Welcome to the village of Thorndale, an idyllic sounding setting for this lighthearted romance. Our protagonist Annie Armstrong is returning to this village, a place that holds fond childhood memories,following the break up of her relationship with the man she believed was ‘The One’. By a stroke of good fortune (although not for the deceased!) she has inherited her godmother Molly’s cottage, and this is where she intends to nurse her broken heart before taking up her teaching position in the local school.
With a promising start I fully expected to enjoy this romantic tale, be introduced to some interesting characters, get caught up in village life and gossip and of course meet the man destined to sweep Annie off her feet and restore her faith in love and romance.
The reader quickly meets Annie’s potential love interest, Jon,when she inadvertently parks her car in the wrong place, thereby ensuring their first introduction is far from wonderful. This pretty much sets the tone for the whole book with Annie and Jon constantly acting like silly teenagers, unable to communicate effectively their true feelings, making me incredibly exasperated with the pair of them. Jon is predictably drawn as the handsome, rugged, multi talented all round nice guy (nothing wrong with that!) keen to cast himself as the knight in shining armour coming to the rescue of the damsel in distress, aka Annie. His role in the fell and rescue team as well as his involvement in other charitable projects does make him an easy character to desire!
However,I have to admit to being infuriated at the way the author has chosen to depict Annie as a fragile woman afraid of her own shadow, acting like a besotted adolescent,incapable of carrying out the most menial tasks. I felt the author was taking us back to the 1950’s with the woman’s place being firmly in the kitchen since Annie’s only skills seem to lie in cooking and baking which is a harsh observation I know. There is an awful lot of eye gazing, unnecessary wardrobe descriptions and plenty of references to sturdy thighs and capable strong arms, in preference to a stronger storyline. I think the basis for a good romance novel is present but with sketchily drawn secondary characters, one of which could have proved to be a worthwhile adversary for Annie, thereby creating a love triangle, is an opportunity that’s been missed but one which I would have welcomed. For me personally, the storyline goes round in circles and ends as you’d expect, although I do believe this is the first in a series, so it’s maybe not the last you’ll hear of Annie and Jon if you feel inclined to follow their journey. ( sincere apologies if this information is incorrect).
I also apologise if this review is viewed as scathing as it’s not my intention to slate the author’s writing. I appreciate that I’m only a book lover and not an author and that writing is indeed a labour of love. Believe it or not I am a huge fan of lighthearted, romantic reads and have nothing against predictability but I prefer them to have a more contemporary feel. Sadly on this occasion The Cottage of New Beginnings wasn’t quite to my taste but I imagine it will still hold much appeal for many fans of this genre.
My thanks to the author and Pigeonhole for giving me the opportunity to read in exchange for an honest review.