what I was expecting. When I read the synopsis, I was expecting more to happen just because it was so long. I thought maybe it'd be a slow burn or that it would have a twist that would need a lot of time to fix. But that didn't really happen so I don't know. I don't know how to rate this because I know that right now in this exact moment this is probably a 3 star read, but I also know that when I'm in the correct mood for it this would be exactly what I would've needed and if I had read this at that time then it would've been higher than 3 stars. So, do I rate based on how I feel after finishing now or on how I think I would've felt if I had read this another time? Expectations suck.
This book was just really long. I kept expecting for the turning point but it never really happened? Unless you count their 3 day break up. It's a long one but it's very cute and it's extremely domestic and just, it's a book to read when you want to enjoy them being together and not the pining and the longing and the drama. It's very cute and I really liked it.
The characters were also written really well. I loved Noah and I found his character cute and funny and his quirks were fairly accurate. He's adorable and I enjoyed reading him get closer with Harry and see how all of their relationships develop. This book evoked emotions out of me that I wasn't expecting. I have a bit of personal experience with your parent dating someone who you might not approve of and seeing how much Louis cared about his son and how much he valued his opinion and how he felt about Harry had me feeling so many things. It was extremely nice. I loved Louis as a character and as a single parent. His fears and his thoughts were so well written and it made the story really really enjoyable. Harry was very soft and adorable here and I wasn't expecting that. I don't know why, maybe because I mixed it up with spoilers for a different fic, but it was very lovely to see.
I like the plot and what the book is about. It's my first intentional kid fic and I really liked it. It wasn't too cheesy or dramatic which is why I tend to avoid kid fics. It was cute and enjoyable and just so domestic. I really enjoyed it and I'd probably like to go back to it sometime.
Summary: **Obvious spoilers**
Reading Thread: https://twitter.com/loveonsapphic/sta...
April 14, 2022
Es una historia con un nivel de drama bastante bajo, en realidad es un romance saludable en donde no hay toxicidad, cosa que me parece importante debido al público al que va dirigido.
Es uno de esos libros a los que vuelves cuando has leído algo que te dejo realmente triste o cuando tienes bloqueo de lector.
Ampliamente recomendado
Es uno de esos libros a los que vuelves cuando has leído algo que te dejo realmente triste o cuando tienes bloqueo de lector.
Ampliamente recomendado
September 15, 2021
Fluff everywhere
February 23, 2022
mi corazón está lleno de amor y hasta ganas de tener hijos me dieron
September 3, 2025
SPOILERS
I have so much respect for this author, it took her 3 years to complete this work. She had a tough time when Zayn left, but I take my hat off to her for coming back to it, respecting the characters she created and completing this stunning novel.
I loved this beautiful fluffy piece of work, with minor anxiety.
Z and Perrie are cute.
Louis is being a sassy king with Jade
At times I read this and roled my eyes at the copious amounts of utter fluff, but it was stunning.
Lots of crying on my part.
I felt like Louis was more of the sensitive one and H more the guy yet quite feminine.
Noah ♥
Zach....♥ :(
The way the author, amory brings this precious little family together is an absolute treasure to behold. Zach was a tough read, but amory, you brought him to life, I could see the little boy and he held my heart through all your words.
I have so much respect for this author, it took her 3 years to complete this work. She had a tough time when Zayn left, but I take my hat off to her for coming back to it, respecting the characters she created and completing this stunning novel.
I loved this beautiful fluffy piece of work, with minor anxiety.
Z and Perrie are cute.
Louis is being a sassy king with Jade
At times I read this and roled my eyes at the copious amounts of utter fluff, but it was stunning.
Lots of crying on my part.
I felt like Louis was more of the sensitive one and H more the guy yet quite feminine.
Noah ♥
Zach....♥ :(
The way the author, amory brings this precious little family together is an absolute treasure to behold. Zach was a tough read, but amory, you brought him to life, I could see the little boy and he held my heart through all your words.
September 7, 2021
best fanfic ever, it’s just so perfect 💗
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