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Lethal Desires: The Complete Collection
dark mafia romance
761 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 7, 2021
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April 24, 2021
Utter rubbish
I don't usually write reviews but this was so bad I thought I would have to do something. Firstly the grammar & punctuation was appalling. Because of the lack of punctuation I could not tell when it was a conversation or part of the story. People were being referred to as It & there were numbers at the end of each statement or paragraph. What was that all about? The story itself had promise at first despite the multiple errors but a few pages in & I felt like I had read it before. The book itself is described as a complete series but at the end of book one, it said to be continued. Not that I read all of book one, I think I read the first half dozen or so pages & skimmed the rest. I have read another book that started out the same way this one did ( I wish I could remember what it was called) but that was really good with interesting characters & that Author clearly employed a proof reader. This is a really bad copy of a book that has been done before & I am really surprised that this Author put it out there as it was so badly written. Although I must admit one part made me laugh, Dante is reading a book & Grace asks him what Gender he is reading. Ooops, did she mean Genre? As I said I skimmed the first story but I was not going to waste my time with the other four in this book. Mafia stories are among my favourites to read but this just did not cut it.
I don't usually write reviews but this was so bad I thought I would have to do something. Firstly the grammar & punctuation was appalling. Because of the lack of punctuation I could not tell when it was a conversation or part of the story. People were being referred to as It & there were numbers at the end of each statement or paragraph. What was that all about? The story itself had promise at first despite the multiple errors but a few pages in & I felt like I had read it before. The book itself is described as a complete series but at the end of book one, it said to be continued. Not that I read all of book one, I think I read the first half dozen or so pages & skimmed the rest. I have read another book that started out the same way this one did ( I wish I could remember what it was called) but that was really good with interesting characters & that Author clearly employed a proof reader. This is a really bad copy of a book that has been done before & I am really surprised that this Author put it out there as it was so badly written. Although I must admit one part made me laugh, Dante is reading a book & Grace asks him what Gender he is reading. Ooops, did she mean Genre? As I said I skimmed the first story but I was not going to waste my time with the other four in this book. Mafia stories are among my favourites to read but this just did not cut it.
July 20, 2024
Not for me…
I love the idea of this story and the unique characters. At the same time this book was not for me due to formatting issues and more. I think that if you like mafia stories you should check it out.
I love the idea of this story and the unique characters. At the same time this book was not for me due to formatting issues and more. I think that if you like mafia stories you should check it out.
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