Not Bad: 2.5⭐
First, I liked the premise. Fairytale retellings are popular for a reason, especially if there is a twist. Second, it was a quick and easy read. Next, as a latina, I especially liked that the lead female was hispanic/latinx, the occasional Spanish dialog, and the cultural references. 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
In my personal opinion (and the reason for my 2.5 star rating), the dialog could have been better. At times it seemed cheesy or even unnecessary. In some cases, a more polished and in-depth, internal monolog would have enhanced the storyline and furthered character development. Also, the pacing was a bit off. Some scenes were drawn out by monotonous, step by step actions (for no apparent reason), whereas the ending felt as rushed as a person attempting "The 12 Days of Christmas" from the 12 lords 'a leaping to the 5 golden rings in a single breath.
Overall, it wasn't a bad read. I think the story has the potential to be a solid 4⭐ book if the author ever considers rebranding it--flush out the plot a bit more by diving deeper into the curse and its back story, polish up the dialog, and find the balance between too much info and not enough to iron out the wrinkles with flow and pacing.