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Brilliant Darkness #1
The Scourge
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Next Generation Indie Book Award Finalist and Library Journal Self Published Book Selection
Can blind teen Fennel face her fear to save her people? Or will she be consumed by The Scourge?
Seventeen-year-old Groundling, Fennel, is Sightless. She's never been able to see her lush forest home, but she knows its secrets. She knows how the shadows shift when she passes under a canopy of trees. She knows how to hide in the cool, damp caves when the Scourge comes. She knows how devious and arrogant the Groundlings' tree-dwelling neighbors, the Lofties, can be. And she's always known this day would come—the day she faces the Scourge alone.
The Scourge is the first book in the thrilling and romantic Brilliant Darkness fantasy romance series. If you like twisty dystopian and post-apocalyptic page-turners, you’ll love this award-winning series from USA Today bestselling author, A.G. Henley!
Next Generation Indie Book Award Finalist and Library Journal Self Published Book Selection
Can blind teen Fennel face her fear to save her people? Or will she be consumed by The Scourge?
Seventeen-year-old Groundling, Fennel, is Sightless. She's never been able to see her lush forest home, but she knows its secrets. She knows how the shadows shift when she passes under a canopy of trees. She knows how to hide in the cool, damp caves when the Scourge comes. She knows how devious and arrogant the Groundlings' tree-dwelling neighbors, the Lofties, can be. And she's always known this day would come—the day she faces the Scourge alone.
The Scourge is the first book in the thrilling and romantic Brilliant Darkness fantasy romance series. If you like twisty dystopian and post-apocalyptic page-turners, you’ll love this award-winning series from USA Today bestselling author, A.G. Henley!
270 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 30, 2012
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A.G. Henley
21 books441 followersA.G. Henley is a USA Today bestselling author of contemporary and fantasy books and stories, including the Love & Pets adult romantic comedy series. The first book in her young adult Brilliant Darkness series, THE SCOURGE, was a Library Journal Self-e Selection and a Next Generation Indie Book Award finalist. She’s also a clinical psychologist, but she promises not to analyze you... much.
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April 21, 2014
This book was given up at 20% into it, and I'm surprised I made it that far. Instead of writing about an overall take on the book, I'd like to break it down piece by piece as I had highlighted parts that made no sense. Wow, for not making it very far in the book, I've got 19 pages of notes on the kindle. Shall we begin?
"I grew up in the forest. I know every path, and the position of every tree and bush." (7%)
"I wrap my hand around Eland's sapling-thin arm--roots and creeping weeds on the forest floor have sent me sprawling more often than I want to remember." (1%)
"I might be terrified and disoriented, but I don't need a Lofty to give me directions in the forest." (8%)
I didn't really care for Fenn by the time I stopped, and it all started with those examples. She was born Sightless, and at first I was in complete understanding of her having fallen in the woods (even though it wasn't clear about when in her life falling was an issue), but then she goes on to be a jerk about knowing everything, and I'm like, oh-you're spechul, that's right. She flipped from being nervous about not having a guide in the woods, to being some kind of pace counting baddass. My first thought when she mentioned the falling, was how in the hell are you supposed to be the only person capable of getting water if you can't keep from falling?
She talks about how there are a million thoughts in her head (when she first goes to get the water) about sounds, smells, scary stories, memories of the creatures screams, all while apparently keeping the pace count in her head, and then adds singing to all that. And keeps count. Because it's the counting that she uses to navigate; which I'm not saying isn't logical, just that the cacophony in her head makes it harder to believe she wouldn't lose count.
Moving on!
"When a boy asks a girl my age, seventeen years, to dance at the Summer Solstice celebration, it usually means he's singled her out as his partner--for life, not just for the dance."(2%)
(Talks about her lifelong friend and then) "But...maybe I'm just not ready to partner."(2%)
(talks about her hair) "--and a thrill runs through me. I wonder if I'll be asked to dance tonight." (2%)
"It can't hurt to look my best"(2%)
""I don't want to be the only one not asked, you know?"" (Callie)(2%)
"I do know, although I think I'm more willing to suffer the humiliation of not being asked than to agree to partner for life with whoever might feel like asking me today."(2%)
""Maybe it's time for a new tradition.""(4%)(Fenn says--as she goes to greet the Lofties that come every year to the Solstice Celebration)
"There's no rule against dancing with them, but that's only because no one has ever tried. Aloe--not to mention the rest of my people--might be furious with me. I decide I don't care. At least I'll have made my own choice."(5%)
""Peree? Would you like to dance?" He doesn't say anything. I bite my bottom lip. "You know, dance? I'm not bad, really. I won't even step on your feet much."(5%)
Sigh. So many things about this annoy me that I almost don't even want to talk about them. If she didn't want to partner with her friend, who was hinted at being the guy to ask her to dance, then why would she ask her new Keeper and make it sound like it was only a dance?! How did anyone learn to dance at all since the dance equaled marriage, lol. The whole thing was just too much of a contradiction to satisfy me, and Fenn wasn't a baddass in asking Peree with the information we're given. I wasn't impressed.
Now for information on those horrifying Lofties.
"All the Lofty men are named for birds, while the women have ridiculous names like Sunbeam, Dewdrop, and Mist."(5%)
"The Lofties usually give us more warning when the Scourge is near. It's their part of our uneasy bargain."(6%)
"And what about Peree? He's kind. Concerned. Funny, even. Things Lofties aren't supposed to be. I'm not supposed to like him."(10%)
"We don't talk much about the Exchange, either. It only reminds us why we hate the Lofties."(11%) --"Generations ago"--is when it all happened I guess.
"People with dark coloring were arbitrarily forced to the forest floor to become Groundlings."(11%)
"The fair-haired, light eyed children are taken by the Lofties to live high above the ground, in the sunlit warmth and security of their tree-top aeries. The dark babies are taken by us, to live in fear of the Scourge."
I don't like anything about this caste system, and there isn't any other explanations up to the point that I gave up. It doesn't make any kind of sense! We have no idea what the year is, we don't know how MANY generations ago shit went to hell, and the way they have divided the people lacks all logic!! On top of that, to make it sound as though those the people wouldn't have fucking revolted pissed me off! Who in their right mind is going to think that if you're left on the ground with zombies, while your neighbor is safely away from their reach, that you wouldn't fucking change things!! We're told that the Scourge leaves, and when they're there, they only stay for a few days at a time (a week once), so what the fuck prevents the Lofties from getting their own damn water, or for that matter, why haven't either people created a damn storage system?! This chick is using bags, and a fucking sled, to gather water. Making multiple trips with the Scourge surrounding her in order to get water, and meanwhile, her Keeper is killing them but she never once trips over a dead body (he does warn her two different times about stepping to the side, but it was after she'd been standing still. There are times when she's walking and he's shooting, but magically nothing unexpected ever comes in contact with her).
I mean really. I just can't even.
The Scourge, or Fleshies, or flesh-eaters:
"They roam the forests, reeking of festering flesh, consuming anything living. People who survive the attacks become flesh-eaters themselves. Death is better."(3%)
"They only move on when they've exhausted their food source, the animals--and humans--who rely on the fresh water to survive. Groundlings have tried over the years, but we've never been able to find another source of water. It's risky to explore very far from the caves, because we never know when the flesh-eaters will come. So we're stuck, with the Lofties, with the Scourge."(6%)
"The caves are safe. The flesh-eaters don't come in..."(6%)
"The Scourge typically stays for two or three days, but they could stay longer. Sometimes even a week or more. The elders didn't speak of those times."(10%)
Tell me why the Groundlings wouldn't have just started living in the caves if that's one sure-fire way to stay safe?! Seriously?! They say they can't leave the caves until the Scourge has left, but yet the arrows that Peree shot them with kills them, so why the fuck don't the groundlings make some fucking weapons!!! Or, better yet, why haven't they made some fucking boats and taken to living on the lake since the Scourge can't swim?!
Furthermore, this bit about Fennel's protection from them made no sense to me.
"I'm supposed to be safe from the Scourge, like Aloe, but I haven't been tested. I will be soon."(3%)
"For a moment I wonder if my protection will hold, but I push the thought away.(7%)
"My protection from the creatures was confirmed, and it gave them a new respect for me."(10%)
And
"I'm not sure I'll live to see the morning after the Three discover my duplicity."(16%)
"...serious lapse in judgment that may have contributed to the deaths of several Groundlings."(18%)
"And you will spend the night in the forest, among the Scourge, as a reminder that you can either stand together with your community...or you will stand alone."(18%)
Let me get this straight--testing Fennel to see if she wouldn't be EATEN was simply finding out if...they wouldn't eat her on her way to get water the first time?! I had assumed they'd captured one and would see if it shrunk away from her or something, but no, it was 'hey girl, it's your duty now to provide water to the whole tribe, so get going, and I hope you don't die.' Dumb! Then I start wondering, well I wonder all over again, why she would be the only one to get water as a Sightless (other than Aloe, who is her foster mother, and just stepped down from water duties to become a member of the council I guess), and they clearly have no qualms about her safety. In fact, they decide to punish her having given the Lofties their water rations against their wishes, by possibly condemning her to die outside the caves while the Scourge is there?! NO FUCKING SENSE! In fact, the whole issue of them not wanting to give the Lofties their water that day was stupid. Why in the name of gawd would they want to antagonize the people they admit gives them protection from the zombies?! Fennel does ask this, which was good, but still. It didn't make sense.
