it’s a start for a new series
As a new series for the author, it was a decent start, though it took entirely too long to get to any of the plot points. There was way to much ridiculous angst and exposition from the main female lead.
It was also too formulaic. Seriously the author rarely bends from her formula between her various series. You have character A, a wimpy female character, trying to find herself, but so without a backbone or brain it’s amazing she ever supposedly wrote a book. Oh and don’t forget, she must have a unique name that stands out but is also a tad on the weird side and magic sounding, here it’s Stormy Breeze. Similar to other series names, like Bay, Charlie, Izzy Sage, Poet, or Scout. B, the alpha male with his own damage to overcome, and once again a police officer. They know they love each other but will have to go back and forth over their emotional rocky recovery, all the while she figures out her magic heritage but can he accept such heritage. His name must have that all important alpha male or frat boy sounding name. In this case it’s Hunter, but could also have used Jack, Kade, or Landon, like in the other series. C, the elderly person looking out for the lead character. One surprise on this character, it’s a male, though that may change if the great-grandmother returns to town and takes over that role. Though as in the Avery Shaw series, she will on occasion use a male. She even made both grandfathers from their respective series, run their own diner/restaurant to keep the families involved with one another and for some reason has to eat weird concoctions of food usually involving lots of onions. I guess it was too difficult to allow them to even have different family businesses.
More side characters, there is D, the overbearing and demanding mother, which the lead has a very strained relationship with. E, the loud but lovable cousin, who is like a sister because they grew up so close to each other. F, the potential gay BFF, though in this instance everyone assumes he’s gay which he adamantly refuses to be true. Then character G, a female character that will be in competition or at least heated yet humorous arguments with the main female. She is of course, the ex of alpha male B. Everyone doesn’t like her, including said alpha male. Belittled as Kardashian-like or similar to reality TV based personalities. She must be made fun of, including in this instance to having been magic missiled into losing her eyebrows.
Wow, initially I was thinking this wasn’t that bad of a story, but after I just wrote the last two paragraphs on how little character development was done in make this series, I have dropped my opinion. As a new series, I originally thought to give it several stars, because it was new. It isn’t though. It’s the same formula she’s written but just twisted in very, very small ways, to create it. There isn’t even any significant differences to make this series stand out.
The female lead is so self involved, which she makes fun of in others when complaining of Kardashians and Reality TV. A snarky staple of the author. I have no problem making fun of both those genres, but if you make fun of such areas, you can’t make your lead just as vapid as what they complain about. The moment that Stormy is talking to Erin at the coffee shop, it’s obvious what has been going on, and that this character is likely the killer. Yet Stormy is oblivious of this fact, even when very direct questions are asked and answered. I realize there needs to be some foreshadowing and allow for the great reveal, but seriously, no one is that brain dead to not realize you are talking to the killer.
The only surprise I had was the added twist of the porn industry filming being done. Though of all the abused and unknowingly filmed women that the dead character took advantage of, there is no way that the filming would not have come out before this.
I understand an author needs to write about what they know. But change some characters around, instead of using the routine parts. Definitely change locales between series. Many of the author’s series are set in Michigan. Only Moonstone Bay and Mystic Caravan seem to be set in other places, yet Poet from Mystic originally even came from Detroit. This set of books are placed within a short 20 minute drive from the Hemlock Cove Witches series. Branch out, maybe one could be set in San Francisco, Portland, or Albuquerque. Though if you prefer small town settings, try new states. Iowa, Indiana, Kansas, or Colorado all have large areas with lots of small towns dotted across them.
As I stated, I originally thought to give this book 3 or 4 stars, but after writing my review, it has made me realize just how disappointing this new series actually is. There are some good things about this author’s writing. I enjoy the snarky content, but change the commentary up some. Modify the characters, plots and locales. Write something new!