Can't Buy Me Love

Zaftig Dating Agency #47

by Jane Fox

Paul: Look, I'm a professional. I really am. But when Elena walks through my office door, all bets are off. I'm going to do whatever I have to in order to have her.

Elena: When I go to the bank to get a car loan, the last thing I expect is for my loan agent to hit on me. But when he's tall, dark, and handsome like Paul, how could I possibly say no?

Sometimes fate needs a little help. Welcome to the files of the Zaftig Dating Agency, where alpha men find the curvy women of their dreams!

Each book in the series is a complete, standalone story.

This is a sweet but sexy short story romance, complete with insta-love and a guaranteed happily-ever-after. If you’re looking for an escape from everyday life with an alpha older man and the curvy BBW younger woman that he loves, this is the book for you!

Genres: Romance

30 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 12, 2021

About the author

Jane Fox is a romance author and librarian. She grew up sneaking romance novels, and now she's a USA Today bestselling author herself. Her books focus on curvy women who meet the older men of their dreams.

When she's not writing or organizing the library shelves, she's probably sipping a latte and plotting her next steamy tale. So if you're ready for a short, fun romance, grab one of Jane's books and prepare to fall in love.

Reviews

[QuinnReads · Rating 5 out of 5]

Moose and a Taco Truck

That was a fun way to start my day! Jane's short stories are sweet and steamy goodness that I look forward to every week. This story about Elena and Paul? Absolutely what I expected! The inclusion of a taco truck and Moose makes it even more delightful. 🐶💋🔥💥💙

[Nova · Rating 4 out of 5]

I am voluntarily reviewing an advanced reader copy of this book.

Elena’s car is on its last legs so biting the bullet she is off to get get a car loan. The last thing that she was expecting Paul, her advisor but also a man that only her dreams could conjure up and he’s asking her for a date. Paul took one look at Elena and saw the woman he had been waiting to claim had just walked through his office door. He has never flirted with a customer before but with her everything feels different and there is no way that he is letting her go. Could they have really met their perfect match?

Great quick read, I do enjoy these quick reads they are great for me when I’m working and Jane Fox never disappoints with her stories. 3.8*.

[Emily Pennington · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a story from a fun series I enjoy reading. The books are short but pack so much into them! The premise of the stories is that sometimes Fate needs a little help getting deserving people together. Welcome to the files of the Zaftig Dating Agency, where alpha men find the women of their dreams! This series gives the reader stories about all kinds of different people and topics, and the people you meet here will take you on their journey to love.

Paul Lawrence is a banker. His co-worker, Danny, said Paul’s loneliness is getting to him as he turns 40 and longs for a family and someone to love. The woman selected for him to meet is Elena Wiley who is a lifestyle blogger who writes on a wide variety of topics. She needs a loan to replace her rusty old car that’s not going to last much longer. The meeting place selected for Paul and Elena to “find” each other is the Central State Bank as she applies for her loan.

Paul invites Elena to lunch since he is just about ready to go out for something. She has to walk her dog, so they agree to have lunch in Central Park as they walk her beagle named Moose. As she arrives, Paul and Moose check each other out. He passed the “dog test” quickly as he and Moose quickly bond. Walking and chatting, he told Elena he always wanted to travel, but it wasn’t something he wanted to do alone. When though bought tacos and sat on the park bench, Moose took an opportunity to jump and knock Paul’s taco to the ground. Trying to help him, Elena dropped her taco too. As they tried to wipe up the mess on each other, Paul decides to take the rest of the day off and spend it with Elena – perhaps finding an easier way to get clean? Has Mona’s match already started another couple on their journey to happiness and love?