To sum up my feelings in pictures...
May 18, 2012
The Scourge is a very well-written YA post-apocolyptic dysptopian novel written in first person POV with a great romance, and you won't want to put it down until you finish it. Do I even need to say anything else? I mean, that's like my list of all of my favorite things in a book. So if you don't want to go read it based on that sentence, then ... well... your loss.
Actually, I do have two more things to say.
(1) I wasn't sure at first if I would like reading an entire book through the POV of a blind person, but actually it was wonderful. It gave the story a depth and a perspective that is sometimes lacking in YA.
(2) This is the first YA in a long time (if ever) that I've actually highlighted some sentences because they were so well written. Here they are:
When the protagonist is afraid: "My heart is a desperate animal, smashing against my rib cage." Is that an awesome metaphor, or what?
When the protagonist is embarrassed: "I wonder if I've just thrust my face into a wall of fire, or if it only feels that way." LOL! Love it!
OK, now go get this book and read it. The author says on her website that a sequel is underway (but, if there never was a sequel, this is wrapped up enough at the end that you wouldn't live with a grudge against the author for the rest of your life). So, A.G. Henley, if you're reading this, please stop and get back to work on it. Thank you.
Actually, I do have two more things to say.
(1) I wasn't sure at first if I would like reading an entire book through the POV of a blind person, but actually it was wonderful. It gave the story a depth and a perspective that is sometimes lacking in YA.
(2) This is the first YA in a long time (if ever) that I've actually highlighted some sentences because they were so well written. Here they are:
When the protagonist is afraid: "My heart is a desperate animal, smashing against my rib cage." Is that an awesome metaphor, or what?
When the protagonist is embarrassed: "I wonder if I've just thrust my face into a wall of fire, or if it only feels that way." LOL! Love it!
OK, now go get this book and read it. The author says on her website that a sequel is underway (but, if there never was a sequel, this is wrapped up enough at the end that you wouldn't live with a grudge against the author for the rest of your life). So, A.G. Henley, if you're reading this, please stop and get back to work on it. Thank you.
January 9, 2018
I thoroughly enjoyed this book! It has a great deal of action and suspense throughout. And I am seriously enjoying books that involved people, MCs with a disability!
Fennel, or Fenn to her friends is blind, or Sightless as she is called. She lives in the forest with her people, the Groundlings. As the names suggests, her people live on the ground, and there are other people who live up in the trees, the Loftys. The Groundlings and Loftys have a uneasy history between them, they tolerate each other most days, but there is still tensions between them. But the time when they come together is when fearsome creatures, Fleash-eaters, attack them and forces them to hide. The Groundlings take to the caves and the Loftys to the trees.
And in the forest there is only one water hole where they can collect their water. But it is told a Sightless is protected from fleshies (flesh-eaters), thus it is there job to collect water and bring it back to the Groundlings and the Loftys. But the Sightless has a Lofty protector, a Keeper, that protects them during their journey.
And this is where Fenn meets Peree, her Keeper. And he watches over her every time. But the fleshies become reckless and are not willing to leave. Which makes Fenn decide to venture beyond the caves and seek for the legendary waters that is said to be cleaner than their own and protected by the fleshies. With no other choice she goes with her Keeper to find and help save their people.
But during this journey, they will face many dangers, and not from fleshies or animals but by infections and dehydrations. Yet as they continue on, they will both discover secrets that will change how they see their perspective and who they can trust.
This was a wonderful start to a series, I can see how this series can keep going stronger as the story progresses. Will Fenn and Peree be the ones to prove that Groundlings and Loftys can live together, can be friendly and have harmony amongst each other? You'll have to read to find out!
Received a copy from the author herself in exchange for an honest review, thank you!
Fennel, or Fenn to her friends is blind, or Sightless as she is called. She lives in the forest with her people, the Groundlings. As the names suggests, her people live on the ground, and there are other people who live up in the trees, the Loftys. The Groundlings and Loftys have a uneasy history between them, they tolerate each other most days, but there is still tensions between them. But the time when they come together is when fearsome creatures, Fleash-eaters, attack them and forces them to hide. The Groundlings take to the caves and the Loftys to the trees.
And in the forest there is only one water hole where they can collect their water. But it is told a Sightless is protected from fleshies (flesh-eaters), thus it is there job to collect water and bring it back to the Groundlings and the Loftys. But the Sightless has a Lofty protector, a Keeper, that protects them during their journey.
And this is where Fenn meets Peree, her Keeper. And he watches over her every time. But the fleshies become reckless and are not willing to leave. Which makes Fenn decide to venture beyond the caves and seek for the legendary waters that is said to be cleaner than their own and protected by the fleshies. With no other choice she goes with her Keeper to find and help save their people.
But during this journey, they will face many dangers, and not from fleshies or animals but by infections and dehydrations. Yet as they continue on, they will both discover secrets that will change how they see their perspective and who they can trust.
This was a wonderful start to a series, I can see how this series can keep going stronger as the story progresses. Will Fenn and Peree be the ones to prove that Groundlings and Loftys can live together, can be friendly and have harmony amongst each other? You'll have to read to find out!
Received a copy from the author herself in exchange for an honest review, thank you!
August 21, 2012
I'll be the first to admit, I never read independently published books. Scratch that--I NEVER read them. For one thing, I'm one of those grammar Nazis who can't handle a few errors (per page). For another, I'm tired of unoriginal YA stories that are all trying to be replicas of Twilight or the Hunger Games. So imagine my surprise when I started reading this book on a whim, more because of its stellar reviews than because of its plot, cover, or price tag.
For the record, this book was nothing like Twilight or the Hunger Games--and I mean that in the best way possible.
I don't want to give anything away, so for a synopsis read the blurb or other reviews (that's what I did). I'm writing this in case someone else like me happens along. And because, as a (hopefully) budding author myself, I felt a bit obligated to encourage readers to pick up this hidden bit of literary beauty.
The plot is original and creative--I loved the idea behind the Scourge and being sightless, although parts were slightly unbelievable even in the context of the story. That's probably why I took away a star (although if it were a perfect world, I'd only have taken away half a star). Fennel is an extraordinary character--she is strong, witty, funny, imperfect in all the right ways (meaning she isn't an obnoxiously and unrealistically perfect person), and she grows. One of my biggest pet peeves is when a character remains static throughout the story, like some famous ones I could name. She is afraid and doubts herself at times, but what teenager wouldn't? The supporting cast was nearly as fantastic, but Fenn is the real treasure here.
Error-wise: I found one or two errors and a few things I'd fix, but all in all this book is very clean. It feels a bit unfinished--doesn't have that nice, squeaky polish that big publishing companies add--but it passes muster and should be priced much higher if you ask me. The story brought me out of my own editing mode (which is hard to turn off once it's on), and had me longing for more. The story is fantastic as a stand-alone (and I DON'T think there should be a sequel), but I will be keeping my eye out for more of Henley's work regardless.
Cute story, a bit cheesy at times (I've always had a soft spot for cheese), a tiny bit predictable, but overall a fantastic read and well worth the metaphorical leap into independent territory.
For the record, this book was nothing like Twilight or the Hunger Games--and I mean that in the best way possible.
I don't want to give anything away, so for a synopsis read the blurb or other reviews (that's what I did). I'm writing this in case someone else like me happens along. And because, as a (hopefully) budding author myself, I felt a bit obligated to encourage readers to pick up this hidden bit of literary beauty.
The plot is original and creative--I loved the idea behind the Scourge and being sightless, although parts were slightly unbelievable even in the context of the story. That's probably why I took away a star (although if it were a perfect world, I'd only have taken away half a star). Fennel is an extraordinary character--she is strong, witty, funny, imperfect in all the right ways (meaning she isn't an obnoxiously and unrealistically perfect person), and she grows. One of my biggest pet peeves is when a character remains static throughout the story, like some famous ones I could name. She is afraid and doubts herself at times, but what teenager wouldn't? The supporting cast was nearly as fantastic, but Fenn is the real treasure here.
Error-wise: I found one or two errors and a few things I'd fix, but all in all this book is very clean. It feels a bit unfinished--doesn't have that nice, squeaky polish that big publishing companies add--but it passes muster and should be priced much higher if you ask me. The story brought me out of my own editing mode (which is hard to turn off once it's on), and had me longing for more. The story is fantastic as a stand-alone (and I DON'T think there should be a sequel), but I will be keeping my eye out for more of Henley's work regardless.
