Three stars for this one. That's neutral, right? First, I didn't like the lack of quotation marks. I get it, other writers do it. James Joyce, Margaret Atwood, McCormac. It still distracts me as a reader, especially when I find myself re-reading sentences to pick out the dialogue. It pulls me out of the story. Lack of dialogue toppled with Australian dialect, and I just didn't understand some parts. Did you know a ute was a car? I didn't, until I Googled it.
I forced myself to push through. The first 20%, not much happened. But I won this on Library Thing and felt obliged to review it. I'm going with nuetral