This wasn't bad, and I liked the whole computer games company background. Here's one story where it makes sense that a young woman in her early 20's could be running a successful business since she was a computer prodigy (or nerd, at least for a time), so she was way ahead of the average person. I get a little tired of these people who aren't geniuses, super wealthy or with loads of connections who somehow make it to the top of the field when they're barely out of college. So, with this story at least my intelligence isn't being insulted.
What I didn't like was the h being so critical of her own looks, without doing anything about it for way too long. (Her transformation happens courtesy of her mother-in-law, who really got on my nerves, which I'll get to later.)
I also didn't like the H judging all women by his mother, who he had the wrong opinion of, because she never bothered to straighten him out, about why she left his father for another man (now her husband). He listened to his father (who was hardly impartial) and took everything he said at face value which, considering Dad's crummy personality, was pretty dumb. (He also blamed her for his older brother's death, which was incredibly ridiculous!) Naturally, he lets his bad opinion of women influence his feelings for the h who - despite theirs being a convenience marriage - fell in love with him, despite his attitude.
I ESPECIALLY didn't like his mother (though wanting to help) interfering, by inviting the h to stay with her and her husband for several weeks and turn her into a pet project, becoming a Professor Higgins of sorts, or a grown woman playing dress-up with a live doll. She actually sends the h to a charm school, as if she's a teenager, NOT an adult of 22 who was running her own computer games company! She even picked out what bras she should wear, for crying out loud! The h was much too passive toward this overwhelming mom-in-law!
To make matters worse, the woman loves to play games! She encourages the h to flirt with another man, in this case her stepson, because he's a real playboy and won't take it seriously, and she'll get some practice on acting the desirable woman part. (Maybe that's good advice for a single girl, but a married one??? Even with the state of her marriage at the time, that still was wrong.) Then, she deliberately arranges for the H to (reluctantly) visit at a time when the h and OM would be alone, and he catches them kissing in the garden! Yes, the old jealousy angle!
Before anyone condemns the h for that kiss, at that point in the story their marriage had yet to be consummated, they weren't on good terms, and the h had reason to believe the H was seeing a former girlfriend on the side. As it turned out, she was thinking about the H while kissing the OM, which is why she responded to his kiss, and once she realized that she pulled asway from him, and that's when the H found them!
Ironically, this virginal h was caught by the H in three compromising positions: with his stepbrother, and twice with the other OM, h's former fiancé, which was a loose term, since he was only after her company. The first time, he was angry that she cheated him out of getting what he wanted by marrying the h and forced kisses on her because he felt she owed him something, he second time he liked her new look and wanted her body, and both times the H caught them! For someone who only wanted the H, this h sure gave a different impression!
This book was just too full of silly stuff to be taken seriously, so it's worth reading for the amusement factor, but it can get a bit annoying, too.