Cute story, a bit cheesy at times (I've always had a soft spot for cheese), a tiny bit predictable, but overall a fantastic read and well worth the metaphorical leap into independent territory.
March 9, 2016
I really enjoyed this book and the different outlook on the zombies.
Definitely a unique storyline and the characters were compelling. I ate this book up quickly since I couldn't put it down.
Definitely a unique storyline and the characters were compelling. I ate this book up quickly since I couldn't put it down.
May 3, 2021
This book is insane. Not all good insane, and not all bad insane, but 100% insane. 😂 Three stars purely for the laughs.
What you shouldn’t expect — for the setting to make any sense at all.
What you should expect — a super fast post-apocalyptic read with innocent romance and some decent characters.
What you shouldn’t expect — for the setting to make any sense at all.
What you should expect — a super fast post-apocalyptic read with innocent romance and some decent characters.
January 28, 2014
Rating: 5 out of 5.
This novel was brilliant. Loved the plot, setting and characters.
I also enjoyed reading the author's afterword. Great use and research of Australia's Dreamtime stories.
This novel was brilliant. Loved the plot, setting and characters.
I also enjoyed reading the author's afterword. Great use and research of Australia's Dreamtime stories.
May 11, 2021
I went into this book blind - pun fully intended - and I am so glad I picked this up when my book club featured it for May. I've never read a book with a blind protagonist, but it helped to give a truly fresh and unique perspective that I haven't experienced in other stories. I definitely think this is firmly entrenched as a YA novel, but that isn't a negative thing by any means. With everything that happens in this book, I felt like it was going to fully wrap things up by the end, but while some things get ended it very much sets the stage for the continuing series. I can't jump straight to book two right now, but it's definitely going on the TBR for later.
June 22, 2013
Fenn is Sightless.
And in her world means that she is mysteriously protected from the Scourge.
So when her mother Aloe become a member of the Three, is now Fenn's responsibility to be the water carrier to her community the Groundlings and to the Lofties.
What are exactly the Scourge?
The sighted say the creatures bodies are open in patches, weeping pus and thick, dark blood. Their deformed faces are masks of horror. They roam the forests, reeking of festering flesh, consuming anything living.
They're the reason why the Groundlings and the Lofties, have to be constantly on guard, in order to survive.
To hear the agony of their hunger, smell their disease, feel their hot breath on my skin ... the idea feels me with dread and loathing.
Groundlings and Lofties used to be one community. They all lived in the trees where they would be safe from any Scourge raiding. But although they were safe they still have to gather food and protect their resources. So the dark haired were forced to live by the ground, while the fair-haired remained above.
By then once a year, the Exchange happened, if a baby was born in the ground fair-haired he must go to live with a Loftie family and vice-versa.
So you can imagine, that besides the truce this two have, the tension was palpable.
Now the Scourge are closing in, and so Fenn must bring water for her community that hides in the caves and to the Lofties. For that she will have the help of a keeper, Peree, a Loftie that will be there for her protection.
Although Fenn should mistrust him, she finds herself liking his companion. He is kind, protective and thoughtful.
He is there for her, every step of the way, he is there to comfort her, to entertain her with his stories.
In the midst of an eminent war, Fenn and Peree go in a crusade to find another source of water. Does it exist that pure water or is just a myth?
Now Fenn and Peree must rely in each other, fighting for their survival and ultimately uncovered many truths about them all.
*****
This book was just amazing!
A rich and complex new world, that makes us question, how humanity got to that point? What caused it all?
And gosh, the twist and turns of this story, just knocked me out!! And did I mentioned how action packed it is?
Besides that i LOVED Fenn and Peree, they're just wonderful characters.
Not an insta-love, it was great to see how everything unfold...and how real it all felt. *sigh
Oh and they're both kick-ass heroes! They both stand for ehat they believe and what's right.
So if you're fan of dystopian stories, this one is for you!!
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May 2, 2013
What a surprise!
It has been a long time ago since I really liked a YA Dystopian book. So many authors nowadays try to be the new Suzanne Collins, or Stephanie Meyer. The only thing that differs is the circumstances and the dystopian world they create but they all copy the 3 persons relationship. One girl who loves 2 boys. Two boys love that girl. So I have read a lot of disappointing YA books because of that.
This time I was not disappointed though. Yes it is maybe in some eyes not the same genre because of zombies but I disagree, it is set after our world (nearly) died so I consider it the same genre.
This has a lot of surprises though and to be honest, although I liked it, I think this should have stayed just the one book and not be a part of a series, but apparently this is book 1.
Yes I do not mean I do not want to read more by this author but I worry that book 2 will be what I described in the first part of my review, cause there is indeed a second boy in this book who loves the main character, only difference so far is she does not love him back.
But I can see it coming, in book 2 boy 1 surprisingly disappears, she thinks he died but he did not, and she hooks up with boy 2. Then boy 1 will come back blablabla.
Okay. So please author of this very enjoyable first book, with great twists and very exiting new world, do not do that. I really enjoyed reading this book. It was refreshing so I hope that you do not go there.
I enjoyed this book very much so not sure what to give. 4 or 5 stars?
4.5 stars
It has been a long time ago since I really liked a YA Dystopian book. So many authors nowadays try to be the new Suzanne Collins, or Stephanie Meyer. The only thing that differs is the circumstances and the dystopian world they create but they all copy the 3 persons relationship. One girl who loves 2 boys. Two boys love that girl. So I have read a lot of disappointing YA books because of that.
This time I was not disappointed though. Yes it is maybe in some eyes not the same genre because of zombies but I disagree, it is set after our world (nearly) died so I consider it the same genre.
This has a lot of surprises though and to be honest, although I liked it, I think this should have stayed just the one book and not be a part of a series, but apparently this is book 1.
Yes I do not mean I do not want to read more by this author but I worry that book 2 will be what I described in the first part of my review, cause there is indeed a second boy in this book who loves the main character, only difference so far is she does not love him back.
But I can see it coming, in book 2 boy 1 surprisingly disappears, she thinks he died but he did not, and she hooks up with boy 2. Then boy 1 will come back blablabla.
Okay. So please author of this very enjoyable first book, with great twists and very exiting new world, do not do that. I really enjoyed reading this book. It was refreshing so I hope that you do not go there.
I enjoyed this book very much so not sure what to give. 4 or 5 stars?
4.5 stars
May 2, 2021
Somewhere between a 3 and 4 star. It was a decent story with a couple of flaws. I do not feel compelled to read the next book. But I do not regret reading this one.
February 26, 2013
I once got scared because my room was “too warm”, I thought maybe a ghost was using reverse psychology and making the room cold was too obvious. I think this explains why I tend to stay away from Zombie novels. I get freaked out easily and do not like to be scared. I am so glad I got over my fears and read The Scourge though, because it is now one of my favorite reads of 2012!
The novel follows Fennel, a Groundling, who because she is blind is tasked with gathering water for both The Lofties, who live in the trees and her people during attacks of the Scourge. Because Fennel is sightless she is immune to the Scourge. To protect her during water gathering Fennel has a Lofty protector, Peree, who she begins to trust despite all of the terrible things that have been said about his people.
The plot twists in The Scourge kept me on my toes at all times. Just when I was starting to get used to the world Henley pulled the rug out from under me. I was forced to reevaluate everything I thought to be true about the society. This happened to me more then once and showcased Henley’s talent as a storyteller.
The characters in The Scourge immediate sucked me in to the story and instantly had me rooting for them. I have never read a book written from the perspective of someone who is blind. It was refreshing to read about how Fennel perceived the world without ever being able to see it. Despite Fennel’s lack of sight I felt like she saw more then those around her. Peree was incredibly likable. I loved listening to the stories he told and his strength. His dedication to Fennel felt completely natural and melted my heart.
The romance was one of my favorite things about this story. It was sweet, slow, and didn’t overshadow the plot twists. The romance complemented the story and was believable. The Lofties and Groundlings have spent generations resenting each other, Fennel and Peree are not going to instantly put that behind them. Fennel’s mixed feelings were natural.
Overall, I loved this novel. If you are nervous about picking up The Scourge because it is self-published do not hesitate! I mean it run to your e-reader and download this novel. It was amazingly well written and completely addictive. I could not stop reading until I was finished and even now I am eagerly awaiting the release of the sequel!
The novel follows Fennel, a Groundling, who because she is blind is tasked with gathering water for both The Lofties, who live in the trees and her people during attacks of the Scourge. Because Fennel is sightless she is immune to the Scourge. To protect her during water gathering Fennel has a Lofty protector, Peree, who she begins to trust despite all of the terrible things that have been said about his people.
The plot twists in The Scourge kept me on my toes at all times. Just when I was starting to get used to the world Henley pulled the rug out from under me. I was forced to reevaluate everything I thought to be true about the society. This happened to me more then once and showcased Henley’s talent as a storyteller.
