I really enjoyed this story, it is very likely a five star rating, I enjoyed it so much. It was a favorite of the series, second to only Heath’s story...
Except in my e-copy there was such a glaring flaw, it completely took me out of the story to investigate and re-read to make sure it was really there. Bare with me and my train of thought...In chapter eighteen, Genie is arranging flowers and has a great heart-to-heart with Rowley and then they are at the village assembly and she is waltzing with Graham, great chapter. But in the chapter before, chapter seventeen, Graham is in the village shopping for Genie when he runs into Edmund, after they speak, Edmund is going to go home with Graham when Mrs. Miller comes running and takes Edmund away. Then Graham goes to the Dower House, trying to catch a glimpse of Genie and hides in the trees. Insert chapter eighteen with the flowers, heart-to-heart, and assembly. The following chapter, chapter nineteen, it’s back to Genie leaving the Dower House feeling like Graham is near but doesn’t actually see him before she heads to Edmund’s home for a visit. While there, she visits with Edmund’s wife while waiting for Edmund’s return. Once Edmund arrives, he informs Genie that HE JUST SAW Graham in the village shopping for her and he was going to go back with him to visit the sick father when Mrs. Miller takes him away. Why, oh why is chapter eighteen, with the flower arranging, heart-to-heart, and assembly, inserted between these two chapters? Chapter seventeen and nineteen seem like they are a direct continuation of each other, seventeen tells us what Graham was up to, followed by nineteen of what Genie was up to with the tie-in of sensing Graham was near but not seeing him, which we can assume is actually Graham because he was hiding in the trees at the end of chapter seventeen. The beginning of chapter nineteen does say “the next morning” but Edmund makes it clear it was THE SAME DAY of when he ran into Graham in the village. I know this might just be the formatting of an e-book, there are always grammatical errors in them that are easily chalked up to being a cheap e-book instead of a printed copy, which I always overlook. A lot of e-books have weird errors or grammatical errors, it’s just the way they are sometimes. But the insert of chapter eighteen between those two chapters is so glaring, it makes me question the editing team and/or the publisher. It was just so strange and jarring to the flow of the story...
Otherwise, Genie and Graham’s story is a lovely, five-star read.