Almost loved
The writing is great. Witty dialogue and romantic scenes. However, I did not enjoy the projected storyline.
Percy is a Rake with a ward who he is attracted to. This ward, Freddie, is also very attracted to him. I just could not understand how they both liked each other, constantly flirted, constantly bonded, and constantly kissed (and other things), but could not see that they liked each other.
I mean, even their best friends were talking to each other and were telling them that they were attracted to each other. How could they not know that they were attracted to each other? I'm so confused!
Honestly, they could have fixed this problem if they would just actually pay attention to one another rather than play the superficial characters they are. This totally ruined their characters for me. It truly felt like he was trying to be her dad, and she was trying to be a rebellious teenage girl who is in love with her step dad. Disgusting thought.
SPOILERS:
HE legit thought she was into a conpletely different guy even though she sent some VERY obvious hints. SHE also always thought he didn't like her for some odd reason. Literally everyone was telling her that he liked her, but she continued to play the coy "I want you to teach me to flirt with someone else" character. Like, girl, it's obvious he likes you, but you keep hinting that this is for someone else. What do you want him to think? Also, she is a contradiction to herself. Sometimes she's stubborn and headstrong, flirting with him amd making herself available, but other times, she's coy and doubtful, holding herself back for stupid reasons even though he's obviously in love with her. Like, the whole sequence where she went to get him at a masquerade because she was scared he would find a lover. It was unnecessary and did nothing for their relationship other than to cause a bit of tension that lasted too long for no reason!