I enjoyed this 3rd book of the series and give it a solid 8 out of 10. I have some pros and cons.
I liked Death By Tea more than this book because there was a little more adventure, wackiness and variety in actions and setting unlike this book. I grew exceptionally tired of the Halloween-themed setting that took up 90% of this book. Constantly hearing about the ball room, the Halloween decorations and the same characters in the same vicinity doing nothing for the entire book became painfully monotonous. I really needed the author to mix up settings and nearby characters. It was refreshing early on, the whole idea of everyone going to a party, but who knew their time spent at the party would take up the whole book. I got tired of the party scene quick in the book and when I realized it was for the remainder of the book, I had to subtract points for that. After awhile, I was acting like the wives of Carl and Darrin about it.
That all said, this book had a thought-provoking and creative conclusion to the murder. I appreciated the creativeness and cleverness of the murder resolution. I’m gaining a little more respect in Krissy’s problem-solving abilities... just a little that is. She’s still making her fair share of mistakes that in a real world setting would land her in jail with multiple counts of crimes, from assault, slander, tampering with a murder scene, etc. But I appreciated that there were a lot of twists and turns in this book that threw me off as far as the culprit.
What in the heck is up with Krissy’s nastiness towards Rita which has never really had any rhyme or reason at all in this series. It got even nastier in this book. Krissy’s behavior towards her is disgustingly disrespectful, dismissive, disdainful and exploitative. I deplored the way Krissy gave Rita no credit as far as solving some of the mysteries out in the whole murder investigation. Krissy’s thank you to Rita for her help was to turn her nose up with contempt at Rita--all the while, Rita praised Krissy profusely in the end. Our main character is very mean-spirited and has zero manners.
All throughout the book as a matter of fact, Krissy cut off Rita and rejected Rita's attempts to communicate. Yet, Krissy had the nerve to repeatedly impose on Rita with obnoxious phone calls for help on a murder that Krissy had no business playing cop in. After Krissy got the info she wanted, she would again shut down Rita and went so far as hanging the phone up in her face multiple times.
Krissy did this throughout the whole book which made me sicker and sicker of the character. Yet, she sat there and whined because two characters didn’t like her and treated her similarly to how she treats Rita--Carl and Darrin’s wives, that is. If Krissy has such a keen disdain for Rita, please stop exploiting her at your convenience, calling her up to bug her for information. And if you don’t like Rita because of her fanaticism for your Dad, please tell your Dad not to accept what is likely a lot of money he makes in book sells from her that puts food on his table. Krissy has this stink about not wanting to be recognized for the accomplishments of her father and takes it out on Rita even though Krissy is the one who named her coffee establishment after her father's book. Way to get your point across that you want to be recognized for your own accomplishments.
As was the case in past books of this series, Krissy and other characters are again unrealistic in their reactions to a murder. All the characters at the party are reported as either “bored” or “tired” as opposed to jumpy, fearful and paranoid after a murder. Average person would be in a state of panic, making enraged protests to leave and flipping out that they have to be in the vicinity of a murder, wondering if they are next on the chopping. None of this fazes the irresponsive characters of Pine Hills. Krissy's reaction to a murder is no more realistic. She is going back and forth between flirting with men and recklessly parading about a haunted house playing detective and accusing everyone in sight of murder.
Why is Paul’s first reaction to a murder to call out for the assistance of Krissy, a nonpublic official, coffee shop cashier--one who has been told multiple times to keep her nose out of murder investigations because of havoc she has caused in the past. Krissy was a casual party guest, like most everyone else at the party. She was not in the room at the time of the murder and didn't know any of the people and that's even to Officer Dalton’s knowledge. Dalton doesn’t think to first question the woman who screams that there has been a murder that took place (Isabell Ortega), her before everyone else. He doesn’t think to contact the hostess before anyone else. Rather, his instant reflex is to call out for Krissy of all people.
Perhaps this could be passed off as him subtly trying to reignite some old flame with Krissy, but c'mon, upon learning of a murder. That's professional misconduct worthy of losing his badge. It’s no wonder why Dalton is still living in his mama’s basement and needs his mama to find dates for him. He is wholly pathetic, incompetent, unprofessional and dim-witted, among other things. Not only that but allowing Krissy to harass all of the party-goers, interrogating them, falsely accusing them, and even assaulting them. She received no consequences from this other than Dalton flirting with her.