This story was different for me. It progressed much faster than most, or at least felt that way. Paul flirted immediately, which was not exactly professional for a bank loan officer and his customer. Within a half hour, they were meeting for lunch and a walk in the park. And in their initial getting-to-know-you chat, they talked about traveling the world together! There was no sense of build-up, just extravagant plans within a half-hour of meeting! It also didn’t feel like I was getting to know the characters as well and never got to the point of genuinely liking them, as I always have before with the stories. Elena also playfully slaps at him and elbows him frequently, which feels too presumptive after their half-hour friendship. Bottom line is that this one did not engage my emotions and was not one of my favorites.

[lf · Rating 5 out of 5]

Moose

Can't Buy Me Love is the story of Paul Lawrence, a forty year old banker who works at Central State Bank, and Elena Wiley, a twenty-seven year old lifestyle blogger.
Mona Zaftig of the Zaftig Dating Agency has been contacted by Danny, a co-worker and friend of Paul's, because Paul is lonely and it is getting to him. Mona thinks of Elena because they have a shared dream of traveling the world and also having a house with a large family and dogs. Elena is doing well making a living as a blogger, so much so that she has decided it is time to get rid of her old car and get a newer and dependable one. This requires a loan and she just so happens to bank at Central State Bank. When Paul sees the lovely and curvy younger woman standing there he stops in his tracks and stares. As luck would have it, or really Mona playing cupid, Paul's next appointment of the day is the lovely lady, Elena. Let's just say that Elena gets the loan, Paul gets a date and they both get very lucky.....forever and ever!!!

This is a sweet and saucy short story that was an enjoyable read. The story-line is quickly paced and the characters are charming. Can't Buy Me Love is a charming story and a lovely addition to the Zaftig Dating Agency series.

[Ingrid Vermeulen-Quakernaat · Rating 5 out of 5]

I've read several books in the Zaftig Dating Agency series but I think this is my favorite.
Every book has the same concept; people looking for love get signed up by friends and Mona Zaftig makes it happen.

This story, although short, is an accelerated romance with a happy ending. Paul who dreams of living with a woman and traveling the world.
Elena wants a loan to buy a new car and meets Paul there. Previous encounters with men were often broken because these men did not pay attention to her dog. But Paul offers Moose the opportunity to travel and well, he invites his woman to come along.

Nice, romantic story with nice funny moments. And of course the sex. The chemistry between Elena and Paul is credible

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[Terri Pietrowski · Rating 5 out of 5]

After checking up at the water cooler with his co-workers, Paul heads back to his office ready to greet his next client, when he sees a beautiful young woman, in the lobby looking nervous and shy.
Elena needs a loan to buy a reliable car and being a blogger she hopes she can get the loan. When she see the handsome guy she thinks she's in trouble. After talking and flirting with each other, Paul send her application to be approved for the loan, he even invited Elena out to lunch. Now Elena is hoping her loan goes through and a new relationship with the sexy, gorgeous loan officer.
Mona Zaftig the famous matchmaker did it again brought two people together when they least expect it.
I am volunteering to leave a ARC review of this book.

[Pat · Rating 4 out of 5]

This matchmaking series is so addictive! Every story happens without the couple knowing they have been set-up by a friend or family member. Mona Zaftig knows what she is doing! In this story Paul is a banker and when young blogger Elena comes into his branch for a loan the attraction is mutual. But is it a perfect match? I like this story for it's dual POV, straightforward actions by Paul, realistic dialogue and great chemistry. The ending may be inevitable but the journey for every couple is as different as their personalities. It's short with heat, a happy ever after and a charismatic non-human furry friend!

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[Lauren · Rating 4 out of 5]

First things first; I really like the cover of this book!
Can’t buy me love is the latest release in the ‘’zaftig dating agency’’ series. This story is short, fast paced and an enjoyable read. I read this book in one sitting and was satisfied throughout. I found the writing style easy to follow, the characters likeable and the storyline enjoyable. Paul isn’t looking for love but when Elena enters the bank for a loan, he wants her.
The chemistry between Paul and Elena is clear to see and I liked them together.
I really liked the ending and the epilogue for this story.
The storyline for this book is easy to follow and it is an enjoyable read. I look forward to more books from this series.