The characters in The Scourge immediate sucked me in to the story and instantly had me rooting for them. I have never read a book written from the perspective of someone who is blind. It was refreshing to read about how Fennel perceived the world without ever being able to see it. Despite Fennel’s lack of sight I felt like she saw more then those around her. Peree was incredibly likable. I loved listening to the stories he told and his strength. His dedication to Fennel felt completely natural and melted my heart.
The romance was one of my favorite things about this story. It was sweet, slow, and didn’t overshadow the plot twists. The romance complemented the story and was believable. The Lofties and Groundlings have spent generations resenting each other, Fennel and Peree are not going to instantly put that behind them. Fennel’s mixed feelings were natural.
Overall, I loved this novel. If you are nervous about picking up The Scourge because it is self-published do not hesitate! I mean it run to your e-reader and download this novel. It was amazingly well written and completely addictive. I could not stop reading until I was finished and even now I am eagerly awaiting the release of the sequel!
December 20, 2012
I just want to give a huge Thank You to Kismet Touring for allowing me to be a part of this awesome tour. I have never ever read a book that has taken me by surprise like The Scourge did. I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I look forward t reading more from A.G. Henley.
The Scourge is a story that has so many twists and turns and lies and secrets that each page you read leaves you breathless and wanting more. The Scourge is a story about a girl who is blind yes you heard me she is blind and she is a groundling who has to rely on her senses to help her people out. Being blind is not that bad but being the groundling that has to face the scourge alone does not scare her. Fenn knows her people need fresh water and she knows that she will have to face the scourge to get that water. But Fenn has a protector Peree who is a Lofty Keeper and he has vowed to keep her safe.
Peree is determined to keep Fenn safe and sound from the scourge and make sure nothing happens to her. What he did not bank on was falling in love with her. But the two of them start to get closer and as time goes on they develop feelings for each other and can not deny them. Fenn knows she is in danger every time she has to get water for her people and the lofty keepers but she also knows that a job is a job and a lot of people are relying on her.
Then Fenn and Peree uncover a huge secret and Fenn is not sure who she can trust. She questions everything she has been taught and with this secret looming she and Peree will have to figure out who to trust and who to stay away from. What will happen to Fenn? Will she be able to get past the secret or will it destroy her? WIll she and Fenn become a couple or will the secret destroy everything she knows?
Come along and read this great story because it is one that will stay with you for a long time after you are done reading it!
The Scourge is a story that has so many twists and turns and lies and secrets that each page you read leaves you breathless and wanting more. The Scourge is a story about a girl who is blind yes you heard me she is blind and she is a groundling who has to rely on her senses to help her people out. Being blind is not that bad but being the groundling that has to face the scourge alone does not scare her. Fenn knows her people need fresh water and she knows that she will have to face the scourge to get that water. But Fenn has a protector Peree who is a Lofty Keeper and he has vowed to keep her safe.
Peree is determined to keep Fenn safe and sound from the scourge and make sure nothing happens to her. What he did not bank on was falling in love with her. But the two of them start to get closer and as time goes on they develop feelings for each other and can not deny them. Fenn knows she is in danger every time she has to get water for her people and the lofty keepers but she also knows that a job is a job and a lot of people are relying on her.
Then Fenn and Peree uncover a huge secret and Fenn is not sure who she can trust. She questions everything she has been taught and with this secret looming she and Peree will have to figure out who to trust and who to stay away from. What will happen to Fenn? Will she be able to get past the secret or will it destroy her? WIll she and Fenn become a couple or will the secret destroy everything she knows?
Come along and read this great story because it is one that will stay with you for a long time after you are done reading it!
June 18, 2018
5 FRICKING STARS!!!!
I've never read ANYTHING like this before. Damn, I can only imagine the stress and struggle the sighless go through in their everyday life. But without a doubt, they are fearless and brave like Fennel.
I could only imagine how difficult it would have been like to be blind in an apocalyptic world.
The writing was easy to follow. The storyline had me thirsty for more.
Book 2, here I come!
I've never read ANYTHING like this before. Damn, I can only imagine the stress and struggle the sighless go through in their everyday life. But without a doubt, they are fearless and brave like Fennel.
I could only imagine how difficult it would have been like to be blind in an apocalyptic world.
The writing was easy to follow. The storyline had me thirsty for more.
Book 2, here I come!
did-not-finish
July 20, 2020I picked this book up as a freebie a few years ago, and I think the price was just right.
While I immediately was drawn into Fennel's world, it lost me when it transitioned from first-person present tense to first-person past tense in the span of a single paragraph.
No. Just, no.
If you care about your work, why would you send it out into the world unedited? I just don't get it.
DNF at 6%.
While I immediately was drawn into Fennel's world, it lost me when it transitioned from first-person present tense to first-person past tense in the span of a single paragraph.
No. Just, no.
If you care about your work, why would you send it out into the world unedited? I just don't get it.
DNF at 6%.
May 7, 2021
Full of world building holes and lots of loose ends that led to a fairly unsatisfying ending, but I did have fun reading it and I liked the characters. I always groan at first person present tense narration, and many of my minor complaints were YA troupe related. Probably would have enjoyed it a lot more if I were a teen and didn't think so hard about it.
January 11, 2013
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The Scourge is an amazing dystopian novel that you really can't miss to read .I usually give at least 3 hearts to the books I review (even if sometimes maybe they're not worth them, but I try to be positive) but this book is absolutely a 5 hearts, and I'm not the type who gives five hearts very easily. From the first chapter of the book I've been completely caught up by the plot and I was so curious to discover about the Scourge, that I kept reading until the first hours of the morning, sometimes. Overall, I think that the world the author created is simply brilliant and absolutely interesting but then, the strong point of the book is certainly how the society is ruled. Honestly, it's quite a common post-apocalyptic society, but then the twists and the secrets that will be revealed at the end, contribute to make the whole situation special. The society in which Fennel, the protagonist, lives is organized in Groundlings, those who live on the ground, in direct contact with the dangerous Scourge, and provide water for all the people, and Lofties, those who live on the trees, far away from the horror and fear of staying on the ground, where the beasts can find you; the only duty of the Lofties is to protect from the trees the Water Bearer, a blind person (like Fennel) who is protected from the Scourge, who has the task to provide water for others.The division into these two categories happens when the baby is just born: if he/she has dark colors, he/she will be a groundling, if he/she has light colors, a Lofties; this implies that the majority of families are mixted and there are a few possibilites that a mother can keep her own child. I found this whole situation really fascinating becuase it shows us how desperate and cruel human beings can be, in order to assure themselves security and survival. It's useless to say that in this case, Groundlings and Lofties were not in good relationship, since the Lofties benefited of the resources the Groundlings had to die to achieve.The point that turns the book completely is when Fennel decides to find the famous Hidden Waters (a source that is hidden in the caves, far away from the Scourge, who didn't seem to like darkness) , accompained by Peere, her Lofty Keeper: this journey will led the two of them toward incredible adventures and difficulties but, above all, they will discover a shocking truth that will once for all expose the cruelty and injustice of the society they live in. I really loved how full of adventures this book was but the end was just shocking! There were so many revelations I didn't absolutely see coming and you know how much I love surprises!! Moreover I think the author's choice of speaking from Fennel's point of view was an amazing choice, because her blindness contribute to make the book more vivid and real; not being able to see things, she always describes the world around her with all 4 senses, so that you can perfectly see what she can't see instead.
The Scourge is an amazing dystopian novel that you really can't miss to read .I usually give at least 3 hearts to the books I review (even if sometimes maybe they're not worth them, but I try to be positive) but this book is absolutely a 5 hearts, and I'm not the type who gives five hearts very easily. From the first chapter of the book I've been completely caught up by the plot and I was so curious to discover about the Scourge, that I kept reading until the first hours of the morning, sometimes. Overall, I think that the world the author created is simply brilliant and absolutely interesting but then, the strong point of the book is certainly how the society is ruled. Honestly, it's quite a common post-apocalyptic society, but then the twists and the secrets that will be revealed at the end, contribute to make the whole situation special. The society in which Fennel, the protagonist, lives is organized in Groundlings, those who live on the ground, in direct contact with the dangerous Scourge, and provide water for all the people, and Lofties, those who live on the trees, far away from the horror and fear of staying on the ground, where the beasts can find you; the only duty of the Lofties is to protect from the trees the Water Bearer, a blind person (like Fennel) who is protected from the Scourge, who has the task to provide water for others.The division into these two categories happens when the baby is just born: if he/she has dark colors, he/she will be a groundling, if he/she has light colors, a Lofties; this implies that the majority of families are mixted and there are a few possibilites that a mother can keep her own child. I found this whole situation really fascinating becuase it shows us how desperate and cruel human beings can be, in order to assure themselves security and survival. It's useless to say that in this case, Groundlings and Lofties were not in good relationship, since the Lofties benefited of the resources the Groundlings had to die to achieve.The point that turns the book completely is when Fennel decides to find the famous Hidden Waters (a source that is hidden in the caves, far away from the Scourge, who didn't seem to like darkness) , accompained by Peere, her Lofty Keeper: this journey will led the two of them toward incredible adventures and difficulties but, above all, they will discover a shocking truth that will once for all expose the cruelty and injustice of the society they live in. I really loved how full of adventures this book was but the end was just shocking! There were so many revelations I didn't absolutely see coming and you know how much I love surprises!! Moreover I think the author's choice of speaking from Fennel's point of view was an amazing choice, because her blindness contribute to make the book more vivid and real; not being able to see things, she always describes the world around her with all 4 senses, so that you can perfectly see what she can't see instead.
