I really wanted to like this more.
I fundamentally agree with its central premise: the AFL is a law unto itself obsessed with spin, PR management, self enrichment and self preservation and with an outsourced influence on cultural life in Victoria.
However, the scope of the book seemed to be a collation of anything and everything that inspired the slightest whiff of controversy. A lot of this was based on he said/she said innuendo and often the other side of the story was never even attempted to be heard. A more streamlined book focusing on a tighter narrative would have been much better.
Furthermore, basic dates (I.e. Jack Hamilton died in 1990 and not 1988, and Tommy Hafey became Collingwood coach in 1977, not 1979) are messed up and occasionally appointments are ascribed to reasons that never were. I am mostly thinking of the intimation that Gary Pert was an ‘AFL appointment’ at Melbourne when in truth that description could be better applied to Peter Jackson. Without wanting to open a can of worms, some of the indirect downplaying of the Essendon doping scandal by overemphasising the AFL’s naked self interest did the book a disservice.
I’d also add that there needed to be greater scrutiny paid to the integrity and motivations of some of those quoted in the book. It’s a bit rich for Jeff Kennett to give anyone a lecture about governing transparency when he spent most of his 7 years in government being accused of weakening the power of the auditor general’s office and granting low transparency bidding procedures for the casino that would ultimately become Crown: a consortium led by his mate, Lloyd Williams. I also found it pretty galling that the full focus of the book was on the AFL’s undoubtedly pathetic response to the Adam Goodes booing saga when it chose to revisit that sorry episode, while not acknowledging that columnists in the paper Warner was working for had columnists like Andrew Bolt and Miranda Devine providing daily grist for the rednecks mill (he called them rednecks, not me).
Nonetheless, Warner’s target is correct. It’s just a shame he didn’t use a sniper rifle to shoot at his targets, and not one of those shotguns that fire out shrapnel and buckshot.