[Julianne Macneil · Rating 5 out of 5]

i read this book as part of an arc program. This is the 47th book in the Zaftig Dating Agency series. In this book, Mona matches Paul and Elena. Paul works at the local bank and Elena goes to him for a car loan. Paul is 40 and his partner is hounding him to find someone and settle down. When PAul meets Elena, he instantly knows she is the one and asks her to meet him for lunch. Elena needs to walk her dog, so she agrees to meet PAul in the park. They have a great time together and Paul never wants to leave her. I really love this book, i love this series. I love how Mona matches the perfect pairs. Moose was a cute dog and knew Paul was a good guy. Another great one.

[Char · Rating 4 out of 5]

Elena needs a new vehicle and has applied for a loan. Elena is self-employed as a blogger. She has dreams. Paul is a loan officer at the bank where Elena is getting her loan. Elena and Paul have sizzling chemistry. One thing leads to another and they are going out to lunch. Lunch leads to something more. This is an instant love, enjoyable, entertaining, fast paced read with flirty characters with a dash of craziness.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[VR Martin · Rating 4 out of 5]

Zaftig Match puts another couple together!
Mona Zaftig runs a match making service but this is set up through friends and family that want someone they know to find their HEA. Mona Zaftig sets up "chance" meetings with two unsuspecting people and she always gets it right!
Paul is a banker Paula is a blogger - they meet when Paula goes in to apply for a car loan and from there Sparks fly!
Always fun, sexy short reads!

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[Rose · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked this short matchmaker love story a lot. It was entertaining and enjoyable. I loved Moose! The characters were interesting and likable. Danny was a great friend to contact Mona on his friend Paul's behalf. Paul and Elena were relatable. Their conversation about what they would like to do versus what they were doing was exactly the kind of thing you would expect someone to discuss. I loved their happy ever after. I recommend reading this book.

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[Tc · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is the 47th book in the Zaftig Dating Agency series and what can I say other than it is another well written story in this series.
This is about Paul (loan agent) and Elena (a blogger) They met when she went to see him for a loan to buy a car.
It is instant attraction but as the saying goes, nothing runs that smoothly! or words to that effect!
Elena is a blogger in need of a car loan, she never expected to find more.

I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[KL Cassanello · Rating 5 out of 5]

He's a banker. She's a lifestyle blogger in need of auto financing. He was maybe a bit unprofessional in flirting with her while working, but he knew she was the one almost immediately. Moose, Elena's dog, is adorable, and I love how protective he is, despite his smaller size. He knows right away, though, that Paul is an okay guy. The story is cute, and very steamy, another installment in the Zaftig files from the Queen of Instalove.

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[Judy Gittleson Hendrickson · Rating 5 out of 5]

In this storyline, a bank is the setup with a loan officer and a young woman wanting to get a different vehicle. Paul and Elena are at a point in their lives when a significant other would fit in perfectly. Both have goals of travel and a family, along with Moose the dog. A lunch after the loan meeting and their relationship skyrockets. Wonderful series and quick read that gives you hope and a better mood - if you were having a bad day. Very well done.

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[casvec · Rating 5 out of 5]

Elena is a blogger, she is good enough to make ends meet. When it is time to get a new car, Elena heads to the bank where she is to meet with Paul. Paul has been in banking for a while, now he wants more in his life. When Paul meets Elena he can't help himself and not only works her loan but gets a date out of the deal.

Can't by my Love is a sweet fun story that is a fast read and you can't help but smile.

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[Tina · Rating 5 out of 5]

Mona Zaftig runs Zaftig Dating Agency, she is contacted by a coworker of Paul’s to find him love! She decides to introduce him to Elena who is in need of a car loan! Paul is a successful banker that feels like he is missing something in life! He realizes the moment he sees the beautiful curvy Elena that she is the wand he is going to make her his! Another great book in the series!