December 13, 2020
**updated to add that both my sons are giving this five stars**
Zombies are my bread and butter. They are what make the world go ’round. I have read so many zombie books and graphic novels, not to mention watching movies and shows. I had started to believe that I had seen it all. Then, along comes A.G. Henley, and I can freely admit that I didn’t see her twist coming. YAY! It takes a lot to surprise me, and it’s always so nice to find this quality in a book. Obviously, it would be a huge spoiler if I told you what the twist was, so I won’t even hint at it. All I will say is that these are not your typical, run-of-the-mill, walking corpses!
Fennel, Fen, is such an interesting character to me. She’s blind, which can obviously cause some problems. Most obviously, she’s wandering around in a zombie infested forest! She is forced to use her ears and sense of smell to maneuver around the living dead (good things those things moan and stink, right?), memorizing her path to prevent getting lost and separated from her loved ones. It can also create an interesting scenario for the author, who is now forced to describe scents, sounds and how everything feels to the touch, as opposed to what they actually look like. I thought Henley did a phenomenal job of it, and I often found myself imagining what she must see in her mind’s eye.
Fen is her village’s water bearer. It is her job to bring water for her own people, the Groundlings, and for the group of people who live in the trees, the Lofties. It is Peree’s job, as her Keeper, to protect her from the Scourge while she makes the trip to the water each day. While this seems like a symbiotic relationship, of sorts, it is quite political. Normally, politics grate on me, but in this case, it adds a complex level of tension to the story line. So many characters seem to be working for their own personal agendas, and it’s anyone’s guess who is being honest.
As Fen and Peree are forced to work together, they inevitably grow closer. While I didn’t feel a lot of passion between them, I definitely bought into their companionship. They have a great dialogue, and I can sense their need to lean on, as well as protect, each other. I have a very bad feeling, though, that there is a love triangle looming in the sequel. *potential ugh*
So it took me a really long time to finish The Scourge. Do you ever read a book as slowly as possible, dreading every page turn? This book did that for me, because every new page brought me closer to the end, and every fiber of my being didn’t want to reach that last page. I kept one eye on the progression bar, wondering how everything could possibly turn out alright. There was going to be cliffhanger, for sure, and I hate cliffhangers! (and by hate, I mean secretly love…) After all was said and done, I was actually pretty happy with how it wrapped up. Now, how long will it be before I break down and get the sequel??
I received a copy of this book from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
Zombies are my bread and butter. They are what make the world go ’round. I have read so many zombie books and graphic novels, not to mention watching movies and shows. I had started to believe that I had seen it all. Then, along comes A.G. Henley, and I can freely admit that I didn’t see her twist coming. YAY! It takes a lot to surprise me, and it’s always so nice to find this quality in a book. Obviously, it would be a huge spoiler if I told you what the twist was, so I won’t even hint at it. All I will say is that these are not your typical, run-of-the-mill, walking corpses!
Fennel, Fen, is such an interesting character to me. She’s blind, which can obviously cause some problems. Most obviously, she’s wandering around in a zombie infested forest! She is forced to use her ears and sense of smell to maneuver around the living dead (good things those things moan and stink, right?), memorizing her path to prevent getting lost and separated from her loved ones. It can also create an interesting scenario for the author, who is now forced to describe scents, sounds and how everything feels to the touch, as opposed to what they actually look like. I thought Henley did a phenomenal job of it, and I often found myself imagining what she must see in her mind’s eye.
Fen is her village’s water bearer. It is her job to bring water for her own people, the Groundlings, and for the group of people who live in the trees, the Lofties. It is Peree’s job, as her Keeper, to protect her from the Scourge while she makes the trip to the water each day. While this seems like a symbiotic relationship, of sorts, it is quite political. Normally, politics grate on me, but in this case, it adds a complex level of tension to the story line. So many characters seem to be working for their own personal agendas, and it’s anyone’s guess who is being honest.
As Fen and Peree are forced to work together, they inevitably grow closer. While I didn’t feel a lot of passion between them, I definitely bought into their companionship. They have a great dialogue, and I can sense their need to lean on, as well as protect, each other. I have a very bad feeling, though, that there is a love triangle looming in the sequel. *potential ugh*
So it took me a really long time to finish The Scourge. Do you ever read a book as slowly as possible, dreading every page turn? This book did that for me, because every new page brought me closer to the end, and every fiber of my being didn’t want to reach that last page. I kept one eye on the progression bar, wondering how everything could possibly turn out alright. There was going to be cliffhanger, for sure, and I hate cliffhangers! (and by hate, I mean secretly love…) After all was said and done, I was actually pretty happy with how it wrapped up. Now, how long will it be before I break down and get the sequel??
I received a copy of this book from Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
June 28, 2012
I found "The Scourge" through an Amazon recommendation and after seeing all of the great reviews for it, I decided to pick it up. I'm very glad that I did! Is there anything that the great Amazon computer doesn't know?
This is one of those post-apocalyptic YA novels, kind of in the vein of "The Hunger Games." The story centers around a teenager named Fennel. She belongs to a community called the Groundlings. They live on the forest floor and spend their lives in fear of "the scourge," a pack of roaming zombie-like creatures. Above the Groundlings live the Lofties, in the tree tops. They are safer from the scourge due to their height. They won't let the Groundlings up into the safety of their trees, which creates a ton of bad blood, as you can imagine. Whenever the scourge appears, the Groundlings have to retreat to caves, which the creatures won't enter, and wait until they move on again. Fennel is sightless (i.e. blind). Since the sightless are for some reason immune to the scourge, she is tasked with taking daily trips to the nearby lake to bring back water to her community while they hide in the caves. A Lofty named Peree is assigned to be her keeper. He stays up in the trees, acts as her eyes and shoots any of the scourge who get too close with his arrows in exchange for half of Fennel's water, which he is able to take to his community. When the latest scourge visitation starts dragging out too long, Fennel volunteers to venture deep into the caves and try to find a fabled, protected water source for her people. What she finds changes everything she knows about her community.
This is the first book I have read in which the protagonist is blind. It was very interesting to read a novel from that perspective. A.G. Henley does a really good job conveying how a person who can't see interprets the world. You don't feel like you're missing anything while reading, and it actually adds to the suspense in several situations.
The characters are well written and the plot has enough twists and turns to keep you guessing. This is one of those books you don't want to put down because you're anxious to see what happens next. I think that both kids and adults will find something to enjoy in this novel. As a teacher, I'm already thinking of several students I want to recommend this to when I get back to school. This was a good one!
This is one of those post-apocalyptic YA novels, kind of in the vein of "The Hunger Games." The story centers around a teenager named Fennel. She belongs to a community called the Groundlings. They live on the forest floor and spend their lives in fear of "the scourge," a pack of roaming zombie-like creatures. Above the Groundlings live the Lofties, in the tree tops. They are safer from the scourge due to their height. They won't let the Groundlings up into the safety of their trees, which creates a ton of bad blood, as you can imagine. Whenever the scourge appears, the Groundlings have to retreat to caves, which the creatures won't enter, and wait until they move on again. Fennel is sightless (i.e. blind). Since the sightless are for some reason immune to the scourge, she is tasked with taking daily trips to the nearby lake to bring back water to her community while they hide in the caves. A Lofty named Peree is assigned to be her keeper. He stays up in the trees, acts as her eyes and shoots any of the scourge who get too close with his arrows in exchange for half of Fennel's water, which he is able to take to his community. When the latest scourge visitation starts dragging out too long, Fennel volunteers to venture deep into the caves and try to find a fabled, protected water source for her people. What she finds changes everything she knows about her community.
This is the first book I have read in which the protagonist is blind. It was very interesting to read a novel from that perspective. A.G. Henley does a really good job conveying how a person who can't see interprets the world. You don't feel like you're missing anything while reading, and it actually adds to the suspense in several situations.
The characters are well written and the plot has enough twists and turns to keep you guessing. This is one of those books you don't want to put down because you're anxious to see what happens next. I think that both kids and adults will find something to enjoy in this novel. As a teacher, I'm already thinking of several students I want to recommend this to when I get back to school. This was a good one!
September 26, 2012
After reading the reviews for this book, I had to give it a try. I was lucky enough to get to read it for free (even though it is very inexpensive on amazon) because I am a Prime member. I began reading it at 10:00pm last night, and stayed up past midnight to get to 50%...then had to force myself to sleep so I wasn't worthless today.
