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As a fan of menage and reverse harem stories, I was excited to see this box set about the lucky women who find her three fated mates. The first story was okay. It did drag in parts, especially when the author went into too much detail about things that really didn’t matter or contribute to moving the story forward. The sexy scenes were a bit unrealistic, I almost felt like those scenes were written by a man who knew nothing about a woman’s orgasm. All of the talk about gushing made me wonder if a flash flood was coming. I did notice quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, as well as sentences or ideas that were repeated. But, this is an ARC copy, so I can only hope that the book will be sent for editing and proofreading.
Moving on to the second story, I quickly noticed similar phrases and situations as I had read in the first story. Although the storyline was different, many of the conversations, actions and details were almost identical to the first story - even the sex scenes were the same, just with different names inserted. Again, the story dragged from unnecessary details and I was constantly distracted by the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. It was a challenge to finish the second story.
Before I started the third story, I took a few days away from the book (I had to psych myself up to read it). By the end of the second chapter, I knew I wouldn’t be able to finish the book. The same problems that plagued the previous stories were evident in this one too. Yes, the basic storyline was different from the others, but I felt like I was reading those previous stories, just with a different type of shifter and different character names.
The set of stories do have some potential, but they need some serious editing, rewriting and proofreading first.
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