Actual rating 3.5 stars
In Rachel’s Garden we meet our protagonist as she is moving into her childhood home Maple Cottage, under sad circumstances. With both parents dead and having previously rented the cottage out she now feels it is time to come home where she feels she truly belongs. Her husband Adam, away much of the time working in China, is happy for this move to go ahead in the hope that a fresh start will also translate into a new beginning for them both as parents,a longed for baby yet to make an appearance. Will precious but bittersweet memories overshadow Rachel’s homecoming or will her love of the outdoor life and project to create her garden of rooms, her homage to those she loves be the beginning of a more hopeful future?
Whilst this thriller sets off on a slow and unusual path I was expecting good things to come from what potentially has the makings of a dark and menacing storyline. Although details of the shape of Rachel and Adam’s marriage trickle down to the reader slowly I couldn’t visualise a more unlikely pair and this unsettled me. They appear to have nothing in common and I can only describe Adam’s character as noxious bindweed that threatens to strangle the life out of their marriage. The relative isolation of the cottage, with only elderly neighbour Shirley nearby and the amount of time Rachel spends alone adds to a sense of foreboding, although the presence of gardener Ollie goes some ways to alleviate these troubling feelings. Exactly how this character will slot into place takes time to understand, his role perhaps the only one shrouded in a (thin) veil of mystery. Still, my trepidation at what may befall Rachel was further exacerbated by the backdrop of Peckerton woods which contain their own hidden threats. As a self confessed scaredy cat, woods give me the heebie jeebies so I gradually immersed myself in this storyline anticipating being frightened out of my wits. That Rachel is also desperate to become a mother, her friend Jen already pregnant with her fourth child, overrides any rational thinking on her part, her heart ruling her head, ultimately leading to a surprising revelation.
Undoubtedly this is very well written. Either the author is a keen horticulturist or has really done her research. From the opening you can tell this is going to be an atmospheric thriller in which nature and wildlife play a crucial role. I loved how the author brings the outside in, heightening the readers sense of setting, vividly recreating the sense of colour and smell redolent of the outdoors and the changing of the seasons. The importance of the garden at Maple Cottage to our protagonist Rachel is striking and with death and the creation of new life all part of this natural world I loved the analogy between the emergence of Rachel’s garden of rooms and the potential for new life to blossom within her. However for a thriller, the pace is agonisingly slow and my hope for a dark and menacing storyline never really materialises. Frightened I was not! The author attempts to create tension and unease with unexpected gifts left in the garden for Rachel to discover, suggesting she is being watched but by whom? For me these attempts felt half hearted, never leading anywhere except a dead end and the former tenant of Maple cottage element, a minor subplot, didn’t work in my eyes; it was like an ill fitting piece of a jigsaw puzzle. It is the toxic relationship between husband and wife that is real cause for alarm and although there are times you fear for Rachel’s safety the author failed to entirely convince me of the threat he poses to his wife. Perhaps it’s because Rachel remains in situ despite his unforgivable behaviour that I felt this way.
The strength of this thriller lies in its descriptive prose of Rachel’s surroundings and I found the portrayal of her relationship with both her mother and father beautifully written and quite moving. Unfortunately I wouldn’t describe this as a thriller, it’s more along the lines of a dark domestic drama. Given the circumstances of Rachel’s father’s death it is perhaps inevitable how this thriller will conclude and whilst it might be a satisfying outcome there’s no element of shock or surprise. I’m incredibly hard to please when it comes to psychological thrillers hence my average rating but I did appreciate the quality of the author’s writing. On this occasion I think the descriptive scene setting overshadowed a weak plot. My thanks to Bloodhound books for giving me the opportunity to read.