So this one was disappointing.
What do you do if you’re homeless, unemployed, and without identification papers on a space station? Elizabeth ‘Bet’ Yeager has been fighting that life for over a year, and her luck’s about to run out. Stationside is starting to feel a bit tight, and jumping ship lands her in even more hot water.
It should have been great, but Cherryh’s usual brisk prose has narrowed to machine-gun fragments here, and the thin plot doesn’t help.
As for Bet herself… I’m deeply conflicted. She’s tough, and she knows what she’s about, but she has serious personal issues. The woman careens from escaping sexual assault, to dub-con sex-for-security (transaction), to consensual & mutually-enjoyable sex with someone she likes, to sex-as-favor (transaction) with someone she doesn’t like but still has a good time with. It would be easier to parse if she could keep a consistent psychology around it, but she can’t seem to decide if she’s okay with the transactional sex she’s having or not. Thankfully, it’s not detailed, but it does leave me feeling a squicked.
It is, however, a strikingly different perspective than what we saw in Downbelow or Merchanter’s Luck, whose Merchanter women had most of the power in their sleepovers, or even than what we saw from Meg and Sal in Heavy Time / Hellburner. The latter, of course, we only experience in the context of their male counterparts, but maybe Cherryh was trying to use Bet to explore the darker sides of her sexually liberated society? I’m not sure if that’s giving it too much credit.
Additionally, once aboard Loki, Bet immediately latches onto her damaged crewmate, “NG” Ramey. NG is seriously traumatized, unpredictable, and NOT popular with the crew. For some reason, Bet decides that this guy (who gives her the creeps right off) is A.) Friends-with-benefits material, and B.) Her new pet project. The mental monologue that runs through most of the books is “This poor dude... but he’s crazy-traumatized… he might be dangerous… he’s also hot for some reason… let’s all just sit on him so he doesn’t do anything stupid… hold up now nobody hurts my crewmate… he’s so sad… etc.”
It gets tiring. Like Decker, but 100x worse.
And then there’s the ending. By now, I’m gotten used to the way Cherryh squishes all her action into the very end of her books, but Rimrunners manages to be worse than usual. It’s approximately 260 pages of slow tension and setup, 18 pages of action, and 2 pages of “and then everyone was happy and the world moved on.” All the setup and internal tension among Loki’s crew just kind of… vanishes. Ship politics to this point? Apparently no longer relevant. That major antagonist-in-power? We got to laugh at him a couple times, but I guess he’s given up on whatever beef he had?
Granted there was some drastic action, but the happily-ever-after fluff note is a bit much to be believable. Especially since I’m really not sure who all is left alive at the end, or why it all went down the way it did, or… anyway. I have a lot of questions about the exact sequence of events in those last 20-odd pages.
I think the worst part, for me, is that Bet really is an interesting character when she’s not mooning over NG. The whole intro portion of the book on Thule was fascinating, but once Bet boarded Loki? Pfft.
If you’ve ever wondered what happened to all those marines who were left behind on Pell in Downbelow, this is worth a look. It’s not a bad book, but it’s really not a good one either. I own this one since the library doesn’t. 2*.