What Have I Just Read?
I have read this book via Kindle Unlimited after it was suggested by Kindle.
I read the original version of this story previously as part of a four story book collection.
Sadly, this revised edition makes no sense, there are many grammatical errors and the author is very contradictory with his descriptions.
Justin - Alpha - manipulative, arrogant, obnoxious and conceited.
He goes off in front of Sam and has adult fun with another omega.
I think the author is trying to show that Justin is a "bad boy", although I feel that he's more of a petulant idiot.
Sam - Omega - he's initially described by the author as confident but he certainly lacks that by Chapter two.
He's always fawning over Justin and is jealous when Justin goes off with the other omega and later in the book when he thinks Justin is seeing someone else (even before anything does happen between Justin and Sam!)
The author writes of Sam's description as, slim built, that when standing only goes up to Justin's chin, the description carries on, Sam is tall, broad shouldered and slim waist, with tight muscles that could overpower Justin!?
In another chapter, Justin gets out of the pool to swim laps!
Another chapter has them both on the bed before Justin sweeps Sam's legs from under him and carries Sam to bed!
Yeah, I was scratching my head whilst trying to decipher this book.
Overall, it's appallingly written, it's consistently contradictory, the Alpha is akin to Superman and the Omega is always sticking up for the bad ways of the Alpha, without having any personality of his own.
It feels like the author dislikes Omegas and it shows in his books.
For me, none of this author's books have a Happy Ever After as the relationships between Alphas and Omegas appear to be toxic relationships. I would not encourage anyone to read any stories by this author as I certainly won't be reading anything else by this author.