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[Catie_didthat3 · Rating 4 out of 5]

Elena needs a new car so she goes to the bank for a loan, her loan officer happens to be Paul. Perfect for each other they play hooky and start their happily ever after. I gave 4 stars because something felt off while reading it, I don't know exactly what, maybe it was they way I read their dialogue. Their conversations just seemed... grrr just off to me. Can't explain better.

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[Mary · Rating 4 out of 5]

It’s not a case of opposites attract. Oh no. This is more a case of two hearts becoming one. Two people with similar life goals and the openness they have to include another person along with a pet named Moose. It’s great watching two people fall in love. And that my fellow readers, is a story you can take to the bank.

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[Lisa · Rating 4 out of 5]

Jane Fox always provides a sweet with heat short story that just makes sense.
Standalone with no cliffhangers.
Paul has just turned 40 with no love in his life, will the right woman ever come along?
Elena is a blogger in need of a car loan, she never expected to find more.
It's a loan with a side of love!
Sweet story with a protective dog included.
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[Chiquita Bee · Rating 2 out of 5]

This new book by Jane Fox in the Mona Zaftig Dating Service Series was such a disappointment. Characters Elena a blogger looking for a car loan and Paul, the loan officer lack enthusiasm for each other, their meeting lackluster and the storyline uninteresting like other books in the series. This one seemed quickly thrown together and didn’t leave me with that feel good feeling.

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[Amy · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another match made by Mona and her Zaftig Dating Agency! Paul's friend and co-worker decides Paul need someone special in his life so he signs him up. Elena needs a loan to get a new car and she gets so much more when she meets Paul the bank's loan officer. He is immediately attracted to Elena and he definitely wants to get to know her better. She is the one he has been waiting for-his perfect match!

[Lea Ann · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another successful match! If you're looking for a quick, sweet, steamy story, this is it. Hot insta-love. These are fast, no drama, and hot lovin'!
Lonely banker Paul wants more..love, the white picket fence and a family. Elena wants more in her life too. The attraction is instant and love comes fast for them. How can she resist after he is Moose approved?

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[Maggie · Rating 1 out of 5]

Not expecting much but still...

This series of books is never particularly deep or anything more then 20 minutes of brain candy. However after reading this one I feel brain dead.

Was this written by Jane Fox or first time writer? Were language and sentance structure wasnt going to make these 2 boring people any more interesting.

Disappointed but I guess my favorite snack has just gone stale.

[JLH · Rating 4 out of 5]

Paul and Elena are meeting because Elena is in a need for a loan. Paul is the one to approve them or pass it through. They matchmaking agency pairs the weird opposites and make them happen. Always love the short non cliffhanger.

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[Debra Soehner · Rating 5 out of 5]

Paul is a loan officer looking for a soulmate who will travel the world with him and Elena goes into his bank for a loan and they are instantly attracted. They have lunch together and go back to her apartment. Great epilogue and love story, always enjoy this author.

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[CJ · Rating 4 out of 5]

Mona has done it again! Elena needs a loan in order to purchase a new vehicle. Her loan officer just happens to be Paul, who has just seen the woman of his dreams. Their relationship moves quickly, but when it feels right you cannot stop to question it.

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[Erika · Rating 5 out of 5]

Paul works in a bank as a loan officer. Elena is coming to the bank for a loan to buy a new car. Elena gets a lot more than a loan for a car. She gets a lunch date with Paul. They hit it off right from the start. This a sweet and short love story.

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[Yvonne · Rating 4 out of 5]

Another really sweet, short Zaftig matchmaking story. Elena is a blogger and she needs a new car, so she goes to the bank and meets Paul, the lending agent. It is an instant attraction and the story is fast and sweet. It even includes her cute beagle. I received an ARC copy of this book from Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.

[Debra · Rating 5 out of 5]

An enjoyable fast pace book 47 in the Zaftig Dating Agency series! It is an engaging, well written, funny, and steamy read that will enjoy from page one. Likeable characters; the chemistry between them is instant and amazing. A recommended read!

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