Swearing and Bad Punctuation
This is a super-short novella, so short that there was much time for plot or character development. Unfortunately, the book has swearing and other crude words—which I never liked to see in books. It's an instant turn-off for me. I really wish authors would warn about this in book descriptions so those of us who did not like that kind of language can skip the book. Aside from this annoying issue, the book also had problems with grammar, punctuation, and usage. The book had random capitalization, missing commas, extra commas, and more. Clearly, the book was not copyedited or proofread. I did receive an ARC copy of the book, but sadly, these errors persist in the published edition.
I received a free copy of this book, but that did not affect my review.