This was one of those (digital) page turners that I thought about all day until I could finish it. At first the writing seemed similar to my first creative writing class submissions, and I found myself mentally correcting things my own professors mentioned and counted off in my writings that I saw within the first few chapters, but after the plot gets going, I suddenly forgot all about the minor details and was sucked in.
Fennel is similar to other dystopian heroines, and the story line is similar to other dystopian tales I've read, but the characters are so well developed, and genuine that I fell in love within 3 chapters.
The story telling within the book is one thing that enchanted me, and I cannot wait for the second book in this series!
This was one of those (digital) page turners that I thought about all day until I could finish it. At first the writing seemed similar to my first creative writing class submissions, and I found myself mentally correcting things my own professors mentioned and counted off in my writings that I saw within the first few chapters, but after the plot gets going, I suddenly forgot all about the minor details and was sucked in.
Fennel is similar to other dystopian heroines, and the story line is similar to other dystopian tales I've read, but the characters are so well developed, and genuine that I fell in love within 3 chapters.
The story telling within the book is one thing that enchanted me, and I cannot wait for the second book in this series!
February 14, 2012
This story had me hooked from the very beginning. Fenn is a strong willed young girl that isn't afraid to test traditions yet shows the vulnerable side of being a seventeen year old girl. She fully accepts her responsibilities to her community, putting others needs before her own. I love the way her relationship with Peree is explored when the two end up on a dangerous but necessary journey. This book is full of drama, suspense and a little romance. It was an intense read that I couldn't put down and recommend for young adults and those not so young adults that love a great adventure.
September 19, 2012
Between 3-4 stars! I enjoyed it but some reminded me of similar genre books which is fine because I know it's hard to have a completely original story. There were twists that were unexpected that I enjoyed as well as a nice ending that was NOT a cliff hanger to be continued. Thank God because frankly I'm getting sick of those. It's nice to enjoy a solo novel. :-)
October 19, 2021
After her mentor retires to become one of their tribe’s high council, blind Fennel takes over as water bearer. When the zombie-like Scourge invade the forest, her tribe retreats to the safety of the caves, leaving her to retrieve the water for the tribe since the Scourge don’t attack the blind. She also has her Keeper, Peree, for company and protection. Peree is the best archer of the Loftie tribe that lives solely in the trees, compared to Fennel’s Groundling tribe that stays entirely on the ground. The two tribes have a feud growing between them with each resenting the other, and it grows worse with the Groundlings trapped in the caves and resentful of the Lofties’ freedom. Fennel decides to go in search of a rumored water source deep within the caves, but rather than let her venture into the darkness alone, her Keeper, Peree joins her.
Yes, I love the Romeo and Juliet story going on between Fennel and Peree and bridging the gap between the two tribes. I love Fennel’s determination and Peree’s humor, caring, and friendliness. And I loved the teenage drama between them, their forming friendship to help her cope with her job with him having to still keep a distance, uncertain of their feelings, knowing they were from opposite sides, trying to feel each other out if they were interested in others in their own tribes, while having to rely on one another. Yes, there were things I didn’t get through the story. Like I didn’t understand why it was such a hardship for Fennel to retrieve the water. I mean, the Scourge never touched her, so all she really had to endure was their smell and listening to them. I guess I never really understood the scope of how big the water bag was. It sounded like it was something that could be lifted, since the Lofties could haul it up into the trees. For that matter, why couldn’t the Lofties get their own water? It sounded like the trees extended for relatively close to the water edge, and the Scourge didn’t go into the water itself. As someone else pointed out it also didn’t make much sense for the water bearer to have only one keeper to shoot at the army of zombies. Another thing I didn’t really get was the male Groundlings’ names. There was a point where Fennel asks Peree what a tiger is because their world doesn’t have any large animals in it any more because of the Scourge. So how would they have names like Bear or Moray? A moray eel certainly wouldn’t be found or known about in the forest. The two separate tribes reminded me of the tribes of The 100 TV show set post-apocalypse in a dense forest. I love the post-apocalyptic genre, though it sounded like the modern world was only 2 or 3 generations removed, which made me wonder why they were in a forest living in huts with no modern buildings around (except for a library in one scene). As one of the other reviews pointed out, there is an agenda to this book of being anti-prejudice and anti-racist and practically a commentary on taking care of nature and our resources. The twists were all fascinating and though it ends on a to-be-continued note, it felt like a good stopping place for this book.
Yes, I love the Romeo and Juliet story going on between Fennel and Peree and bridging the gap between the two tribes. I love Fennel’s determination and Peree’s humor, caring, and friendliness. And I loved the teenage drama between them, their forming friendship to help her cope with her job with him having to still keep a distance, uncertain of their feelings, knowing they were from opposite sides, trying to feel each other out if they were interested in others in their own tribes, while having to rely on one another. Yes, there were things I didn’t get through the story. Like I didn’t understand why it was such a hardship for Fennel to retrieve the water. I mean, the Scourge never touched her, so all she really had to endure was their smell and listening to them. I guess I never really understood the scope of how big the water bag was. It sounded like it was something that could be lifted, since the Lofties could haul it up into the trees. For that matter, why couldn’t the Lofties get their own water? It sounded like the trees extended for relatively close to the water edge, and the Scourge didn’t go into the water itself. As someone else pointed out it also didn’t make much sense for the water bearer to have only one keeper to shoot at the army of zombies. Another thing I didn’t really get was the male Groundlings’ names. There was a point where Fennel asks Peree what a tiger is because their world doesn’t have any large animals in it any more because of the Scourge. So how would they have names like Bear or Moray? A moray eel certainly wouldn’t be found or known about in the forest. The two separate tribes reminded me of the tribes of The 100 TV show set post-apocalypse in a dense forest. I love the post-apocalyptic genre, though it sounded like the modern world was only 2 or 3 generations removed, which made me wonder why they were in a forest living in huts with no modern buildings around (except for a library in one scene). As one of the other reviews pointed out, there is an agenda to this book of being anti-prejudice and anti-racist and practically a commentary on taking care of nature and our resources. The twists were all fascinating and though it ends on a to-be-continued note, it felt like a good stopping place for this book.
March 26, 2018
This book was amazing! I loved the perspective of the character being blind and Peree is absolutely swoon worthy. I love how the author incorporated so many different stories about the different animals "of the past". There are so many different twists in turns in the storyline, so many of which I didn't see coming. The romance was a bit underplayed but I still adored the characters. Fennel is so relatable even though she can't see and her struggle is enchanting to read about. The conflict between the groundlings and lofties isn't all consuming which I liked because it left room for other developments. The whole world is well thought out and I'm definitely looking forward to the next one.
May 9, 2020
This actually blew me away. I couldn't put it down and I was sad when it was over. I got swept up in the story line and I'd love to know what happens next. The way Fennel gets around although she can't see is fantastic and the hidden truths around her were amazing. I liked how her watcher actually loved her before they even met and the way the world actually was. I liked the struggles throughout and all the truths which they both uncovered.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 30, 2017
Review posted on Kindles & Wine
The Scourge has much in common with other young adult dystopian books: something’s gone wrong in the world, things aren’t great, and a young person is destined to try and save his/her community. I’ve read enough of this genre now that it takes a great spin on this premise, or something really unique about the world, to make me sit up and take notice. And take notice is exactly what happened when I read this book.
As I mentioned earlier, I haven’t read a lot of zombie apocalypse books. Sure, I’ve read a few, but in general, it’s not a genre I seek out. Had I judged The Scourge by that association, I would have missed out on an incredibly unique twist – the main character is blind! I was so curious to see how the author would handle this. Would I be able to sympathize with her struggles? Would I see the word the way she “sees” it?
The heroine is Fennel, or Fenn for short. She’s gifted with being blind (referred to as Sightless in the book). Only the Sightless can survive walking among the Scourge, who are zombies created by a world gone wrong. In Fenn’s community, there’s a division between the Groundlings and the Lofties. Groundlings live on the ground (appropriately named!), and Lofties live up in the trees. I bet they have some awesome treehouses! The two communities don’t really get along, but they are forced to cooperate to survive the visits from the Scourge.
When the Scourge terrorize the small community, the Groundlings are forced to retreat into nearby caves. As one of only two gifted Sightless, it’s Fenn’s job to make her way to the watering hole and gather water for both communities during these sieges. We meet Fenn as she’s about to take her first terrifying trip, and I could feel her horror (but don’t worry, it’s not too scary – I had no problems sleeping at night, except for being unable to set the book aside!). Peree is the assigned Loftie who protects her using his bow and arrows when the Scourge get too close while she gathers water. It’s a perilous trip, but one that Fenn has trained for her entire life.
There’s SO much more that happens, but you know us – we keep it spoiler free here at Kindles & Wine. To say any more than this would reveal too much, yet, oh how I wish I could talk more about it!
