This review deserves an “executive summary” because, while Drew Hayes is an excellent author, this is not his best work and my full review is a lot of complaining about that. This is a better than average book that makes some mistakes Mr. Hayes doesn’t make in his other books. Those mistakes are (1) using stupidity to move the story forward and (2) a ridiculously convenient ending that just so happens to set every thing up for a second book.
As for the stupidity, the main character, Tori, fails to believe the criminals she’s working with when they tell her that they will kill her. She is clearly smarter than that so all of this text undermines the story. Also, one of the secondary characters who is a hero stupidly trusts a villain for no real reason other than he wants to. So, basically the villain organizing the destruction of the heroes (and, by extension, the villain’s “guild”) is not smart. He just found a hero stupid enough to believe him for no reason. Still, Hayes is one of the better authors working and I don’t regret taking the time to listen to this book. However, Mr. Hayes' performance in “NPCs” and “Superpowereds” is significantly better than here and anyone who hasn’t read those should do so first.
What follows is my original review which is essentially a poorly written rant but which I am retaining for the specifics contained therein. Read on if you wish but nothing below should be taken as contradicting the opinion that the book, while flawed, was still worth the read.
I’m a Drew Hayes fan since he writes two of the best series it has been my pleasure to read (NPCs and Superpowereds). Therefore I was tempted to run out and immediately buy “Forging Hephaestus”. What stopped me was the story line. “Join me or die” is just stupid. Saying such a thing just insures there can never be trust between the parties and removes any element of surprise when the “or die” aspect comes into play. I was so skeptical I didn’t even immediately check out “Forging Hephaestus” when my library got it. But then I read “Superpowereds Year 4” (in beta on Mr. Hayes’ website, as I’m writing this review you’ll have to wait for publication to read it now). Year 4 was so fantastic I could not imagine Mr. Hayes doing anything sub-par ever. Unfortunately “Forging Hephaestus” has brought me back down to earth.
Oddly enough, Mr. Hayes deals with my concern about the “join me or die” scenario. The blurb I read made it sound like a group of super villains recruited that way. It is a secret group of super villains but this group (the “Guild”) has government and super hero approval. In return the Guild controls the really bad villains who would destroy the world (the world being where Guild members keep their stuff). (Reminds me of how, in Terry Pratchett’s early Discworld books Lord Vetinari relied on the Thieves’ Guild to regulate crime which they did because robbing the same guy twice means the second robber gets nothing and some other guy goes un-robbed.)
My problem with this book is, I was 6.93% in (I did the math) and the rationale for villains not killing the main character, Tori, was exhausted. Tori is told repeatedly she has to perform or die and she repeatedly fails to perform. So much so that a special apprenticeship is arranged for her. Why not kill her? Because the Guild is getting too many violent types in the younger generation and so it needs to put extra effort into recruits like Tori who are just rebellious. Fine, as far as that goes, although it fails to explain why the Guild isn’t just killing the unwanted overly violent recruits- they are villains with a retirement to protect after all.
Tori’s initial efforts in the book, which gets her into the guild, make it clear she is extremely intelligent and competent but once in the guild she is pretty much being nothing but stupid and whiny. I got fed up (6.93% in) when she’s being pissy about having to work as a corporate intern. Like the idea of a cover identity is completely new to her???? So much for her being smart. Worse, she can’t seem to grasp the fact that her life is in danger. When she can’t even be bothered to do the simplest thing, like buckle her seat belt, without being made to do it, I honestly could not understand why the Guild would continue to waste time on her. Then she has to be made to attend an important meeting, which she whines about, then she has to have it explained to her that the Guild has other apprentices because she couldn’t figure that out??? Then she has the big revelation that The Guild of Super Villains has bad people in it who really would kill her??????????
Finally Mr. Hayes’ abilities reassert themselves and the book becomes quite good, with the notable exception of Tori realizing FOR THE SECOND TIME THAT THE GUILD OF SUPER VILLAINS REALLY WOULD KILL HER. (It comes after a very well written group test of all the guild’s apprentices.)
Then an insanely convenient scene occurs where robbers force their way into the corporate office where Tori and her mentor, Ivan, work. As if that isn’t convenient enough, one of their co-workers recently became a “meta” but has kept to himself. And if that isn’t convenient enough, a coffee shop employee from across the street also recently became a meta. And, if that isn’t convenient enough, coffee shop girl is actually in the corporate office to cater an event.
Then the book gets good again for a long while until the conclusion. If you do not wish to risk SPOILERS skip to the last paragraph.
Given Ivan's children are the absolute focus of his life it is bizarre Ivan didn’t have them better protected. How did the "real" bad guys find them? And why hadn’t Ivan, whose best friend is the genius leader of the Guild, figure it out first and guard against it? It was also stupid how Ivan decided his kids were dead- he just assumes the bad guy attempting to kill them wouldn’t screw up. What was that based on? We see little of that bad guy’s powers except in the finale, where he pretty much screws everything up. Apparently Ivan’s kids don’t have cell phones so he couldn’t even attempt to call them?? But, wait, they did because we are told a silly story of how his daughter is constantly losing her cell phone charger. For all Ivan knows his kids weren't even at school that day since he isn't close to his ex and things like dental appointments and getting sick happen. In short, Ivan, who has been an intelligent character otherwise, acts like a complete moron throughout the climax, really just to allow Tori to shine.
Back to the super-geniuses (literally) behind both the Guild and heroes, neither of whom were very smart. They both saw problems coming, had wealth, armies and tech at their disposal and the best plan they could come up with was to let it happen? From the story as told they never even attempted to bug or infiltrate the "real" bad guys. Plus, how stupid is it that when the crap hits the fan the super-geniuses big plan relies on their heavy-hitter, Lodestar, answering her cell phone? (Which Lodestar doesn't.)
Apollo, the superhero protagonist, is beyond belief stupid for trusting this world’s mash up of Joker and Dr. Strange. Basically his reasoning is “I don’t like criminals so I’m going to put my trust in the worst criminal I know so I can arrest a bunch of people I think of as criminals but really aren’t since they haven’t been caught committing any crime”.
If it were possible to be worse than Apollo, then Lodestar would win. After all, she’s known for years that something would eventually come up that would require her return to crime fighting, and yet she had no plans in place in case of emergency. As a result Lodestar's arrival is delayed by a crucial ½ hour WHILE SHE GETS A BABYSITTER??????
The heroes' genius even knew who was going to betray the heroes but FAILED TO PREPARE FOR THE BETRAYAL IN ANY WAY. This is especially exasperating given the betrayer proposed a city-wide test of the heroes' defense systems, a set up that SHOULD HAVE BEEN OBVIOUS TO THE HEROES’ GENIUS WHO SHOULD HAVE, AT THE VERY LEAST, ARRANGED FOR BABYSITTING FOR LODESTAR IN ADVANCE.
The ending was too convenient and is clearly contrived to pave the way for a sequel. Also, it seemed bizarre to me that the heroes, after having a lot of their bacon saved by the villains, decide that now is the time to stop tolerating the Guild??? This is particularly bizarre since they weren't really tolerating it in the first place since the HEROES HAD NO EVIDENCE OF CRIMINAL ACTIVITY BY THE GUILD.
BOTTOM LINE: While far from Mr. Hayes’ best work this book is still an okay read.