Officer Dalton actually sounds rather manipulative. He involves Krissy because he likes her and wants to win her back, which is a smack in the face to both of the dates they brought to the party. If I were Will or any of these other party-goers, I would report Paul and have his license removed.
Krissy is a total dingbat of a character. She apparently has the town’s hottest guy after her, for what reason is a complete mystery to me based on how they describe her looks and behavior in this series. Despite all that, she is worried about dopey Paul Dalton who comes up with the dumbest reason for dating another girl while he Krissy was still interested in him, lives from his mama's basement and doesn’t know how to act professionally as a police officer. Will needs to drop the loser that is Krissy and go for one of the other one million girls chasing after him. I wish I could have Will based on his description in the book.
Thought it was rude of Krissy to go to a party and completely ignore Will to hang with a guy she recently dated. It was not her place to be investigating as she is not a public official so to be called in as a detective by an ex-flame while ignoring Will all night was entirely disrespectful any way you slice it.
And why is this obnoxious old crone Krissy constantly feeling bad about herself all the time? She was invited to a party by a doctor guy who everyone else wants who was crazy about her. Despite all that, she is ignoring Will at the party and showing Will that she has interest in other men. Krissy is such a self-doubting sourpuss. As others have noted, she needs hardcore therapy. It’s no wonder Robert cheated on her. I’m clueless as to why Robert wants her back or any of these men want her. Horrible personality traits, so my guess is she must look amazing. I find her "gorgeous" looks hard to believe, however, just because she’s constantly insinuated to be out of shape, losing her breath easily after trying to chase others down and pigging out at candy stores and McDonalds in past books.
I thought it was creative the way the author tried to address criticism and complaints he received over his last books with some of the stuff that went on in this book. For example, Paul Dalton asks Krissy why would one of the murder suspects be willing to open up to her of all people when she is not an officer. Krissy reasons that the murder suspect would be more willing to open up to a friendly face like herself than a police officer who suspects him/her of murder. I thought this was creative but unfortunately fell flat. Krissy is seen hanging out with Paul by everyone at this party in an effort to solve the crime. In fact, she interrogates all or most of the murder suspects at the party right alongside Paul, so how does she look like a “friendly face" to anyone as she claimed?
Also, does Krissy even realize what a ginormous clown she looks like running about this party with baggy sweats and an oversized t-shirt?! At one point, she's seen by all the party-goers in a muddy mess while mishandling and abusing an innocent man. I cringed because Will's parents (the parents of Krissy's flame) are at this party watching on at the madness of this clown. That Will has remained interested after the clown hot mess that Krissy has made herself out to be makes me wonder if Will has a sexual disease or something that he's not telling Krissy about. Will is apparently rich, hunkiest man in town chasing after this clown. The author will have to work that out and make it more believable that someone like Will would be chasing after someone like Krissy with all of Will's other choices.
I found it absolutely absurd the way Krissy has the officers wrapped around her little finger, totally running the show. She is no officer, detective nor any other public official and has no training other than being the daughter of a mystery writer. Yet she can freely order about police officers as to what possibly helpless parties they have to grill next, then interrogate and treat as criminals. After several miscalculations, Krissy is still able to freely order these bumbling police officers about like a police chief. I thought Buchanan would actually have some backbone when he arrived since he doesn’t care for Krissy. I fully expected him to get her behind together like he did in past books of this series, but he really weakened in this book. Even he starts getting walked all over by Krissy. What happened to pit-bull Buchanan from the other books who didn't put up with her pestering antics. He was the one character we could expect to get this louse of a main character in check.
The author needs to do a better job of distinguishing the characters from each other and assigning traits. All the characters seem to have a lot of the same quirks and characteristics in this book series. For example, seems every character in the book bites their lip in conversation and uses the word “bests,” as in “I bests go and get started.” I noticed Rita had said that in the first book of the series, Death By Coffee, remarking it to Krissy. I immediately thought it was a cute quirk of Rita's when the author had her say that, like “Lordy Lou” and liked that touch. But then Krissy later said it in Death by Tea, a character who shows disdain with Rita and her mannerisms. I gave it a pass since Rita is always around Krissy and it might have rubbed off on Krissy. But then Lena also says it in Death By Tea, a character who is supposed to be around 19 or 20 year old, punk rock type character. That threw me for a loop. I decided to give it another pass since Lena likes Krissy so much. But then Officer Buchanan said it in this book, Death by Pumpkin Spice. That’s when all bets were off and I finally concluded to myself that this author needs to do a better job of distinguishing character phrases, traits and quirks.