As I mentioned, I was a smidge concerned I’d have trouble relating to young Fenn. Silly, silly Heather. That was so shortsighted of me. (You see what I did there? :)) The author did a fantastic job of showing the world from Fenn’s perspective. I loved how others describe colors for Fenn in terms of activities or feelings; it really helped with picturing the world she lives in. I appreciated how Fenn’s strength and courage is so deep. Nobody pities her for being blind – I wouldn’t say they envy her, but they certainly admire and respect and even look up to her. In this world, being Sightless isn’t a limitation but, instead, is liberating. Though terrifying, she can walk among the Scourge and survive (I’m sure I don’t need to tell you what zombies do to most people, right?), and dark caves are no problem for someone who’s blind.
When Fenn and Peree are forced to work together for the good of both their communities, things get really interesting (like so interesting, again, I can’t talk about it!). It was neat to read about the Groundlings from the Lofties’ perspective, and vice versa. It helped me to understand why things were the way they are and allowed me to create a better picture of this world and how things work. Even some of the vocabulary is different, which showed how separate the two communities are despite the Lofties pretty much living directly above the Groundlings!
I loved the action and pace of this book! There’s not really any downtime – it was fast and furious right until the end. There was more than one reveal/twist (and possibly more than I mention here) – one I saw coming, one I suspected, and one was like…what?!…followed by my mouth hanging open for several pages. I love being so engrossed in a plot that I’m right there in the moment and am shocked.
I honestly don’t remember how this book found its way onto my radar. Was it a friend, a K&W reader, or just random? I have no clue, otherwise I’d thank them. Speak up if you want credit! I was wrong to be concerned about this book being associated with zombies (I’m so mad my rebellion lasted as long as it did!), and I wouldn’t even classify it as a zombie book – they have their role, but the book isn’t about them. The book is about the two societies and an amazing Sightless woman finding out how deep her strength and courage truly run. Don’t let zombies deter you!
Bottom Line
It took me 7 months to move this book from having purchased it to the top of my TBR list, but immediately after finishing The Scourge, I got the second book and have already read it. That should speak for itself. :)
Rating: A
The Scourge has much in common with other young adult dystopian books: something’s gone wrong in the world, things aren’t great, and a young person is destined to try and save his/her community. I’ve read enough of this genre now that it takes a great spin on this premise, or something really unique about the world, to make me sit up and take notice. And take notice is exactly what happened when I read this book.
As I mentioned earlier, I haven’t read a lot of zombie apocalypse books. Sure, I’ve read a few, but in general, it’s not a genre I seek out. Had I judged The Scourge by that association, I would have missed out on an incredibly unique twist – the main character is blind! I was so curious to see how the author would handle this. Would I be able to sympathize with her struggles? Would I see the word the way she “sees” it?
The heroine is Fennel, or Fenn for short. She’s gifted with being blind (referred to as Sightless in the book). Only the Sightless can survive walking among the Scourge, who are zombies created by a world gone wrong. In Fenn’s community, there’s a division between the Groundlings and the Lofties. Groundlings live on the ground (appropriately named!), and Lofties live up in the trees. I bet they have some awesome treehouses! The two communities don’t really get along, but they are forced to cooperate to survive the visits from the Scourge.
When the Scourge terrorize the small community, the Groundlings are forced to retreat into nearby caves. As one of only two gifted Sightless, it’s Fenn’s job to make her way to the watering hole and gather water for both communities during these sieges. We meet Fenn as she’s about to take her first terrifying trip, and I could feel her horror (but don’t worry, it’s not too scary – I had no problems sleeping at night, except for being unable to set the book aside!). Peree is the assigned Loftie who protects her using his bow and arrows when the Scourge get too close while she gathers water. It’s a perilous trip, but one that Fenn has trained for her entire life.
There’s SO much more that happens, but you know us – we keep it spoiler free here at Kindles & Wine. To say any more than this would reveal too much, yet, oh how I wish I could talk more about it!
As I mentioned, I was a smidge concerned I’d have trouble relating to young Fenn. Silly, silly Heather. That was so shortsighted of me. (You see what I did there? :)) The author did a fantastic job of showing the world from Fenn’s perspective. I loved how others describe colors for Fenn in terms of activities or feelings; it really helped with picturing the world she lives in. I appreciated how Fenn’s strength and courage is so deep. Nobody pities her for being blind – I wouldn’t say they envy her, but they certainly admire and respect and even look up to her. In this world, being Sightless isn’t a limitation but, instead, is liberating. Though terrifying, she can walk among the Scourge and survive (I’m sure I don’t need to tell you what zombies do to most people, right?), and dark caves are no problem for someone who’s blind.
When Fenn and Peree are forced to work together for the good of both their communities, things get really interesting (like so interesting, again, I can’t talk about it!). It was neat to read about the Groundlings from the Lofties’ perspective, and vice versa. It helped me to understand why things were the way they are and allowed me to create a better picture of this world and how things work. Even some of the vocabulary is different, which showed how separate the two communities are despite the Lofties pretty much living directly above the Groundlings!
I loved the action and pace of this book! There’s not really any downtime – it was fast and furious right until the end. There was more than one reveal/twist (and possibly more than I mention here) – one I saw coming, one I suspected, and one was like…what?!…followed by my mouth hanging open for several pages. I love being so engrossed in a plot that I’m right there in the moment and am shocked.
I honestly don’t remember how this book found its way onto my radar. Was it a friend, a K&W reader, or just random? I have no clue, otherwise I’d thank them. Speak up if you want credit! I was wrong to be concerned about this book being associated with zombies (I’m so mad my rebellion lasted as long as it did!), and I wouldn’t even classify it as a zombie book – they have their role, but the book isn’t about them. The book is about the two societies and an amazing Sightless woman finding out how deep her strength and courage truly run. Don’t let zombies deter you!
Bottom Line
It took me 7 months to move this book from having purchased it to the top of my TBR list, but immediately after finishing The Scourge, I got the second book and have already read it. That should speak for itself. :)
Rating: A
January 27, 2025
The Scourge by A.G. Henley captivated me with its unique premise and the journey of Fennel, a blind teenager navigating a post-apocalyptic world. Through vivid storytelling, I felt immersed in her challenges and the lush forest setting experienced through her heightened senses. The tension between the Groundlings and Lofties was gripping, and Fennel’s efforts to unite them were inspiring. This beautifully written tale perfectly blends adventure, romance, and a powerful message about courage and understanding—a must-read for YA dystopian fans.
December 13, 2012
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When people find out that a book is self-published, they tend to naturally shy away from it. I guess they think, if a publishing house rejects a manuscript, it's probably not good enough. The truth is that sometimes, the story isn't what they're looking for at the time, or they've already signed a similar story. Whatever the case is, just because a book is self-published, it doesn't mean that it's bad! When I picked up "The Scourge", I didn't even know that it wasn't published by Random House or Penguin or what have you, and it didn't come through at all when I actually read the book either--in fact, it's one you should check out.
Seventeen-year-old Groundling, Fennel, is Sightless, but she knows how to survive in the dangerous forest. When she's called by her people to begin her lifelong task of braving the Scourge--flesh-eating creatures that haunt humans--to collect water for both the Groundlings and the Lofties, Fennel is anything but fearless. But she won't be alone. Fenn's Lofty Keeper, Peree, a boy who smells like summer, protects her from the trees. When the unlikely pair uncovers a secret that shatters the truths they thought they knew, Fenn must decide who and what to protect--her people, her growing love for a boy she thought she'd never fall for, or the elusive dream of lasting peace in the forest.
I don't know whether this sounds strange or whatever, but the fact that the protagonist is blind just made the story all the more interesting. It presented all sorts of challenges, but Fennel deals with them in a way that makes her likable and extremely believable. Rather than presenting her readers with a two-dimensional, archetypal 'strong' heroine with a single weakness she has to overcome, Ms. Henley weaves in layers to Fenn's character that make her anything but boring. There were times, however, when her blindness wasn't entirely believable in some of the descriptions--they were almost too visual, and it would've been interesting to craft images in your head while reading relying solely on smells, sounds and textures. Nonetheless, Fenn is a unique heroine that I enjoyed being with throughout the book, and I definitely see potential for development in sequels!
Another aspect that was helped by Fenn's blindness is the romance between her and Peree. In a lot of YA books, you'll see the protagonist madly falling head over heels for a super hot boy with piercing eyes, and sometimes it makes me wonder whether it's more of a physical attraction than a deep, real love. And that's something that really bothers me, since romance is a huge element to the YA genre. If the relationship between the so-called star-crossed lovers comes across as shallow, it just ruins it. But in "The Scourge", because Fenn can't just fall for Peree because of his looks, but instead ends up being attracted to him because of his actions and his personality, their romance adds another layer of sweetness and believability to the story. I liked the way their relationship developed, though maybe it could've been stretched out a tad longer.
That being said, I think one thing that put me off just a little was the plot development. The ways the twists in the storyline were introduced to the readers were clumsy and way too sudden, and it just didn't seem too realistic to me. If Ms. Henley had dropped a few hints that led up to these surprises, the plot would've run a lot smoother. Towards the middle of the book, it was pretty much twist after turn after twist, and it was just too much and too out-of-the-blue to work really well.
