Great Potential in the Storyline, but Needs Better Editing
I enjoy MC romances, including some of the darker, grittier ones with subplots going on that, in my humble opinion, actually enhance the love story rather than detracting from it. I mean, what better way to appreciate the good than to experience the bad right along with it? I think it makes the hard-won HEA that much more meaningful. In E.C. Land’s “Malice’s Soul,” the second book in her Devil’s Riot MC series, there is quite a bit going on, but at the heart of it is a love story between Mattox “Malice” Thyne, the older, sinfully sexy, alpha VP of the DRMC, and young, fairylike beauty Willow Swann. This story had great potential: the subplot was good, there was an element of danger that was authentic and suspenseful, and the whole cast of characters (male and female alike) was a ragtag family of misfits that were believable, loyal, and protective. Unfortunately, two things took away from the enjoyment of the story for me. First, although the book could technically be considered a standalone, there were so many references to past events (I’m assuming from the first book since I’ve not yet read it) that I found myself confused, and this sometimes led me to become puzzled by a character’s thought process or reaction to a situation. The other thing – and this was probably what distracted me the most – was that the book needed another round of copyediting and/or proofreading. There were numerous typos, grammatical errors, and punctuation issues, as well as several points where word choice seemed awkward and didn’t flow well with the rest of the story. Stuff like that tends to take away from the reading experience for me, so it was a bit of a bummer.