3.5 stars. Review for both books in this duet.
This is about Raven, an American college student in France who gets trafficked to a work camp in the wilderness. Unlike a lot of other “trafficking” dark romance plots, she isn’t sex trafficked. Women at the camp are forced to do unpaid labor packing drugs for drug lords. Magnus is a guard at the camp who is secretly sort of helping her, for unknown reasons.
I liked that this is unique from other “trafficking” plots, since she’s not sex trafficked. The camp had a lot of chilling unique details, too, like the “Red Snow,” where they execute a random woman every week, to keep the workers from rebelling. And, the camp was so remote that they had to access it on horseback, since cars can't reach it. It sounds weird to say I "enjoyed" the setting, since it's a horrible place. But, these details made it atmospheric, and it also made it stand out as distinctive from other "trafficking" books where the setting is just a bland warehouse.
I also liked how Raven isn’t the most gorgeous woman ever, and Magnus liked her for her inner strength, and her loyalty. He still found her attractive, of course. But this story did a good job of showing how they connect on a level that goes beneath the surface. I also loved how co-dependent they eventually became. That's one of those dynamics that's toxic IRL, but I eat it up in fiction, sometimes.
The "prisoner / guard” trope is obviously problematic. But it’s a problematic trope that I enjoy sometimes, when an author does it well. This book isn’t that well written (the spice scenes were sometimes a little cringey and a lot of story elements could have been fleshed out more). But, that "prisoner / guard" element of their relationship was done well. It had a lot of interesting push / pull. Sometimes, it gets boring when a hero is a simp for his heroine too fast. Magnus took a long time to fully lock in, emotionally, and show his care for her - maybe too long, but, it kept things interesting.
It really seemed like they could never be together. The stakes were so high, it kept me turning pages to find out how they would ever be able to get a HEA. I also loved how “ride or die” Raven and Magnus were for each other (eventually). And, I liked the angst of how, there are a few instances where they're forced to hurt each other.
So, why in the 3 star range, if this was all good stuff? Book 1 is only Raven’s POV, while book 2 is only Magnus. It worked for book 1 to be single POV, to keep him mysterious, since his motives were shadowy. But there were times in book 2 when I wanted her POV.
It also didn't handle side characters well. Like, Raven gets in huge trouble for trying to help other women at the camp, like Bethany. Then, Bethany just vanishes from the story. I wasn't super invested in her, but it just felt odd that Raven suffered a lot as a result of helping her, and then we never hear about her again. It made the narrative feel unbalanced, and like something was missing.
But, the main reason for the 3 star range is the overarching plot. It involves their siblings, who both suck. Raven basically gets trafficked because of her idiotic younger sister. Magnus is stuck working at this terrible place because of his idiotic brother. Their siblings get the next 2 books in the series, and I’m definitely not reading them. Their siblings were both annoying, and this book spent too much time trying to get us to like them. Normally, I’m all for a “redeem the villain” plot. But, his brother was responsible for countless innocent women dying. This book does acknowledge that there’s no justification for that. But then, it does sort of try to justify it. His brother just isn’t an interesting enough villain to get redeemed. Their siblings were both tedious, and they weren't just side characters, they were major parts of the plot.
But, overall, the duet is pretty solid, and, since many dark romances blend together and have samey plots, it does feel somewhat unique.