Nevertheless, "The Scourge" is definitely worth reading, especially if you love realistic romances, or a believable, unique character. Peree and Fenn really tugged on my heartstrings, and I look forward to the sequel to see how things unfold.
Rating: 4/5
When people find out that a book is self-published, they tend to naturally shy away from it. I guess they think, if a publishing house rejects a manuscript, it's probably not good enough. The truth is that sometimes, the story isn't what they're looking for at the time, or they've already signed a similar story. Whatever the case is, just because a book is self-published, it doesn't mean that it's bad! When I picked up "The Scourge", I didn't even know that it wasn't published by Random House or Penguin or what have you, and it didn't come through at all when I actually read the book either--in fact, it's one you should check out.
Seventeen-year-old Groundling, Fennel, is Sightless, but she knows how to survive in the dangerous forest. When she's called by her people to begin her lifelong task of braving the Scourge--flesh-eating creatures that haunt humans--to collect water for both the Groundlings and the Lofties, Fennel is anything but fearless. But she won't be alone. Fenn's Lofty Keeper, Peree, a boy who smells like summer, protects her from the trees. When the unlikely pair uncovers a secret that shatters the truths they thought they knew, Fenn must decide who and what to protect--her people, her growing love for a boy she thought she'd never fall for, or the elusive dream of lasting peace in the forest.
I don't know whether this sounds strange or whatever, but the fact that the protagonist is blind just made the story all the more interesting. It presented all sorts of challenges, but Fennel deals with them in a way that makes her likable and extremely believable. Rather than presenting her readers with a two-dimensional, archetypal 'strong' heroine with a single weakness she has to overcome, Ms. Henley weaves in layers to Fenn's character that make her anything but boring. There were times, however, when her blindness wasn't entirely believable in some of the descriptions--they were almost too visual, and it would've been interesting to craft images in your head while reading relying solely on smells, sounds and textures. Nonetheless, Fenn is a unique heroine that I enjoyed being with throughout the book, and I definitely see potential for development in sequels!
Another aspect that was helped by Fenn's blindness is the romance between her and Peree. In a lot of YA books, you'll see the protagonist madly falling head over heels for a super hot boy with piercing eyes, and sometimes it makes me wonder whether it's more of a physical attraction than a deep, real love. And that's something that really bothers me, since romance is a huge element to the YA genre. If the relationship between the so-called star-crossed lovers comes across as shallow, it just ruins it. But in "The Scourge", because Fenn can't just fall for Peree because of his looks, but instead ends up being attracted to him because of his actions and his personality, their romance adds another layer of sweetness and believability to the story. I liked the way their relationship developed, though maybe it could've been stretched out a tad longer.
That being said, I think one thing that put me off just a little was the plot development. The ways the twists in the storyline were introduced to the readers were clumsy and way too sudden, and it just didn't seem too realistic to me. If Ms. Henley had dropped a few hints that led up to these surprises, the plot would've run a lot smoother. Towards the middle of the book, it was pretty much twist after turn after twist, and it was just too much and too out-of-the-blue to work really well.
Nevertheless, "The Scourge" is definitely worth reading, especially if you love realistic romances, or a believable, unique character. Peree and Fenn really tugged on my heartstrings, and I look forward to the sequel to see how things unfold.
Rating: 4/5
September 1, 2013
Welcome to your typical YA dystopia. Post-apocalyptic world, small, scattered groups of humans fighting for survival, menaced by the foul undead. Boy and girl from conflicting groups fall in love, go on a quest and return home determined to unite and save their communities against terrific odds. Sounds familiar right? Did I mention that Fennel, our heroine and narrator, is blind? Yes, Fennel is sightless, that's one of the first things the book description tells us. As a blind person myself, descriptions like this always get me interested, and worried. What manner of blind character are we dealing with here? The tough, insanely independent Superblink, taking on the world with incredible powers and a trusty animal companion in tow? Or the meek, essentially helpless blind damsel who spends most of the story being carried around by her hunky protector, acting as delicate inspiration for the rest of the party? Or, almost as bad as that, the saintly, wonderful blind girl who goes through all manner of trial in order to be rewarded with the miraculous gift of sight? Unfortunately, these very broad types are what I've come to expect from stories like this. You can only imagine how pleasantly surprised I was to discover that Fennel was, in fact, human. Yes she was stubbornly independent, but also resourceful, adaptable, and able to ask for and accept help when she needed it. She's a full member of her community, expected to pull her own weight and live a completely normal life, complete with mischief and potential boyfriends. The one "superpower" she supposedly possesses, the protection from The Scourge her blindness gives her, turns out not to be quite as special as previously believed. She's angry, vulnerable, aroused, loving, weighed down by responsibility, terrified and occasionally self-pitying. In short, Fennel is perfect in her imperfections, reacting to the situations she finds herself in exactly as anyone else would. It's rare to come across such a fully realized blind character, and I can't praise the author highly enough for an incredible job. I've been in contact with her via Twitter and I look forward to learning more about her research process, as well as answering any questions she might have about life as a blind person.
Oh, and the book? Tons of fun. Peri, our hero, is a delight, and the world-building is quite good, though I'd be interested to learn more about the fall of civilization and what led the Groundlings and Lofties to their current positions. Overall this, and the novella and sequel that follow, is well worth the read. A well-realized dystopic future with one of the most unique and exciting protagonists I've come across.
Oh, and the book? Tons of fun. Peri, our hero, is a delight, and the world-building is quite good, though I'd be interested to learn more about the fall of civilization and what led the Groundlings and Lofties to their current positions. Overall this, and the novella and sequel that follow, is well worth the read. A well-realized dystopic future with one of the most unique and exciting protagonists I've come across.
July 12, 2013
I'd been eyeing this book for a while and was out of good books to read so I thought I'd give it a try so I sent the sample to my Kindle and instantly fell in love with the story. I was so drawn into it that I'd forgotten it was a sample and when it ended I immediately bought the book and clicked as fast as I could to get back to where I was at. This is just one of those stories that sucks you in and you never want to leave. Halfway through the book I noticed I wasn't even seeing any of the words, I was there with Fenn and Peree, adventuring right beside them, seeing everything they see, or didn't see in Fenn's case and sharing their journey.
I love Dystopian books and I absolutely love the type of setting in this book. Even though there's horrible things going on, there's just something about a society that lives off the land that greatly appeals to me. I'm too much of a wuss to do it myself but I do love to daydream about it so this book gave me a lot to daydream about. The Scourge is a very character driven story. Sure there's action but the real meat of the story is in the characters and A.G. Henley does a great job of bringing them to life. What really impressed me was the way she described the world through the eyes of Fenn who is blind. I was wondering how a book could be descriptive with the main character being unable to see yet she handled it beautifully. You get a full detail of every little thing Fenn encounters, not only through her sharp senses but also through the eyes of those around her. I was simply amazed at how detailed this world is. I also enjoyed the fact that it's not just your average run of the mill zombie horde. There's some nice twists in this book that fit so well with the overall theme of the story.
It looks as if this was A.G. Henley's first book which impresses me even more. Not only is it a wonderful story that's beautifully written but it's also extremely well edited. I didn't find a single error or anything to distract me from my wonderful reading experience. It seems all too often some independent authors take editing for granted so it's very nice to see those that put their heart and souls into their work. It shows here and for that she deserves to be congratulated. I will definitely be buying the next book and recommend this book to anyone who loves strong characters, a great storyline with rich detail and a bit of romance. If you're looking for something a bit different then give The Scourge a try, you'll be glad that you did.
I love Dystopian books and I absolutely love the type of setting in this book. Even though there's horrible things going on, there's just something about a society that lives off the land that greatly appeals to me. I'm too much of a wuss to do it myself but I do love to daydream about it so this book gave me a lot to daydream about. The Scourge is a very character driven story. Sure there's action but the real meat of the story is in the characters and A.G. Henley does a great job of bringing them to life. What really impressed me was the way she described the world through the eyes of Fenn who is blind. I was wondering how a book could be descriptive with the main character being unable to see yet she handled it beautifully. You get a full detail of every little thing Fenn encounters, not only through her sharp senses but also through the eyes of those around her. I was simply amazed at how detailed this world is. I also enjoyed the fact that it's not just your average run of the mill zombie horde. There's some nice twists in this book that fit so well with the overall theme of the story.
It looks as if this was A.G. Henley's first book which impresses me even more. Not only is it a wonderful story that's beautifully written but it's also extremely well edited. I didn't find a single error or anything to distract me from my wonderful reading experience. It seems all too often some independent authors take editing for granted so it's very nice to see those that put their heart and souls into their work. It shows here and for that she deserves to be congratulated. I will definitely be buying the next book and recommend this book to anyone who loves strong characters, a great storyline with rich detail and a bit of romance. If you're looking for something a bit different then give The Scourge a try, you'll be glad that you did.
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