Editing!!!!!!!
I have enjoyed the previous books in this series despite small grammatical errors they all seem to be plagued by. Unfortunately, the errors were worse in this book, and the writing style was repetitive. In the other books, I could overlook the errors because the stories and characters were really good. This story was severely lacking in action until the ending, the romantic chemistry was just mediocre. My favorite characters from the previous books were mentioned by name but had no impact on the story or dialog. Honestly, I am pretty irritated because this was not a cheap book, and it did not progress the series at all. I totally could have skipped it. I have noticed the author quickly turning out several PAVAD spin off story's, I wish she would allow down, get back to true suspense stories with fully developed storylines rather than the completely unbelievable and not at all creepy Amazon of a serial killer from this story. Also, a much lower price or some serious editing would be helpful. The PAVAD series has been an automatic buy for me, but it won't be after this book. I seriously hope the author will get back into the style of the great stories like Georgia and Hell, Carrie and Seb, and Paige and Mick.