Jade Lee is hit or miss for me, and this series unfortunately hasn't always highlighted her strengths. The template involves ambitious women entering the workforce during the Regency period, but her writing is most often at its best when she focuses on quirky characters and humor, not the staid protocols of business, government, and the ton. That said, there were things I liked about the previous entry in the series and was looking forward to this one. Lilah, an illegitmate daughter of nobility, was a sweet, engaging character in Lord Satyr and I wanted to follow her journey to her HEA. (This is also the last book in the series, so I had to see how things ended.)
Honestly, I wished she'd been paired with a different MC. Aaron is a prig through 90% of the plot. And that kills the book for me.
SPOILERS AHEAD............................................The story kicks off with Aaron lasciviously kissing Lilah at a party in front of the ton. She wants to marry; he turns her down flat, saying he doesn't love her. Nonetheless, his actions should have caused a big enough scandal for her brother to pressure him to marry her. But her ruination is strangely overlooked by her, the ton, and the rest of her family. Later, it's supposed to make Aaron seem noble that he approached her brother regarding the incident, but ultimately, Aaron does nothing more because he's too big of a snob to marry her. When they're intimate and she says several times that she loves him, he tells her that love isn't enough. Then he says that what they have together is lust, not love. He wants her, but doesn't want to besmirch himself by taking a mistress. When he finally does decide to privately propose, he mentions hiding her away in the country. Even when he has his Big Breakthrough and plans to publicly propose, he's worried that he might be embarrassed by a "by-blow" turning him down.
Ugh.
BTW, this book uses the terms "bastard" and "by-blow" way too frequently. It just makes me feel worse and worse for Lilah, who is barely able to climb out of the hole of her low self-esteem by the end of the book.
There are moments of humor that work, some heartfelt scenes with family and friends that should have come sooner than later, and, trying to break through the surface, there is an underlying theme about people's skills and abilities being more important than their titles. The steamy scenes aren't mechanical, which is impressive considering what a cold fish Aaron is. Also, I liked the tie-in with the Lyon's Den and was intrigued by the underworld angle. I also appreciated how the rift in Lilah and her non-biological mom's relationship is resolved--too many Regencies feature overly nasty mothers or fathers.
However, everything is wrapped up way too abruptly, without even an epilogue. And the HEA, as mentioned, is not convincing. It's a shame, because Lilah's a sympathetic character and there's an interesting plot that started to emerge involving her past. Maybe it will be mentioned in the first book in the new series?
Overall: I'll try Jade Lee's next series, but I wish this one had ended with more of a bang.